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Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2021 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow! Amazing story, so unique. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2021 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 25 Nov 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2021 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Excellent chapter!!! I wonder what he'll decide??????

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2021 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loving this story, I love the switch in the characters! Bella being the jaded one, and Edward being the hopeful. Feel so bad for both of them now, and can't wait to see how Edward fights this. I truly look forward to every update! 

Take care, stay safe, and healthy!

Ciao

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2021 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yet another good chapter however, he can't die he just can't.  Can Bella save him or maybe the girl with short black hair (is this Alice) can?  Eagerly awaiting the next chapter with anticipation.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2021 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well that's gotta throw him for a loop. I can't even imagine what comes next. Excellent chapter!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: Sullysnonna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh this story has captured my attention. I look forward to future chapters. Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination with us 

Reviewer: Sullysnonna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh this story has captured my attention. I look forward to future chapters. Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination with us 

Reviewer: Sullysnonna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing first chapter. Looking forward to future chapters. Thank you.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2021 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter!!!

Reviewer: AnaNymm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

amazing, can't wait to read more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Again a really good chapter - hanging on your every word!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2021 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

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