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Reviewer: Roxie619 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2024 1:36 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Please continue 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2023 5:34 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Please update

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2023 7:20 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Please update

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 11:19 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 11:10 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 10:51 AM Title: Chapter Seven

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 10:40 AM Title: Chapter Six

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 10:27 AM Title: Chapter Five

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 10:16 AM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 10:06 AM Title: Chapter Three

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 9:54 AM Title: Chapter Two

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2023 9:39 AM Title: Chapter One

Loved it 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2023 6:03 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Loveit

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2022 12:22 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

hurry back can't wait for more

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2022 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Ten

glad for the updates love this story

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2022 1:13 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Wow..

Thanks for the update :D

Reviewer: shandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2022 8:49 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Thank you so much for the new chapter! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2022 7:55 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

She needs to lisen to Edward

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2022 2:07 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

I'm guessin' lockdown is only for women and children...the men, led by Viper, will be kickin' ass and takin' names, right? Otherwise, no tellin' how long they'd be in confinement *ugh!*

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 8:09 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

He better place a tail on Candy. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter Six

I would keep an eye on Candy for sure. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 5:33 AM Title: Chapter Five

I'm so excited to see that you gave an update on Fanfiction. I hope that you continue updating here too. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 3:59 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh wow! I really loved this. I hope everything works out for then without Bella and Terror meeting until it is absolutely necessary. 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2022 3:44 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Too bad it wasn't Terror who was caught in the fire'

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 8:36 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Happy to get an update :) 

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 4:52 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

I hope Bella doesn't do any thing reckless, like run off to try and save them from Terror, like she did with James in the books. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 3:43 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Great chapter, a pleasure to follow.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 3:40 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh my goodness, I love this story so much!  I cannot wait for more! 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 8:37 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Thank you for the update, absolutely loved it, please update soon as I am so loving this story x

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 4:34 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Love this! I love the promise E made at the end.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 12:06 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Love these two! Definitely need more of them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2022 11:50 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

:) 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Really enjoy this story. Thanks for updating it.

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Going on six months since an update. Is this another one that isn't going to get finished?

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2022 9:57 PM Title: Chapter Ten

She's going over to the enemies 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2022 12:57 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Love it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2022 6:52 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Well, at least two people in the club have the potential of rattin' Bella out to Terror...Preacher and Candy. Maybe Tiny, too!? In any case, a shitstorm is brewin' on the horizon!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2022 1:24 PM Title: Chapter Ten

great story wish you vould update more ofter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2022 2:39 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: roxiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2022 10:14 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Well Edward set the record straight about Bella! But oh Candy is now super pissed which is not good for Edward and Bella. Ty!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2022 6:19 AM Title: Chapter Ten

Yikes!

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Happy Mother's Day!!! So maybe Tiny or Preacher will tell Terror that Bella is there???? KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 8:58 PM Title: Chapter Ten

:) 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 3:09 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Candy is going to rat Bella out to the Savages.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 12:02 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Candy may be trouble if she gives info to Satan Savages..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 8:25 AM Title: Chapter Ten

she is going to cause trouble

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2022 8:07 AM Title: Chapter Nine

they all scare the shit out of me lol

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2022 11:48 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Wow, this was full of action.  Great update.  So glad they got rid of the Sour Patch Kid.  ;)  

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2022 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Good reading

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2022 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Sounds like all of them are horrible...  

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2022 1:14 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Love your story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2022 12:32 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Holy shit.  Please let Waylon still be alive.  Love Duchess.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2022 9:54 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Terror is one crazy SOB!

 I'm looking forward to more. Thank you. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2022 8:25 PM Title: Chapter Seven

For sure, Candy's going to be the cause of any trouble. 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 9:38 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I'm looking forward to Edward taking Demetri out.. I know it's gonna happen and I'm going to clap when it does... :)

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 6:48 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I don't agree at all with Bella Edward and Emmett having a threesome. If you love someone then you are committed to only them.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 5:37 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Thank you for the update..well done..Until you post again

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 11:54 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Another great chapter, thank you

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 9:25 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Poor ol' Waylon! Bella will be devastated when she finds out *sigh!* As for Demetri and his evil henchmen, may they rot in hell forever when Viper gets hold of them!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 5:50 AM Title: Chapter Nine

He is one sick m***fer.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 1:50 AM Title: Chapter Nine

What is Pyro and Snake real name??? KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️‘”’

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 1:38 AM Title: Chapter Nine

:) 

Reviewer: LunaForever13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2022 1:36 AM Title: Chapter Nine

I am so happy you started writing again, I have missed this story! Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2022 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Pure evil

blood will be spilled for sure

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2022 10:41 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Great chapter!!  Looking forward to Terrors downfall.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2022 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

I can't keep up with everyone names Clo.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️😂‘”’

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2022 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

love it 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2022 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Fantastic 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

When the dust settles would they try to recruit the Savages into their club?

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

until next week?  Are you sure? I certainly hope so!

READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

Nice to have Viper and Isa back, and you !

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dudes look to be findin' a new home but I guess it wouldn't be prudent of Viper to try 'n recruit them...right?

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad you are back.  Absolutely loved this chapter and cannot wait for the next one, until then take care x

Reviewer: roxiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you! At least these new guys aren’t the guys planning trouble with Edward’s club. Maybe they’ll help?

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks muchly as always for the update, my friend. I love the instant reconnection Isa and Edward have. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2022 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

So glad to see an update.  Can't wait for Trust and Obey to hit the shelves!!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2022 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Welcome back.  Loved the update! ;)

Bought your book!!

 

 

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2022 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

Good reading

 

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2022 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Nice. I have been missing this one 

Reviewer: Afwife2016 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2022 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Nice. I have been missing this one 

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2022 11:30 PM Title: Chapter Seven

OMG love this story... what is next!!!

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: Tezrian9399 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2022 3:40 AM Title: Chapter One

Just found this story today and I hope you plan to continue it, I love it so far! I  would really like to see where this goes. I have a feeling Cindy will be part of the reason Demetri finds out where Bella is, after her unspoken threat to get rid of Bella...

Reviewer: LunaForever13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 4:39 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Just started this story today and I am obsessed! Please write more! I really want to see how it all goes down!

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Hope you continue this story I miss it so much.

Reviewer: goldjess94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2022 4:06 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I love this I can't wait for more chapters when they come out the suspense is killing me.

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 8:44 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I just started this one today  it's so good but this one I feel is gonns be a slow burn and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen  love a strong tough Bella ...Candy is  gonna be TROUBLE

 

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 8:28 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I just started this one today  it's so good but this one I feel is gonns be a slow burn and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen  love a strong tough Bella ...Candy is  gonna be TROUBLE

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2021 11:25 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Damn. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2021 11:17 PM Title: Chapter Six

Candy is trouble. She's going to find out about Terror. Cut her off & out. One less house mouse to deal with. Extermination is in order. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 6:01 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 4:46 AM Title: Chapter Seven

He not really going to have a threesome is he??? Although some of the guys here think that would be cool but most of us are saying nah!!! 

KEEP WRITING ✍️ & MERRY CHRISTMAS 🎄 ’❤️‘”…’

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Damn they are hot together.  And no, Bella, don't do Kevlar!!!!  

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2021 11:50 PM Title: Chapter Seven

thumbs up

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2021 11:08 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I don't know if I'm on board with the 3 way but it's not me, so....  

Wouldn't it be easier if he just got a pearl piecing?

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2021 10:52 PM Title: Chapter Six

I have a gut feeling that Candy is going to stir up trouble, and Demetri will play a part in that. 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2021 10:52 PM Title: Chapter Six

I have a gut feeling that Candy is going to stir up trouble, and Demetri will play a part in that. 

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