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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 1:43 AM Title: End Of The Road, Or Is It The Start

Glad Bella got to be apart of Charlie's wedding and then spend time with him while he was there on his honeymoon.  Glad everyone helped with Bella's change. I wish Aro would have suffered more. From Jasper or Bella.  



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Thanks,

I bet he never thought his pets would kill him lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2022 10:44 PM Title: End Of The Road, Or Is It The Start

Aww for CHarlie and Stacey.  Glad she got to see her Dad married and happy.  Peter and Char are the bestest folks. 

Thanks for writing and sharing as always. 

ty



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you enjoyed it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2022 6:34 PM Title: End Of The Road, Or Is It The Start

Charlie and his wife got a nice wedding, honeymoon and life.   :)     

Jasper and the others made sure Bella had the life she wanted too.   :)     

I loved the thought of Aro, Chelsea, Jane and Alec slamming down into the ground because of Bella's shield.   LOL     Once Chelsea was ash everything changed.    But if Jane and Alec were under fake bonds too, why did they burn themselves with Aro?    Hmmm....

Well,....I guess a sexy peaceful life is in store for our couple now.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.   I loved it.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

They never wanted that life, they were ready to die and he stopped it and turned them into monsters that everyone hates.

So they killed him and took their final rest xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2022 6:28 PM Title: If Life Were Easy, Would It Be

Renee is too funny. At least Bella got to meet her brother.  Peter is so awesome.



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Thanks,

Let's hope her mother does better this time xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2022 12:45 PM Title: If Life Were Easy, Would It Be

That's a whopper of a cliffhanger for so close to the end of the story.   Dam woman!   LOL

Peter saved the day twice in this chapter.   Thank goodness....   Jacob was gonna ruin so many lives.   And Bella never would have gotten to meet her little brother.

Charlie meeting his second wife and moving away, living straddled across two counties is really romantic.   I like to picture him moving on with his life instead of rotting away alone in Forks.   :)

Now apparently some loonies from Volterra are causing havoc.    I'm with Bella about being anxious to hear what's going on.

Thanks as always for writing and sharing a great chapter Alexis.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Love me some Peter, he's the kind of nutty friend everyone needs. 

Glad you are liking it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2022 10:35 PM Title: If Life Were Easy, Would It Be

Ok.......What the hell is going on?????? 

Love how you did this chapter. 



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Thanks,

Moving everyone forward and setting up for the end lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2022 4:03 PM Title: Time For Change, Time To Grow

Wow, Carlisle took out Edward.  I'm surprised.  I laughed at Esme taking Edward apart piece by piece. Lol. 



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Thanks,

He finally saw the light and took charge as he should have years ago xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2022 10:19 AM Title: Time For Change, Time To Grow

That was a very deep thinking chapter for Bella, indeed.   She has sure seen the worst of vampires and shifters in her short little life.   Being mated to someone as mature, calm, romantic and passionate as herself is a great thing.   :)

On the flipside, why the heck was Carlisle mated with 2 wing nuts?   It makes me think he's just covering his true crazy self.   Maybe he will need to go too?    But maybe Esme can balance him?    Hmmm....

I am relieved that Jacob was forced by Charlie to leave the area, but that is just putting off the inevitable with him.   He isn't getting any kind of treatment, so he will be just as obsessed when he comes back.   Ugh...

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)



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Thanks,

Carlisle never tried to help them grow, he treated them like children and cause a lot of their problems xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2022 10:50 PM Title: Time For Change, Time To Grow

Wow didn't know Carlisle had it in him.  Glad Charlie finally did right by Bella.  



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Thanks,

Everyone reaches breaking point eventually xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 10:07 PM Title: Mistakes Were Made

Glad Bella and Jasper are speaking up. Feel sorry for Sam having to deal with all the crap Billy should have been the one to so it.  Yummy major/Bella time.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, Billy will have to accept the pack and the tribe have lost all repect for the child xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 9:58 PM Title: Mistakes Were Made

Sendng the victim away from the criminal is sadly still the most common way to deal with perverts of any kind.    I wonder if Sam, Billy, the tribe and even Charlie are going to deal with Jacob to Bella and Jasper's satisfaction.    Hmmm....

I wonder what creepy Edward's angle is in all of this.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

They need to be united and he has to leave.

Edward is just a selfish douche, who doesn't care about anyone but himself xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2022 6:59 PM Title: Mistakes Were Made

So many twist and turns. 



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Thanks,

Another doozir to come next time too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2022 1:54 PM Title: Chance Of A Lifetime

Glad they have great people in their corner.  Dem seems like an awesome guy. Feel sorry for Esme.  Ugh to the nasty stalker



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Thanks,

He wasn't it just looked bad, all will be explained lo, xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2022 11:01 PM Title: Chance Of A Lifetime

Demetri, Heidi, Peter and Charlotte are leaving Jasper and Bella to get to know each other even better, as they should.    The others are just going away.   LOL      But Esme is sweet, I guess.   She will keep in touch.

Jasper and Bella's date was romantic.    Sight seeing, conversation and dinner......   ;)      

I'm surprised creepy Jacob didn't hear Jasper and Bella outside, esp taking his picture.    He must have been really distracted.    Maybe he WAS looking at her underwear.   ;)

Charlie is enraged at Jacob.    I'm surprised that he didn't go arrest and/or shoot his ass.    Billy should consider himself lucky to be allowed to remove him.    The pack hopefully will be disgusted with him too.    Maybe Charlie won't be driven to drink more than his usual.               wink  wink.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

He reallyh wasn't doing anything but searching for evidence, but Jasper made it look bad with the photoes.

zoom lens and downwind, he never knew he was there lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2022 10:49 PM Title: Same Differences, Different Species

Loved all the different POVs in this chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you're enjoying it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2022 10:46 PM Title: Chance Of A Lifetime

I love how Jasper handled Javob being in Bella's room. Smart man. 



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To get him in the bad books with Charlie lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2022 5:26 AM Title: Same Differences, Different Species

Glad the girls are watching out for Esme.  While I understand the punishment part for Eddie, I feel soorry for his students. 



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Thanks,

It's to be hoped he learns something xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2022 4:47 AM Title: Same Differences, Different Species

I'm relieved that Alice is gone, but Edward doesn't seemed phased by her death at all really, after his initial moaning that is.    Carlisle didn't even hope that he and Edward could comfort each other.   He just waited for Esme.

Jasper and Bella are really suited for each other.   They are both 'no nonsense', but caring individuals.   :)

I'm still wary about Edward trying for some kind of revenge.....maybe Carlisle too?    Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

They are to weak to go against the others, a human yes xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 4:48 AM Title: Could They Be More Dense?

I was fascinated by your take on mates, true mates and triads.     Alice just couldn't get her mate triad to be like she wanted and plus....she's gone over the deep end.   ;)

So Demetri and Heidi are going to live with Jasper, Peter, Charlotte and Bella?    I like it.    The kings better not mess with them or they'll regret it.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you enjoyed my new way of seeing an old thing lol, just trying to keep it fresh xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 2:34 AM Title: Could They Be More Dense?

Malice truly is insane.  Bella is Def a devious one.  Glad she is on their side.   Poor Esme stuck with Carlisle. Hopefully he'll grow up some.

Idreamof eddy is a goddess for giving us the God of War and his Captain. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

We are so lucky with the authors who came before us, paving the way for bigger and better character arcs xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2022 9:10 PM Title: Could They Be More Dense?

Oh my gosh!!!!!!! So much information in this chapter.  Wow!!!!!! Love Edward's punishment.  Lol!!!!!!



Author's Response:

hanks,

Yes, I thought he'd hate that. All those teenage thought directed at him all day long, pure hell for him xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2022 10:01 AM Title: A Little Light In The Dark

You didn't tell us the big secret that Emmett discovered!   Grrr.....    Meanie.....   LOL    :P

Seeing Bella and Jasper care for each other is very romantic.    She takes care of him just as much as he does her.   :)

Hopefully Demetri and Heidi WILL leave the Volturi (or maybe take it over).   The kings are iffy.    

Esme deserves someone better than Carlisle, the slime too.   Hmp...    ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

He-he, oh lots to be revealed, Carlisle will be getting his wings clipped very soon xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2022 11:42 PM Title: A Little Light In The Dark

ooh My.  The triad have soooo much to answer for.   Aww for bella recreating the scene.  They are so good together.  I so love Peter.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Peter likes to be the comedic releif, but he's all business too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2022 4:10 PM Title: A Little Light In The Dark

Oh I can't wait to see how Jasper handles things. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

It might go down a little differently than you imagine xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2022 5:54 AM Title: What The Hell's Going On?

Jasper and the others know some, but I'm guessing there is a lot of slimy bullshit left unsaid.    I feel terrible for Esme.   Maybe she can be separated from Carlisle.    He IS disgusting.

I have a feeling that Bella is right about needing to get the hell out of dodge.    Our little human in this story has a lot of protectors, but from Aro?    That's a whole other situation.   I hope Carlisle isn't shield hunting FOR Aro.   Hmmm....

Can Heidi not turn her powers off?   Is that why she couldn't look at Esme?   I liked what she instructed Edward and Alice to do though.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Power, greed, protection! All things weak people want from the strong,

while wanting the strong to bow down to them xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 4:14 PM Title: What The Hell's Going On?

Loving this twist on the story. 



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Thanks,

I do try to come at it from a different angle every time xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2022 2:01 PM Title: What The Hell's Going On?

Poor Esme. Hope she'll be OK eventually.  Wonder if Carlisle is really her mate.  Glad Peter, Charlotte, Heidi and Demetri are all there to help.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Unfortunately they are mates, sad fact not all are great or even worthy of their partner xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2022 7:25 PM Title: It's My Party, Yes Mine!

Glad Bella is having a good Birthday. 



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Thanks,

The high point before the shit hits the fan lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2022 7:37 AM Title: It's My Party, Yes Mine!

I love how literally everyone in town is freer, happier and just more relaxed without the 'evil' Cullens around.

Charlie having a date AND realizing Bella has grown up and won't live in Forks forever are good actions.

No one has ever asked if Jasper needed anything picked up?   That makes me want to cry.    Bella did good asking him.

Jasper, Peter Char and everyone did good planning Bella a party that she actually wants too.

Great chapter....    Thanks for writing and sharing.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah, it's their entitled arrogance that put others off,

Emmett is to nice not to like and Jasper is that guy, other's want to be and woman just want.

Rose may come across as a cold bitch, but she's honest about it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2022 3:49 AM Title: It's My Party, Yes Mine!

Awesome chapter.  Love her having real friends in her corner.  Party sounds like so much fun.   aww for Charlie going on a date.



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Thanks,

I could imagine Angela digging her heels in about being run off.

Just wanted her to have what she wanted for once lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2022 11:20 PM Title: It's My Party, Yes Mine!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

So pleased you're liking it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2022 7:01 AM Title: The Truth Will Out

Please say there will be more. I don't remember if  this story  said complete or not. God I hope not. I want to see the fireworks!!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

Yes it's ongoing xx

Alexis

Reviewer: opeltigra Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2021 11:02 PM Title: This Day Just Got Better & Better

Wow a super original story!! I can,t wait for the next chapter!! Please write quickly!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Trying to come at it from another angle, to make it fresh and newish lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2021 3:37 PM Title: The Truth Will Out

Love how you explain things about Edward and Alice's gift.  Love the new twist on this story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

So glad you like it so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2021 2:26 PM Title: This Day Just Got Better & Better

I like your take on the venom left in her and Edward controlling her.  That is new. 



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Thanks,

Always looking for new ways to spin the story xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2021 6:32 AM Title: The Truth Will Out

Aww for her first time. Great job Jasper.  Party sounds awesome.  Glad Esme is in the clear. 



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Thanks,

Esme is oblivious because she see no bad in them xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2021 1:45 AM Title: The Truth Will Out

Great chapter....     I love that Alice can't 'see' anything that the group is doing.      After reading about the food being 'contaminated', I would never eat anything offered from a Cullen again.   shivers.... scary......   

Edward's list gives me the hella scary creeps too.    

Hopefully between Peter, Charlotte, Demtri, Heidi and Jasper...Bella should be well protected from those assholes.    Emmett and Rose should be on their side too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes they'll get what's coming to them xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2021 4:36 AM Title: This Day Just Got Better & Better

Bella isn't just annoyed anymore at Eddie boy.    She is super pissed at him, Alice, Carlisle and maybe Esme.     

I sure hope Alice can't 'see' anything going on at the Cullen place.   

This seems like it's going to be another really good story.    I'm buckling up for the ride.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you like it so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2021 2:32 PM Title: This Day Just Got Better & Better

Awesome start.  Can't wait for more.  Love me some Jasper/Bella lovin



Author's Response:

Thanks,

glad you liked it xx

Alexis

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