Date: 18 Nov 2022 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Please update this story
Date: 25 Sep 2022 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting first chapter
Date: 13 Aug 2022 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow.. a fast romance. I am looking forward to the next chapter :D
Date: 13 Aug 2022 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Edward was honest with her. Why are you asking about someone adopting this story. You are doing a good job. Please please please continue it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my story. My life has gotten very crazy. I don't know what I'm doing I've never done anything like this before. And I don't feel like I am doing it justice. When I started this story I thought hey you can do this but now I'm not so sure I can. I'm sorry that I'm letting down the few readers I have.
Date: 13 Aug 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol. Ok I know this is fanfiction but in real life I would think Edward is crazy and a sociopath. Lol. But being fanfiction, yes Bella would be crazy to turn Edward down. But I do feel they are moving quite quickly.
Date: 12 Aug 2022 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella. Working 3 jobs at 18 and all by herself.
Date: 12 Aug 2022 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 Aug 2022 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
SO YOU HAVE NO INTENTIONS OF COMPLETING THIS STORY SINCE YOUR ASKING FOR IT TO BE ADOPTED....
: ( GOOD LUCK!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2022 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
SHORT CHAPTERS BUT..... I'M HOOKED
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2022 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I AM SO EXCITED TO START THIS STORY.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 12 Aug 2022 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
glad he told her about the mafia part early.
Date: 12 Aug 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Her talking to Alice will be a smart thing. Hopefully she wont overwhelm B. LOL
Date: 12 Aug 2022 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Shes going to be scared out of her mind with Jason approaching her that way. Alice would have been better.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2022 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Short and to the point I like a lot.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2022 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really like your story. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2022 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella is going to give Edward a chance. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. until you post again
Date: 11 Jul 2022 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2022 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for the update..Your off to a good start. I wonder if Bella will go with Jason..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will post again on Friday.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2022 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
New reader to your story..very promising, can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Hope you like the next chapter.
Date: 25 Jun 2022 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope you write more soon. Sound like a good story
Author's Response:
Thank you for your response. I am hoping to update every Friday evening.
Date: 25 Jun 2022 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure about the marks on the page! Get a beta and be sure to write an outline for the story!
Author's Response:
I see what you mean about the marks. I will try to figure out how to get those off. This is the first time I have posted so hopefully the next chapter will not have those.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2022 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds very promising!!! Can't wait for next update🥰
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I hope you like the next chapter. Will try to update on Friday nights.