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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2022 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh my goodness the mystery man has me on edge as much as poor Edward is. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh no

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

love this story

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2022 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Uhoh....there is at least one baddie left looking for Ward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2022 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bella is learning how to be even more supportive of a skittish and wary Ward.     He is so sweet too.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again..Let's hope ward's sister is ok



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter, keep  writing 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

He is so sweet



Author's Response:

He sure is! Thank you for reading.

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2022 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

So happy he was a smart boy lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2022 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

He has to stop running

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2022 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update.  I wonder who this man is? Is he there for Ward or just a tourist.  I'm happy Ward was able to speak with Riley to bring himself some comfort.  Well done until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2022 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2022 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awe...   I'm so relieved that Ward reached out to someone.    Riley was a good choice.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2022 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 18

Keep writing 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2022 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella (and everyone) should trust her gut instinct about things.    And Edward needs to stop running from her,      Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2022 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh my goodness that chapter definitely got my heart racing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2022 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

He will learn

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2022 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2022 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm not sure if I would call Ward a pessimist or a realist.     Hmmm....     Knowing what the meanie author has put him through and is probably planning to put him through....he's probably a realist.   LOL

Great chapter....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2022 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2022 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella knows Ward is skittish, and she is learning to settle, comfort and read him.    I hope he is doing the same for her.   Hmmm....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2022 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

He has came a long way 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2022 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..well done until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2022 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

You rock

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

I adore Bella and Edward getting to be all lovey and relaxed.    ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2022 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2022 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2022 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

love it 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2022 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella already knows Ward so well.   It's like she can read his mind.   And I'm so relieved that he isn't closed off with her anymore.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

She has to push, but he opens up so beautifully.

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2022 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Beautiful declarations.  I'm so happy that they found each other  



Author's Response:

They need each other so much!

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2022 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

AWW Thank you for the update..well done.. finally they let each other know howw they felt.  until you post again



Author's Response:

They're so good together!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2022 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2022 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm swooning at these two taking/facing problems together.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

I love it! Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2022 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

love them



Author's Response:

Thank you! Me too!

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2022 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, that was an emotional chapter. Not gonna lie, I got misty eyed when he asked her to call him Tony. Pass the Kleenex. 



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2022 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2022 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

Cliffhanger, write the next chapter ASAP 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2022 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Nooo! Tease. Can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2022 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh shit that is one big cockblock lol

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2022 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hmmm....   But Ward hasn't contacted Witness Protection yet.    I'm scared.    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2022 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh boy! Just when things are getting good for the couple...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2022 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow Riley is a kick OMG . Date cant wait



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2022 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella can sure read what Ward is thinking easily.     :)     He is, thankfully, getting used to her doing it too.

Ward's fist interaction with bubbly Riley went pretty well too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2022 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2022 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

so happy that happened 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yay for Bella for laying out her requests to Ward.    And yay for Ward for hearing them, accepting them and not running away.  

I love Riliey by the way.  ;)    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

love it

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

The situation that Ward is in makes me so sad.    And now it's worse because Bella is so sad for him and for herself now too.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh so bitter sweet. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh so bitter sweet. Great chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2022 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2022 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait for you to post again.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2022 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8

now she knows wow he really trust her

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2022 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm relieved that Edward finally felt he could trust Bella enough with the truth about his past, both good and bad.     Even though he only sees bad, Bella and I see good.    He defended someone who needed it at the time.

Bella was calm and supportive while listening and taking in all of his story.    I'm pretty sure she is gonna end up being his biggest supporter.   But she is definitely not naive about anything either.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2022 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2022 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love that he's opening up to Bella 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2022 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow thank you for the update..well done..What will Bella do?  I would get to know him better since she is smitten.  Yes he has a dangerous past, maybe they are not looking for him.  One could hope..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2022 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

love this story. Thank you for replying to my short reviews I know I do not have great words of wisdom for you lol. I just want you to know I appreceate what you do and I enjoy your words.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2022 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Carpe Diem Ward. Seize each day. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2022 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

If you are trying to hide, a small town is the worst choice.   LOL   Ward is fast learning this.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2022 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2022 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

New reader to your story .  I love it well done!!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I'm hoping his past doesn't catch up to him.  until you post again



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2022 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

Keep writing 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2022 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2022 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well, Ward has given Bella (and Alice) enough information to mostly figure things/his situation out.   They just don't know the details.

Ward really increased Bella's interest in him with the make out sessions.  ....fans self....     She is not going away.   (Neither would I - LOL)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

No, they're certainly entwined now.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

He needs to start talking lol



Author's Response:

He should, lol.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

He cant help himself



Author's Response:

No, he can't.

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2022 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds like fun times



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2022 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow Edward was naive in his past working for criminals.    Maybe he delivered something to the 'wrong' person.   Hmmm.....

I wonder how his sister got him out of jail.   Is she involved?    So many mysteries.....

Edward coming back and kissing Bella proves his lonliness won out over his 'go it alone' mentality.   I'm glad.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

It's true, his need for her company won out.

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2022 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

God's forgiveness is permanent. Forgiving yourself is much harder. 



Author's Response:

Very true!

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

It is life. Not always rainbows.. Sometimes it rains



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: chelsea_feeney Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2022 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am so very intrigued with this story. I'm more of a reader than a reviewer but this story just intrigues me. I cannot wait to read more of it!



Author's Response:

I appreciate all my readers! I'm glad to hear you like it.

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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2022 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

I’m guessing he’s trying to hide because he protected someone in the past and is in trouble from it. He knows some good fighting moves. Alos his knuckles are maybe used to be cracked from fighting.



Author's Response:

That's a good guess!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting storyline 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2022 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2022 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

Some nice, good people in town are noticing Ward.   But he isn't ready yet to make friends.    Heidi is gonna have to lead the way.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

I agree with that!

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2022 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

Keep on writing 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bella is just as sad and lost as Ward.   She just hides it better from people.   ((HUGS)) to your characters....    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

You're so right!

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2022 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds like fun



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonder what happened to Edward and why he goes by ward.



Author's Response:

I really wanted to use that name, but he has a reason for it, yeah.

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh poor Ward, what have you been through to react like that and to have nothing but Heidi as his friend 



Author's Response:

That's an excellent question.

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2022 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

So Ward you have been injured. Don't touch me is a give.. sorry



Author's Response:

It's a dead giveaway, yeah.

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2022 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Ward....   If Bella's gasp means anything, I bet his hands hurt like a bitch.       Heidi and Charlie seem very sweet though.   :)     Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

I bet they do. I loved adding pets to the story.

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