Date: 07 May 2023 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 56
Bella is soooo strong and so brave. I was hoping that Sam would have an outburst in court and show his true self.
Date: 07 May 2023 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 56
I hope Eleazars dirty tricks back fire on him.
Date: 07 May 2023 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 56
Wow so strong and determined. Excited for more.
Date: 07 May 2023 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 55
Have a great vacation! I love how brave and strong Bella is.
Date: 06 May 2023 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 55
Bella is so brave for telling her story. It will get harder , especially when Sam's lawyer gets to cross exam her. But I like that she told Kate, "They need to know what he did, Kate, he doesn't get to own me anymore. Never again." Bella realizes that she is not nothing, not a nobody. She is somebody. She is Isabella Marie Swan.
Date: 06 May 2023 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 55
Oh my gosh!!!!! Bella is sooooo brave. I LOVE her statement at the end of this chapter!!!!!
Date: 05 May 2023 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 55
Wow. She's been so brave. I'm excited for more, especially with her resolve at the end. I'm glad she could give Gianna's parents that little bit of knowing how much she loved them.
Date: 03 May 2023 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 54
Thank you for the update..well done. I'm happy Angela & Ben camre to the court house to show Bella support. I wonder who has Sam back that he is all clean up? I thought the people on the Rez realised what he did to those little girls. Until you post again
Date: 03 May 2023 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 54
Really?? Offer Sam Uley a deal? Bella needs to be strong. He broke her, but she's recovering. She just needs to remember what Sam Uley did to her and those she loved, including Hope. Bella has a great support group with her. Glad to see that Angela and Ben are there too. How sweet that Vanessa misses her. I wonder if she feels that connection to her mother.
Date: 03 May 2023 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 54
Oh my!!!!! I hope Bella doesn't panic. Love that Ben and Angela are there for her too.
Date: 03 May 2023 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 54
I can totally hear the bang of the gavel like in the opening of a Law and Order episode.
Date: 03 May 2023 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 54
I can't wait to see what happens next. Sam Ulley deserves to pay for what he did to Bella and I can't wait for him to get what is coming to him.
Date: 03 May 2023 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 54
At least Eleazar knows how despicable what he's doing is. I'm so happy Angela and Ben came to support Bella and everything they said to her. Excited for more!
Date: 01 May 2023 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 53
I just found this story yesterday and couldn't put it down. The writing is so good. The emotions so deep. The progress so far so beautiful. Excited for more!
Date: 30 Apr 2023 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 53
I don't blame Jasper for being mad. I hope Bella doesn't panic when she sees Sam.
Maybe they need to show her a picture of him to see her reaction and maybe when she sees him in person it will not be so bad.
Date: 30 Apr 2023 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 53
Bella is starting to gain some self assurance. She's starting to see that she's more than nothing, she's Bella Swan. Someone capable of being loved.
Date: 30 Apr 2023 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 52
If Angela and Ben let her, she can be a part of Hope/Vanessa's life. Another person who loves that little girl. Bella realized that Sam Uley raped her. She's learning the truth and doing so she's become not the victim but the survivor of the horrible things he did to her.
Date: 30 Apr 2023 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 53
As hard and painful ad it must be, Bella is doing what a good mother does, put her child above and before her. I'm guessing there will be times she may regret her decition, but she will get the inmense joy of seeing her Hope thrive. And hopefully Angela and Ben will let her be part of Hope's life.
Again you amaze me with the passion and emotion you're writting this story. Thank you for making me feel and share, shed some tears and a few smiles.
Next the trial. I wish Sam dors something stupid that msy help the case. As long as it doesn't cause Bella mire stress.
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor ❤️
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor ❤️
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's such a warrior and survivor ❤️
Date: 28 Apr 2023 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 52
thank you for the update..well done. It was hard to read. I feel so bad for Bella, her thinking is correct thinking about Hope/Vanessa. Bella realizes that Ben & Angela will give a good life. I like the way Edward exolained to her that Hope/Vanessa can still be in her life. I hope it works out for Bella & Hope & Ben & Angela. until you post again
BRAVO!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2023 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 52
What a strong woman Bella has become through all of this.
Date: 28 Apr 2023 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 52
Bella has taken a HUGE step. Acknowledgement of what happened to her. She is starting, even if it takes her a while to realize she is something, someone. Not just a someone, someone who os lo ed, admired, cherished and worth fighting for.
Then there is the realization, love and devotion she is showing towards Hope wanting her to have the best possible life. That is a loving mother.
What is next for these two? Lots of shock from their loved ones, once they find out what Bella is deciding about her daughter.
Can ot wait to see that and I guess the trial is getting really close. I am more rhan a bit worried about what Eleazar will atwmpt to defend Sam.
Date: 28 Apr 2023 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 52
Love Love love this chapter!!!!!! Her healing journey has started
Date: 28 Apr 2023 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 52
The fact that she is willing to let her daughter stay with Angela and Ben kills me. They need to come up where she can share custody with them. I think that it will be good for her and that they both get to have her in a way. Bella is so grown in a way for her age and hopefully she will not have an set back.
Date: 24 Apr 2023 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 51
Thank you for the update..well done.. Bella is very strong. I'm happy the visit went well. Hope didn't cry when she was with Bella. I'm so happy it was a nice visit. I'm not sure how Bella is going to handle this from now one. I hope Bella can stay in Hope's life. Until you post again.
Date: 24 Apr 2023 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 51
Angela and Bella are both such strong women
Date: 23 Apr 2023 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 51
Two women in love with the same little girl. It's breaking both their hearts to see the love they each hold for Hope/Vanessa.
Date: 23 Apr 2023 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 51
Bella's strength is a force of nature, a unique one that trembles and stays strong at the aamemtime. One moment we thnikmshe will fall spart and the next she is so strong it leaves us speachless.
maybe some will wonder how ,uch more can she resist befoe she crumbles, others can say she is just starting to grow stronger.
a part of me thinks it's both. How? I cannot explain but after all she went through, there is no other way for her than up and into the future.
the trial will be ... I can't find a correct word, I'll go with shocking and not because of thr trestimonies
, but the forces that will be there
i hope I make sense.
Date: 18 Apr 2023 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 50
Aw thank you for the update..well done. I hope the visit goes well. until you post again
Date: 18 Apr 2023 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 50
Vanessa/Hope loves that ratty teddy bear. Blue has been with her since she was born. Sam took Blue away from Bella but at least gave her to that baby, the baby he hoped no one would find.
Date: 18 Apr 2023 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 49
How sad. They finally, maybe, have an identification of that little girl. So many families ruined because of that monster, and the people that refused to step in and stop him.
Date: 18 Apr 2023 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh, how touching. Pass the tissues
Date: 17 Apr 2023 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 50
Oh how sweet!!!!!! Please update TOMORROW!!!! I can't wait to see how they enteract with each other.
Date: 15 Apr 2023 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 49
Today I find myself praying for the children who are trafficed. iT is a horrible thing for children.-
Date: 13 Apr 2023 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 49
Thank you for the updates..well done.. what an AMAZING story. Sad part is this probably true some where in the world. People are crazy. I hope Jane Dow is there little girl, how did Sam come in contact with her. until you post again.
Date: 13 Apr 2023 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 49
If only the monsters like Sam would stay in stories...
i cannot imagine what not knowing must be for parents. What I do know is that knowing and putting s child to rest is less awful, still not what should be.
iFor this story I wish all that is popping up will aid in putting Sam in jail for the rest of his life. And that that will give some closure and peace to allwho are joining this task.
Date: 13 Apr 2023 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 49
Oh poor Jasper, his anguish is so palpable through your words. Such an impact full chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2023 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 49
A very moving chapter. Poor Jasper.
Date: 10 Apr 2023 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 48
Loving this.
Date: 09 Apr 2023 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 48
All of this just makes me loathe Sam even more
Date: 09 Apr 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 48
Wow, Angela is something special, and Ben too. I am glad they are going to let Bella know Hope.
Date: 08 Apr 2023 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 47
I hope they'll be able to come to a compromise
Date: 07 Apr 2023 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 46
She is not same girl Sam locked up. She is a someone. She is Bella. She is Hope's mom. She has family who loves her. She is getting stronger a day stronger. She has people helping her She has people who love her.
Date: 07 Apr 2023 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 46
She is not same girl Sam locked up. She is a someone. She is Bella. She is Hope's mom. She has family who loves her. She is getting stronger a day stronger. She has people helping her She has people who love her.
Date: 07 Apr 2023 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
My heart hurts for everyone. Well, except for Sam. I hope he suffers.
Date: 03 Apr 2023 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 46
Oh, poor Bella. Seeing Hope growing up without her. Hope was growing but Bella felt like she was still the small fragile girl that Sam Uley kept locked away.
Date: 01 Apr 2023 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 45
Tia must have seen the article of Bella in the newspaper, otherwise why did she keep glancing at Bella. "Tia smiled, though it seemed almost as timid and nervous as Bella's..." Could she be a survivor too?
Date: 01 Apr 2023 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 44
She did name him. Wow. And she declared he doesn't own her anymore. Very big moment for Bella. How will Bella react to meeting the peole that adopted her baby. And they agreed to visitation. But Bella is not ready to take over care of her daughter. Maybe Maggie can work out some kind of agreement that leaves an open adoption option for Bella to get her back later.
Date: 01 Apr 2023 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 43
This story is killing me. The more that's revealed about the people who facilitated or turned a blind eye on what was going on sickens me.
Date: 01 Apr 2023 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 45
Thank you for the update..well done..I'm happy Yorkie got arrested ..until you post again
Date: 31 Mar 2023 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 45
Yorke is going down. Good. As I read I wondered if days, weeks after that day, he ever thought about Sam. If we was ever in his radar. However, now it doesn't matter too much since he will have the rest of his life to regert not listening that day.
What about Newton and Crowley? Will they face charges too?
As for what happened at the hospital. Bella will be faced with many, many people staring at her. It will be a challenge no doubt. Tia was just the first. I would like to know what Bella thought and felt.
Then Irina showing up, that was an amazing gesture. It tells me how much she cares and amires Carlisle. I guess Bella's story got to her too and she is trying to do somethign for her.
Can't wait for next chapter!!! (no pressure, just I really love reading it)
Date: 31 Mar 2023 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 45
I love the vindication that Jasper got from arresting Yorke. Good riddance !
Date: 31 Mar 2023 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 45
I am so glad that Jasper got Yorke.
Date: 24 Mar 2023 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 44
I don't know on how thing will go with her daughter. She is her mom and the adoption is not legal but at the same time she is not ready to take care of her. Really Ben and Angela do have an standing as Bella never signed the papers but they raised her. No matter what someone will be hurt.
Date: 24 Mar 2023 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 44
Love that Bella is taking a stand for herself. She admitted to Sam killing her parents. She called him by name. I hope she gets enough self-confidence to scream and yell at Sam. I also hope she gets to hit him just one time. Bella is going to get to see her little girl. I don't blame Angela and Ben for being worried about Bella being able to take care of Hope. I am too.
Date: 23 Mar 2023 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 44
The amount of people Bella has enraptured keeps on growing. if they were all to line up in front of her, that would be a very long line.
But, how Marcus said, she needs to do her part, she needs to take the stand and that will be quite the task. Thankfully there are so many who will help her keep it together.
I am with Kate in woring what Eleazar will try while defending Sam. Sam has been very lucky so far, but luck goes so far. I really hope his is finished.
There are a lot of people involved in this, and all those who turned their heads, did nothing or ignored things... how are they feeling now? I really hope they are feeling regret and remorse for their actions or lack of.
Date: 22 Mar 2023 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 43
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know if these people will ever pay for their crimes. I sure as hell hope so. This is crazy that no one stood up for these young girls. I hope EVERYONE involved will be punished. until you post again
Date: 22 Mar 2023 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 43
You are doing an amazing job with this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 22 Mar 2023 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 43
Every single chapter leaves me speachless!! I am trying to find the words to express my feelings while I read, sadly, I can't find them, yet.
Marcus is right, they all have a long way to go. Not only Bella, but all of the people who have fallen in love and afection for her. And Edward.. he is a teenager and I wish to be wrong, he could make a wrong move at any moment. However, until now, he has been the best at helping Bella. Somehow, he knows and feels what she needs. Something tells me that somehow Marcus has realized it and he will do all he can, along with Edward, in the difficult path in front of them. Bringing Bella back to believing life can be good, warm, sunny, nice. Making her beliee she is SOMEONE and EVERYTHING to so many people.
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Date: 18 Mar 2023 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 42
They are both hurting so much.
Date: 18 Mar 2023 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 42
Thank you for the update..well done..Sam & his council buddies need to be castrated..until you post agin
Date: 18 Mar 2023 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 42
That tribe is truly sick
Date: 17 Mar 2023 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 41
Sick sick sick
Date: 15 Mar 2023 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 35
Such a sad story
Date: 13 Mar 2023 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh my!!!!! That is just sick. Why did the Forks police not listen about Sam?
Date: 11 Mar 2023 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
Poor Bella. The council are monsters
Date: 09 Mar 2023 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my goodness
Date: 08 Mar 2023 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow just wow. I can't believe this. They have to get to the bottom of this. No way are they married. I hope they can fix this. I like that the judge isn't having any bs in his court room. I'm happy Edward & Carlisle got a chance to talk. I can't wait to see what happens next. well done. until you post again
Date: 07 Mar 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Date: 07 Mar 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 40
There is no.way he married her. He didn't let her out. I hope.someone kills him in jail!
Date: 07 Mar 2023 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 39
I think u did great! Marcus is so.intense!
Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
I love that Kate and Garrett are together! If Carlisle is smart he'll bring her some pancakes. I also hope she wants to go back with him to his house. I thought it was funny she doesn't like Rosie's cooking.
Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 37
Edward always needs to be there for any of these meetings
Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 36
Peter is still a little.creepy and so is Marcus.
Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 35
I really want Bella to see Hope. Her being a toddler might be overwhelming to her.
Date: 07 Mar 2023 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
I don't think I like Peter either.