Date: 21 Jan 2024 5:26 PM Title: I Keep Hearin' That Name
I love the story but just so you know Bella would have had a total of 7 years of schooling to become a lawyer. First you have to complete and undergraduate degree in pre law and take the LSAT before 3 years of law school, then Bella would have to pass the bar exam before practicing law.
Date: 08 May 2023 5:22 PM Title: Does Bein' Immortal Make Him Dumb
Merci j'ai adore
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2023 3:20 PM Title: Does Bein' Immortal Make Him Dumb
awe.... Jasper is such a romantic character at heart. Thanks for writing and sharing. :)
Date: 07 May 2023 2:29 AM Title: Does Bein' Immortal Make Him Dumb
Awesome update. Glad Aro finally got taken down along with his accomplices. Woo hoo for college grad B
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2023 4:40 PM Title: Not So Much A Bang, As A Whimper
Loving this story. Please update soon. I like all your stories. I find myself rereading them time and time again. You are an excellent writer. May many blessings come your way.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2023 1:07 AM Title: Not So Much A Bang, As A Whimper
Charlie, Billy and Sue really screwed up. But Charlie did the most to demolish his own life.
Bella and Jasper are living their fun and enjoyable life while being wary at the same time. Aro will "fuck up and find out" soon. :)
Alice is taking Jasper's threat very seriously...as she should.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Apr 2023 12:45 AM Title: Not So Much A Bang, As A Whimper
Glad all the evil ones are getting their just due.
Date: 09 Apr 2023 1:17 PM Title: I Have But One Life To Live
Glad they are getting some alone time with all the craziness going on. Buh bye emoward.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2023 2:32 AM Title: I Have But One Life To Live
I think Charlie and Aro (despite the years difference in their births) are twins who were separated at birth. Their actions are so similar that they are disgusting.
Marcus and Caius have their hands full with Aro while, the court system has it's hands full with Charlie.
Good riddance to Edward though.... :)
Jasper and Bella are just dealing with shit as it comes and loving each other along the way. I wonder if Bella is slowly changing into a vampire. Hmmm....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2023 2:57 AM Title: The Calm, The Storm, The Finale?!
Lots of drama, but at least the rational vamps, humans and shifters seem to have control of things. Thank goodness for small favors. :)
Sam mating with Rebecca Black is a new twist and I like it. Marcus and Caius teaming up against any and all future Aro shenanigans is also a good thing. It probably won't keep Aro from trying anything though.
Charlotte and Bella figuring out how to cover the vampire "shine" will make vamp life easier. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 25 Mar 2023 11:13 PM Title: The Calm, The Storm, The Finale?!
Loved it. Glad Jake some help too. Rofl for Charlie's fun time in jail.
Date: 12 Mar 2023 4:01 PM Title: How Far Is Too Far?
Glad Bella has so many people watching her back.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2023 5:28 AM Title: How Far Is Too Far?
It seems everyone is out for Charlie, Billy, Jake and Sue. LOL Instead of all the stories where Renee loses the plot, it's Charlie instead. hehehehe.... I wonder how far and strong he thought his power reach was. shakes head.....
Marcus taking some power out from under Aro is very funny also. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Mar 2023 1:12 AM Title: It's All Greek To Me
Awesome chapter. Loved their meeting with Marcus. Rofl for the video they got too.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2023 5:13 PM Title: It's All Greek To Me
Bella and Jasper confirmed much more than their mating bond. I had hoped he would like and get along with Bella, but having a paternal relationship with her is even better. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2023 7:20 AM Title: You Push Her, She'll Shove Back!
Charlie is over the top ridiculous with Bella by his actions and reactions. I would have left even sooner than her. Ugh....
Renee, on the other hand, is all kinds of awesome. Reading her chewing out Charlie was outstanding.
Bella probably feels like her Texas beginning is a vacation too with all of the new places and new things to see.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Feb 2023 2:31 AM Title: You Push Her, She'll Shove Back!
Wow.. Charlie is a real delusional arsehole. Nice to see Renee as a good parent. Love the 4 of them all making a new family and coven together. Poor Marcus.
Date: 31 Jan 2023 2:35 AM Title: Wouldn't It Be Nice...!
Oooh glad Skankya got taken down a few notches. Marcus is just awesome
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2023 2:48 AM Title: Wouldn't It Be Nice...!
Jasper and Marcus are actually a lot alike in maturity, wisdom and fairness. I can see Marcus helping him, and Jasper being loyal. Bella will probably have a similar relationship with Marcus. :)
Everything seems to be in place for the Greek holiday trip for Bella, Jasper, Peter and Char. Charlie is being a bucket over the top with his denial of Bella's future. Ugh... Renee was happy to support Bella though. :)
The bulk of the Denali coven is just weaslely. Ugh....
Looking forward to Bella's "show" at the diner with Charlie, Jacob and Billy. ;) I hope Jasper stays close. I'm wary.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Congratulations on Top 10 Favorite at TwiFanfictionRec for "The Road To Freedom Is Long." You're awesome as usual. ;)
Date: 20 Jan 2023 10:31 PM Title: The Guard Arrives, Let The Fun Begin
LOL you read my mind on the no protection thing! I love a good badass bella!
Date: 20 Jan 2023 10:31 PM Title: The Guard Arrives, Let The Fun Begin
LOL you read my mind on the no protection thing! I love a good badass bella!
Date: 18 Jan 2023 10:16 PM Title: The Guard Arrives, Let The Fun Begin
wow looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2023 2:03 AM Title: The Guard Arrives, Let The Fun Begin
jam packed chapter.....
Jasper gets along well with the Volturi guard that have brains and common sense. Jane, arriving at the castle with her head off is something that she didn't expect to happen. LOL
Jasper and Bella had an amazing first time togetger. (I'm jealous of fictional Bella.) ;)
What's up with Charlie? I'm glad that Bella has his number and can deal with him. Ugh...
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 07 Jan 2023 8:45 PM Title: The Guard Arrives, Let The Fun Begin
Glad someone put Jane and all the others their places. Aww for Jasper and Bella getting in some mate time.
Date: 07 Jan 2023 8:45 PM Title: The Guard Arrives, Let The Fun Begin
Glad someone put Jane and all the others their places. Aww for Jasper and Bella getting in some mate time.
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2022 8:37 AM Title: Time To Sort Out Some Shit!
It took quite a few points brought up by Jasper, and actions by the Whitlocks for Carlisle to start getting a clue that his goose might be cooked. Things will never be the same at the very least. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing. Happy Holidays. :)
Date: 24 Dec 2022 8:54 PM Title: Time To Sort Out Some Shit!
Love Em getting to take charge. Rofl for the tongue removal. Yea Aro is probably going to let Carlisle off with a slap unfortunately.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2022 1:05 AM Title: Mates, Singers & Liars!
Jasper isn't having to work very hard to hear or find out about the Cullens horrible unlawful ways. Emmett and Rose only know scant more than Bella. And she doesn't even know about vampires yet right?
That kiss between Bella and Jasper was hot though. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 10 Dec 2022 3:54 PM Title: Mates, Singers & Liars!
Wowsers. Enough strikes to make a perfect bowling game soon. Love it.
Date: 10 Dec 2022 3:54 PM Title: Mates, Singers & Liars!
Wowsers. Enough strikes to make a perfect bowling game soon. Love it.
Date: 01 Dec 2022 11:01 PM Title: I Keep Hearin' That Name
Love this!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2022 11:56 PM Title: I Keep Hearin' That Name
It's a punishment, but really a job for Jasper. And he has manager type freedom with his decisions too.
I appreciated Jasper and Sam's interaction. They both learned something by being civil.
Now he has some pompous morons to investigate. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2022 11:31 PM Title: I Keep Hearin' That Name
Ooh awesome start. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 26 Nov 2022 7:33 PM Title: I Keep Hearin' That Name
I love Jasper stories, Great start. Thanks!