Date: 25 May 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 55
I just found your story early this morning and have spent the entire day reading. Now suffering from dehydration and less two boxes of kleenexes, I have reached the end of chapter 55. I must say that your story has touched my heart. I am eagerly awaiting your next update.
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Date: 25 May 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 55
nice dream
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Date: 25 May 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh crap! What the hell is wrong with Bella?
Date: 25 May 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 55
great chapter
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Date: 25 May 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 55
im happy she is finally getting a happy start ! cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 25 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 55
i loved the dream
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Date: 25 May 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok, I am a little worried about Bella.
Date: 25 May 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, Edward can really rub Bella the wrong way. I love what you are doing with Bella's character. First cheerleader, now homecoming queen nominee plus she plays not only the piano but the cello too? No wonder the girl is exhusted.
Author's Response: I like a strong Bella:
Date: 25 May 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn, that's a lot of twins! Bella as a cheerleader? That's a new one. Can't wait to see how you play with our favorite characters in this story.
Oh, and the shower was funny, but Bella could totally get them back by sleeping in the buff for a week. I guarantee Charlie and Emmett would never try that again! LOL
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lol, I wish I had thought about that:)
Date: 24 May 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 54
Bella needs to take care of herself and let Carlisle do his job. He said Emmett was ok. She needs to trust him.
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Date: 24 May 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 54
Well I guess that it is a good thing that she hasn't had a reaction to the marrow. This is a good sign that everything is working.
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Date: 24 May 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 54
great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 54
It was good. Can't rush things. It's a slow process.
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Yes, it is:) Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 54
carlisle and esme are so cool
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[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 53
It was nice to hear it frm Emm's POV. Thx
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[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 52
I think you captured it very well. Way to go!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 51
I so loved the letters between Bella and the 13 year old. It was good to see that senerio.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 53
Well I just cried like a baby!! Gotta love that Emmy Bear!!
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Date: 23 May 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 53
Well lets see if this works out for all of them.
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Date: 23 May 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 52
I really hope that this works for all of them because they need this to work.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 53
Go big brother Em.
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Date: 23 May 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 53
great chapter
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Date: 23 May 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 53
This was such a tear producing chapter.
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Thank you, I cried alot with this entire story:)
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 52
You can feel her fear. Well done.
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Date: 22 May 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 52
You did a great job with this chapter. It was heartfelt and well wriiten. I have enjoyed this story, it has made me laugh, cry and really feel love for the characters. You are an amazing writer. Thanks for posting this story. Keep writing. Looking forward to more. :)
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Thank you, hon:)
Date: 22 May 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 52
great chapter
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Date: 21 May 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 51
What an emotional nightmare for Bella. I feel so bad for Edward having to see that and not be able to wake her up.
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Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 51
Emotional can't begin to describe the chapter. Brought tears to my eyes when reading her dream. Heartwrenching!
Author's Response:
I cried like a baby when writing this one. Well, most of this story, actually.
Date: 21 May 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 51
hate those dreams that feel real
Author's Response:
Thank you, I do too ;(
Date: 21 May 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 51
great chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 51
Wow that means that she is on the road to getting better! I hope that this works for her and all of her hope isn't lost!
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 50
That is good that others feel like they have an outlet in Bella's blog page. Cancer is a terrible disease and it hits and devistates many families. In my own family there have been many cancer stories.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 50
Man, this was so hard to read! I can't imagine being in those situations. I would hope that the real unsong hero's are able to get some consolation in a real support group and have supportive family members and friends. This is good food for thought. Thx
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Date: 20 May 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 50
I think the blog is a good idea for Bella to talk to other patients.
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Date: 20 May 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for writing this story. It is awesome. I am enjoying this view of Bella and Edward. It's a great story and your writing is awesome. i hope that there will be a happy ending.
I love stories that make you love the characters and that you care about them enough that you actually get emotionally attached to them, and that you end up cry when they go through things.
Your doing an awesome job. Keep up the awesome work. :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 May 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 50
great chapter
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Date: 20 May 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 49
great chapter
Date: 20 May 2010 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 48
great chapter
Date: 20 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 50
hope b feels better after. ya making me cry ua know.
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Date: 19 May 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 49
hope she'll be ok in ther end
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Date: 19 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 49
I am glad that Carlisle is thinking about letting her go home faster because I think that she will get better faster at home than in the hospital.
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Date: 18 May 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 48
poor b
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Date: 18 May 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 48
As sad as I find this story I really hope that she pulls through this. I have a friend at work that found out that his Leukemia came back after being in remission for 4 years. This transplant is what he is facing now and while it breaks my heart, reading about what is going on with Bella makes me feel better about him because I can kinna read about what is going on with him.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope your friend the best of luck during his transplant.
Date: 18 May 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 48
I hope the transplant works for her, she has so much to live for.
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 47
I hope meeting Nick and hearing his story gave her a little more courage and hope.
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The more people she knows who have done this, and survived, the more hope she has. Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 47
And another one of the things on her list is being done. Hopefuly things go well for her and she will get to go see Nick soon to do more songs.
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Date: 17 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 47
great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 47
Bellas bucket list & Edward is helping her. Has she frozen eggs in case she survives?
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Thank you, no she hasn't:)
Date: 16 May 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 46
I am so glad that she had this special time. It will put her in the right mindset to start the fight again with the transplant.
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Date: 16 May 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 46
wicked update
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Thanky you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 46
great chapter
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Thanky you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 46
That is so sweet that they did this for her so that she got to enjoy christmas with them before she won't be able to be around them for a while.
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[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 45
Very sweet and poignant! I liked how you slowed down the drama and just let them enjoy.
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Date: 15 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 45
So Edward got out of school early too. Well I guess that we all know what is going to happen next and that is Bella preparing for her bone marrow replacement.
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Date: 15 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 45
So Edward got out of school early too. Well I guess that we all know what is going to happen next and that is Bella preparing for her bone marrow replacement.
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thanks:)
Date: 15 May 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 45
great chapter
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Date: 14 May 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 44
That was very nice of her classmates. I bet she didn't think she had so many friends who really cared about her.
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Date: 14 May 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 44
great chapter
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Thank you :)
Date: 14 May 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 44
Bawling!!!
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Date: 14 May 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 44
Aww.. She has some of the best friends in the world to do this for her because she is going to miss her senior prom.
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Thank you so much for all the reviews:) I enjoyed each and every one of them.
Date: 14 May 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 43
That had to be one of the hardest thing that she had to do! Give up her one normal thing in her life so that she can possibly go and die.
Date: 14 May 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 42
Wow I think that everything is finally crashing down on her and she is trying to hold on to everything that she can before things get worse.
Date: 14 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 41
This is so hard for her to go through because of all of the death that has been around her lately and it seems like she has one foot in her own grave too. I hope that everything works out well for them because she deserves to live.
Date: 14 May 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 40
It was good that she has someone that she can talk to that has gone through all of this too. And I must say thank God that she finally agreed to the transplant.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 39
I really think that Bella needs to think long and hard about that transplant because it could be the difference between getting to spend a lifetime with Edward and everyone or dying at 18.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
I am glad that they found her before it was too late. I hope that she was going to make it through this.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 37
I haven't cried through this story until this chapter because now she is giving up and that is so sad because she has her whole life waiting for her to live.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 36
I am glad that she won and that is wonderful that she gave her scholarship to someone that needed it. That just goes to show just how selfless she is.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well here is their moment one of the lives! There is a another thing that can be crossed off their list and I am with Bella hopefully there is so much more that they cross off their list.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
That really gave them a better feeling of what Charlie was thinking and I think taht is a good thing that they now know what was going on in his mind and that he didn't decide to tell his children that their mother left that was all Renee.
Date: 14 May 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
I really think that maybe he should get into trouble for that. I mean he touched and hurt someone.
Date: 14 May 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 44
that was really sweet
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[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 44
"Feel the love"....what a wonderful thing for all of them to do for Bella and Edward. If she doesn't make it, at least she will have her memory of attending Prom and her friends and family will as well.
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[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 44
Now that was sweet, Sr. Prom!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 43
I am really enjoying this story even though it is kind of heartwrenching! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you :)
Date: 14 May 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
It is sad that she is giving up. I never thought that she would do that.
Date: 13 May 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
So Bella got to know more about Renee. It seems that all Bella had to do to get to know Renee was go to New York.
Date: 13 May 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 30
That is sweet that they are trying to act like everything is normal for them.
Date: 13 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow they got another piece of the mystery behind the money that they were left! Who knew that Renee was famous.
Date: 13 May 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
That is terrible that she had this reaction when she isn't home where she could be comfortable.
Date: 13 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hope that the both of them do well in New York.
Date: 13 May 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
At least there is some good news that her numbers are looking goo and that is what is importaint.
Date: 13 May 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
That is sad that she got hurt. Hopefully this doesn't hurt her worse than she is.
Date: 13 May 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
Damn Charlie really kept things from his kids didn't he! That is amazing for them though.
Date: 13 May 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well I hope that they don't have a fight like that for a while. I wonder what they are going to find out in this meeting.
Date: 13 May 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 22
Aw she is starting to get worse. I hope that she gets better from all of this.
Date: 13 May 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
This story is really sad now. I can't beleive that the Hale's and Charlie are gone that is so sad because Bella has been through so much.
Date: 13 May 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
No! Not Charlie he and his kids have been through so much!!
Date: 13 May 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well now the whole town knows and I hope that they do as she wishes and gives her space.
Date: 13 May 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was so sad. Now everyone knows about it. At least now the rumors will stop she had to have know that it wouldn't be that much longer becasue of the whole hair thing.
Date: 13 May 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Aww... Edward bought them a house!! That is so cute!
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Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 13 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well it is kinna like a solidarity thing going on with them and their friends with the whole marriage thing.
Date: 13 May 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think that Edward and Bella started a trend in their group there. I wonder why they are getting married now not that it is a bad thing it is just that they are still in High School.
Date: 13 May 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
For the two girls that didn't want to be homecoming Queen they got runner up and Homecoming Queen. Oh the horrors!!
Date: 13 May 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
I guess that now the whole school is going to know what is going on with Bella because I really don't think that she needs all of that right now.
Date: 13 May 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
She has a list now! That means that she has to finish everything on that list right?
Date: 13 May 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Why were they glaring at her? Did someone let something out and now they know about what is wrong with Bella?
Date: 13 May 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
What is Lauren doing there? I hope that her mother doesn't tell her anything because that could get her into trouble and could start a whole bunch of problems for Bella at school.
Date: 13 May 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Those girls are terrible. I hope that they don't piss off Alice because something tells me that they will regret it.
Date: 13 May 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am sure that she is sick of all the sympothy right now. Hopefully the rest of the students won't treat her any differently because of the marriage.