Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:03 PM Title: Mistress Tanya
Well sweetheart I am a reformed lurker and review every chapter I read now. I figure it is the least I can do since you and all of the other authors feed my ff adiction daily, it's like paying my dealer! Lol! So you will always have love from me. And do not worry about what people want to see in each chapter this is your story! We should all be happpy that you have chosen to share it with us ;)
He has seen her! Now what is he gonna do about it?!?!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:22 PM Title: Master Aro
Well I agree background is important. And to see that eddie is still thinking of and dreaming about miss bella, well that just makes the wait for the meeting that much better. I can just imagine eddie waiting in a room at the club all neked and in his glory, eyes down not allowed to look at his new mistress until the end when she comands him to cum and he sees her and realizes his dreams have come true. Yummy!
Author's Response:
You have a vivid imagination :-) That's not quite the way it's going to happen, but I hope you'll like it anyway ;)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:13 PM Title: Under the canopy
Love their first night. I can't wait to see what the light of day holds.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:58 PM Title: Under the canopy
omg! just really OMFG! wonder how cold i can make my shower?
hope you update like now as in like NOW!
ace story and omg
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:54 PM Title: Edward's morning
Well at least eddie realizes that dropping the card in her bag was probably a dumb move. He seems to be more accepting of his new needs
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:35 PM Title: Soap cleans all
Well just as I thought eddie-boy does not seem too happy that eddie jr. Wants to be dominated. Looks like he is gonna have to come to terms with what his body really needs.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Under the canopy
I love Edward´s POV. Please update soon!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:09 PM Title: New games at the club
sounds like miss bella is anatural domme, all she needed to do was open that door.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chocolate coloured fantasy
i wonder how long it takes eddie to realize he wants to be dominated? how does he get from here to there?
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:37 AM Title: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"
well i am so happy that carlisle was open and understanding to bella's need to top
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:26 AM Title: The business card
amazing how thinking of something with 'green eyes' feels like cheating to bella. i get it only because she expanded the thought from ' wow he's hot! i wonder what he looks like neked' to actually thinking of calling him and starting something with him.
i wonder what carlisle is gonna think of where bella allowed her mind to go?
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:02 AM Title: The meeting
well it sure does sound like eddie shows some submissive tendancies. i wonder if bella called him or if she just blew it off as an 'it'll never work anyways' kind of thing...
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:56 AM Title: Young Bella moving to town
wow bella is loaded?!?!? and she met carlisle online, wow
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:48 AM Title: Flashbacks
wow that sounded like a hell of a punishment!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:16 AM Title: At the club
well at least carl let her cum while he took off the clamps. that shit has got to hurt!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:21 AM Title: Initiation
bella is bowing down to hot daddy c! what a lucky girl, he could spank me any day.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:05 PM Title: Under the canopy
That was just what the DOM ordered for Edward. He is so sweet in this story.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:08 PM Title: Under the canopy
MMMMM .. oh to be the oil that is rubbed all over Edward*sigh*
good chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Initiation
great chapter!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Under the canopy
I like that she's making him comfortable and just building a slow burn, she knows what she's doing. Great chapter!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Under the canopy
yay! Bella and Edward are finally together. can't wait for their bondage games..I loved the new banner!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:27 PM Title: Under the canopy
Bella taking of Edward is wonderful. I can only think of the words 'sexual healing'.
I'm still afraid that Edward is going to completely break down once everythin has settled.
Lovely chapter!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:52 PM Title: Under the canopy
i'm so glad your back from your vacay! great chapter. smiles for edward feeling better. much better. i hope to see more of bella next chapter. thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:35 PM Title: Under the canopy
Good job I'm a reader and not a writer as I honestly have no words after reading that delicious chapter. *gulp....sigh*
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:30 PM Title: Initiation
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Please please please..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:15 PM Title: Under the canopy
Loved the chapter. Edward´s wish of worshipping her legs made me smile. I really liked how you discribed the chemistry between Bella and Erward. Well maybe that´s why he totally trusts her after the Tanya incident. I don´t know if I could trust a stranger after something happend that required a safeword, but I liked how you discribed the fellings Edward had during aftercare.
Now go jump around the house ;)
Author's Response:
I thought of you when I wrote about the foot/leg-worshipping, so I'm glad you noticed it!
I am jumping and writing right now AND thinking about all the naughty things I'm going to have Bella do to Edward ;-)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:05 PM Title: Under the canopy
i think he needed a sweet night. And I still want her to punch Biatchya right in the face.
Author's Response:
I'm working on an outtake where Tanya will be brought to justice but I don't know when it'll be finished. Justice will be done, I promise :-)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:03 PM Title: Under the canopy
Glad to have ou back!
Edward deserved some tenderness and care.
Lovely chappie!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Under the canopy
I am glad you had a good vacation now get your ass bussy LOL. I missed you. Bella is so sweet to Edward
Author's Response:
Yes, my ass is busy busy busy writing right now ;-) (I'm very talented, right? ;-) )
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Under the canopy
I liked this chapter, poor Edward deserved some love :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:09 PM Title: Under the canopy
It all makes sense now. they had to "know" of each other a little for him to be able to trust her enough for them to get to this point.. cause had she been a mere stranger... There is the possiblity that he would not have gone with her... So.. in a word... you rock...and your story is amazing. All this build up to get us here. VERY NICE.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me! And yes, it has been a long journey for them to get to this point and I hope you aren't the only one thinking it was worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chocolate coloured fantasy
loved it
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:49 PM Title: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"
loved it
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:39 PM Title: The business card
loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:25 PM Title: Under the canopy
great chapter, bella is so caring but could edward not have got out of those harsh jeans sooner ouch!, cant wait for them to begin to realise they have worked at the same building for 5 years, hope they stay together, thanks tracy
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:25 PM Title: Young Bella moving to town
loved it
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:23 PM Title: Under the canopy
well i bet edward likes this side but i know he will reveal in all sides of bella. he needed to be taken care of and she did that. i know she won't be all nice and tender but she will know what he wants and needs and will let him get the most out of them. she will not be like tanya. noone should be like tanya . that is the wrong way to be a dom and even tanya knows that but doesn't care. i think edward will get the most because bella was taught what and how to treat someone. i am looking forward to the upcoming chapters and their playroom scenes. thanx
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:18 PM Title: Flashbacks
loved it glad she got rid of james
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:03 PM Title: Under the canopy
bella is so sweet!!! cant wait for them to talk about the first time that they saw each other!! and for a scene with the two of them!!! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:01 PM Title: Under the canopy
So I really think you should update tomorrow, because I'm really enjoying this story so far and can't wait to see domme Bella in action with a submissive Edward. It's very rare that I come across stories where Edward is the sub and out of all of them, this is the only one I actually want to follow. Loved this chapter and can't wait for more!
~Ingenuity15
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:56 PM Title: At the club
can't wait to see who the new sub is loved it but ouch lol
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:45 PM Title: Under the canopy
I love stories where Bella is the Domme, and they are few and far between. Always a pleasure to read your updates!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:44 PM Title: Initiation
that was hot loved it can't wait to read more
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:54 PM Title: Awakening
I like it veeeery much, as always :-))
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:02 PM Title: On the floor
I really like this story and appreciate the history of the characters. I regret that I am not well enough to review very often; otherwise, I would review every chapter that I read. I have very low endurance and extreme fatigue due to Multiple Sclerosis. Reading doesn't take up near the energy that typing does. I love reading these stories, so keep up the excellent writing.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Awakening
I really like it :D
I hope you'll update soon, and this next chapter better be smutty ! lol
Date: 14 Jul 2010 3:31 PM Title: Awakening
Thank you for the update! Enjoying your story and can't wait to see where it leads.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 4:37 AM Title: Awakening
I'm glad you'r eback, I've truly missed this story. You have been in my prayers.
I was so happy that she woke up and stopped him! If he would have gotten out that door there's no telling when she would see him again. And for him to trust her to take care of him after what happend to him, that speaks volumes. I'm excited to see what becomes of these two.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:08 AM Title: Awakening
I love this story! I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2010 10:37 PM Title: Awakening
I don't care if this chapter was lemon free, it was nice to see some less sexually overt tension between Dom and sub. Plus I had a good drool thinking of a naked whippedward.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2010 7:33 AM Title: Awakening
The last chapter was hard with Tanya and Edward - so pleased Edward has so far trusted Bella to look after him. I am loving your story - the build up, pace and language. So calm.
Thanks.
Date: 04 Jul 2010 7:08 AM Title: Awakening
Swoon... nice chapter. I really liked the break of drama.
I cringed when I read that Edward wore jeans and a fitting shirt. That must have hurt like a bitch on his raw skin. And I don´t know if I would be able to sit in a car after such a session even with the oil and massage.
Looking forward to the smut.
Happy spankings ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2010 5:42 AM Title: Awakening
Seems that the experience with Tanya hasn't changed his sub mentality. He just needs a domme who will care for him properly!
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Awakening
well thank god he accepted her help meeting bella in the flesh will be so good for him and she can nurse edward back to health, cant wait for them to begin to talk and realise they have thought of each other for years, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 04 Jul 2010 2:31 AM Title: Awakening
Bring on the smut!!! Edward needs some TLC from Bella...
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:32 AM Title: Awakening
Go forth and write then. I really like this chapter, and find myself hating your Tanya more and more throughout the whole thing.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:10 PM Title: Awakening
oh no don't leave us there!
good chappie........poor Edward.
:)molly
Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:27 PM Title: Awakening
Well I am glad he agreed to let her take care of him.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:21 PM Title: Awakening
OMG, this was so touching. He is a champ through it all. I would forget I am a sub and find that winch and kit her A*S.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 8:50 PM Title: Awakening
I love it going to her house and they did not even talk about it he just wants her so much. I tell you these other fucks reading better review LOL
Date: 03 Jul 2010 8:37 PM Title: Awakening
soo good.. soo soo good. poor edward.. I am very glad he went with her. I wonder if he was just to overwhelmed to go back to familar surroundings.
Can't wait for more. Great job. Thanks
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:38 PM Title: Awakening
I'm looking forward to reading some smutty goodness so I guess I better review. I really like this story so far and I hope to get some really good Domme Bella and Sub Edward action soon! Update as quickly as you can please!
~Ingenuity15
Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:33 AM Title: Reasons
Carlisle needs to grow a set, Tanya needs to be soundly beaten, and poor Eddie needs a bit of TLC
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:49 PM Title: Reasons
sorry for your loss.
well thank you for writing. it was great to have cpov and very eye awakening. my goodness esme brings a story with her. how sad she has to endure tanya. i guess like father like daughter. she was just like daddy. poor esme. i am glad she found carlisle. it was truly sad how she used her power as a dom to break her sub only because she didn't want ot lose face. what a bitch. man i hope sooner or later she does get hers. if ever karma needs to strike someone i would believe it is her. i can't believe seth went back to her. man he must have a death wish. if she can do that torture to one sub then she is doing it to all. wow love it
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:47 AM Title: Reasons
I'm seriously hating this Tanya and hoping that there is some escape from the agreement between Esme/Carlisle & Tanya
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:13 AM Title: Soap cleans all
Edward is very sexy on his knees. This is only thebeginning..hehe..I bet he can take alot more from Mistress Bella when the time is right Thank you for giving us a parallel insight into his head so we can see what brought him to be the person he will be when he meets Bella..
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chocolate coloured fantasy
Great! Now they are both fantasizing about each other...Can't wait to see the sparks fly!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 1:59 AM Title: The meeting
Love the chance "meeting" of these two!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 1:14 AM Title: Flashbacks
A well written turn-on!
Date: 28 Jun 2010 11:35 PM Title: Reasons
Cant wait for the next update..im hooked on this story..and I dont normally do bdsm stories but im lovn this one xo
Date: 28 Jun 2010 11:32 PM Title: Crush
killer chapter...I was reading like pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease safe word!!!! Just fell over this story and im going post it as one of my rec's on fb :) xo~Aud
Date: 28 Jun 2010 11:44 AM Title: Reasons
Just found this story and I love it. update soon.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:12 PM Title: Reasons
great chapter, so now we know the reasons why carlisle was helping tanya she is a nasty piece of work is it not enough that she forced esme out of her home but she keeps on threatning them, i'll be intrested to hear what edward has to say next he'll be in a lot of pain but with bella so that should make him feel a little better, thanks tracy
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:43 PM Title: Reasons
Really enjoying the story :)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:36 PM Title: Reasons
OH NOOO.. I didn't realize this was the last chapter.. What on EARTH are you doing to me... :(. lol..
So YES.. I will be on pins and needles patiently waiting for the next update...
I can't wait to see what Edward thinks of Bella's aftercare. I wonder if Tanya ever provided aftercare... ??
Thanks again.
Author's Response:
I really enjoyed your reviews, though I'm sorry for making you cry (not!) ;-) It means a lot to me to be able to touch readers like that, even if it means that I have a very twisted mind for coming up with stuff like this. It's good that you've only started to read my story now, I've just given it a months rest for personal reasons, but now I'm back and ready to entertain! And it will get a lot more easy from now on, at least I think so *winks*
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:29 PM Title: Crush
Gosh.. I am crying.. I can't believe how horrible he must feel.. I know you understand this...but I have to write it out for me...so if you don't want to read my ramblings just skip this next part...(Considerate my journal of thoughts...a introspection of how this story makes me feel...)
By "loving" her, Edward had put all his trust and well being in her hands. Something that I am sure was very hard for him to do, but it is clear that once he makes the leap of faith, he is 100% committed. He didn't want to let her down, and would have taken anything she gave him to prove himself to her... SHE...(can't even say the nasty cunts name) took that love, trust and obiedance and used it against him. She KNEW that he would make her push him hard, and that he really wanted to make her proud. So, instead of telling him... having a conversation about what she was feeling... she abused her power and broke him completely. I have seen kids like this at school. They would do anything for their parents love... They trust in their parents to do what is best for them...They would never go against what their parents say...Only to have that thrown back in their faces over and over again. The one advantage Edward has is that he DOES have a safe word... However the damage is done. My students that have struggled with this type of abusive power struggles will NEVER trust again. As I suspect Edward will have a hard time as well.. for long time.
Okay.. sorry about that.. just had to get that out.. As you can tell your story is evoking some pretty deep emotions for me. Which, as an author's stand point is a wonderful thing.
Thank you so much for your story. I am really enjoying the journey...(even if I am mess right now..) lol
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:06 PM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
Oh now that was GOOD.. well.. BAD... but GOOD...(I have no idea what I am saying...but I liked it.) lol
I am so glad your story is here, and I hope you are starting to get lots of reviews.
Love it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 2:43 AM Title: Reasons
interesting to see where this goes .. thank you for writing
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: Reasons
I'm sorry for your loss. Hope you have some time to escape into other worlds in ff.
Oh I did not know my hate for tanya could grow but it did. Bitch. I hope you let them take her down!!!!!! Hope we see an update soon. Meg
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:08 PM Title: Crush
Oh Tanya is a sick one. Evil. So not right. Can't wait for them to wake up. Meg
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:58 PM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
Oh my that was hard to read. But well written. I'm almost never a tanya fan. And most defiantly not in your story. But I bet there is a reason. And I hope for renvenge by Bella. Meg
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:40 PM Title: Reasons
C is a WUSS!!! He would danger other lives because he's hiding his and Ms E'. secret lift style. Get over it and do the right thing. T yes, yours will come one way or the other.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:23 PM Title: Reasons
Wow, that was so NOT what I was expecting! I was really looking forward to Tanya getting punishd, but insted she gets away with it ! I don't know what to think of Carlisle and his infatuation with Tanya. I can understand his need to protect Esme, but maybe there are other ways to get back at Tanya? But then again, he has this "thing" for her.... Can't wait to read where this is leading to.
xox Linda
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:20 PM Title: Crush
BETTER!!!
Author's Response:
;-)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:04 PM Title: The job and harsh introductions at the club
This is one of the best stories I've read on this subject. With that being said I have to say that first of all that was a great injustice done to E. C and T both crossed some serious trust rules. If T wanted to be with S, she should have been honest and told E. Secondly C should not have gone along with that plan as well. He as a DOM and well regarded in the BDSM world and should have not agreed and told T to be truthful to him. E is a good SUB as well as loyal and prideful of course. Yes he should have safe word. However, she was his DOMMES and had a duty to him knowing he wouldn't go down without a fight, probably because he thought he would disappoint her (you think!). He truly did not deserve that harsh treatment. Lastly, that was a very hard chapter to read. I truly hope from this point on it gets better. You ask for reviews and now you have it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, it means a lot to me!
And yes, my characters aren't the most likable out there, but that's the way I've choosen to write them. Of course Tanya shouldn't act like she does, Carlisle should interfere, and Edward should stand up for himself, but they are only human and make mistakes like all of us.
And it will get easier from now on, don't worry.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you took the time to do it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:46 PM Title: Reasons
Welcome back! I was very pleased to get a Carlisle POV. I hope we can move on from Tanya's crazy ass. I hate her and cannot wait to see how Edward reacts to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:08 PM Title: On the floor
Excellent, Excellent you did a great job. Let the games begin.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:49 PM Title: Mistress Tanya
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Author's Response:
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[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:22 PM Title: Master Aro
Aro was good to Edward. I can't imagine Tonya not being a nut. We will see!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:30 PM Title: Soap cleans all
I will be patient for the meeting.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:15 PM Title: New games at the club
I must say, this is the first I've every read where C have been DOM, B a DOM, E a SUB I guess a some point. I truly love this story. Well done~~
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:35 PM Title: Reasons
There you are again. Thanks for keep on writing.
Let me say I´m really sorry for your loss.
The whole chapter I wanted to strangle Tanya, again. I really hope there will be further ramifications for her.
I didn´t like Carlisle´s reaction. I know that he loves Esme dearly and wants to protect her but he should have done something about the whole Tanya fiasco. Maybe there will be something in the future?
I´m really looking forward to the EPOV.
Many spankings to you.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 7:28 AM Title: Reasons
I dont know about Carlisle. Isnt he suppose to be devoted and exclusive to Esme? I dont think he should be getting turned on by Tanya especially after what she had done to Edward. I hope someone puts Tanya in her place.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 6:50 AM Title: Reasons
I know men are weird, but it turns my stomach to think that Carlisle could be attracted to Tanya. I hope for Esme's sake that he never acts on it even if it's just playing around in a scene.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:05 AM Title: Crush
I love your submissive Edward. I certainly hope that last scene doesn't completely break him and I hope you don't plan on changing him too much for his interactions with Bella .
Also, I thought your build up to their initial meeting was perfect. I liked seeing exactly were they came from.
Keep up what you're doing, it is well done.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:18 PM Title: Reasons
First off, I'm sorry for your loss and I'm glad you're feeling better enough to return to writing. I've missed reading about Subward and Domella.
I certainly hope that at some point Tanya will get what's coming to her. And I'm looking forward to reading some EPOV!!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:48 PM Title: Reasons
I can't wait to see how Carlisle puts Tanya in her place. She needs to be treated the way she treats her subs!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: Reasons
I don't feel very good about letting Tanya get away with this. I would hope she rots in hell, but I think public humiliation is much better.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 9:12 PM Title: Reasons
Tanya is a fuckin freak. I think Esme needs to live her life and tell her kids about the prick she was married to I am sure they knew all along.