Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
they won!!
Winning;D)
Author's Response:
They sure did :) Thank you!
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
oh my gosh, what a ridiculous place for the statue to turn up, hilarious.
Author's Response:
Haha had to be there! At least nobody knows it's him! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
Somehow I managed to screw up my review of this story on Ch 43, but i will skip back to this chapter. Let me say, I love this story!! So very funny!! Emett is hilarious as well as Esme and Renee. The pure love of edward and Bella is unmistakeable!! The laughs and love and lemons, yeah, very good!!! I hope this story continues here or in a sequel, yes, its that good!! We all want to know about Edwards football career, as well as Bellas reporting!! Marriage and babies, yes, we all want to hear about it!! I am not alone in this!!!! The football slang was great, very knowledgeable!!!! This story is GREAT, and I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Hahah i'm so glad you love it! Emmett, Renee and esme are total handfulls!
E&B are so very much in love that I myself adore their relationship!
There's still more story to tell, but we are close to the end. I think I'll wrap it up the way you want! Thanks so much ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
I began reading this story a few days ago from the beginning, let me tell you I loved it!! I did not understand completely all of the football slang, but this story is soooo funny. I laughed so much at Emmetts antics as well as Esme and Renees!! And the pure love of Edward and Bella could not be missed!! I hope you continue this story with the F & T or a sequel. Edwards career thru football, Bells career, their marriage, and kids maybe??? We all love to hear about it!!! Thank you for a very entertaining story, I look forward for more updates!!
Author's Response:
The football is a true joy to write and I'm glad you're trying to get it anyway! There's more to come, I promise! I think you'll be happy with how they end up! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
I hope he proposes at the superbowl. That would be so cool. I can't wait until they get Emmett back.
Author's Response:
:) You'll see next chapter! Em's hooked! Thanks for the review!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
Have I told you how much I like how you detail the games? It almost feels like I'm watching the game!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love bringing the football in and getting wrapped up in it just like a real game! I'm so glad you enjoy that!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
Hoist by your own petard Edward! Emmett got you too lololol. Good football description. was actually fist pumping there at the end.
Author's Response:
Hahah yep! Of course Em turned it around on him!
I'm glad you were into the game! Thanks so much for the review ;)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
bring on the superbowl :-)
Author's Response:
It's on! hehe Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
GREAT Chapter!!! Emmett is such a hoot---you just keep coming up with better ways for him to be such a jokester!!! Where DO you find your ideas???
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Haha I'm so glad you liked it! I have no idea where they come from, but they seem to come naturally to me. hehe I'll be glad when I don't have to think up any pranks for awhile though! :)
Thanks so much for the review! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
oh wow great update !!! can't believe Emmett added Edward to that tape. hmmm wonder how Edward will propose????
Author's Response:
Thank you! Of course Em had to bring Edward into it! And Darnell. Anything he could get :)
We'll see! He has a plan :)
Thanks for the review!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
So cute, and I have to say I reread the part where the team was atching the ' footage ' too Funny. Leave it to Em to do something like that, at an important time for them. Cant wait til the next chapter. LOVE LOVE this story
Author's Response:
Haha Em broke up the tension, didn't he? He knew the right time to spring it and spring it he did! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! We're getting to the big stuff now! Thanks so much for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
That game was so intense, it felt like the real thing!! I have basketball to tide me over, but even that's coming to a head about now! Soon it'll only be baseball... This is a terrible fate! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing the football and hearing that you were involved with it! Means so much! Basketball is almost gone and baseball is still...just dragging along. haha I'm glad you're enjoying and I'll have more football for you soon!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
hi!!! is amazing how I never see the game and I do not have idea how it is, but when you writen it I always understand!!! I look in the google it and I found a lot the womans dancin!!! I was looking for someone look like Edward but i see nothing!! lol how you have a idea for do this Edward??? I loved the chapter!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm glad you can understand! Means I"m doing a good job! I have no idea why you'd see women dancing but I'll take your word for it! I love football and I lvoe Edward so I had ot combine them :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
Why would Bella want to rub an ugly statue when she has the real thing to rub all over. I don't this story to end I lov it so much.
Author's Response:
Haha so very true! She'll hold out for some real abs ;) I'm glad you want more! Even after it's done, lots of outtakes to come! :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I won't bug you too much LOL
just know it is a great story, thank you and your creative mind
Author's Response:
You could never bug me! I'm so glad you enjoy it and I love hearing your thoughts!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
Yay! NFC Championship here we come!
Author's Response:
That we do! Bring on the Bears! :) Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
I think I'll cry when this is done boohoo! This has been one of my favorite stories. thank you so much, could you maybe do a followup story?
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you don't want it to end! I love that! I promise there is a lot of stuff to follow, outtake wise. We'll see on a sequel. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
aww! that last part was sweet. I love how focused Edward was in the game. He was ready to win! I'm sad to see this end but at least we have a couple chaps & an epilogue left before the real end. that's always good news. keep up the great work thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
Hahah I'm glad you're here too! Thank you :) There's plenty ahead, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
geat! i actually enjoy the game details the way you write them.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's a huge compliment to me! Love it! See you soon with more!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
Oh may those girls are definitely going to get Emmett---his ineterest is already peaked!!! Nice to see Seth congratulate Bella!
Good Chapter
Author's Response:
Haha they sure are ;) Seth buried the hatchet. They may not be friends but at least he can be civil! Thanks for the review hon!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
noooooooooo...not 2 more chapters . waah! some good football tho lol, I can almost picture Brees in his black and gold now and his face when he gets pic'd. LOL at Emmett too.
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I'm sure there will be lots of outtakes ahead though! Still plenty left for these guys. Glad you could see it happening and of course, Emmett ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
awesome as usual. cant wait to see how it goes down w/emmett
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Em's situation will occur in an outtake but it'll be fun! Thanks so much for the review :)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
Awesomeness, cant wait to see how they are going to get Em..... Is the epilogue going to tie everything up, or will there be a chance for an out take or two? Just wondering..... Great story, love it like always
Author's Response:
Hahah time will tell, and that itself is going to be an outtake as it doesn't fit in my timeline. Two? More like...well, lots I have a feeling! At least 3 or 4, but that's without requests! The epilogue should give you all the answers you want though! :) Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
very exciting, great update !!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you :) More soon!
Date: 31 May 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
Emmie is going to get it. LOL somehow or another that boy will spin it in his favor
Author's Response:
Haha so true. He always manages to land on his feet! :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
I love how Edward doesn't want the delivery guy to see Bella, lol.
I can't wait to see what else Emmett does with David and the video of Jasper.
Author's Response:
Haha yeah Edward's not about his girl giving out a show!
I'm glad you're looking forward to the fun ahead! Thanks so much hon!
Date: 31 May 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
So, I take it that if you didn't know the torso was Edwardm then you wouldn't know the torso was Edward... niiiiice. ;) Kinda creepy for Edward if the team starts to rub it a little too much... LMAO! I really do hope they make it to the Super Bowl, cause that will just be too mcuh fun to read about.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, nobody will have any idea that's supposed to be Edward unless Emmett tells them, which he'd never do! hehe I love the image of them rubbing it though!
Thanks so much for the review! We'll see about the Super Bowl! :)
Date: 30 May 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
UH OH, damn that Em.... I cant wait to see whats going to happen next. LOVE this story
Author's Response:
Haha I love Em. He'd never tell anyone it was Edward and with no head, how can they know? I'm so glad you love it hon! Thank you!
Date: 30 May 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
Only Emmett would come out ahead w/ this statue thing!! LOL!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe he absolutely had to! Plus I did want it to be their good luck torso :) Thanks hon!
Date: 29 May 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
i love this story! Huge football fan too, so its an extra great read.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're loving it! Lots of football coming up! The playoffs are about to start ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 May 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
if i was Emmett I'd might put that in the locker room :)
Author's Response:
Haha I guess we'll see pretty soon!
Date: 26 May 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
Oh how i love Emmett! if you write another story...pls keep him as your main character. He is hysterical!... and so are the parents.
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I am writing other stories but nothing starring Em at this point. So glad you want more of him! Thank you! The parents are a trip to write too! Thanks so much :)
Date: 26 May 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
Emmett is going to take it to the locker room or something as crazy. Bella needs to be honest with Renee and tell her she does not want appreciate her art. I could not stand it if my mom was so embarressing. It is no wonder Bella is always blushing. Edward better dig up some good dirt on Emmett and be ready for the ambush.
Author's Response:
Haha we will see soon enough.
Sometimes honesty is warranted, sometimes it isn't. I think a balance is required when it comes to your family. Bella chooses to suffer in relative silence I guess.
Haha Edward's getting prepared!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
That was the funniest...Hahahahahahaah...God what a conversation...sides hurt from laughing. Can't wait to find out what Em has planned.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you had fun with it! Thank you :) We'll see what Emmett has in store next!
Date: 26 May 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
First love love love Bella's parents! Funnest chapter loved it! Em I bet put the
sculpture in the locker room or is going to put it in the locker room... Can't wait to see :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you love her parents!
We'll see what Em has in store soon enough! Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
I loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soooooo hilarious and awesome, keep rock'in!!!!!!!!!!!!!
for the epilouge you should include sons playing little league football, soooo cute!!
Thanks,
Icecullener
Author's Response:
Thank you hon! I'm glad you had fun with it!
That's a very cute epi idea. I have a plan for my epi but that could well be an outtake :)
Thanks for the suggestion and the review!
Date: 24 May 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
it was so funny!!! poor Bella and Edward lol I don´t know who I loved more the crazy Renne or Emmett here.
I´m sad to know you will finish it so soon I loved follow you here!! but hope to read more of you soon too!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! They were crazy! I've got plenty more that I'm writing so I won't be far :) Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
loved it! perfect! :-D
Author's Response:
So glad you loved it! TY! I've got your FF reviews saved to reply to if they ever get the feature working again! ;)
Date: 24 May 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
oh boy, i cant wait to see what Em has in store now. I love bella and Edward, but im sorry to say i think Em steals the show every time he's in a chapter, is he by chance based off a person u know in real life? Keep up the great work, love this story. Waiting patiently for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Haha I think Em is most people's favorites! And no, he's just some strange guy in my head! I wish I knew him in real life, because it would be a lot of fun, and a little scary at the same time ;)
Thanks so much! I'll have more for you soon!
Date: 24 May 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
Hi,
I must honestly say, that I find Renee extremely annoying! It's a tad bit too much. I read a ton of Fanfics and I am oftern annoyed at how intrusive and bossy the characters of Alice and Emmett are. I would never accept anyone of my family to run me over like that. But in the end, it is just fiction.
Nontheless, I am impatiently waiting for the next update, hopefully Emmett will not do too bad for Edward, maybe Rose will step in?
Sabs
Author's Response:
Sorry to hear that. Yes, she's OTT but she's been that way from the get-go. I think we each have different ways of dealing with our families and Bella didn't want to hurt her mom, which she made clear earlier in the chapter. Sorry it wasn't for you.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 24 May 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
This chapter was very fun to read. Can't wait to find out what Emmett is going to do with the bust!!!! I'm sure it's going to be Epic!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you had fun with it :) We'll see what he has in store soon! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 24 May 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
Too funny!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 24 May 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
damnit my computer failed when I sent the review for this chapter. It was epic, the best review I ever made, it would have brought tears to your eyes, but, sigh...I cannot remember what I wrote lol. Something about the typo about only 5 chapters left. I think you mean 50 more chapters of all Emmett all the time ... right? I think I also said how sorry I was for Charlie (well except the Long arm of the Law, thats good to know) LOL Got a spring high school game to go to this week...Yeah, so will get my football fix in person this week. See ya next chapter and will stalk you on facebook and at ff now (you are the first author I ever friended on facebook, didn't want all my real world friends to know what a pervy little habit I had lol ) Vicki
Author's Response:
Oooh not cool! This site doesn't usually do stuff like that!
Haha 50 more chapters of all Emmett would likely kill me dead :) You crack me up!
Awww Charlie loves his Renee even if she drives me batty!
Enjoy the football! I'm jealous!
So sweet that you made me a friend without any other FF people! Thank you! What a compliment!
Love ya, Vicki! Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 May 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
That was awesome! I laughed soooooo hard!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
I laughed and laughed... It was great!
P.S. I want more FILL ME WITH YOUR POISON!!!!!
It was SO GOOOODDDD!
Author's Response:
Haha I love to make you laugh! hehe
I know, I know, gotta see where I want it to go :) Thank you!
Date: 24 May 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
It's in the locker room or some public part of the stadium. Actually if Renee was my mother, I would have killed her by now! LOL Funny!!!
Author's Response:
Haha we shall wait and see! Renee requires patience but hey, that's why they live far away :)
Date: 24 May 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
that was fuckawesome. i laughed so hard that i thought i would pee myself. excellent.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It was worlds of crazy but it had to be done! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 24 May 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
I can only imagine what Emmett has done with that bust!!! Poor, Edward. (hee hee)
Things seemed to go well at the Cullen's with everybody meeting. I think that Renee has a lot more common sense than what she shows... meaning that she totally is aware of how Bella and Edward really feel about certain topics and does her "act" just to see them squirm... I think Renee and Emmett could do some serious damage together if they were able to team up! ;)
At this point I am totally assuming the Cards get into the playoffs and make it to the Super Bowl... I hope I am right!
Author's Response:
Hahah We will soon see!
I think Renee knows just what she's doing at all times. She's no fool :) Renee and Emmett would be insane together as well!
We shall see about the Super Bowl! hehe
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
omg, i have been laughing my ass off !!!!!!
Author's Response:
I love hearing that! Thank you :)
Date: 23 May 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
One of the best things I've read in a while. So good. So funny. I can't wait to see what Jesse James is up to.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love hearing that. One never knows what old Jesse will do! :)
Date: 23 May 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
Another masterpiece!! I have to wipe the tears from my eyes! I love your sense of humor!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you don't think I'm certifiable for pumping out a chapter like that :) So happy you liked it!
Date: 23 May 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
OH MY GOSH----I have not laughed so hard through an ENTIRE chapter as I have this one!! I can't even begin to imagine what Emmett has done w/ that statue!!!
YOU DID YOURSELF PROUD W/ THIS CHAPTER!!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! I love hearing that! We'll find out soon enough what Em's gonna do with that thing. One shudders to think! :) I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 21 May 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
This was one hilarious chapter! God I love how entertaining you make the characters. Can't wait til next chapter if that's when they all meet up in Phoenix. Too much! LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you have fun when I let out all my crazy ;) I'm working on the next chapter today :) Thanks again!
Date: 19 May 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
I have a feeling the chapter with the parental units meeting each other is going to be epic.
Go Emmett!
Author's Response:
I hope so! I'll do my best for you! Thanks so much!
Em'll be lurking!
Date: 18 May 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
The world is suppose to come to an end this weekend. Could it be because the Swans and the Cullens meet? Only joking! Poor Edward having to deal with the crazy overly horny Renee. they should try to take Edward's gift on the airplane and get it confiscated. Oh darn! they need a place to hide all of her horrible gifts. Lets hope they never move close. Bella would hate it. She would have to have her mom's creative crap in her house not just when they visit.
Author's Response:
Haha that might just be what does it! Lord knows my mind hurts just thinking about writing it! hehe
You know if they did something to statue #1 she'd have fun making another. hehe
True, they don't want them living too close. At least they're in a building you need to gain entry to. They could keep them out until they get all the junk placed. hehe
Thanks for the review hon!
Date: 18 May 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
He he, very funny chapter, Rene & Charlie are a kick. Loved E's POV
Author's Response:
Thank you! They are definitely that. I had to do it in his POV, all that confusion and inner turmoil :) Thank you!
Date: 17 May 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
What a happy fun chapter;DDD)
Author's Response:
Haha that it was! So much fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 17 May 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
OMG!!! This is by far one of the most funniest chapters yet!! I can wait for the Swans to hit Phoenix!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! It's definitely near the top of the funny ones! Glad you're excited for more, thank you!
Date: 17 May 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
HAHAHAHA
this chapter was just hilarious
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
I loved this chapter. It´s so hilarious!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it! Thank you :) Love making you laugh!
Date: 17 May 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
Oh great!!!!! Charlie and Renee - what a wonderful couple...although I do not like Renee embarrassing our lovely Bella and Edward. But Charlie is just hilarious.
Now I am really curious for the meeting of the parents - THAT will be epic! I only hope, that they won't embarrass too much, when in public at the stadium...
Thanks for sharing - I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Sabs
Author's Response:
Charlie and Renee are cute. She's not trying to embarrass them, she's just...Renee.
I have no idea hwo the parental meeting will go, but it won't be at the stadium. :) That I can assure you.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 May 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
Wow! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad you're excited for it. I'm scared but I'll do my best!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
I want one of those Jerseys and I want my Mom to be like B's Loved the chapter and I still think E needs to have a run in with James Turn the tables Ya know see you around and if your adding a chapter it just means the story will be longer Thanks for sharing this with us and have a good week.....
Author's Response:
Haha Get one made! I have a Cullen 10 Cardinals t-shirt! This was definitely a fun chapter! Yeah I constantly add things as you know. Never know what might come in! Thank you so much!
Date: 17 May 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
Laughed my ass off! Just wonderful!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! Thank you :)
Date: 17 May 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
Oh dear it was so funny!!! I like Charlie so much!!! you make it so cool I really can´t wait for see what will happen when the Swans come in Phoenix.
Author's Response:
Haha thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed Charlie. He was a blast to write ;) We'll see what happens when they all meet. God help me in the writing!
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
Wow, loved this update. And she got darn close to the package !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Haha I'm so glad you loved it! She did get close indeed! :)
Date: 16 May 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
OMG... I can't wait for the Swan's to meet the Cullen's, and Emmett! And please tell me that they will find a way to get the statue to Edward and Bella because I soooo want Emmett to see it! ;) Thanks for the laughs this chappie. I really hope that Edward stays in Arizona... unless a certain two other teammates happen to also sigh with Seattle!
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad you're excited for the meeting. I have no doubt that Emmett will get a load of that statue before all is said and done. So glad you enjoyed it. I think Edward's staying in Zona :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 May 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
that was awesome. cant wait for the swans to meet the cullens
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're excited for it :)
Date: 16 May 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
having an absolutly shitty day and along comes your chapter 39 and I feel infinatly better ♥ Thank you dear author. Have a feeling next chapter when the "rents and Emmett meet up that I will need a depends for the pants piddling I will be doing.
Author's Response:
So sorry to hear about your day but I'm glad I could help! I hope next week lives up to your expectations! I'm scared to write it but I'll do my best for you guys :) Thank you!
Date: 16 May 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
I cant wait til each set of parents meet, and throw ina side of Emmett, Please PLease make that a long chapter, or not make us wait in between updates for that. I can only imagine whats going to happen. Keep up the great work. LOVE this story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're excited for that chapter. I'm scared to death of writing it but I'll do my best for you all :) Thank you so much for the kind words! Love it!
Date: 16 May 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 39 Leaping
gah! can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're excited for more :) Thank you!
Date: 16 May 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Once again Emmett makes his hilarious presence known! This story should be voted for the best Emmett! Love him!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you! ;) Em would love that attention, let me tell you! And I wouldn't mind either!
Thanks so much for the review. I'm gald you enjoyed his pranking!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Ya the parents are coming I can't wait*claps hands while jumping up and down* see you next update.......
Author's Response:
Haha that they are sweets. Thanks so much :)
Date: 12 May 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
I just started reading your story and I love it!!! It is really fun and enjoyable to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I have a lot of fun with these guys!
Date: 10 May 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
That was such a funny joke Emmett pulled. I knew Emmett knew about Edward and Bella on the field. Emmett seems to know anything that can embaress you. It is his hobby.
Author's Response:
Haha Emmett does have a sixth sense for those things, doesn't he? He makes me laugh, all the time. So glad you enjoyed him!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
oh i can't wait charlie and renee in person, that will be great, i bet renee grabs Edward package saying she just wnated to get a vibe from it ?!?!?!?!!!! soudns good huh!!!!! love it
Author's Response:
Haha I think Bella would kill her if she tried! But it would be funny. Glad you're excited for it! Thank you!
Date: 10 May 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
I have absoluetly loved this story so far! I've been reading until the early hours for a couple of nights now - revisions not that important lol. Can't wait to see what you'll update with next!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it! I'll have a new chapter for you next week :)
Date: 10 May 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Thanks again for writing this story. It's still my favorite. Gives me something to look forward to on Mondays!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoy it! I love Monday updates as well, gets me through the day ;) Thanks so much!
Date: 10 May 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Have I ever said that I love your Esme almost as much as your Emmett! I take it you don't like Farve very much lol!!! Poor guy will never live that stuff down. See ya next chapter looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Haha no, I've hated Favre for a long time for all his retirement/non-retirement holding the NFL hostage stuff. He annoys the hell out of me.
So glad you love Esme! :) She's a lot of fun! Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Would it be too much for me to tell you that I almost gave myselfa hernia from laughing so hard this chapter? Emmett clearly is an evil genius!
Author's Response:
Haha I love hearing that! Don't wanna hurt you but love the laughs! He's so awesome :) Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 35 Grounding
Even with scary possibilites, there was still some humour injected (with Esme's tendency to overshare) regardless. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I generally have some humor in each chapter. Gotta lighten it up :) Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 09 May 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Hee hee. All this joking around that Emmett's doing makes me wonder if there really is a lot of practical joking that happens with other players in the league and not just teammates. Thanks for the giggles.
Author's Response:
Oh I know they pull pranks and such, especially on rookies. I have no idea where my crazy ideas come from but I let em ride! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 May 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 38 Press Pass
I am laughing SOOOOO HARD!! I have to say Emmett is almost better than my favorite couple in this story---okay not really but ALMOST!!
Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Haha So glad to hear it! Em is so much fun! Thanks for the review! Love to make you laugh!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol I absolutely loved this chapter! - had no idea theyd been seeing each other obviously - such a shock lol. I love how they are together as a couple not just the usual 'hot edward' in a fic. really great! thanks:)
Author's Response:
I'm glad I could surprise you with it! They're a great couple and you'll get to see how they got that way. There's more to my Edward than hotness I think! Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
Wonderful chapter, all in all, it is sorted out.. A little action on the field as well. I really hope no one was watching.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Things are good now. Field sex is always a good thing. I promise they weren't compromised!
Date: 04 May 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
hmmm..security video..oops
Author's Response:
No oops, I don't roll that way :)
Date: 04 May 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
oooh SEX on the FIELD? that's hot, but its not going to come back and bite them in the ass is it? like someone saw them? that'd be bad. lol but I'm glad they worked screwed and made up. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
Very hot and no, it won't bite them on the ass. I'm not turning my story into some sordid sex scandal. All is well now! Thanks :)
Date: 04 May 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
Hi!!I lost six chapters and read it all Oh god I was jumping here about Esme sickness, and crazy when Carlisle have Esme in kitchen ( I loved the daddy C lol) this story are so good i really loved to read it and always have a great time!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're all caught up! You picked a good time...the heartache is pretty much done now :) Esme is just fine and Carlisle and Edward are back on the right track :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 03 May 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
That would be hard. She does her job and he had a bad day. That was hard on both of them.
MAMA is okay all else can be repaired.
Author's Response:
Yep, it was a tough day for both of them. Everything is just fine now though :) Esme being healthy certainly puts things in perspective!
Date: 03 May 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
Another great chapter....good to see E human!
Author's Response:
Haha glad you liked it! He's very human :)
Date: 03 May 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
I loved this chapter. I just hope no one was around. Edward and Bella would not live this one down. Emmett would go crazy.
Author's Response:
Haha I promise nobody saw ;) Em is definitely going to be jealous!
Date: 03 May 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
AAAWWWWWWWWWW OMGGGGGG they're the perfect couple LIKE the way you wrote them is amazing and perfect and balkdafajkfn OMG <3
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you :) They do seem to complement one another perfectly!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
I am really glad, that even though the game and Bella having to write about it sucked, he took it like a man. I loved the line you put in where he knows that Bella probably wouldn't want to read the article either.
Author's Response:
He did take it like a man. Needed some time to deal with it, but he never blamed her. I'm glad you liked that line. Thanks so much :)
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
OMG If Em finds out He is going to flip I want to see Thanks for sharing this with us and I can't wait to see what will happen next I bet Charlie loved E's bad game see you next update.....
Author's Response:
Haha we'll see what Em has to say next chapter I promise! Charlie probably did enjoy the bad game. Meanie :) hehe
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
wow, footbaALL field sex !!!!!! I woudl rather have pillows. But then again anywhere with Edward woudl be good i guess
Author's Response:
Haha well it wouldn't be something I would do a lot but totally worth it for a once off! I've always wanted field sex and I gave it to them. hehe
Date: 03 May 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
Oooh! Football Field Sex. Awesome.
Author's Response:
Haha glad you liked it! Thank you!
Date: 02 May 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
Yep...the make-up sex was awesome! Please tell me that Em & Jasper didn't catch them, or worse Carlise or the Coach...ewwwww! I love how you don't let things drag out with these two- it's great that they get to work their problems out.
Author's Response:
Haha Yes it was! We'll find out if anything was seen next chapter, but I promise it's all good :) I definitely don't like to drag things out :) Thanks so much for the review and I'm glad you appreciate the way I resolve things with these two!
Date: 02 May 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
I thank you loving this story, can't wait for more chapters
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're loving it! Thanks so much! More soon!
Date: 02 May 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
I bet someone saw them.
Author's Response:
Haha no, not that sort of story :)
Date: 02 May 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
yeah Screw You Cam Newton!!! Draft looked pretty good a lotta players from Florida teams got drafted. Looks like Tampa wanted to get some new blood on the defence. Great chapter, nice job pissing off the defence Cullen! Congrats to Esme and really, Bella is not going to have a Cardinal red back and azz, really would love for Emmett to see that (the red not the act lol) Thanks for great chapter Bucgirl (notice the absence of Noles hee hee) see ya next chappie. Vicki
Author's Response:
Haha I thought that was fun to include right after the draft.
Tampa did a great job of working on their D. Very excited they got a top 5 player with the 51st pick. Hopefully his knee is fine and we'll get a lot of production.
Haha I am sure Em's gonna find out about it. I'm always gonna be a Nole, thank you :)