Date: 08 Mar 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible
oh gosh Love all the football talk, really makes me wish it was already season again. Oh well just watch some rugby on BBC and wait patiently. Great chapter, already looking forward to next.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you love it! I love writing it and it fills a little of the football hole. Need the season to return!
I'll have more for you soon, including that lemon Bella aluded to! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible
Aww...that was a bit cute, can't wait for the next chapter xx
Author's Response:
Haha glad you liked it! Next chapter will be fun, I hope!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible
i liked it, love that buddy character !!!!!!! and Edward getting shit from players..... hmm guess i never thought of that
Author's Response:
Thank you! Buddy's a blast to write. I love him.
Edward was bound to hear it from fellow players. They live to get in your head ;)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:22 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
That was so funny. I guess they are rich enough that $100,000 isn't going to freak them out for an evening of fun. I think Edward owes him big. Edward may regret that fact.
Author's Response:
Haha yeah $100,000 isn't a lot to them like it would be to the majority of us. I don't think Edward will regret it! Em may be a handful but his heart is in the right place ;)
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:12 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
You've done it yet again!!! I absolutely loved it and could not stop laughing out loud!! Emmett actually reminds me of some of my friends from when we were in high school and some of the pranks they would play. Keep up the awesome writing!!
Cindy
Author's Response:
Hehe I love it! Love making you laugh like that! So glad Em can remind you of some old friends, that's awesome! Thanks for the review, Cindy!
See you soon!
Amy
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:39 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
so funny :) loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) Had a blast with it!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:47 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Hahahaha, Emmett...so much fun.
Author's Response:
:) Yeah he is! I loved writing him!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:43 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Are you still writing about how Edward gave Bella the key to his apt. I am sure he was imaginative...
Author's Response:
I intend to but that will probably come at the end of the story, because I think it'll be more of a full-length chapter.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
Thanks once again for a memorable chapter... you are a very talented writer, this story is delightful!!!!!!!! More please :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! Much more ahead, I promise!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:00 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Awe, what a ham. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Haha he is indeed. So much fun :)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:16 AM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
EPIC! I love it!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! Thank you :)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:51 AM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Hilarious!!!!! Every single word, starting with the Emmettake!!!! Hats off for your sense of humor and imagination!!!!!
Emmette is always portrait with a wicked humor but this one takes the cake. I love him and as I have said before....dibbs!!! :P
I'm not american so I'm neither acquianted with all the football (I have scarce knowledge of the basics) and the references, so you keep me on my toes, frequentely googling names to get the refrences I don't get!!!
Thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had the best time getting into his head and I love the response to my Em. I love that you all love him so much!
Hahah I love that you look everything up, that's awesome. Maybe I'm teaching you a bit then. Thanks so much!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:16 AM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
God, you GOTTA LOVE Emmett!!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe I do! Glad you do too :)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:58 AM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
omg i almost peed my pants !!!!!!
Author's Response:
Heheh I'm hearing a lot of that! Love it :) Thank you!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:20 AM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Great, I couldn't stop laughing all this chapter even had difficult reading because of my tears
Author's Response:
Haha Love hearing that! Thank you :) So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:36 AM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
OMG thank god it does not hurt to laugh anymore or I would be finding a way to kick your ass LMFAO I really needed that
You need to keep him around Because when things get tough he is who will make us all better.
I want an outake of that night with BxE it sounded like things got rough and dirty all HOT in my book Please I will pay see you monday LOL
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad it doesn't hurt you to laugh! Glad you did tho! I love writing Em and of course he'll stay around.
I have more B&E lemons coming up, I promise!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:28 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
i LOVE EMMETT, LOVE HIM LOVE HIM LOVE HIM
Author's Response:
Heheh I love that you do! He loves you all too, just like I do! ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:13 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Ghost Busters... Say no more. Freaking hilarious.
Author's Response:
Who you gonna call? Emmett!!! ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:12 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
I LAUGHED SO HARD!!! I think I might have even have pee'd my pants!! This was the MOST HYSTERICAL chapter I have read! EXCELLENT job!
Author's Response:
Hehe Love tha t you laughed that hard! Love it! I'm so glad you had a blast with it, just like I did! Thank you!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:00 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
roflmao ohhhhh that was perfect i think i love emmett he rocks
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you love him. I have the best time writing him :)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:35 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
I am sitting here laughing my ass off, tears rolling down my face!! Absolutely freakin' love Em!! He totally cracks me up!! Can't wait to see what comes next!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
peach
Author's Response:
Love hearing that! I do! Em is such a blast to write and I love that you all enjoy him like I do! Thanks so much for the review, peach!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:21 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Damn I love this story! Emmett is freakin funny!
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I have such a good time with him, and being in his head was an adventure! :) Glad you love it!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:16 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
OMG that is freakin hilarious.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:13 PM Title: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
I love Emmett. Great hearing from him.
Author's Response:
Haha me too! Getting into his head was a blast! :)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
Suck it, Dan! Man, that was Epic and the perfect level of revenge...at first I was hoping for a beatdown involving Edward, Emmett, or both on Dan, but reading through the rationale of Bella and Jasper it makes sense that any extreme physical retaliation would look bad for her. This was much better, and he got exactly what he deserved, the creep...
Author's Response:
Haha I'm glad you liked my solution. A beat down would have been fun but it would have faded too quickly, whereas psychological terror has much more long lasting effects. At least Bella got to hit him!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
i personally thought it was freaking halarious :) go Edward and Boys :) and well hell throw in a hell yeah for Bella too nice handling.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a good time with that chapter. Everybody kicked some ass in their own way :) Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
I just caught up on my chapters and I have to say, they were all wonderful.
I hope we get to hear the outcome of Dan!
Loved it.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're all caught up and still enjoying it :) Thanks so much for the review! I'll have more for you soon!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
I TOTALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER.....loved how our fav QB made him squirm!! I am proud of Edward for showing patience and wiating for the end to BLAST him....I could SO PICTURE that---great writing job!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you loved it :) QB had a good time scaring the piss out of him. Love that you could picture it! I saw it very clearly in my head and love that you could as well! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
I just LOVE this story!! You conjure up the most amazing mental images! I can almost sit back and WATCH this story unfold. Well done!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you love it! I love that you can picture it, that means so much to me. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
I am proud of Bella for taking care of herself, but I think it is sweet that all of the boys rushed over to rescue and protect her. I wish more men were like them. The world would be a better place. I hope Dan got the message and doesn't start harassing women in other locals. He needs to stop all together.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the boys coming to the rescue but being unnecessary, more or less. Of course they came a runnin! Dan got the message and really this thing with Bella was a one time thing. She's dating a QB and rejected him hard publicly. He'll stop, I promise!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
Oh that was even more fun! I figured it would either be Edward by himself, or he would send Emmett and Jasper to avoid the press. I never imagined we'd get all three at once! Too bad he wasn't still there when they arrived. Though, you're right, this was much better for Edward and Bella since he didn't get arrested for assault and she didn't get her name splashed all over the papers for it either. Win win all around AND Danny-boy is (hopefully) gone for good :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! All three, those boys stick together! It was actually a good thing he wasn't there or there would have been a lot more blood.
Yeah, this was the best solution for all of them, including Dan. hehe He's about to be gone for good, I promise!
Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
Awesome chapter
I think Bella should of done more damage to Dan than reported him for his conduct
LOVE this story Can't wait for more more more more
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! More damage would have been fun, maybe, but all Dan really did was show up at her door drunk and make a lewd comment. She was the one who took things physical, so it might not have gone her way with a report ;) And she doesn't need anymore press, sadly. But she handled it effectively I thought :) More soon, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
Are we going to have James show up in this story That would be cool. I liked what those 3 sexy ass men did for there girl I want to see more of that please......*bats my eyes*........
Also thanks for the Non-Lemon Maybe we can get an outake after I can read that "Funkin"shit LMAO Is that a first thanks for a PG rated chapter.......*giggles*
As you can see I loved it and I am so excited to see How his parents and hers act when they find out Maybe Charlie can make a visit......
Enjoy the Fam and see you some time next week No rush Family is important;)
Author's Response:
Haha I haven't really thought about having James appear. If it fits, I will, otherwise, he's just a memory :)
More intimidation huh?
Hey, it wasn't PG rated. There was lots of cussing. There's lemons ahead, I promise!
Glad you loved it and I promise Charlie will appear soon :)
Thanks for the fam wishes ;) See you soon!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
I think this was my favorite chapter.. Personally, I would have killed the prick if he talked to my wife like that but your way is WAY more effective!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! I would have liked to have killed him but this was, as you say, effective and keeps my boys out on the field :) Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
bravo bravo bravo .. loved it !!! And what the guys did was great !!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it :) Thank you!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
YEA TEAM! I love how they used the intimidation technique! The three of them would probably scare anyone, not just a slime-ball reporter.
thanks for the update - glad Bella took care of herself...even if Edward went off the deep end, it was kind of funny to read.
till next time!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! They are definitely a great team :) Edward was bound to go off the deep end when his girl was in danger!
Bella did handle herself well :) Glad you liked it! See you soon!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
Wonderful chapter addition to a good story :) nicely done
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it, thank you! ;)
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
hee hee I knew she would kick his arse! Sometimes I wish it was okay for men to kick ass still. Dan needed it and Edward would look lovely doing it. Those three coming to the rescue was awesome tho (another day where I wish I was Bella Swan lol)
Watching any of the combines some nice rookies coming the NFLs way
Author's Response:
Hahah She did indeed. Yes, it would have been hot for Edward to pound on him but sadly it would have created way too many problems! At least they came over to save her, that's something :)
I didn't get to see much of the combine, but what I did see and read sounds great ;)
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
very creative way of solving the problem. good job as usual.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you thought so! Bloodless but effective! And fun :)
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
oh my I hope you'll be updating soon. I really hope E. doesn't mess up his throing hand on a jerk like DM, that would be very sad. I was just smiling & reading & thinking what happy light fair this was to read{and pleasant} until she opened the door. Dunnhhndadunhduh
Author's Response:
I'll be updating tonight, I promise! It's still going to stay light and pleasant, I promise. A little drama here and there but nothing that will derail our fave couple!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Oh, dip!!! Some shh is about to go down!!
Author's Response:
Heheh could be! ;) Thanks for the review! We'll see soon!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
OMG!!!!! I can't wait to see what is going to happen to Dan. I CAN"T WAIT!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're so excited ;) Thank you! I'll have it for you soon!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Wo! This is definatly not going to be good. This story is steaming along, love it.
Author's Response:
Haha glad you love it! Definitely something of interest coming up :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
next week can't come soon enough!
Author's Response:
Hehe glad you're so excited! It'll be here before you know it!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Ha, Edward is on his way and you know he is pissed. Look out. Can't wait for next chapter. Really like when you do your football commentaries for the games.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing the games, making them come to life. Love that you enjoy it too!
I'm glad you're excited for next chapter! We'll have to see what happens! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
OMG, please tell me that bella is going to be ok.
dont leave us hanging to long, i am dying to find out what happens
Author's Response:
I promise that she is! This isn't that kind of story! I'll have more for you soon :) Glad you're anxious for more!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Oh you can't leave it there!!! At least I can be comforted in the fact that I'm nearly 100% positive that you'll have Edward come to the rescue. Or send Em or Jasper :) Not quite sure which I would love more! Because while Edward 'saving' her would be all sweet and heroic, can you just imagine Dan's face if Em were the one to show up??? HAHAHA I can envision it now.... :D
Author's Response:
Hahah See, leaving it there gave you free rein to imagine anything you like at all! Have a blast with it! Imagine away. Then I'll probably fail you though...sigh. The pressure! Glad you're anxious for more tho ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Great chapter. I cant believe your going to leave us there for a whole week. I cant wait to see happens when Edward shows up.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Sorry to keep you hanging but I need to write it ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
So mean!! I can just imagine what's going to happen now. I have to say, I'm a little pissed at the other reporters. How dare they? Bastards... ;) Great, GREAT chapter, hon. I can't wait for more!
Now, off to read your new one shot . . . then maybe I'll get writing on my own chapter, lol. Who knows, hahaha!
Until next chapter!
~Rae
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm not trying to be mean, my dear! I just had a natural stopping point.
THe other reporters were jerks but unfortunately you encounter some of that.
So glad you liked it and are checking out my o/s. Thank you :) Good luck with your chapter Rae! ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Oh my, oh my!!!! Have you posted the update yet?!!! Come on don't leave us waiting!!!! This is not going to go well!!!!!! (For Dan that is)
I want Emmett as my big brother, may I have him?!!
Whenever I receive an email with an update to this story I can help but smile, Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
Haha I don't have it ready to post! Have to write it! :) But I'm thrilled you're anxious for more!
Get in line! I think everyone wants an Em :) Glad you love him tho!
I love hearing that it makes you smile. Thanks so much :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
I hope he either just leaves or Bella kicks his ass!!
Author's Response:
Both are definite options! ;)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
NOOOO, oh my god! Cliff hanger, much? I cannot WAIT to see what Edward will do to Dan. Hopefully, it will involve some evil laughter. lol
Author's Response:
I know, I know! So sorry! But I really do need some EPOV for the rest of it! Evil laughter, love it :)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Is he coming alone or will he have his wingmen with him to beat the crap out of Dan?
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon :) Glad you're anxious!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Oh my---Edward is gonna be majorily P-I-S-S-E-D!! Would not want to be that Dan guy!! I do have to say, in some instances she does have to stand for herself or they will respect her even less--but NOT here!!!!
GREAT Chapter!
Author's Response:
Haha yeah it's safe to say Edward is not going to be a happy camper. She can definitely stand for herself but it's good to have people back her. So glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
I can't wait to hear Edwards reaction and see what he does! Love protective-angry-caveward. I literally just did an alice - clapping my hands, bouncing up and down and doing a 'squee'! (I'm not joking either - I think i'm reading too much fanfic?!?!) Also, wish I had an emmett to theaten co-workers or others. :)
Author's Response:
Hahah love hearing that! I bite my lip now, which I never did pre-fic. Go figure! You're not alone!
Protectiveward is always very hot. Glad you're looking forward to more. Having Em on your side always rocks ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Loved it so very much I am not getting notified of any updates so I just have to check back I am not even getting review replys back this is really starting to make me mad.........I hope Em and Jaz stop Edward from hurting him.....
Author's Response:
Hmmm that's odd hon. wonder why you're not getting them? I've always replied, you know that! Em and Jaz will be helpful, as always!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
The 3 boys will handle this jerk quickly. If they can't leave their hotel, they will find a way to get Ron their fast. They will save Bella from the jerk.
Author's Response:
:) I think they're definitely going to find a way to get to her. Emmett has no barriers, you know! haha Glad you're thinking of possibilities, love it!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Emmett is the absolute shit!!! Love that boy lol. Dan seems to want to get his arse seriously mauled by an entire football team. Dumb Dumb Dumb man. Course I have a feeling is going to teach him a thing or two before Edward can even think to put his shoes on lol That girls got brass ones. Thanks for the cliffie will now be waiting on pins and needles waiting.
Author's Response:
Haha he is, isn't he? I love writing my Em. He's so loyal to those he loves.
Dan's not overly bright, is he? Moron. I think Bella handles him pretty well, you have that right :)
More soon, I promise! So glad you're anxious for more!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Wow that was so fkd up of Seth to treat B like that, I'm happy Emmett put him in his place the ass deserved it. I can believe how stupid Dan is, I mean really insulting Bella in front of all Rhodes reporters and still show up at her hotel room. He's just asking for ass whooping that I'm sure Cullen will be glad to give him once he shows up. Can't wait to see what goes down between them 3 and if Em and Jazz tagged along with him.
Author's Response:
Yeah it was, but he's jealous and angry and out it came. Guys don't always handle rejection well, I'm sure you know :) Em definitely scared the life out of him. hehe
Dan's not very bright, full of self-importance and doesn't think he'll ever get his come-uppance. He just may very soon though!
You'll find out what happens next week! Glad you're anxious for more :)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
can you please write a flash back of when edward gives bella a key to his place and the dresser
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm going to do an outtake of that at some point :) I don't have the time right now while I write a chapter a week but as soon as I can I promise it'll happen!
Date: 19 Feb 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
Really liked all the banter and picking on each other. Great laughs,
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I love writing them all together and having a good time :) More soon!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
I voted and I am sore this morning and Yes no outside for me till Tuesday atleast I have to go in for blood work but that should be all I hope unless my doctor finds out about the accident then he may have me come in Lets hope not have a good weekend.......
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad to hear you're staying in and staying safe for a bit. I hope all goes well, my dear. You have a good weekend as well!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
<3<3<3
Thanks for the update, cute.;D)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thank you :) More soon!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
I did come, countless times, thanks to his hands and his tongue and his cock. Something you’ll never do, Kara.
Hilarious One liner :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! haha Inner snark is always welcome, I say :)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
I love, love, love when they all get together - they are so much fun and their comments are hilarious. You do such a great job making these characters so likeable. Well, not the skanks, but we aren't supposed to like them anyways :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love getting them all together too! They have the best time. I'm so glad you like all of them, minus the skanks! hehe THat is the point! Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
Still love Emmett...
Author's Response:
Hehe good. I adore him so :)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
This chapter was so funny. Tears came to my eyes, I was laughing so hard.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad I made you laugh that hard! Awesome! I had a blast with it and I'm glad you did too! Thank you :)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
Cant wait for more, love this story. Emmett cracks me up.
Author's Response:
More next week, I promise! I'm so happy you love it. Emmett cracks me up too! I never know what he'll do! Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
Awesome Chapter
can't wait for the next update
love this story even though I don't follow football
More Baseball or PHX Coyotes hockey team
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll have something new for you soon. I'm glad you like it despite not following football. Good luck to your hockey and baseball teams. I actually have a baseball 2-shot over at FF. It's called Stealing Home and you might like it if you want to check it out. Same penname as here, Nolebucgrl.
Thanks so much for the review :)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
i love the relationships that these 6 seem to have. Alice is... well Alice...
edward might regret "hiring" her...
didn't get to read this at work today
have you thought about hockey???
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing them all together. Alice is a force, but she'll take good care of Edward. He won't regret it, I don't think :)
Have I thought about what? Watching hockey or writing it? hehe I don't know enough to write it, and it gives me a headache trying to find the puck (moves the instant I do) hehe.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
yeah. I so like your story. good job
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :) I have a blast writing it. More soon!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
Just keeps getting better and better!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you think so! I love writing these guys :)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
Fabulous V-Day present!!!
Thanks for posting! New chapters of this story always make my day :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad I could give you a V Day present :) I love posting new chapters for you guys and knowing you love them like I do. Thanks so much!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
I was laughing so hard at times!!! You HAVE to love Emmett!! You are doing such a good job with this story--please keep up the VERY GOOD work!!
Hope your day is a FUN FILLED ;-D one!!!
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I love Emmett! For sure! I have the best time with him. He's so crazy, but in a fun, smart way. I'm so happy you liked it!
I hope you have a wonderful day as well, thank you :) More soon, I promise!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 25 Scrum
what a great Valentines/Anniversary gift. Thank you lol, hate what they had to go through at the grocery store, but love how they are when they are with friends. Love these two.
Author's Response:
Well Happy Valentine's & Anniversary! Very sweet!
The store wasn't fun but there are good and bad with his fame and I tried to show both aspects. Friends definitely will help get them through. So happy you love them :)
Thanks for the review and have a great night with your hubs!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Big smile over here;D)
that was sweet & fluffy, a great treat after reading too much angst ff.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! I love writing a happy story that makes people smile! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! More, more, more ahead :) Thank you!
Date: 08 Feb 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
They are so funny. I am so glad that they got Victoria back. She so needed to be fired after the commercial. She finally got what she deserved. I wondered how Bella is keeping tabs on Edward's performance. Does she have a "price sheet"? I love the playfulness of their relationship.
Author's Response:
Thank you ;) Victoria got hers. She didn't really do anything fireable prior, I didn't think. She overstepped her bounds but backed off when he requested, or seemed to. Then she messed up bigtime last night.
She must have a mental price sheet, huh? She'll probably only deduct a dollar now that they're down to 100K tho! Their banter is a lot of fun to write.
Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
WOWZA, another terrific chapter!!!!!
i loved how lauren and jessica wrote the gossip column about them, it was so sweet and well down, plus i loved the rosalie quote. haha
looking for to more amazing reading!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I had a blast with it! Jess and Lauren's article was fun to write, with the snark and the sniping. hehe Rose had to get her quote in there!
So happy you liked it :) More soon!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Ohh, I have fallen in love with them all over again.
They are just too cute.
Cant wait for the next update. Loving it.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Awww thank you. I have the best time writing those two. So glad you liked it Fiorella!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
This is one great story! I thoroughly enjoy each and every chapter.
Thank you so much for sharing! I had a rotten week and even worse weekend and Monday lived up to its reputation...but your chapter update brought a smile to my face and made me feel MUCH better! Again...thank you.
Catherine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm sorry you had a bad week but I'm glad I could make you smile! I hope things get better, Catherine! I'll have more for you soon :)
Amy
Date: 08 Feb 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
GREAT chapter!! Loved the firing of Victoria, the article was G-R-E-A-T!!!
Can't wait for next chapter. You have done a super job with this story, you should definitely be proud of yourself----from a O/S to a full story and it still gets better!
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you! Firing Victoria was a lot of fun, as was writing Lauren and Jess' snark. They're a blast to channel.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I love how my two best received stories were just supposed to be one shots! I can't leave them alone it seems :) So happy you're all liking where I took it!
Thanks for the review and I'll see you soon :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Oh I think I might love Lauren and Jess for the awesome job they did on the article and how they really stuck it to Tanya about her not being over Edward. Hehe Edwards reaction to her temp tattoo of his number was funny how he went from ecstatic to sad. I'm really glad he put it out there that he's in it for the long haul and that she better get use to the idea of him proposing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a good time with Lauren and Jess as well, writing their snark. They're both a lot of fun.
Edward was a little disappointed but he has forever to look forward to. She'll get it one day *wink* I loved his marriage talk too. She needs to wrap her mind around the fact that he isn't going anywhere :)
So glad you liked it!
Date: 08 Feb 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
i know this story is about Edward and Bella but can you do an outtake of what happen at the party after they left i think it could be quite funny with Em and Jaz invovled.
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm planning on it, but not sure when I'll get it done, since I write a chapter a week. ASAP, I promise :)
Date: 08 Feb 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Loved it. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad! Thank you :) More soon!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Awesome again...I'm glad he fired Victoria
Author's Response:
Haha thank you! Firing her was a lot of fun :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
I think that my doctors enjoy giving me pain They were laughing at me this morning while they were cuting into me bastards I loved this and I really loved the pillow talk you can never have enough of that update when you can and thank you very much for sharing this with us......GO PACKERS GO PACKERS GO PACKERS GO PACKERS;)
Author's Response:
Congrats on your Pack, sweetie. Glad they could win for you. Not so much congrats on the pain sweetie. So sorry! Hope that's the last of it!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
awww that was an awesome chapter. He is so whipped love that. Superbowl was a fantastic game, love when one team does not dominate the game. My daughter saw the defensive player Matthews (one who gave Big Ben fits all night) and promptly fell in love. LOL even got his pic on her facebook page (stalker much) I miss football too, except my son goes to conditioning every day after school.
Author's Response:
Thank you! He is definitely whipped, but so is she so it's all good.
I was really glad the Steelers came back a little, because I was bored in the first half. Don't tell your daughter that I kept yelling at Matthews to cut his girl hair. hehe I used to like long haired guys though. hehe
Well at least you have a football link still :) I'm floundering already! Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
i have nothing else to say except that I loved it as always xx
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love that you loved it :)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
I took a quick study break to read this chapter and was NOT disappointed!! Loved it like always! keep the chapters coming!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it :) Keep up those studies! I'll have more soon :)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
What great fun it was to read this chapter. I had a feeling Tanya would be making an appearance, never saw the Esme effect coming though. ha Great introductory lines too, they were perfect. You do a great job with backing up the illusion of Bella being a quick wit with a great sense of humor.
Thanks so much for writing, looking forward to next chapter:D)
Author's Response:
I had a blast with it! I knew some of you expected to Tanya to show but I'm glad I was able to surprise you a bit with Esme and maybe Rose. The intros were my favorite part ;) Bella is quick witted and I like to think she has a great sense of humor!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I absolutely love this chapter!! I have read a lot of fanfiction and this is my first review. I love this story and this chapter had me laughing so hard that my kids thought I was losing my mind!! I love the practical joke atmosphere with all of the basic 6 characters and the comments Emmett makes all the time...and the love story between Edward and Bella is so romantic and believable. Keep up the awesome work and thank you for creating such a fun read!!
Author's Response:
Well thank you so much for making me your first review :) I love hearing that you enjoyed the story and made you laugh! Emmett is so much fun to write and I like how they all fit in with one another. So happy you're enjoying E&B's romance. I love them together! Thank you for taking the time to review! It means a lot :)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I have to say this chapter CRACKED ME UP, and I was laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes!!! You did a great job w/ the bidding and oh man TANYA!!!! Victoria better be running and hiding!!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!! woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hee! Thank you! I turned out exactly as I pictured it and I had the best time writing it. So happy you were laughing that hard. hehe Tanya got hers and Vicky will get hers as well, albeit less publicly. hehe
So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
i loved it ohhh man this is great and Tanya stuck in a bathroom may Esme not let her out until the end of the night :) and i have a feeling Vickie is getting fired.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it! Esme's definitely not going to let her out til the crowd dwindles down, just in case. hehe I don't think Victoria will be around for much longer myself :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Great chapter. I loved how the girls got Emmett and Jasper back.
Author's Response:
Haha thank you! Emmett needed some payback and Jasper was just along for the ride, too bad for him ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Steelers!
I wait with baited breath for EVERY update! Great story.
Author's Response:
Go Steelers! Thank you so much :) I love hearing that!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
Thank you for the laughs!!!! You certainly surpass my exprtations. Throwing in Hercules, Thor, and Zeus to the mix was genius!!!! Now I'm waiting for that gossip column!!! Ha it's going to be something!
Author's Response:
Haha you're very welcome and I'm glad I surpassed expectations. I loved getting the cock names in as well. Too much fun. The gossip column is coming up! Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
No it going to be Greenbay in the SB come to my side Its better over here Loved this and everything in it and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can Also thanks for the warning next week are they also going to have a football party at his house that would be fun thanks for sharing this with us and see you next week.....
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it! Actually, yeah, they're supposed to have everyone over to watch the games on Sunday. I forgot about that. Thanks for the reminder. hehe
So glad you liked it and good luck to GB. I can easily see them winning :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I LOVE this story! Please update soon, its so freaking cute! And a football-playing Edward is so freaking hot!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you love it and I agree with his hotness! I'll update same time next week! TY for your review!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
white dress+red wine on tanya was amazing:)) works ok with strawberry hair:))
Author's Response:
Haha so true! She really just color coordinated her. :) So glad you liked it!