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Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awe-some.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fun little story.

Reviewer: VampireDiva21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was hot lol Good job

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

yummy

Reviewer: TheMoreSmutTheBetter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sexy and hot as He££ dominant Jasper being given submissive Edward as a Christmas gift was quite thoughtful of his loving wife, Bella.

I love how deliciously detailed and well thought out the choreography of their being together was presented making for one freaking hot sex-fest.

VERY well done--keep up the good work.

;~D



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much for your lovely review. :-D It made me grin all day. I can be quite the detail h00r at times. It's one of my obsessions in writing. o.O Which can be both a good and a bad thing. That was my first slash (and only so far) but who knows what'll come up next hehehe. I just posted Baking Brownies over here today. I figure if you like my other two one shots, you'll most likely like this too! Thank you again!


-LBK

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very creative and very, very hot!!!

Reviewer: Flora73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love it..)

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