Date: 15 Feb 2017 2:16 AM Title: Bella
Huh?
Author's Response:
Hi. Sorry about delay in replying; just saw this. The ending of this story sets up the sequel, My Heart's Desire. I hope you read it if you have not.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 9:29 AM Title: Bella
What! Oh there needs to be a sequel :D enjoyed reading :)
Date: 07 Nov 2015 11:01 PM Title: Edward
So she gets rape and she wants to have sex with E. Wth? Not normal! Not even fulling around is ok
Date: 14 Apr 2015 8:02 PM Title: Bella
WTF!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!! i don't know if i can read the sequel if it ends up being a bxj story sorry ;)
Author's Response:
It is not really a Bella/Jasper story. It is canon with the couples. Of course, there are a few differences and it seems like she'll be with Jasper, but it doesn't happen. Give it a shot. :)
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:22 PM Title: Lance
i don't know if edward would be this understanding unless he has been intimate with someone else in the 4 years ;D
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:09 PM Title: Edward
ok that was too easy!!! his he going to get revenge on her for what she did? and why did he wait 4 years to show up? ;D
Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:54 PM Title: Cameron
wow when i read the beginning i thought it was ah!! ;D
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:07 AM Title: Bella
WOW! What an ending!!! Can't wait for the sequel...
Date: 26 Apr 2012 1:55 PM Title: Bella
its a wonder she didn't break a tooth
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:25 PM Title: Edward
Such a lovely chapter:) Loved your writing
Date: 04 Nov 2011 12:18 PM Title: Edward
Wow! Finally the victorian is giving in:)
Date: 04 Nov 2011 11:54 AM Title: Lance
Sweet:) Good that she's not immediately getting back in to her old role.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 11:44 AM Title: Edward
I love your story. It's really sad about what happened to Bella, I'm glad Edward is back.
Date: 14 Oct 2011 8:57 PM Title: Bella
love the chap and yeh im intered in the preview xx
Author's Response:
Hi Twilightgirl! Thanks for reading. Which preview are you referring to? Another chapter or the introduction to My Heart's Desire?
Date: 21 May 2011 2:33 PM Title: Alice
Poor Bella! Poor Edward! Well, he did good with the control thing if only, he could see it for himself!
Date: 21 May 2011 6:07 AM Title: Bella
I hope that she is pregnant at some point though!
Date: 21 May 2011 3:25 AM Title: Alex & Jacob
I suppose the Dog is gonna make some trouble now? And, are the rest of the Cullens going to make it into the story?
Date: 21 May 2011 1:14 AM Title: Bella
I think, maybe, Edward is trying to scare away the competition - scare not hurt - because if E wanted Alex hurt he would havve been badly hurt or dead!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:39 AM Title: Bella
yes please more!
Date: 21 Mar 2011 12:51 AM Title: Jacob
she told Jacob she never fucked a guy twice in a row...but Cameron (?the selfish bastard?) wanted to go a third time before she told him she had things to do and he had to leave...
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bella was a bit of a liar to get what she wanted.
Thanks for r & r! Hope you continue to enjoy. :)
Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:42 PM Title: Alex & Jacob
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying! I hope you will be able to finish the story. :)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:30 PM Title: Bella
okay thanks for the story! i really enjoyed it i can't wait to see what happened. now the lucky bella is going to get to have sex with jasper.... she is always so lucky.. is ed dead? alice dead? i can't wait.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:34 PM Title: Alex
edward is watching you F everyone bella!!! what a perv!
Author's Response:
Lol. He's not actually watching; he's just aware of Bella's...hobby.
Thanks for r & r. Hope you enjoy!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:27 PM Title: Jacob
hummmmm bella you trashy woman!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:22 AM Title: Bella
You left us on the cliff.. bad girl. Yes I will read the sequel.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:08 AM Title: Bella
Well Edward has arrived finally. so much for vampire speed. LMAO
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:33 PM Title: Alice
Bella just cant win. Better change her or leave. This sucks.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Bella
I am glad she is not pregnant, that is just so weird. Well, anyway think about it if they are permanently hardened then how does he get it up? It should be one way or the other always. Either permanently up or permanently down, just a thought. I think Edward straightlaced is so funny with the blow job. Another story I have read with his point of view and getting one is so darn funny.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chris
.. oh my.. is Bella crazy? LOL, is it really Eddy boy? GAH! I hate not knowing if it was him...
Chris sounds like a good guy but I don't think he's the guy for Bella, if Edward hadn't come back I'd say give them a chance.. but now... now things are diff. But I have to say if Edward left again or is just a hallucination, then I'd say Chris would be the guy to start a relatioship with :)
Author's Response:
Lol. I hope you are enjoying this story. :)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:30 PM Title: Bella
.. is it Edward? GAH! this is so frustrating... I NEED TO KNOW o.O
Gonna keep reading xD
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:26 PM Title: Alex
OMD *oh my dracula* Is it Eddy boy!? Is it? or is Bella of her bunker??? LOL, not gonna lie, Bella comes off as a total bitch and I love it. She's using men as many men use women, I like that.
Alex came off as cocky and I think Bella enjoyed herself more with Jacob than with that dude. But what the heck, let Bella have fun.. even with married man, they're the most fun when it comes to cheating xD. And she doesn't care about him, yep let Bella use the sucker xD.
But what if it's Edward that's come back.. OmD
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:17 PM Title: Cameron
:o I have no idea who that might be but.... I think it could be Jacob or Edward. Just that Edward wouldn't text something like Lol, maybe 'love' but not lol. LOL, anyhoo. Enjoyed the chapter.
Hate Cameron, he sounds like he just needs an opening to trust his member in so he can get off... ugh! totally disgusting guy. Don't know why Bella is just now scratching him off her list xD
Anyhoo. goona read some more!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:30 PM Title: Bella
Now, that's just MEAN! You can't just leave it there.
Author's Response:
Oh, but I did. Perfect way to read the sequel, huh? ;)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 7:44 PM Title: Bella
that was good cant wait to read the next one and i like how you end this one and ii liked how you got bella and edward back together
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was getting sick of stories where Edward was a man-whore. I thought "why can't Bella be a whore?" That's where this story came from.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:23 PM Title: Bella
Oh my god! So not nice to end there! I'm glad the sequel is almost done, I'm heading there now!
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:54 PM Title: Alice
oh man, these two just can't catch a break and have some peace, can they?
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:27 PM Title: Bella
Yay! No more angsty Edward! And he's going to get over changing her too!
Love!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:44 PM Title: Edward
Yay, he's back!!
Now for presents!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Charlie
Ah, everyone's in love with Bella. And she still has low self esteem? Silly girl.
Moving on!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:01 PM Title: Alice
Oh, so sad. Too bad he has to stay away for a while.
Boo.
Balti k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:42 AM Title: Rosalie
Well, I'll guess she'll just have to watch out for shower sex. Bummer, that's lots of fun. But again, communication is key.
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:29 AM Title: Bella
I'm glad she's not pregnant. Thaat would suck.
Good that he's thinking of forever too. He should be selfish and change her.
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:15 AM Title: Alice
Fantastic! And look, it worked!
Awesome.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:06 AM Title: Edward
Damnit! I was afraid of that, but you lulled me into a false sense of security with the last chapter. Damnit!
Moving on!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chris
Yay for no angsty emopire! Handled like adults.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:50 AM Title: Bella
Rut roh, Shaggy! What's going to happen in the morning when he finds the bruises? I hope there's no self-loathing vampire shenanigans, like removing himself from her life again, or not having sex anymore.
Great job on this one.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:36 AM Title: Jessica & Alex
Aha! I was right, he did get Jeremy! Good, asshole deserved it.
Nice to see Edward without the redwood tree up his ass. I like your version.
Onward, ho!
Balti
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Edward & Bella
I want an Edward between my thighs! Hot!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:19 AM Title: Alex & Jacob
Yup, pissed off Jake = out of control werewolf. I don't trust that that's going anywhere good.
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Bella
Aww, shucks, Bella, could you do that again?? Uh huh. (I''m sure that sounds funnier in the Droopy Dog/Edward voice in my head, than on the screen)
Cute! Lovin' it!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:03 AM Title: Edward
Intriguing. Is Edward going to hunt deer, or Jeremy? But some good lovin's for Bella! Yay!
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:55 AM Title: Jeremy
Now would be a good time for him to give in to the monster and kill Jeremy. Where was he earlier anyway? hmmm.
Onward,
Balti k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:50 AM Title: Lance
Well, he's certainly working it, isn't he. At least he's giving her the time she needs. Can't wait to see what he's got up his sleeve next.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:43 AM Title: Edward
Edward's back! And seems to have grown a set while he was gone! And a libido too!
Goodness Gracious!
Moving on....
k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Zack
Dun dun dun! About time he man'd up and revealed himself.
Now what's she going to do about it?
Movin' on!
k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:34 AM Title: Bella
Hmm, why would he be hurting her old flames while standing by and letting her hookups happen at all? Crazy vampire!
Cheers,
karina
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Scott
Is he trying to drive her insane or get back into her life? He's a bit fucked.
Onward and upward!
Balti k
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:23 AM Title: Jacob
Good for Bella. She needs to get hers too. Too many schmucks leaving her unsatisfied, though I was beginning to wonder if it was a psychological block on her side at the beginning of the chapter.
Keepin' truckin'!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chris
I wonder how he's doing with not being spotted in sunny LA? Hiding in her neighbors yard no doubt.
Moving on!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:47 AM Title: Bella
Well now, is he watching her in person, or through Alice? I think he must be close, since she's dreaming him again. Just my thoughts.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Alex
I'm digging it. She's got the total "woman scorned" attitude and taking the revenge that would probably hurt Edward most. Nice.
BTW, noticed a mistake up above. You used conscious instead of conscience. Simple typo, no doubt. May want to edit that if you ever have a free second.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
Ooh, thanks for the catch!
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Bella
what the hell was that! holy shit. Jasper, really. what the hell? who did he eat? where is edward and Alice. what is the blood. ok i need a preview of the sequel PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! with an dending like that holy shit. so did not see that one commin! what the hell does he want? i gatta know. PLEASE tell me how to get the sequel!! i gatta read it!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found it. :)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:36 PM Title: Bella
as if you left the ending like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you serious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg what happens next!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm guessing that you finished the story? If so, check out the sequel, My Heart's Desire, to find out more.
Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:54 PM Title: Edward & Bella
this is a gr8 story it made me laugh when bella couldnt even stand and the whole story had me on egde. you're a brilliant writer
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:17 PM Title: Bella
well that was so not a nice way to end it off! but lucky for me you have already started the sequel! off to that now!
thanks for sharing your story with me :)
Author's Response:
Well, thank YOU for reading it. I hope you enjoyed it and the sequel as well. :)