Date: 02 Aug 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was so good. I didn't expect that she was like him in everyway possible. Amazing.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
very nice can't wait to read more from ya
Date: 24 Sep 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
ooohh!! i never saw it coming!
it hurts so much, to now that there wont be a next chapter:(
anyway!! looooove it





Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was awesome- intense, erotic, and scary. The ending really floored me. Loved it!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFG! This was the BEST one-shot I've ever read! I wish there was more! Please just write one more chapter! Pretty please with a strawberry on top because i fucking hate cherries! Please...that ending is saying in bold red letters "THIS ISN'T OVER BITCHES!"





Date: 20 May 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great. f*cking. o/s. Violent, but tons of fun. Totally did not expect that ending at all right up until she said 'Marie'. Great writing.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
MORE, MORE, MORE!!! PLEASE
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Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was really fucking awesome!!!
Damn....what I wouldn't give to see this continued!!!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow, its amazing how much i love sick, demented edward...great story.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
great freaken story. i love it
Date: 08 Apr 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this please let me know if you dectide to continue it





Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
please do this as a full story it was really ggod
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Had me all the way to the end!