Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:44 AM Title: Epilogue
This was wonderful. I always wondered what it would be like from this POV. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 25 May 2013 8:00 PM Title: Epilogue
I've read this wonderful story once already, but it never hurts to reread something so good! I hope to find the other Renesmee story you wrote, and enjoy it too!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 3:04 AM Title: Held in her Shield
To save your readers time, go to TwiFiction and read all 68 stories.
I'll check out kimmydonn.com
I'm a real reader, just want to save ya'll some time getting to the next story.
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Great, I look forward to visiting the family again. Thank you
Date: 09 Nov 2012 9:44 PM Title: No Fighting!
I couldn't find this story on TwiFiction. Please post your stories there as well.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2010 12:00 AM Title: Dawn
Love the story. And very interesting since it is written from Nessie's point of view, but i do wish she would call Edward Daddy, i think it fits, but that's my oponion. I can't wait for your next story!!!
Keep writting these beautiful stories
Date: 27 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Stage Fright
i meant to review this for the other chapter but had already went to the next ch. and didnt feel like going back. I think that theyre should be a few more sweet little Nessie and Edward moments
Date: 08 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: No Fighting!
This scene got me more than the original.
Date: 07 May 2010 2:10 AM Title: Christmas
Loved the chapter. you know? The funny thing is, is that it didn't come to a fight, and the Volterri really did leave peacefully, well, except for the killing Irina part. So, maybe Siobhan's gift really does work afterall. lol
Date: 04 May 2010 11:26 PM Title: The Seen and The Unseen
I like your concept for this story. Quite interesting.
Date: 04 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: The Seen and The Unseen
lol "I was careful not to say nice." she's so cute!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 7:43 PM Title: Darker Days
wow interesting story!!! Its nice to see this from Nessie's POV although Im not big on her calling edward Edward!!! I understand your reasoning but still you would think that he would have hurt feelings i mean after all he didnt think hed have a child so for her to not call him Daddy or even Father seems weird to me. That's just my Opinion so i hope i dont upset you.
Author's Response:
Doesn't upset me at all. I often have people get their backs up about the 'daddy' issue. I'm glad you see my reasoning. As far as Edward being hurt by it, she doesn't 'speak' to him often in the books. I would think her mental name would be much more complete. It would be Edward-man-who-hears-me-father-partner-guide all in one. Every time I wrote Edward I was thinking of the entire personality, not simply how he related to her... well relationally. And she does call him 'father' and 'my father'. Hope I'm not too adamant!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:55 PM Title: Darker Days
OMG!! Talk about cliffhanger! lol, really can't wait for the next chapter! hopefully it's soon. :)
RYSS,
~Harmony is Key
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:31 PM Title: Charlie
Loved this chapter! can't wait to read the next one!! you are such a good writer! I can't seem to stop reading you story.. this is by far the most interesting story from remesme's point of veiw.. you get every detail from the original Breaking Dawn, it makes the story seem that much more real. You capture Remesme's charator so well. Can't wait to read more of you story.
RYSS,
~Harmony is Key
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:07 PM Title: Charlie
This is such a cool story, can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:29 AM Title: Dawn
Loved this first chapter, you are such a good writer. Can't wait to read the next chapters.
RYSS,
~Harmony is Key
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:17 PM Title: Mama
I love love love this story and hope that you continue it. so sweet and wonderful
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:19 PM Title: Baby Steps
I like your story! Its really cute :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:19 AM Title: Dawn
Oh my gosh, this is so cute! I've never seen a story told from Nessies's POV!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:33 PM Title: Baby Steps
Its great so far! I'm so glad I read this. Normally I don't like to read stories that are being retold, just from a different persons point of view, but I really like this one! I am really glad I gave this story a chance.
Thanks for uploading it here :)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Dawn
This is pretty good. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
I apparently didn't have my review notification on. I just found this review today. Thanks for reading! I have posted another chatper.