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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

so glad this is complete



Author's Response:

Thank-you for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 5:59 AM Title: Epilogue

Excellent epi.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Thank-you ever so much for reading, reviewing, and leaving such fun content for us in return!  <3

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 5:40 AM Title: Outtake

Hilarious.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Tee hee. THANKS!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Emmett and Alice save the day.

Sherry



Author's Response:

*ringing bugle*  :D 

<3

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Alice and Emmett teaming up together is gonna be interesting.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

I wanna kick Edward's ass.

Sherry



Author's Response:

You weren't alone. Boys are so often dumb. Gotta "love" them.  :D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After

With everything they've done, yeah, it might be a bit overdue, but it's needed.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Pretty much what we thought, too.

Better late than never, eh?  ;D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

These two have a beautiful connection. 

Sherry



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

*lights cigarette*

Sherry



Author's Response:

*Cheshire Cat grin*  <3

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

How ironic it was they both harbored feelings in school for each other.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Isn't it, though? Wonder how many people make it to their 40th year reunion before they take the chance to say anything.  That thought was there for us.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Damn, that didn't go as planned.

Sherry



Author's Response:

LOL  Nope. Drat that Murphy.  ;D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

I like Bella held some interest in high school Edward. She's about to discover what she could have had then. 

Sherry



Author's Response:

Exactly. Fear IS the "killer" of so much potential, right?  :D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions

I'm anxious for them to finally meet.

Sherry



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2015 11:35 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

I've had this one on my TBR list for a while, and after reading the first chapter. I'm not disappointed. Looking forward to reading on.

Sherry



Author's Response:

So sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you. You totally made our days when you first read, and are again today as we resond! Thanks ever so much!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:18 PM Title: Epilogue

cute little story ;) al & em wierd :) 



Author's Response:

LOL  We had fun with them.  :D Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Good story.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:26 AM Title: Epilogue

great ending! so happy for them!

Author's Response:

We're so glad to hear you enjoyed the ending and what we did with the characters!  Thank-you!!  ~IW and TA

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 5:15 PM Title: Epilogue

Omg I so remember that part. I love the ending note. Perfect ending. Glad you finished it.  



Author's Response:

Thank-you so very much! Very glad you enjoyed it. :D

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Alice is amazing and she also can fix anything ...add that simple emmett to the mix and crazyness is about to happen

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

shit i was hoping to enjoy the symphony ......she is so embaresed ...I can feel her red face from here ....make this right E

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

yea the letter really got to her ....i feel so sorry for him she broke his heart ...oh E  she didn't mean to

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:46 PM Title: Epilogue

what a great ending



Author's Response:

Thank-you so much!

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions

I love when you  post photos of things in the story it makes the story seem so real .....oh and she does remember him ...was she being so cavaleir because he friends were mocking her ...this letter was eviditenly something she has held close to her heart for  a while .....what is the next surprise he has in store for her ...i am curious as to what size condoms she really will need ...or when she finds they are both virgins maybe she will throw caution to the wind ...oh no bad idea ..what if his dream of her is not what he expected

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:57 PM Title: Epilogue

awesome story and the perfect ending.



Author's Response:

Thank-you so much!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:48 PM Title: Outtake

she caught her lol.fab outtake.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 3:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful!



Author's Response:

Thank-you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 10:26 AM Title: Epilogue

THanks for writing and sharing

ty



Author's Response:

(Much delayed, but...) THANK-YOU for reading! xoxo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:45 AM Title: Epilogue

The story was worth the wait just like there love story was Thanks so much for finishing it for us.



Author's Response:

Thank-you so very much!  I can hardly express how much it means to hear your tremendously touching words!  TwiliteAddict should take a bow for getting out the whip to get this done!  ;D

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:22 AM Title: Outtake

i loved reading this story. it was an unexpected pleasure. you fit so much depth of character in 12 chapters. i was amazed! :) very angsty, and i loved your old-fashioned edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews!  We love to make readers chuckle.  It was so much fun to write this -- and we do have an epilogue that will be posted soon that takes place several years into the future.  Hope you put this story on alert for that!  

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

you two possess comedic genius! this was a great chapter!

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

you two are evil for putting emmett in tights! that was hilarious. i'm so glad alice is here to save the day!

Reviewer: maxiixam Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions

Ohh, very sweet .. and -of course- a bit mystical from Edward's side.

Very nice :)

Can't await to read more!

Lovely Greetings Maxi



Author's Response:

Thanks!  We had a lot of fun with it, and kinda liked a bit of humanized supernatural (almost) to nod at canon.  :D

Working on more now.  Hope to have it out within the month.

Thanks so much for reading and sharing your reaction with us!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:45 PM Title: Outtake

thanks for the great story!  loved it made me smile! :)



Author's Response:

Thank-YOU for reading and sharing!!!  You absolutely returned the favor on the smiles!!!  :D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

so funny sooo funny love Em.. it may be a fiesta but it's no party to ride in!!!! hahah classic love it!!!! :)



Author's Response:

You rock!  Got me laughing along with you that you're mentioning some of our favorite funnies to have included in the story!  :D  Deeelighted to hear it, bb!!  Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

love alice so funny that she knew ed too... love em of course!



Author's Response:

*huge pleased grins*  Delighted to hear it!  Thanks so for reading and responding!!  :D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

oh ed you are being stupid!!!



Author's Response:

No matter how magnificent, just can't seem to avoid it.  Silly boy.  But he will be redeemed!  :D  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After

oh yeah i have seen all the parts and tested the water.. do you want to go out! haha funny



Author's Response:

Tee heee hee  *enormous grin*  You know, the foibles of youth!  ;P  You know, since he's always making sure and all, before taking it all the way.  lol  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

oh yeah you better stay bella.. ed you are sooo f-ing HOT



Author's Response:

LOL  Yup.  Thanks!!  :D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

oh she is always beautiful when she comes there hasn't been a story where she hasn't  oh bella you are always so perfect and Ed's penis is always beautiful.. ha!



Author's Response:

Why thank-you very much for the high praise!  Agree, how could they not be beautiful after all the cockblocking S.M. put us through, right!?  ;D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

oh boy.. here we go...



Author's Response:

I can tell you had your belt tightened and the seat in the fully upright position!  Hope it was a good ride!  :D  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

oh boy... drama nothing like drama 



Author's Response:

Drama Llama in full effect! :D  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

ewww gross quivering aro.. yuk!!!



Author's Response:

Bahahahaa!  Yeeeeah!  *revulsion face*  We thought that might help with the whole "PLEASE let E win!!" thing.  LOL  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions

oh ed the forever romantic!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's what we thought too!  *huge grin*  Thanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 2:46 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

cool can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:55 AM Title: Outtake

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and responding!  Might I suggest you check out TwiliteAddict's "Future Imperfect"?  :D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

(:

Author's Response:

C:

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:15 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

:)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:21 PM Title: Outtake

That was to funny Alice is a riot if I was Bella I would of left her after the third box of condoms. lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, this Alice is loosely based on imagining if my own mother were in Alice's shoes! And, YEAH I would have left (probably by the second box!), too!!  ;D  lol  Delighted to hear it struck your funny bone, so well!!  *enormous grin*

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:20 PM Title: Outtake

OMG too funny



Author's Response:

*DELIGHTED giggled*  Yay!!  (I thought so tooooo! *mwhahaa*)  We had waaaay too much fun with it!! :D  THANKS!!

Reviewer: LanaLee1248 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Great job and awesome story. So sad it is over. I really, really enjoyed it!

Author's Response:

Thank-you so much!  It warms our hearts to heart it.  Take heart yourself, there is still an epilogue to go (eventually, lol)!  Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 10:25 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

Loved the idea, enjoyed the first chapter, thanks



Author's Response:

So glad to hear you enjoyed.  :D  Thanks for the feedback!!  Look forward to hearing what you think of the rest.  Happy HOlidays!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Please tell me there is more. Hoping for Happy reunion for the lovers...?

Author's Response:

lol  Yes!  There will be more - an epilogue and at least one outtake.  So glad you liked it well enough to be chomping for more!  :D

Thanks so much for reading and sharing your response with us!

Reviewer: christinamarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

really loved you story send me a messege when you have more

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2011 6:32 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

Poor Edward.  Girls can be jerks too.  This chapter made me so sad for him.



Author's Response:

Agreed!  Thanks for reading and responding!!  (Finally got review ability fixed!)

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Oh Boy! Sounds like it's ON! This sounds like it's going to be so fun reading these two get Edward and Bella back together! How fun!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah!  :D  Thanks so much for the fun review, and for reading!!! 

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Sold!!! I loved it! that was so sweet and innocently delicious! Please give me more!



Author's Response:

Thank-you!!  Am responding now that I'm able to.  Thanks also for the great grins you always gave us!!  :D

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

This story is very cute! Your chapter end notes are even more cute! I like this story becuase it's very sincere and while I do love the dirty nasty, kinky stuff, it's nice to read a sincere romantic novel with a touch of kink! Very nicely done ladies, very nicely done......now on with the dirty nasty, kinky stuff! **giggle**



Author's Response:

*enormous grinning giggles*  I feel the same way about romantic... and kinky!  *mwhaahaa*  Just wanna kiss ya for the lovely warm fuzzies this review gave us!! Thank-you!!!  xxooxxoo

Reviewer: EdwardCullenLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 2:22 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

Ok, my interest is piqued I will keep reading!



Author's Response:

So glad!  Thanks!!  :D

Reviewer: mandy07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

I usually don't comment because I really don't know what to say.  Once I get caught up in a story I just have to keep going but you two are amazing!  I've never read so much passion and endearing words in a fiction like this one.  Please do not stop with just an epilogue, you can take this story to so many heights.  Bella finishing school,Edward at Carnegie Hall,Emmett and Alice (thats different) Edward becoming famous, Bella being left behind, I could go on and on.  Where do their lives finally lead them, I'm not a young reader but I've lived my life, and writers like you have brought back sweet memories.  I love you both for giving me this happy moment.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you did comment!  I cannot explain how uplifting these kinds of reviews are.  We thank you for taking the time to give us such a passionate review!  For me, the feeling of love in Twilight gave me all sorts of endorphins (even better than chocolate) and so knowing we captured some of that for you is so awesome!  And, wow, such great ideas for continuing the story.  I am psyched about the epilogue though I know RosaBella and I are working on many writing projects, I also know it will get done...in time.  And we will seriously consider your suggestions.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Yes, I'm with her, time for more...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews.  I know this story is somewhat frustrating with all the missed opportunities and miscommunication -- but to me, it is classic Edward and Bella!  We promise  a happy ending!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

Yes, Okay, a little less bitchy attitude, but it seems to me she could still be more forthcoming of her failures and asinine behavior to try & look cool in some mean girl friends eyes.

Hope it's good enough for him. It's working some for me;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Wow, she's being a little bitchy to a guy that professed his love for her & she maybe had fantasy crush on, isn't she?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

i hope he shows

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:36 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

So, I guess Alice is not his sister or what kind of parents would they be to not foot the bill on a long long loan that could be paid back sometime after their death, ie never?

But, who cares? We got the premise & she's doing it, yeah, let's see what happens!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Sappy goodness



Author's Response:

Janet, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I hope you were entertained by our fairytale turned romantic comedy!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Oh Emmett is so great!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

Always hate it when they don't say what they mean. Separation anxiety already here!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

What a flowing of sensory gratification. Too bad most first times aren't that wonderful.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Very sensual accounting. Wheww

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

Finally honesty.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Edward always overthinks things and Bella is alway impulsive.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

Anziety must be killing them both. Don't think he'll follow through.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:45 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

So did she just not date?

Reviewer: SomeRandomGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Morning After

I would have loved this in Bella's point of view, because the shower scene has always been one of my fantasies and seeing as I don't have a boyfriend at the moment to fulfil that for me... >.<

Great story guys :D

Reviewer: twilightobession Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

I think daniel Marks is Edward accountant. And Bella is suppose to call him to get her money.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

great short story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:12 PM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

A great start

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

aww that was so sweet what a lovely chapter.update soon

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

This was a great chapter. Those 2 can be so stubborn.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:12 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

Goddamnit!

You've written my idea I thought of a year ago!

Shit!

I haven't even read this and now I can't because I have to write my own version. I'm pretty sure it will be different from yours, and a tad bit longer.

Still. The plot is the same. I just had to come here and let you know so when you see a story with the same plot in the future, just KNOW I didn't steal your idea.

Damnit!

But when I start my version, I will let you know. It will be told in two POVs and slightly immature, but it will be funny.

Damnit.

I can already tell that is good.



Author's Response:

I know, that sucks doesn't it! 

You should know that we got seriously attacked by another author on fanfic.net who said the same about us -- that we had plagarized her story.  Now, last time I checked, it is impossible to plagarize without having READ the work first!!  I tried to tell her I never read her story, let alone heard of it, but she was convinced and got a bit nasty! 

Here's my opinion, I say go for it, write your story -- the woman who gave us this premise (selling virginity) read about it an article in a magazine, so this is by no means an original idea.  As long as I'm not reading parts of my story verbatim in your story, it's all yours!  No one should have their creativity stiffled!  Have fun and I'd love to know when you post it.

Good Luck!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

I loved it that was perfect she was there in the nic of time.  Emmett and Alice I can see it such opisits but so much energie.  I will be looking forward to the epi.  Happy holidays to you to and Thanks for working on this wonderful story.

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

that was good i liked it and i liked how it ended  aslo

 

Reviewer: Lady Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Great chapter!  And I totally loved the idea of Alice and Emmett starting a relationship.  You should write a sequel about the two of them; they certainly are a pair!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5: Second Chances

fan fic foreplay is awesome 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

that was hot loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Well that didn't go well at all .I thought she would be glad it was him not pissed .I hope Edward can explain everything to her .

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3: Regrets

iam so happy that she always liked Edward I hope this all goes well but when does love ever turn out that way lol love this story

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 2: Decisions

OK now I like Bella again she was just saying what a loser to her friends can't wait till they meet up



Author's Response:

lol  Glad you joined us for the adventure!  Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 5:48 AM Title: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

I can't belive that she was mean like that to Edwards letter .I can't wait to read more

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Yes! Em & Alice make a great team...lol!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

I loved this and I am so glad they opened up to each other finally!

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