Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 32
Okay, seriously poor Bella... Edward's a stubborn ass
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
great chap!! can't wait for the next one :) Oh Seth!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 32
loved it very much and she better say YES because they both have been through so much update when you can thanks....
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 32
loved rosalie in this chapter and i loved that bella got all he's mine on those two girls lol
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter!! I love how Seth almost "spilled the beans" :)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 32
YAY!! He asked charlie!! Now we have to wait to see the proposal!! Can I fond the wedding dress??
Please??!!
xx
M
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter. I'm glad Bella and Rose talked. Atleast now Bella knows what is going on in Seattle. I love Edward and Bella together and I thought it was cute that she got jealous of the girls. Looking forward to the next. Can't wait.
Elli :)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 32
For a detective Bella is slow. Can she not tell how much Edward loves her. Edward is a marrying type of guy. She should have figured it out long ago that it would come to this point.
Author's Response: LMAO....yes, she's not firing on all of her pistons anymore...I'll get the teaser to you soon.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
oh you are so mean!! I can't wait!! can't she and alice open their own practice as PI's or something??
Much love!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
great chapter... I don't want this to be over so soon... :(
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
Cliffies in the A/N??!!! Are you fucking with us???
I loved it you evil creature!
xoxo
MArianne
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 31
hmmm I think you're right! hehe duh! ;)
Great, great story!! Can't wait for the update!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't believe she forgot about her father's wedding, while Edward remembered. Who had surgery and was under anesthesia for 6 hours? I like Edward's attitude. Bella needs to realize that she has more to her life than her job now.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
great chap!! can't wait for the next one!!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
I love where Edwards head is...who cares about after care....when can he have sex!
Yup...think Edward may be asking Charlies permission to marry Bella!
Loved this...can't wait for more but am curious who the mole is. Could it be Carlisle?
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Two words, poor Bella
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
I liked this chapter alot! Suspenseful, but also with wit and humor :) Glad to see Aro dead.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oo he's finally awake and out to the hospital. Hmm so are hinting that we might have a proposal on the near future...
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter. Glad that Edward is ok. I'm wondering why it seems to be ok that Bella hasn't gone back to Seattle. Could it be that Carlisle is helping her? Hopefully Bella won't be in too much trouble cause she did a lot of things that were definitely not ok. Can't wait for more.
Elli :)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
I loved it girl!! i just wish it was Rose who finished Aro off... but it was awesome
let's see how the wedding goes!!!!
Much love!!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 30
I LOVED IT! :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 29
oohhh very good chappy :) I'm a little behind, but I'm quickly catching up. I loved the whole Charlie bit. That was very clever!! :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well, taking a bullet for his daughter is one sure fire way to impress Charlie Swan. Plus he'll have a cool scar as permanent proof of his devotion... lol
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
I thought you did a good job, good chapter.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
I didn't hate it!! It was goood!!!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
You have got to be kidding me!!!!! This hole just keeps getting deeper and deeper.Poor Bella!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yeah! Bella got Tanya. I love that Edward ran in and saved the day. I hate that he got hurt, but love that he is the hero. I hope that they can clear Bella and Alice's name with the FBI. Bella still has a mess to clean up.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
oh well damn girl, I read all your fic in 2 days, and damn I'm impresed!! I hope she survives...
I can't wait for more!!
Much love!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
Next chapter please? PLEASE LET EDWARD BE ALRIGHT
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
yay! I am glad Bella is safe! Can't wait for the next chap!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love it. Thank God someone decked Tanya. I really hate her in all the fanfics I read. Sigh..Edward my hero and of course, still loving Charlie. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
more now and i do mean now
Date: 10 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
FAb chapter! I'm glad both Aro and Tanya got what they deserved. Thank you for the chapter!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
That was great can't wait to see what will happen next and I hope she does more than slap her in the next chapter update when you can thanks....
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter, I was so expecting you to cliff it with him bleeding on the ground.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
fianlly someone decked tanya....great chappy
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
Well aro is dead so I guess it's finally case close, now I'm sure shit will hit the fan once Bella gets back to the station and has to face Rosalie for running of with James.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hate it? Are you kidding? I loved it! I know there is still stuff to take care of like who the real mole is in the SPD! However, Aro & James are dead, Tanya is a bitch & Bella & Edward are together!
Looking forward to more!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love it! It's so sad but it's good.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think its time to order a cape for Edward! LOL
Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
You are definitely the best for giving us another update. Now I'm really going to sound greedy because I so want the next chapter. I'm hoping it's coming soon. So..... Aro is dead. That's what he gets for doing his own dirty work. LoL. I like that Bella hit Tanya but I was kind of hoping she would get killed off. You know maybe get caught in the crossfire. I think that would of worked. LoL. I hope Edward is ok. I'm thinking he just earned himself major points with Charlie for trying to save Bella. Looking forward to the next.
Elli :)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
Bella messes up again because she tries to take everything on herself. She is not that good. She is part of a team, but she forgets that she is.
Author's Response: So true, that's because she tries to protect everyone, and thinks she can do it on her own, but she doesn't realize until it's too late...but I don't think this is her fault, I mean Alice just went to the store LoL
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
Next chapter please?
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
oh man.. I'm not going to survive long on this! I hope you update soon, because I'm freaking out!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
Doesn't Aro ever watch movies? When the villan keeps the captured hero alive to taunt them instead of doing away with hero right away, the villan always loses.
Author's Response: LoL yes, I know, it's predictable....but Aro is above everything, and who said he was going to lose?
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
I'm getting whiplash!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love Charlie. He has always been one of my favorite characters from the books but especially from the movies. He is totally underestimated by everyone. Let's hope he saves his baby Bella. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 29
Awesome chapter! I'm so glad Charlie know's something is up. Thank you for the update!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved the chapter. I guess it was time to say bye to James. He had served his purpose. Aro is apparently even crazier than I thought. Can't wait for more. Hope it comes quickly like this chapter.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 29
more more more!!!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
Omg I never thought james would die by the hand of Aro i assumed it would he alice or bella to kill him. As soon as they were getting pulled over I knew it would be Charlie, I'm glad he caught on to what was going on. Can't wait to see how he helps rescue her, and what alice thinks when she finds the James body.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT!!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 29
Nothing Aro does surprises me. I just hope he didn't realize Charlie was Bella's dad! Good thing is Charlie must realize something is wrong & I hope he doesn't call SPD or he may get the mole & alert Aro.
Can't for more!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
My apologies for not reviewing sooner - I just had to keep reading!!!! Wonderful story - I love it. Thank you so much and I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yipee!! Edward and Emmett to the rescue. I almost believed James for about a second. I hope Bella gets to kick Aro's ass too.
Eclipse was awesome. I've seen it twice already. The movie was actually more exciting than the book. I think David Slade did a good job.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Continue to love your story and your characterization of a strong Bella and Alice. Nice that the girls are protecting the guys for a change. Look forward to your next update. E
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
I pray to he isn't wrong ;)
Now I had I weird flash-want.... Can we have hot make-up smut after all that??
Irrelevant much?! lol
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response: Maybe *snickers* Bella still needs to use her cuffs on Edward....oh the possiblities ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
love this chapter!!
Date: 05 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
i want more right now
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 27
well agent reed was just....creepy. Eclipse I must wait untill 4th of july cause i work nights suckity.....just finished rereading the book and can't wait....love your story loved the chappy will miss you have fun .....
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
You really know, how to keep the readers. So much suspence, so many unexpected turns of events. During this chapter I thought, that Agent Reed is somehow involved with Aro and it looks like he is.
Really cool chapter.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter. She definately made the right move.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 27
I knew Agent Reed was dirty!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
I think they made the right decision as well. Hmm...hope Edward will be okay.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hope this works out for them. Her whole career is on the line. I know Edward believes in her. He will stand by her no matter what.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it!! Yes I agree too about making the right move!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
I knew reed was the mole he just didn sit well with me. So it seems Bella is taking james to her dad. Can't wait to see what happens next..
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 27
Always knew Reed was a bad egg!! Run Bella Run!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 27
I think Bella made the right decision in only trusting Alice and Captain Cullen. I don't think Rosalie is crooked, but at this point I guess you can't be too careful. I guess Aro knows everything that is going on if he even has people in the FBI working for him. Can't wait for more.
Elli :)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
I knew Reed was the mole! You gave it away to us numerous times. He was shady from jump- it's just the vibe you got from him. I'm starting to like James (actually I have for a while). Yes, he has screwed up, but at the end of the day he's a kid that has gotten himself into a heap of shit he can't get out of. Look forward to the next update.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I agree with Bella. There is a leak somewhere.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Agent Reed is the inside mole and the computer guy is connected to Aro somehow... Good chapter.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
Continues to be a great and interesting story. The plot continues to thicken as they say. I followed you over here from Twilighted since you are further along here than there. Get busy and write some more girl! Like your characterizations of Edward and Bella. I like that they are both pretty strong and smart, instead of weak and mopey (emo) like in a lot of other stories. Looking foward to your next update. E
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it iam glad he understands how much her job means to her love them they will work it out i just know it
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh thank god bella is ok but i know trouble isn't over yet
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
poor edward i hope bella is ok evil cliffy
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
My heart hurt for Angela i just hope bella can bring james down and soon i loved it this story has me hooked
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have to say now i like rose i feel for her and the hard work she has done loved it
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh crap that was really good i loved alice's pov i just hope at the party she can keep an eye out for her
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh tanya is evilwhat did she mean that she saw them on friday hmm... I am glad bella came back i loved it but she needs to go to the party so that she can get more info
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent! Thank you for letting everyone "talk it out"...it explained a lot and filled in the blanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
I prefer the longer chapies and I do not mind the time in between so much because very short chapters are just getting on my nerves actually... (Full with clifies which I loathe lol)
I loved it! Bella is right noone is safe and I get off on it! Gimme blood!!
I still think for a peculiar reason that Agent Reed is the informnant...
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 18 Jun 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter12
he is a sick person i can't wait till she takes him down
Author's Response: Dang, girl..you're whipping through these chapters quick! Thanks for the awesome reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying my story :)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
i loved it em is the best
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh crap loved it
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am so glad that bella and rose had it out i just hope it all goes well but what would be the fun in that lol loved it
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh crap poor bella loved it but wow rose is going to kill her lol
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
loved it i have to give jasper some credit he held out longer then i thought i love alice as well
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved it iam glad she told him the truth and not drag it out
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
that was awesome poor jasper and edward they both are so screwed loved it
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
I knew it that was so funny i loved it ithis this story is really good
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it this story looks really good iam glad i found it
Date: 17 Jun 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward knows the truth and was able to connect the dots. Can't wait for more. I really don't care how long the chapters are as long as you update quickly. Hope you update soon. Elli :)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Uh-oh
I'd rather have shorter chapters and faster updates