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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 32

Okay, seriously poor Bella... Edward's a stubborn ass

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

great chap!! can't wait for the next one :) Oh Seth!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

loved it very much and she better say YES because they both have been through so much update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: stephc7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

loved rosalie in this chapter and i loved that bella got all he's mine on those two girls lol

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 32

great chapter!! I love how Seth almost "spilled the beans" :)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 32

YAY!! He asked charlie!! Now we have to wait to see the proposal!! Can I fond the wedding dress??

Please??!!

xx

M

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 32

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella and Rose talked. Atleast now Bella knows what is going on in Seattle. I love Edward and Bella together and I thought it was cute that she got jealous of the girls. Looking forward to the next. Can't wait.
Elli :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 32

For a detective Bella is slow. Can she not tell how much Edward loves her. Edward is a marrying type of guy. She should have figured it out long ago that it would come to this point.



Author's Response: LMAO....yes, she's not firing on all of her pistons anymore...I'll get the teaser to you soon.

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

oh you are so mean!! I can't wait!! can't she and alice open their own practice as PI's or something??
Much love!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

great chapter... I don't want this to be over so soon... :(

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 31

Cliffies in the A/N??!!! Are you fucking with us???

I loved it you evil creature!

xoxo

MArianne

Reviewer: tima Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 31

hmmm I think you're right! hehe duh! ;)

Great, great story!! Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 31

I can't believe she forgot about her father's wedding, while Edward remembered. Who had surgery and was under anesthesia for 6 hours? I like Edward's attitude. Bella needs to realize that she has more to her life than her job now.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 31

great chap!! can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 31

I love where Edwards head is...who cares about after care....when can he have sex!
Yup...think Edward may be asking Charlies permission to marry Bella!
Loved this...can't wait for more but am curious who the mole is. Could it be Carlisle?

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 31

Two words, poor Bella

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

I liked this chapter alot! Suspenseful, but also with wit and humor :) Glad to see Aro dead.

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oo he's finally awake and out to the hospital. Hmm so are hinting that we might have a proposal on the near future...

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 31

Great chapter. Glad that Edward is ok. I'm wondering why it seems to be ok that Bella hasn't gone back to Seattle. Could it be that Carlisle is helping her? Hopefully Bella won't be in too much trouble cause she did a lot of things that were definitely not ok. Can't wait for more.
Elli :)

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it girl!! i just wish it was Rose who finished Aro off... but it was awesome
let's see how the wedding goes!!!!
Much love!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 30

I LOVED IT! :)

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 29

oohhh very good chappy :) I'm a little behind, but I'm quickly catching up. I loved the whole Charlie bit. That was very clever!! :)

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

Well, taking a bullet for his daughter is one sure fire way to impress Charlie Swan. Plus he'll have a cool scar as permanent proof of his devotion... lol

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 30

I thought you did a good job, good chapter.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

I didn't hate it!! It was goood!!!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 24

You have got to be kidding me!!!!! This hole just keeps getting deeper and deeper.Poor Bella!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yeah! Bella got Tanya. I love that Edward ran in and saved the day. I hate that he got hurt, but love that he is the hero. I hope that they can clear Bella and Alice's name with the FBI. Bella still has a mess to clean up.

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29

oh well damn girl, I read all your fic in 2 days, and damn I'm impresed!! I hope she survives...
I can't wait for more!!
Much love!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

Next chapter please? PLEASE LET EDWARD BE ALRIGHT

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 30

yay! I am glad Bella is safe! Can't wait for the next chap!

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

Love it.  Thank God someone decked Tanya.  I really hate her in all the fanfics I read.  Sigh..Edward my hero and of course, still loving Charlie.  Anxiously awaiting your next chapter. 

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 30

more now and i do mean now

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 30

FAb chapter!  I'm glad both Aro and Tanya got what they deserved.  Thank you for the chapter!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 30

That was great can't wait to see what will happen next and I hope she does more than slap her in the next chapter update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 30

Good chapter, I was so expecting you to cliff it with him bleeding on the ground.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 30

fianlly someone decked tanya....great chappy

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 30

Well aro is dead so I guess it's finally case close, now I'm sure shit will hit the fan once Bella gets back to the station and has to face Rosalie for running of with James.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hate it? Are you kidding? I loved it! I know there is still stuff to take care of like who the real mole is in the SPD! However, Aro & James are dead, Tanya is a bitch & Bella & Edward are together!
Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

I love it!  It's so sad but it's good.

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

I think its time to order a cape for Edward!  LOL

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

You are definitely the best for giving us another update. Now I'm really going to sound greedy because I so want the next chapter. I'm hoping it's coming soon. So..... Aro is dead. That's what he gets for doing his own dirty work. LoL. I like that Bella hit Tanya but I was kind of hoping she would get killed off. You know maybe get caught in the crossfire. I think that would of worked. LoL. I hope Edward is ok. I'm thinking he just earned himself major points with Charlie for trying to save Bella. Looking forward to the next.
Elli :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

Bella messes up again because she tries to take everything on herself. She is not that good. She is part of a team, but she forgets that she is.



Author's Response: So true, that's because she tries to protect everyone, and thinks she can do it on her own, but she doesn't realize until it's too late...but I don't think this is her fault, I mean Alice just went to the store LoL

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

Next chapter please?

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 29

oh man.. I'm not going to survive long on this! I hope you update soon, because I'm freaking out!

Reviewer: CassieCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

holy shit

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29

Doesn't Aro ever watch movies? When the villan keeps the captured hero alive to taunt them instead of doing away with hero right away, the villan always loses.

Author's Response: LoL yes, I know, it's predictable....but Aro is above everything, and who said he was going to lose?

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 29

I'm getting whiplash!

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 29

I love Charlie.  He has always been one of my favorite characters from the books but especially from the movies.  He is totally underestimated by everyone.  Let's hope he saves his baby Bella.  Looking forward to your next chapter. 

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

Awesome chapter!  I'm so glad Charlie know's something is up.  Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved the chapter. I guess it was time to say bye to James. He had served his purpose. Aro is apparently even crazier than I thought. Can't wait for more. Hope it comes quickly like this chapter.

Reviewer: monkeymansgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 29

more more more!!!!!

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 29

Omg I never thought james would die by the hand of Aro i assumed it would he alice or bella to kill him. As soon as they were getting pulled over I knew it would be Charlie, I'm glad he caught on to what was going on. Can't wait to see how he helps rescue her, and what alice thinks when she finds the James body.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 29

Nothing Aro does surprises me. I just hope he didn't realize Charlie was Bella's dad! Good thing is Charlie must realize something is wrong & I hope he doesn't call SPD or he may get the mole & alert Aro.
Can't for more!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 29

Go Charlie!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

My apologies for not reviewing sooner - I just had to keep reading!!!!  Wonderful story - I love it.  Thank you so much and I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 28

Yipee!!  Edward and Emmett to the rescue.  I almost believed James for about a second.  I hope Bella gets to kick Aro's ass too. 

Eclipse was awesome. I've seen it twice already.  The movie was actually more exciting than the book.  I think David Slade did a good job. 

 

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 27

Continue to love your story and your characterization of a strong Bella and Alice.  Nice that the girls are protecting the guys for a change.  Look forward to your next update.  E

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

I pray to he isn't wrong ;)

Now I had I weird flash-want.... Can we have hot make-up smut after all that??

Irrelevant much?! lol

xoxo

Marianne



Author's Response: Maybe *snickers* Bella still needs to use her cuffs on Edward....oh the possiblities ;)

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

love this chapter!!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

i want more right now

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

well agent reed was just....creepy.  Eclipse I must wait untill 4th of july cause i work nights suckity.....just finished rereading the book and can't wait....love your story loved the chappy will miss you have fun .....

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 27

You really know, how to keep the readers. So much suspence, so many unexpected turns of events. During this chapter I thought, that Agent Reed is somehow involved with Aro and it looks like he is.

Really cool chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter.  She definately made the right move.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 27

I knew Agent Reed was dirty!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27

I think they made the right decision as well. Hmm...hope Edward will be okay.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 27

I hope this works out for them. Her whole career is on the line. I know Edward believes in her. He will stand by her no matter what.

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!! Yes I agree too about making the right move!

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 27

I knew reed was the mole he just didn sit well with me. So it seems Bella is taking james to her dad. Can't wait to see what happens next..

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 27

Always knew Reed was a bad egg!!  Run Bella Run!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter, I look forward to the next.

Reviewer: emartin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 27

I think Bella made the right decision in only trusting Alice and Captain Cullen. I don't think Rosalie is crooked, but at this point I guess you can't be too careful. I guess Aro knows everything that is going on if he even has people in the FBI working for him. Can't wait for more.
Elli :)

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

I knew Reed was the mole! You gave it away to us numerous times. He was shady from jump- it's just the vibe you got from him. I'm starting to like  James (actually I have for a while). Yes, he has screwed up, but at the end of the day he's a kid that has gotten himself into  a heap of shit he can't get out of. Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

I agree with Bella. There is a leak somewhere.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 26

Agent Reed is the inside mole and the computer guy is connected to Aro somehow...  Good chapter.

Reviewer: EeWee Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

Continues to be a great and interesting story.  The plot continues to thicken as they say. I followed you over here from Twilighted since you are further along here than there.  Get busy and write some more girl!  Like your characterizations of Edward and Bella.  I like that they are both pretty strong and smart, instead of weak and mopey (emo) like in a lot of other stories.  Looking foward to your next update.  E

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

loved it iam glad he understands how much her job means to her love them they will work it out i just know it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

oh thank god bella is ok but i know trouble isn't over yet

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 18

poor edward i hope bella is ok evil cliffy

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

My heart hurt for Angela i just hope bella can bring james down and soon i loved it this story has me hooked

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

I have to say now i like rose i feel for her and the hard work she has done loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

oh crap that was really good i loved alice's pov i just hope at the party she can keep an eye out for her

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh tanya is evilwhat did she mean that she saw them on friday hmm... I am glad bella came back i loved it but she needs to go to the party so that she can get more info

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 26

Excellent!  Thank you for letting everyone "talk it out"...it explained a lot and filled in the blanks!

 

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 26

I prefer the longer chapies and I do not mind the time in between so much because very short chapters are just getting on my nerves actually... (Full with clifies which I loathe lol)

I loved it! Bella is right noone is safe and I get off on it! Gimme blood!!

I still think for a peculiar reason that Agent Reed is the informnant...

xoxo

Marianne

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter12

he is a sick  person i can't wait till she takes him down



Author's Response: Dang, girl..you're whipping through these chapters quick! Thanks for the awesome reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying my story :)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

i loved it em is the best

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

oh crap loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

I am so glad that bella and rose had it out i just hope it all goes well but what would be the fun in that lol loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

oh crap poor bella loved it but wow rose is going to kill her lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it i have to give jasper some credit he held out longer then i thought i love alice as well

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it iam glad she told him the truth and not drag it out

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

that was awesome poor jasper and edward they both are so screwed loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

I knew it that was so funny i loved it ithis this story is really good

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it this story looks really good iam glad i found it

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter. I'm glad Edward knows the truth and was able to connect the dots. Can't wait for more. I really don't care how long the chapters are as long as you update quickly. Hope you update soon. Elli :)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

Uh-oh

I'd rather have shorter chapters and faster updates

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