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Reviewer: dlpash Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ha, loved this chapter.  You do a great epov.  Aw, I can't wait till he finds out, REALLY hope he's not ticked though.

Okay, so they both find 'love at first sight' on the same day?  Hope they don't get suspicious.  This is so cute and so different.

 

Reviewer: dlpash Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this so far.  I never would have guessed this was your first if you didn't tell us......that's a compliment, btw.

She has to pretend to be a nerd, lol.  Hope Edward's still interested when he finds out the truth, and not hurt.

 

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

the cliffy was perfect and can't wait for more

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: Twhylitelvr77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ok, I hate cliffies but I understand. I am seriously wondering "what the hell" but I'm sure you'll remedy that soon. Thanks for sharing...great chapter...loved the part where Esme called Edward "emo"...ha ha!

till next time...

:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh no you didn't!!  Talk about a heart stopping cliffie!!  Please update soon.  I have to know what the hell happened!  Did James pick her up?  Why didn't she just tell him she'd meet him at the party?  She's supposed to be a professional - self preservation, etc.  OMG - I'll be waiting for the update....will have to pacify myself with "he's in HS, she's an adult cop, she will be okay, she will be okay, she will be okay....." 

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

I thought this story was great before, but somehow you keep making it even better. Please don't take long to update. I can't wait to find out what is going on with Bella.
Elli :)

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh hell no!!!  You did NOT just leave us like that... *arms crossed tapping foot*

I'll forgive you with one condition.....Just don't make me wait too awful long, please???  I'm still waiting on Twi for gawd knows what chapter and I'm kinda peeved about it.  Anyhoo, on a much lighter note, If James has Bella, I hope to high heaven that Bad Ass Bella comes out to play.... *grins*

Awesome chappie chica!! And I'm only messin with ya!!  :p

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 17

i feel sad for angela...

Reviewer: belle123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think James has been terrorizing girls as long as he has been able to get it up he is a sick fuck. 

Edward and Bella wow that was hot.

Reviewer: twi-pixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

coz pixie likes that!

omg. more please!!!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

Sweet dang, loved the chapter

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

Of course James forced himself on Angela.  He's just that type of guy...he needs to be put away for good.

The story line is heating up and it's going to be interesting how the "team" corrals the high schoolers and then get to Aro!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

OK so now the truth is out. And what a truth it was. hopefully they will be able to have some kind of relationship.Alice and Jasper too. PLease update soon.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well damn. What a ride home. I laughed mt ass off when Bella went off on the two ho bags. You go girl. James sounds very dangerous. Bee careful. Awesome story. Keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my Bella now Edward is even more interested. Damn good story please keep up the great work.

 Marguerite

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

"The wanton need I had to feel him in my mouth was indescribable and as I took him in, I relished in how good he tasted.” Maybe a grammar mistake.... is that suppose to say "The want and need I had to feel in my mouth...”.

Edward grunts roughly at my words and my body stiffens with my impending release, soon my body was riding out the intense waves of my orgasm orgasm.... You type orgasm in there twice.

Those are the only mistakes I saw, other then that the chapter rocked, I'm a bit nervous about Bella going to James party, I'm afraid he'll end up hurting her worse. What if they ever do investigate Edward and Bella because of the rumors... will Bella be force to let them know she is not underage and that she is actually an undercover cop?

 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am all for Edward too but damn there aren't any ugly men in the Twilight universe. I repeat if there had been teachers that looked like that when I was in high school the entire female population would have had perfect attendance.  Please update soon.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh man 2 loves at first sight. See that's why I like this story. I can't wait ubtil all of them reveal that they are old enough to act on their feelings. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love Edward and Bella together. Love the teasing between them. It's like they've been together for a long time. It's kinda cute. James is a disgusting pig. I hope he gets what he deserves.
The story has been great so far. I can't wait to read about the party and the gala.
Elli :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now why in the hell didn't I have teachers that looked like Edward when I was in high school?? Life is so unfair. Great story by the way. Keep up the good work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

Awww....poor Ang.  James is one sick mf and I can't wait to see the day that B gets to teach the bastard a lesson. I'm sooo looking forward to the party.  I can't imagine what kind of situation our Ball Crushers will find themselves in.  As always, the lemon you've provided was smokin and love the banter between our fave couple. 

Reviewer: bookkeeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

I Love It!  Thank you for not torturing Edward and Bella until chapter 105 to get their first kiss.  And oh what a kiss it was!!!!!!  I should have reviewed before now but I have been way to caught up in the story to stop and write something.  I know that things won't be simple for them but at least now the truth is out and Edward doesn't want to slit his wrist any more for being a prevert.   hahahahaha!

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 16

sweet i like it!!! this is going really well!!

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love that you gave us a Rosalie POV. I wasn't expecting that. I can't wait to read about the
party and the gala. I'm glad you are going to do both POV. I can't wait to see how that is going to play out with the changes. Thanks for the update. Can't wait for more.
Elli :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

Good to know more about Rose and why she is the way she is and I am glad that she is feeling protective over Bella and not just wanting to run her over somewhere.  I cant wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

Good chapter.

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 16

Now I understand Rosalie a little better.  Thanks for that.  I'm dyin to know what's gonna go down at the party now...... And see, you still got the show down in Cullen's office!!!  Nicely done chica!!

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ya know, you're so good at this changing everything for me stuff!!!  LOL   You're doin GREAT!!!!

 

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

Have I mentioned how much I despise Tanya??? Grrrrrrr

Well, at least Bella's finally facing her feelings for our Hottie Teacher.....

Reviewer: inked-mom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Hey girlie!!!  I was tryin to wait Twilighted out but I caved and came over here to read on......They just take too damn long!!!  Anyhoo, I'm lovin the changes so far so I'm gonna move on to 14.  I'll catch ya over there.....

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

I look forward to the next chapter, this one was interesting

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

Rose is.... well.... her emotions are all over the place! Is she bi-polar? Thanks for the update! Hopefully you are over your writers block!



Author's Response:

LoL it would seem so, huh? I never intended to have Rose be so wishy washy..but she has some issues she needs to work out. Also, she is too close to this case, and I think it's a conflict of interest with her.

Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

Can't wait for this story continues.  Its got me glued to the screen!!!!

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love the Chris Hansen comment.  Calling Dateline for an expose' anyone?

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

God, I love Alice! I would love to read Rose's POV once they let her know EVERYTHING that has gone down as of yet. That would be interesting!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think I would like to hear from that sick fuck Aro and about his operation.  I want Bella to go to the gala not James party because that is a trap.  Victoria is okay with James messing with other girls because she is a fraid of him and she is a sick as he is.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think you're right on target with this story.  Not every story has to have 99% romance and 1% plotline.  I think the "case" they are on is what makes this story unique and not just another meet, deny, succumb, HEA.

Glad Alice heard what was going on.  Don't think I would like to see Bella get in over her head or in danger.  The more you know, the better off you are.  Think V being ok with her boyfriend going out with other girls is just her insecurity of believing whatever he's dishing, she'll take it.  Low self esteem is her issue.

Looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'm definitely glad Alice heard what James has planned for Bella. I really want Bella to tell Rosalie that Emmett blew his cover and was seen with her and Edward. Will she a bitch to him like she was to Bella if she finds out? I can't wait to see what happens next. Loving it so far.

Elli :)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

I loved the chapter, look forward to the next.

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

awwww i like this story!!! its really good!!

Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Is Aro going to be at the gala??? That would be awesome. BTW~ I'm lovin bitchy Bella! ;)

Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Is Aro going to be at the gala??? That would be awesome. BTW~ I'm lovin bitchy Bella! ;)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

Bella has to go to James' party, it's her job and Tanya will end up going to the gala also and pursue Edward bacause Bella won't be with him.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter, I look forward to the next.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ohh, it is good to see that they are on the same page.

I really hope they have some happiness soon.  Will Bella not have to tell Rose on the update of the party and what James is black mailing her for.

I hope that Edward is not to pissed with her not going to the Gala.  It is all getting interesting.

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

yay fight

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter12

awe crap

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

you did great

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

awesome work

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

she should just slap Rosalie

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

uh oh

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

love it

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

litter bug

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

that was sexy

Reviewer: pixdog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

great job

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

he owns most of us ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

awesome chapter ;)

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

fantastic start

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Tanya the low down ditry bitch.  I was dying when Bella left and I was so happy when she came back and told Tanya to leave.  happy dance.  I hope she will figure a way to go to the gala.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

This was really good. I definitely noticed the changes here. I can't wait to see what happens with the gala and the party. Can't stand Tanya. I think I've only ever read one story where I didn't dislike her.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

awwww i want an alice.  I have a picture with ashley greene so does that kinda sorta count?

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Tanya the slut...ugh, I've never liked her. She was in town for months and after seeing Edward out with Bella she then decides she wants him when she sees him happy! Are you freaking kidding me, Bella should have beat her ass!!! As for James party... if you think about it, Bella has to go. I mean her cover will be completely blown if she attends the Gala. She's on a case, she needs to continue with her job, then when all is said and done her and Edward can have a natural loving relationship.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

It was good!  Almost had heart failure when Tanya appeared and Bella ran out and tried to break up with Edward.

Thank goodness Edward didn't go all emo and tell her he'd wait forever for her!  He needed to tell her to make a decision and he wasn't going to "pine" for her! If he hadn't given her the ultimatum, she would have waffled and used her job as an excuse...Fish or cut bait!!

I'm sure the James situation will heat up and while I wish Bella and Edward would go to the Gala together, it may be too "public" and Edward needs to accept that Bella has a job to complete and once it's over, there will be other opportunities to be together.

I'm afraid if Bella blows off James and accompanies Edward, Aro (or his spy/minions) will see B&E together and more drama will occur!

Glad you are a quick updater....looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.

BTW - Tanya-get a clue and leave!!!      

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think Bella should go to the Galla! So excited to see what she decides to do!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think Bella should go to the Galla! So excited to see what she decides to do!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good chapter. Glad James is kinda dense & not suspicious. I would have told James that Edward was Bella's uncle but didn't want anyone to know.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter12

Hope not too much drama!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

You did great!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome job!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

Double standards indeed!  Didn't Edward recognize Emmett from school and Bella should have told Rose about Alice and Jasper!

Bet heads would have turned then!!

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dum de dum dum......DUM!!!!

Have I told you I like this story a lot!!  I do!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yay Yay Yay again!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

glad to see that bella and edward have finally come together and delt with a few things. bella is gonna have t put her game face on and be ready for things to get messy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter12

well looks like james is gonna be a bigger problem then any of the others thought...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

i love me some emmy too! who wouldn't?

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Yay Yay Yay !!!  So glad the truth is out for them!!!

Not so sure about the date thing.....would hate for either to get hurt!  

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

Dayum!!!  If I had a teacher as HOT as Edward, I probably would have done better in school!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

Yes please....more please!!  Don't make us wait!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

No....upload all 19 now!!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

I don't think you'll need to beg for reviews....this story is good!

I'm enjoying the dual POV's and how you don't rehash the same scenes but help make the story go forward (does that make sense?).

Onto chapter 3~ 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

yay emmy has come to save the day! i wonder how he knew to be there? did edward ask alice to make sure bella was covered? rose? alice on her own? why was she allowed to go without back up anyways? and what about the investigation? obviously the james angle won't work after tonight...

you caused all of these questions and more, here's to holding out hope you will answer at least some of them in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

of corse there is a double standard rose was always selfish, what was ok for her is not ok for others as long as she is getting what she wants out of it. and yeah it was kinda dumb for them to stay in town, they could have met up with anyone, other teachers, students, anyone. but love makes you dumb sometimes.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

bella's in trouble! heehee. maybe edward will spank her later

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

love how alice told jasper! too funny, i guess it is hard to deny a badge and the dropping of his fbi sister's name.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

yay for alice butting in and making a way for edward to find out about bella's real life. wonder how things will go back in the clasroom? i wonder if alice already told jasper?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow they are both treading on thin ice. i wonder how long it will be before bella has to tell edward who she really is? cause you know eddie-boy is gonna go all emo over 'taking advantage'of his student.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

so lookslike eddie and jazz are screwed here, i wonder who will crack first?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

love them all but emmy bear is my favorite! love me a muscle man who can laugh at everything, kick someone's ass defending your honor, and then hold you up on a wall while he pounds you but good! yummy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

well it sounds like both jasper and edward may be screwed here.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

sorry for the problems on FFn, glad you are continuing to write, hope you like your new home here!

Reviewer: charv241 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

why didnt she just play it off when she was talking to james...but i am glad that she does have an advantage over him...really enjoying this story so far..keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: twilightelle99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

ok...gotta be honest here...when I realized u posted this on TWC I nearly pissed my pants!! I've been reading on Twilighted & decided to check out TWC for a fic that was removed from ff...so glad I did! I just love your fic! :)

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

She should have just played it off that she had no idea what James was talking about, that after the beating he took he obvouisly wasn't seeing things correctly.



Author's Response:

lol you right. she should of pulled an edward cullen...hmph why didnt i think of that. thanks for the review hun.



Author's Response:

lol you right. she should of pulled an edward cullen...hmph why didnt i think of that. thanks for the review hun.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love the fighting Bella! I think with her knowing that James has a idea that she knows about his drug dealing is in her advantage.  Lets hope she carries her gun on her now when around him!

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