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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

Very nice lemon cant beleive its your first LOL.  James is a fuckin freak what is Bella going to do.  The party is a trap isnt it????  Why didnt Emmett tell her that James seen them?  What is she going to tell Rose???  So many ??????   More

Reviewer: evilangel813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

You're kinda jumping in tense during the lemon, past to present. Other than that two thumbs up.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it. Now your A/N has me even more curious than I was before. I can't wait to see how Bella staying changes the plot.

Elli :)

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

Looking for to the next few chapters

Loving it

B

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the lemon, hate the cliffy.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter12

Ohhh fuck bloody James always a spoil sport. Now he is definitely going to get himself killed. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, I did not see this one coming with Edward going on stake out with Emmett, they actually make a good team all that was missing was Jasper and then it would have been a party. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 10

Excellent Emmett to the rescue.  But Edward is going to be pissed with Bella for getting beat up. 

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter12

I am really looking forward how Bella will try to keep her relationship with Edward under cover, now that James know. Too bad he had to see them. But he is really sick in his mind with his regard of the hole situation.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter12

I think he is going to plan to kill Bella but he is a sick fuck so he will want to have what he calls fun first.  James must die

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well I love a good cat fight and the one between these two was good, maybe add a little hair pulling and it would be excellent. he he kidding.

 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well they were bound to be found out. it is not like they were in private they were sitting on a terrace for everyone to see.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ohh, James is getting interesting, I am more excited about reading that date than I am about Edward and Bella.  I know this is a love stroy but I like crime as well. 

I just hope you dont carry on to long with Edwards and Bella's date because I know that there is going to be more of them.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

Litter bug Edward.

Well I was wondering how it was going to come out and how pissed iw Alice going to be that Edward found out before Jasper.  I hope Edward eases Jaspers mind as well. 

Hmm actually that could be bad for Jasper, he might go nuts at his sister for not telling.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ah Oh, they have just crossed the invisable line that should not ever be crossed by a teacher or student. 

Hmmm, someone better watch out.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter12

Great story, I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter12

Of course Bella was right! Come on now, we all know James is a totally douche! You are truly a tease though.... I NEED MORE!!! LOL

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter12

now that was mean lol just kidding

Keep em coming

B

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well it looks like everyone is in a large amount of trouble...  I just hope Alice and Bella can hold it together.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter12

Love the James POV. I like that you are giving us a chance to look into his sick mind. I hate that he saw Edward, but only because my instinct is to want Edward to be protected. However, I think the fact that he saw Edward makes it even more interesting. This only proves the story is about to get even better.

Elli :)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ohhh they are both so fucked. I new it was going ot be a hoot of a story, I hope it stays that way.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter12

I think James will try and blackmail Bella.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think I am going to enjoy this story.  I think there is going to be some really funny parts. 

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awwww....they said it

Keep them coming LOL

loving it so far. I get upp early in the morning and start looking for new chapters, that's pretty bad

Thnaks
B

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

LOVED IT! I wish Emmett was my brother! I could only wish, so I had an idea that Edward was behind it, but I just thought he told Emmett and that was it. I didn't even think he was with him. As for there friendship...awesome job Hun!

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm so glad you are posting the story here because at least it's getting closer to where you left off. I love the friendship that is building between Emmett and Edward. I'm wondering if it will come into play in later chapters. I can't wait for you to post the next one and see if you made changes.

Elli :)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

LMAO!  Typical Emmett reaction to the mushy stuff.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

Quick bonding time for the boys over beer and sports. Quite funny. You did a good job with describing Edwards anxiety for Bella. It will be very interesting, how te next chapters are. I mean James will not back off so easily.

It is funny, that Emmett always keeps tabs on Bella when she is meeting a suspect without her knowledge.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Go Emmett!!!

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love it. You're right about it being like a different chapter. It's amazing what a few changes make. I'd like to think I caught all the changes, but it's been a while since I had read it and I might not be as observant as I thought. LoL.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Pretty intense chapter, especially the end. I just hope for Bella that her effort with James will pay off and not be a dead end, this would be really cruel.

Off to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOved the first ch cant wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love Emmett such a great protecter one minite and such a kid the next.  So glad they got the I love yous out of the way. You did very good.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter.  Yeah ya gotta love Emmett.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Would it really be that much of a shame if Emmett did kill him?  ;)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

I can imagine, that Rosalie might have a few problems with dating Emmett, because she is his supervisor. So it seems, that Bella and Rosalie (and Alice?) are in the same boat. But Rosalie can be a very good addition to team "Ball Crushers".

It will be interessting, how things will go on in and out of school.

Good chapter, I enjoyed reading.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

OMFG  so much excitment going on you need a good slap on the ass for stoping there hurry need more.  Love Emmett! Now Edward will really be overprotective of her.

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm so glad you updated. Interesting how Rose thinks Bella shouldn't be with Edward, but she can get with Emmett. Definitely a double standard. I'm glad Bella had the guts to stand up to her. Sometimes Rose just needs to be put in her place.

Elli :)

Author's Response:

Hey hun...are you ready for chapter ten..it'll be like ready a new chapter..I promise ;))

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

Yeah Rose is all about double standards.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love it...thanks for not leaving us hanging

Looking forward for more

B

Reviewer: clancy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

with Rosalie that was exactly how i expected her to react...... and she called Bella selfish ?? *shakes head in amusement* 

i just hope that Edward can keep it all together when Bella goes out with James - this is where things will get tricky !!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

bella's got balls for saying that to rosalie

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Yes double-standards yes indeedy.  Thing were going so well.  It was a good thing that Bella and Rose had there little talk cleared the air and now Bella wont be such a wimp around her.

Reviewer: bella_love1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Okay so I just read your whole story in one sitting and LOVED it! I'm not going to be crazy and review every chapter, so I just wanted to let you know that I am completely hooked to your story! PLEASE! OH PLEASE update again soon! I want to know how Alice's date went.  As for Rosalie and her double standards.... totally agree with you there!



Author's Response:

LoL did you read it all today? Wow, I really need to start making my chapters longer...Thanks hun!!!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Sweet chapter, I look forward to the next chapter. The title to this story sounds more appropriate all the time.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

Busted what is going to happen now and who is Rose with????  Where has James gone for 2 days???

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Please let Rosalie at least be there with Emmett.  Good story.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

This story as well as this chapter are great. I just read the whole in one rush and it is very good. I really like the story-line and also where this could probably lead. The end of this chapter is really an interesting cliff hanger, I can't wait to find out, how things will continue.

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow this story is great.....hate the cliff hangers lol

Keep them coming

B

Reviewer: minimunchkin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love this story!  I just found it this morning and read all 8 chapters.  I love reading fanfiction.  I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) aaaaa another cliffy

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow.. great cliffy!! the story is well written and i can't wait to read more

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: clancy Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

i cant believe i didn't find you over on FFN... but i am so damn happy that i have found you now : )

i grew up with 21 Jump St and Never Been Kissed is a huge fav so this is an absolute gem to be able to read - i am kinda hoping that Rosalie is there having dinner with Emmett, cause that would be so funny !!

Bella threatening the skankettes was one highlight for me...

Edward making out with Bella before the big reveal was a better one ;p

but James - even though he has had so far had a small part - creeps me out and i cant wait to read more !!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thank God he knows now so I wonder does Jasper know???  Why didnt they just go in to Bellas room ??????

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

LMAO....well that was classic!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

Dammit, you can't leave it there, f**k. I need to read the next chapter.

Oh and did your story really get booted off of FF, or were you just worried and kicked yourself off? Some of mine were put in the shit list and I was forced to remove them.

And don't worry about the reviews, they will start coming, just give it some time.

 



Author's Response:

my lemon brought attention to someone and i was afarid they were going to rat me out and have me banned. i might repost it later or not. i dont know. 

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Okay, I am seriously addicted to this story now. Loving it!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

i am a big fan of 21 jump street and i like this idea

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMG how hot are they?????  When is Edward going to find out she is 28?????

Reviewer: emartin Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hey, just stopping by to show you and your story some love. You already know that I think it's awesome.

Elli :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

So glad Edward came clean to Jasper.  Jasper is done for.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) aaaa i hate cliffys

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Damn you, stupid cliffy. Need next chapter.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am so wanting more more more.  It is a wonder Edward was walk away sporting his hard on LOL

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved the chapter. I'm a serious begger, so just one more chapter today, please. *down on knees begging*

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, sweet jesus, let's get that next chapter out. This story looks extremely interesting.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

So Jasper meet Alice this is to cool bad teach lol.  

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am for sure going to stick and read love it so far.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lol, i love it

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