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Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

James is one sick fuck.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 78

Okay I know this story has been over well finished for awhile but I just found it and OMG!!!!! I loved it!!!! There were times I was screaming in my head bc of the ecstasy that Bella felt and other times I was screaming out loud bc I couldn't believe I was still reading it!!! I hated James and even Carlisle until I realized he wasn't the person I thought he was... anyhoo, LOVED IT and I will be recing from now on!!!!!

Reviewer: Rebekah Joyce Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A

Does the training school have a policy against lube? Did the tool James request this? Lube is good. Lube and penetration (especially anal) are peas in a pod. No wonder she is sore in her bottom everything is entering fairly dry. I would not put it past James to request this sort of thing but if these are experienced BDSM practitioners they have to see that something is up by now.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 78

So confused with myself. I liked this story so much but feel like I shouldn't.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 75 - Bella

Breathing a very heavy sigh

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

I can't believe I forgot all about that microchip.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

No shit, Sherlock.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22

Payback is a bitch, isn't it James.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

Ha Ha Good One !

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 56: Renee

You have to love Renee.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 51: Bella DAY 20 PART A

Thought it was Charlie, but now I'm not sure.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

Wish she threw up on him.

Reviewer: jinx113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 78

This is the third time ive read through this story and the third time really is the charm! I can say without a doubt that this is the best fanfiction ive ever read. You guys are not afraid of offending anyone and that says alot. Ive seen many works of literature fail just because of too many inhibitions. This story sparked my original interest in bdsm from the first time i read it. It's encouraged me to be at ease with myself finally and accept who me for me without worry, for that i thank you.

                               -Jinx

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 35: James DAY 14

So sh'e pregnant?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B

What are they all using for birth control?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

Oh, I really hate this guy.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B

So how long before someone, prefferably Edward finds out she's not there because she wants to be and that James is a asshole.

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 78

love love this story! hott and sexy but also brings tears to your eyes and keps you on your toes. cant wait for more!!

Reviewer: Jelchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 78

Ohhh i just grin all over my face =) I´m so in love with your story.... i can´t stop reading it the last night. But i can´t believe it is the end =(

But i can say that is the best end i ever read !!! It´s perfect an i hear edwards voice in my ears ...grrrrrrrr =)

"Ohh yes i wish to play"

You are amazing writers...thanks for the perfect story!!!

 

Reviewer: IsaM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 78

Just great!!! I loved it.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

this chapter just makes me want to cry :(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

karma mike - karma :)

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 78

This story was just fantastic from start to finish. You had me rivited from the first chapter.  The way everything came together with the plot and characters was superb. It was the perfect blending of lemons, mystery, romance and character development. I just finished and I already want to read it again!  I usually dislike multiple point of views, one or two is usually enough but the way you did it really worked for this story.  I really WANTED to hear from all the different characters you wrote from.  I'm guessing you each took on a particular character(s) and stuck with it through out the story but I would never have known there was more than one writer to this had you not told me.  You fused your styles together so perfectly.

Any plans on a sequel? I think an interesting sequel would be hunting down those 'appointments' in Heidis address book. It sounds like Laurant was running a white slavery ring and was using Carlisle school to train them then sell them to different 'masters'. I think it would be interesting if Bella, Edward and Jacob took up the task of seeking out and rescuing those girls.  Perhaps sending the 'masters' to be Aros pets with James.  Those appointments in Heidis address book are the one mystery that wasn't solved in this saga and I would be here with bells on if you made it into a sequel!

Reviewer: rachiegrl6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 78

Ahh - that was the PERFECT ending! But I can't believe it's over! :)

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

I know this is an old story so this authors note is probably irrelevant now, however I would like to say I'm a fan of the word "pussy." I think it's hot and I don't find it dirty. I think it can be used in a loving scene without it taking away from the scene. I dont have a problem with the word "cunt" either but I know others dislike it.  I don't know, words are words and it's the intent behind them to me more over the actual words. I don't find them over used because, well, that's what they are.  Saying 'vagina' is to technical and other slang terms just seem juvenile to me. I don't think it would sound less romantic for Edward to breathlessly tell Bella "God, I love your pussy" and I don't think there is any other magical name for it that would sound better.  And yeah, it would have sounded weird for Edward to say, "Thank you for sucking my COCK" but not because he said "cock". It would have sounded weird just because you just don't thank someone in that sort of scenario. They are having a real moment in bed together. I prefer "cock" to "dick" but "dick" isn't as bad either. It's much preferable than the weird, corny language that is used in cheesy romance novels. I think Sookie refers to Erics cock as his "gracious plenty" in True Blood and I cringe everytime I hear it. I dunno, just call it like it is. An arm is an arm and a pussy is a pussy. Damn, I'm eloquent. ;P

Honestly, as long as you don't use the word "cootchie" or "hootchie" I'm fine. Those words are just trashy to me.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21

Bella pisses me off in this chapter. If she doesn't want to go to the police for herself, fine. However, it's incredibly selfish of her to make that decision for Victoria. Sure, James ahs friends everywhere but Bella isn't devoid of police contacts either. I'm sure her dad can find away to help Victoria if Victoria wanted to go through the cops. This could have easily been done without Bella having to tell her story if she stopped thinking of herself for 5 minutes and came up with a clever plan. This would have then perhaps gotten James put in jail without her havin to get involved. Also, they'd have avoided taking a walking trackign device back to Edwards house.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 78

Ovarall it was a great story, I wish this chapter had gone on a little longer, so we could have see the Edward Bella session, but I digress. Amazing work

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

I admit, I'm horrible at reviewing chapter for chapter but this was an amazing chapter, btw I love those last two lines. Great story so far

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 78

Oh one last lemon would have been nice rather than a tease, but it was a great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

don't plead you are doing a great job

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11

I hope Bella speaks up to one of the Doms soon

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

scary esme and carlisle

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 78

awesome story

really enjoyed it - perfect ending

thanks so much :)

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 75 - Bella

awesome chapter

loving it

 

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 74: James

awesome

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

getting very interesting

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

he didn;t take to long

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

awesome

loving it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

excellent

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

loving it - guess they found out james is out

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

very interesting

loving it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22

great chapter

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 63: Edward DAY 21 & 22

great chapter

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22

love it

awesome

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21

excellent chapter

thanks

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21

awesome

love it

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21

loving it

thanks

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

oh so cant wait for him to get his

love it

awesome

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 56: Renee

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella DAY 20 PART B

love it

awesome

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A

oh - cant wait

love it

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 53: Edward DAY 20 PART B

awesome - loving it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 51: Bella DAY 20 PART A

awesome

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 48: Bella DAY 18

love it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 47: Edward DAY 17 PART B

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 45: Edward DAY 17 PART A

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:45 AM Title: Interview with the Master

very interesting

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A

getting interesting

loving it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

loved what they did to mike

awesome

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B

very interesting

hope they find out soon and he gets his

loving it

thanks

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B

poor bella

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 39: Edward DAY 16 PART A

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 38: James DAY 16 PART A

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 36: Edward DAY 14

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 35: James DAY 14

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B

love it

thanks

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

loving it

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella - DAY 12 PART B

love it

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 26: James - DAY 11

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B

great to have edwards pov

loved it = thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 23: James - DAY 8 PART B

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

loved it

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A

loved it LOL = thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7

trhanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

thanks

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B

loving it

thanks

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