[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
You are very good writer I'm enjoying it
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it what a awesome story.so glad they got their happy ending n everything worked out.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
So I really liked the story a lot. Although there are a few things that left me confused. In the beginning Emma's middle name was Grace then it changed to Antonia. And twice in the middle of the story Emmett went from being a Cullen to being a McCarty and back to a Cullen. I guess I am still not sure who the real sibling is, Emmett or Rosalie. Other than that, it was fun to read.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Very nice story! Well written! Enjoyed alot!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow,
I liked how E & B got together so quickly and didn't deny themselves each other for very long. the middle of the story was kinda frustrating. I didn't like how the story revolved around sadness most of the chapters with the kidnapping then dealing with Emma's issues from Kate and then Bella's difficult depression. I know that life isn't a nice box of chocolates, but sometimes you just want E & B to be happy.
This was a good story. I like that it was Kate and not Tanya getting mixed up with Edward. Tanya is so evil and frustrating usually.
Thanks for writing this.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
loved your story
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was hot... Loving this story
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
amazing story i love it
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
that was good i liked it was different and good
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad this story ended on such a good note. It was hard to read the last couple of chapters...I thought they would never get through it all! Bella said it right about being imperfectly perfect. I enjoyed how you wrote this last chapter through the years. I enjoyed your story overall...but got a little weighted down with all the stuff that happened to them. I'm a wuss! Thank you for writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think mothers of preemie babies have a tendency to feel guilty because they didn't deliver a term baby. Please don't have Bella go through baby blues! I am glad that Edward came to his senses...even if it had to be yelled into him.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sometime we forget that Bella is only 19 yrs old....she is tempting fate with her denial. Preeclampsia can be so dangerous. To her and the baby. Damn. More problems...no insurance now. Why couldn't her parents pay the COBRA until their grandbaby was born?! They suck! I can only imagine all the stress these two are facing...I'm stressed and I'm just reading! LOL!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella and Edward are just not getting any breaks are they? Bella bought the dog to make Emma happy and then she won't talk to her the next day... Edward is stressed by work and money and now feeling he has to pick up even more at home because of Bella's condition. How can Bella not be stressed? This has been an awful year for them. Sigh!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
I thought it was going to take time for Emma. Kate hurt her terribly and as a 4 year old she just doesn't understand. I am glad that Bella trys to stay positive. It's difficult when you are constantly being rejected. It's tough for all of them.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
So was it Riley that turned Kate in? If it is I hope they catch him too. I am glad they have Emma back. I hope she adjust ok to all of this.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Kate has got to screw up some way. Poor Emma thinks her Daddy doesn't want her anymore. Sad. Bella being pregnant is so bittersweet for them. It would be hard to be happy when your first baby has been kidnapped. I hope they get her back soon.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope that Riley turns Kate in. Though it has been two weeks, so it doesn't seem as though he will. I am glad Bella is there for Edward. Poor little Emma. At least Kate didn't tell her that Edward was dead. Will Emma try to escape and find her daddy? enjoying.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love this twist. I briefly thought that Kate would try to take Emma when she was so pissed about Edward taking her to Philadelphia...but I thought she took the money for drugs. Way to surprise me! Oh and Bella came to support Edward. Yes! I hope they find Emma soon, Edward is already falling apart. Loved the way you wrote his emotions.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope that Bella cleans up her drinking. I hope it's just the momentary depression over Edward. Edward doesn't need that, especially with the way Kate just acted. Sounds like she's back to using. I love how concerned Carlisle is about Bella and her relationship with Edward and Emma. After Kate who wouldn't be? I hope that Edward gets his internship in PA and that he and Bella keep talking. They still have a lot to go over. enjoying.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad they talked and Bella told Edward about the abortion. She was only 16...a kid having a kid...Edward is right...all that happened in the past brought them to the present. Edward said he loved Bella and she loved him. So will Edward get the internship in PA? Poor Drunkella! LOL!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love your Jasper...he really got Bella to make the decision to call Edward. She wanted to...but Jasper gave her that boost of confidence. I wonder when Bella will tell Edward about Mike and the abortion? Edward knows, I am glad he's waiting for her to tell him and that they are trying to take it slow. Emma is so cute! So is Kate really backing off of Edward? She wants to watch Emma...I would worry about that, I guess. Enjoying!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella's relationship with Mike really sucked...he betrayed her and her freinds betrayed her. Bella closes herself off in pain...poor Bella. Yeah, Edward kind of did a thing on Bella, but I hope she eventually calls him. If she breaks it off with Edward, instead of trying to get her back he may just fall into Kate. Yuck! Enjoying.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh damn! Why hasn't Edward listened to his phone messages? Naturally, I think that bringing Kate back into Emma's life is wrong. It's pretty obvious that Kate wants the whole 'family' deal...including Edward. I'm with Rose and Alice. Oh and why didn't Edward tell Bella about Kate last nite....gah! Bella feels betrayed. She doesn't have all the information...Edward better call!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, I guess we knew it would be hard for these two to be parted... So is Jake married to Leah? Bella is having an affair with him? Bella does have emotional intimacy issues. Jacob can't be hers...so he's safe. Is that why she's disregarding Edward? Edward is so ready to be with Bella. But Bella is just 19 and Edward has his med schooling to complete. Oh and holy hell Kate is there. Ugh!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
So what is Bella's relationship with Jacob...he sounds like an asshat. Bella is so good with Emma. Edward kind of freaked out when he saw Emma on the counter...but she could have fallen off. So I guess, I understand his rant. So everyone seems to see the way these two look at each other...yes the chemistry is really there! I wonder how they will deal with distance. Hopefully they will talk and start learning about each other. Enjoying.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Enjoy the way you write this magnetism that Bella and Edward feel for each other. It's very physical, but I see that they are feeling a bit more for each other than just lust. Sounds like Edward will be visiting soon.
Enjoy the way you have brought the other characters into the story. Rose does seem to be a real bitch...but she loves Emma. Emmett cracks me up...loud hockey player that he is. Jasper is funny and definetely a mediator. Looking forward to reading on!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty hot first chapter! LOL!
I liked getting the backstory on Kate and Emma's birth. It would be a tough thing to have a child with someone you didn't love. Both were busy with medical school and someone had to take it on. Good for Edward.
Sounds like Bella's family (mother) are a bit unconventional and she has to deal with a flaky mom. Well Bella put herself right out there for Edward...and he happily accepted. I wonder how this will go. They do have distance between them. Enjoyed.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
really enjoyed your story... it was a shocker how everything happened within the first couple of chapters, but refreshing... thanks for sharing!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great story. I love the ending
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
aaaaawwww it was so sweet but it was real, not just the fun stuff ya know?
Much love!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful story, I'm sad its over.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
This has been a wonderful story hot in all the right spots ;) Thanks for writing it and I am glad you have more coming Thanks
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really loved this story thank you so much for sharing it and I am so glad I took the time to just read it finally.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
I truly enjoyed reading your story. I will continue to read your material. Thanks for the entertainment.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
i think this story is brillent.
I hate it when stories say that they had a baby and everything is sunshine and daisys. so i love the way you have shown that it is not the case
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
Absolutely beautiful! You did an awesome job writing this story, and I'm thankful I came across it:) I'm glad every happy, sad; good, bad; up, down- all the challenges they faced, they conquered! I hate for a fic I like come to an end, but as they say, 'all good things must come to an end'...*sigh*
Again, thank you for APL, and I look forward to your future stories.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
thanks good chapter
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
That is a great story.. I enjoyed it. I happen to like Happy Ending.
thank
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[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it :)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
cute story..... thanks for posting it :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great story I liked the ending. Nice touch with them adopting Riley.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad for the happy ending. Poor Edward had such a hard time in this story. I didn't think he could take any more. Thanks for taking the time to write.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad with the happy ending. :-) The Cullen clan is growing.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Robicorn
Fabulous ending to a great story!!!! A true family/love story with Bella falling asleep at the end!!
Looking forward to the two new stories!!!!
Cory
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
aww Bella fell asleep? poor Edward. lol I love that Edward is so protective of his kids even the ones not his. :D I don't know about the Elvis one but the older Edward sounds good. I'll read that one. lol thanks again bye
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
aw im so sad its over, but it was a great story and you did a great job writing it
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
This was PERFECT! I can't tell you how many times I would go back & reread certain chapters because they were so good! Your lemony scenes were so hot. The words you put in Edwards mouth, especially the New Years "can I have you here?". Damn....I had to turn the fan on!
Great wrap up. I love all your stories & looking forward to your next ones!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awwww.... so sad to see it come to an end...your right we´ve had some really good times and some bad with this story...you did an excellent job...I hate to see it go, but as they say all good things must come to an end....but hope to read more great fics from you in the future!!!
Krazi
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
great ending to the story!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
This was wonderful. I loved the ending!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it very much thanks for sharing sad its over but really excited to see what you have for us next......
Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome way to wrap things up! :)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really loved how masen interrupted the wedding and riley and scarlet I really loved how everything worked it and em and rose and the twins! Thanks !!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
aww loved it. worth the wait.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
awww sweet chapter.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow....Edwards playing with fire bringing Kate back into their lives, that's for sure.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad Bella is getting help and that Emma is coming around. GREAT GREAT job with this story. Can't wait to see where they are in the future.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is getting herself in deep trouble. I hope Edward can pull her out before it is to late.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
OH MY GOSH!!!! Edward and Bella have been through sooooo much stuff. When are they ever going to catch a break. PLEASE let everything work out alright.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I did not have a good feeling when I was reading this chapter. I am scared.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
I just started reading your story, and I'm completely addicted to it! (: It's so beautiful, and this chapter was amazing, I'm so happy that Emma finally fully accepted Bella again! <3
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah! finally, I couldn't take anymore bad times for these two. Can't wait til next time.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
awww....!!!!!!!!!
I am soooo glad he handled the Jake shit the way he did!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
Damn, got cut off. Lol. Glad she's getting better. And I loved how you made E a struggling single parent and intern, not more money than God E who could fix everything w said $.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. If she doesn't get help, E needs to get it for her.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
I do understand how she feels and where E is coming from too. She was stupid and selfish but she didn't do it w malice in her heart.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
awww for the mommy thing in the end.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love these two most recent chapters.
Is this the ending???
Antidepressives don't usually take effect for a few weeks though, so it is unlikely she would feel much of a difference after a week.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
I cannot believe she is still talking to Jake.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! cant wait for more.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
How cute. I;m glad that everything is working out.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
WOW! that letter from Kate was just wow and then Emma finally accepted Bella, again a loss for words. I can tell you that because of the disclaimer at the end I think this might be the only chapter I am waiting for the epilogue to come. bring on the kinky fuckery. lol thanks again so much. bye
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was amazing. Can't wait until the next one comes out.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved it update when you can thanks.,...
Date: 25 Aug 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love the update! :)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good for Bella, getting some courage to change things. Well done on the pep talk from Edward. Glad things are finally falling into place for these two. It's been a long road and they deserve to rest now.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad Edward didn't freak out about Bella's stupidity of talking to Jacob again and not telling him
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so glad that Bella got some help. I didn't like her drinking to feel better. I am also glad that Emma is doing better. They need to be a family without all of the stress. Bella and Edward have enough on their plates with work, school and 2 children. I hated how Edward had to find out about Jake. Bella should have told him. She was so wrong, but at least she did not do anything stupid in her depressed state.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
So glad Bella got help other wise she mit have went in the wrong direction and fucked up her life. I am glad that Kate wrote the letter and Emma knows that she is not betraying her bio for Bella. This has been a wonderful story to read.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was so imperfectly perfect! Got a bit worried when Jake started sniffing around but glad that got snipped!
PPD is real...I'm glad Edward was able to get Bella to recognize that she needed help.
Kate did the right thing. She gave them all
closure & the ability to move on.
Sorry to see it coming to an end. They are both so kinky anyways but wouldn't mind a but more all night marathons. Their thanksgiving & new years romps were very sexy!!
Love your stories....hope Collide gets more readers. I've tried to rec on Twitter but guess I don't got the mojo!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Robicorn
Great chapter. I'm glad they are working out the tough spots together!!!!
More when you can please!!!
Cory
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG, you had me crying at work. I love it. What a great writer you are.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
aw they worked it out!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella! Poor Edward! I hope that Edward can convince Bella to get some help. At least Bella is starting to realize that Mason needs her. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just started reading your story, its wonderful. :)
Looking forward to more.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was so sad I really hope she gets better
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Robiconr
Bella's going to have one humdinger of a headache in the morning.
But what was up with Jasper feeding her all the drinks???
More when you can please!!!
Cory
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love how you showed the emotion Bella's going through especially at the end of the chapter. The Baby Blues are a horrible thing to have to go through, I had to watch my BFF as she suffered and it sucked! Edward has a long road ahead of him.
BTW, you didn't do too bad not having a beta
Rhonda