Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
God please make it stop! I don't think Edward can take any more. i want to cry for him. stop the maddness.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
ahh that lemon was much better. Although I like the dirty talking Edward too. lol. I love how Emma loves Bella even though it makes Rose mad. lol.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow - that was an unexpected turn of events! Who would think Tanya could pull this one off.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
poor. poor. Bella. Cant wait for your next update.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!! uuummmmm well I loved the lemon although it felt too short. But I hate the way he pulled out of her to cum on her and then just gets up and leaves. What a dick.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love the chapter :D
I always do :D
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Its a good story and you are a good writer! I just want the story to go back to normal! haha. I want everything and everyone to be happy again. I want Emma to stop being mean to Bella, however, I do understand why she is being a little brat. I want Bella to get out of her depression. And I want Kate to tell Emma that Bella is her mommy now which she probably won't, but everybody can dream! Also, I hope Bella doesn't turn out to be like Kate--I really do not want that to happen! But I did like how Bella screamed at Edward. And Edward is like a god. He is so patient with first Kate, then Emma, and now Bella. Keep up the good work! I hope everything turns out to be really happy soon!! haha
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
poor girl really needs some counselling.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awww... I never suffered from Post Pardom but Ive heard that it can be really tough....i would love to have them all come together and be a happy family...
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Charlie should be ashamed of himself for thinking Edward would force himself on Bella. Bella needs help and not alcohol. At ;east she said yes to Edward. She did one right thing today.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh poor Bella. She really should get some help for the post partum. It doesn't always go away on its own. But maybe the fact that she can comfort Masen can help her.
Surprised that Edward chose to propose there at the party, but it was sweet. Charlie needs to get over himself though. It's not like he's ever been there for her. Oh well. Maybe he's starting to see how much Edward cares.
Good chapter. Hope B isn't too hung over in the morning. Though it might be good if she can't remeber coming on to Edward and being turned down.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 18 Aug 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Is it post depression? She is having a hard time. Great story.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
My heart is breaking for Bella not only does she feel like it was her falt that the baby was born to soon she has Emma telling her she doesnt want her as her mom and the post partum what a mess. Edward is a good man and loves her. Cant wait for more
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
loved it I just hope they can work througth this update when you can thanks....
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Okay, I have a feeling that this story is not going to get better anytime soon, there really does not seem to be any happiness for this family in the near future.
I dont see how a family can have so much bad luck? Get the girl into some sort of therapy, Edward is a doctor and I truly do not believe he would let it go a few weeks with out getting Bella some help of some sort.
As for Emma, maybe a good slap on the backside might fix her up now as well, the therapist does not seem to be working. Or at least give the girl some sort of discipline, she should not be talking to Bella like that, I understand she is young, but really I don't even let my niece get away with talk like that.
I know I am being a whiner this week, but I would just like to see one week go their way, they kind of deserve it. Life cant always be shitty like they have been having the last 5 -6 months.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor B/E I hope she goes and sees someone for her PPD
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, that was amazing! I am hoping Bella will get some help for her depression. I am proud of Edward for not having sex with Bella while she was drunk (although I really don't think that was ever a doubt in my mind that he would do such a thing). I am glad Masen is finally home and seems to be doing well. I am so happy that they are engaged :) YAY!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
Amazing chatper. You wrote PPD to the t! Its a miserable thing for a mother to go through. I cant wait for another update!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. Bella has a serious case of PPD. I speak as a licenced psychologist. You nailed it! If that is not what you were going for, I am sorry, but the way everything was written was spot on PPD.
Author's Response:
It is exactly what I was going for! Thanks so much!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
aww Edward is one nice guy. He's awesome to put up with not only Bella's post partum depression but his snotty spoiled brat too. :D I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please... they deserve some happiness... :( too much, too bad...
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Woa Bella is really one big mess. Hope she gets her act together. Between having a baby and one big little sister giving her a hard time, poor Bella.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad Edward's being so patient with Bella.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella she is young and everyone treats her like shit.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
me,me, me, me, me, me, pick me! The commas are in the right places? Aren't they?
I can't beta, but if you need a pre-reader....
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is really starting to bug me. I totally understand about the post partum depression and all, but if she's not going to say anything to the doctor about it, then Edward sure should. I mean, look what happened when she didn't tell the doctor what was going on before. And Edward must have the patience of a saint to be dealing with her mood swings the way he is, and taking care of Mason, Emma and the house, basically all by herself.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just found your story. I really like the way you are descriptive in your writing, I can really picture it. So far, like the story.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. Update soon
Date: 03 Aug 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward really behaves like an ass! Its not bella s fault.. Please update soon IsaM
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
Please let little Mason be ok so Bella doesn't think she is being punished. I'm also hoping that Emma loves her little brother and this experience will bring her all the way back to Bella. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Did you change Emma's middle name? I thought it was Emma Grace and now you have mentioned Emma Antonia twice. Help a girl out here.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome job on the buttsex lemon! And the declaration love for that matter. I'm so excited for them. You do a great job of making your stories flow well. They are very easy to read.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Don't let Bella sleep with Jake!!! Great time for Kate to come back though.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love Daddyward stories and this one is very promising. Great start.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hate Kate. Definitely. no second chances. End of story.
I feel really bad for Bella. I hope there is a chance for them.
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
I knew it!, she was up to no good all along.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
He should have never trusted Kate, she was a crack head as Rose so put it. She just screwd up Big Time.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great story, Love the Lemon.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Mmmm, what a lemon...
Okay, back to story: Rose is a cold bitch but i think there's more about her, maybe some sad backstory?
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to have this kind of DILF in my bed! :)) Thanks for the chapt!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
AM LOVING THIS STORY!!!! HAVE BEEN ON FANFIC.COM FOR A WHILE BUT KINDA NEW TO THE COFFEE SHOP. IS THERE A WAY THAT THEY SEND OUT ALERTS TO TELL YOU WHEN A STORY HAS UPDATED OR DO YOU HAVE TO JUST KEEP CHECKING YOUR FAVS? I WILL REC SOME GOOD STORIES FOR YOU SOME ARE ON THE COFFEE SHOP AND SOME ON FANFIC. THE NANNY DIARIES, HELP WANTED(TOP 5 FAV), MASTER OF THE UNIVERSE, THE UNIVERSITY OF EDWARD MASEN, THE RED LINE, AND I COULD GO ON AND ON!!! THE NAKED GUY UPSTAIRS, MILLION DOLLAR BABY....LET ME KNOW IF YOU NEED ANY MORE REC'S AND WAITING ON THE THE NEXT CHAPTER.
HAVE A GREAT DAY-
SHANNON
MSA121371@YAHOO.COM
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Robicorn
Now that was a humdinger of a chapter!!!!
Bella should feel bad for lying and putting herself and their baby in danger since she knew how bad her condition was. But Edward could have been more understanding since Bella is so young. So I'm glad that Edward went back and talked it out with Bella!!!!
Let's hope the two of them can just go forward from here!!!
More when it's ready please!!!
Cory
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter, bella is lucky and all is well so they should focus on the positives comparing bella to kate is real bad, little emmas is still not happy she needs a better councillor, thanks tracy
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, this perfect Love doesn´t seem so perfect right now. Is Jake marry? What are bellás issues, since she prefers to casually be with a guy compromised than with a hot, sweet, availlable guy? And this Kate girl, what the hell? LOL
Tough let´s face it, the sex and sexy flashbacks are so steamy...
I´l keep reading
Take care
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can understand Edward being mad at Bella for lying and putting them in danger. He loves them so much and doesn't want anything to happen to them. Bella needs to stop having a pity party and state why she didn't call the doctor. She needs to be honest. Luckily it looks like Mason will be fine.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
That is a brilliant well thought out
chapter! I look forward to more! :)
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
Boy these two can they take any more? Please noooooooo. And as for a rec, try Confessions of a Nanny by Melissa 228. I don't know if she's on here but look on FF. Theres an age gap and daddyward.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bring on the tissues that was so sad I am glad they are all OK and yes she was stupid for not calling the DR but she is so young and stuck in a house going stir crazy Edward should of been easyer on her yes mad but not mean. cant wait for more
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter cant wait till she tells him that she has no medical coverage! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
those two crazy kids.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aww that's exactly what Bella needed for Edward to forgive her. now she needs to forgive herself. poor thing. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye P.S. if you read Total Eclipse of the Heart, don't know if you have or not, that has Daddyward as a father and Bella the actress's bodyguard. Plus Tattoos. Very awesome. :D Also My Mistakes were made for you, that one is good too. I can't remember if that's the sequel or the very first one but reading both is good. :D thanks again
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
I feel sorry about Bella. She shouldn't feel guilty about irt.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
loved it although it was a little angsty, but i hope verything wroks out!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
WOW!!!! Such suspense. Hope Masen and Bella are okay and that Emma gets over her anxiety and starts treating Bella and Masen as they deserve.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ohh, I really do hope that Bella gets out of this funk, she really needs to be strong for Masen, and I think that Emma needs a bit of an attitude adjustment, this anger she is holding in is getting annoying. If this councillor is not working then get a friggen better one, because Bella and Masen is going to start taking a lot of Edwards time up as well.
A bit of friggen happiness would be nice for these two, even if it is for a chapter, I think the world has shitted on them enough, don't you!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG...the angst is killing me! great chapter but I really think that these two need so HAPPY times! Cant wait for the next one!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can see both Edward and Bella's perspective on this. Bella just wanted to get out of the house, I can't say I wouldn't have done the same thing. I also can see why Edward be upset since the baby had to be delivered so early. Sad situation all around.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this story, ALWAYS look forward to the updates! You have no idea! I hope there is lots more! Awesome, awesome job!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved the chapter and very worried for the both of them. A good story to read is Ripple Effect 17 YO Bella 25 YO Edward and Like a Moth to the Flame mobward and virginal Bella both angsty but very good update when you can thanks.....
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hoping for some happier times fir them. Life keeps batting them down so they need so e smooth sailing for a while!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
That last sentence makes me think that with all this drama, Bella is gonna suffer from depression for awhile.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
GO ALICE! And Emmett and Jasper are great too of course!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
:D :D :D
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:D :D :D
Please please please..*
:D :D :D
Alice R..*
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love the chapter :)
So much drama :(
As for story recs:
Ripple effect by shadowcat2009- Bella is 17 and Edward is 25 :) And hes quite posessive ;)
Getting lost by Vican- Daddyward :)
My Older Man by rparkerp- well the title says it all ;)
Only some of my favorites who fit your description. Maybe there is something new for you ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is of course angry, but hopefully can pull out of it. Truthfully, I can understand Bella's wanting to jsut get out of the house for a bit. Maybe she didn't realize exactly how dangerous it was. Hope they can get past this and can grow together.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella and Edward are really in a hard place right now. I feel really sorry for them. But for the most part, they seem to be handling it pretty good.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
I feel sorry for Bella and for Emma. Emma has been brianwashed that Bella is BAD. Poor Bella. Her hormones are all out of wack because of the baby and then to have to deal with Emma's outbusrt. THat is awful. I also feel sorry for Edward. He is caught in the middle. They have a lot to work out.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
well the way you ended it there that is just begging fate to have something go wrong. and right now? with no issurance! so not good....
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
i agree with bella - how the hell is she not gonna worry. i mean she has so much to worry and stress about!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
if you think emmas gonna get away with taking my fredward your nuts! lol love it!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
nothing like slipping away durring your kid's birthday party for some grown-up lovin'! been there done that.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
yay emma is home!! and it did not take that long to show that her daddy always loved and wanted her.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
why isn't emma home yet?!?!?!?!? this is so not fair! to anyone. bella, edward, emma, the rest home the family, and us the reader! i mean they had to move without her!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
what the hell?!?! they were supposed to have found emma by now! they better find her soon :(
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
that bitch!!!!!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
well it seems kate blew a hissy fit over not getting her way, good now edward will kick the bitch outta thier lives for good! and daddy c to the rescue!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
you did good for your virgin run! heehee so happy that they are out in the open now. now things can move forward.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
so sweet! they are so close to the little happy family they will no doubt end up.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
poor bella! and edward was an ass both knowingly and unknowingly here.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
i hope kate proves she's still a junkie bitch sooner rather than later. before edward and emma have a chance to get to attached.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh no this is just not going well for either of them. bella should not be trying to replace edward with jake, but hopefully she will realize it before things go too far. and kate? what the hell is she doing back? she better not be thinking she wants to play mommy again.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
yay they are gonna give it a go!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
well they both seem to want more than a holiday fuck but the distance seems to great. i wonder how this will play out?
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
well now they sure did hit it off!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it, please write more.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
god i can feel the stress and worry in these chapters i just hope everything works out, they are going through so much!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow poor bella!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
i hope they can make it work!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
so i love this and i hope they can work it out!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella, Bella, Bella, she should know better. Hasn't poor Edward been through enough, I feel like he is ready to blow a gasget one of these days.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh crap! Something is going to happen to Bella and Masen I can see it!
Rhonda
Date: 07 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Robicorn
Why do I have a sneaky feeling that something is about to go wrong for Bella and the baby???? (Gulp)
I'm hoping for some good things for the three, soon to be four, of them soon!!!
More when it's ready please!!!!
Cory