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Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

hope this passes.

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

God please make it stop! I don't think Edward can take any more. i want to cry for him. stop the maddness.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

ahh that lemon was much better.  Although I like the dirty talking Edward too. lol.  I love how Emma loves Bella even though it makes Rose mad. lol.

Reviewer: Twi-Addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow - that was an unexpected turn of events!  Who would think Tanya could pull this one off.

Reviewer: megEb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

poor. poor. Bella. Cant wait for your next update.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!! uuummmmm well I loved the lemon although it felt too short. But I hate the way he pulled out of her to cum on her and then just gets up and leaves. What a dick.

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love the chapter :D

I always do :D

Reviewer: kristaa19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Its a good story and you are a good writer!  I just want the story to go back to normal!  haha.  I want everything and everyone to be happy again.  I want Emma to stop being mean to Bella, however, I do understand why she is being a little brat.  I want Bella to get out of her depression. And I want Kate to tell Emma that Bella is her mommy now which she probably won't, but everybody can dream!  Also, I hope Bella doesn't turn out to be like Kate--I really do not want that to happen!  But I did like how Bella screamed at Edward.  And Edward is like a god.  He is so patient with first Kate, then Emma, and now Bella. Keep up the good work!  I hope everything turns out to be really happy soon!! haha

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

poor girl really needs some counselling.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 18

Awww... I never suffered from Post Pardom but Ive heard that it can be really tough....i would love to have them all come together and be a happy family...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

Charlie should be ashamed of himself for thinking Edward would force himself on Bella. Bella needs help and not alcohol. At ;east she said yes to Edward. She did one right thing today.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh poor Bella.  She really should get some help for the post partum. It doesn't always go away on its own. But maybe the fact that she can comfort Masen can help her.

Surprised that Edward chose to propose there at the party, but it was sweet. Charlie needs to get over himself though. It's not like he's ever been there for her. Oh well. Maybe he's starting to see how much Edward cares.

Good chapter. Hope B isn't too hung over in the morning. Though it might be good if she can't remeber coming on to Edward and being turned down.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Is it post depression?  She is having a hard time.  Great story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

My heart is breaking for Bella not only does she feel like it was her falt that the baby was born to soon she has Emma telling her she doesnt want her as her mom and the post partum what a mess.  Edward is a good man and loves her.  Cant wait for more

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

loved it I just hope they can work througth this update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 18

Okay, I have a feeling that this story is not going to get better anytime soon, there really does not seem to be any happiness for this family in the near future.

I dont see how a family can have so much bad luck?  Get the girl into some sort of therapy, Edward is a doctor and I truly do not believe he would let it go a few weeks with out getting Bella some help of some sort.

As for Emma, maybe a good slap on the backside might fix her up now as well, the therapist does not seem to be working. Or at least give the girl some sort of discipline, she should not be talking to Bella like that, I understand she is young, but really I don't even let my niece get away with talk like that.

I know I am being a whiner this week, but I would just like to see one week go their way, they kind of deserve it.  Life cant always be shitty like they have been having the last 5 -6 months.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor B/E I hope she goes and sees someone for her PPD

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow, that was amazing!  I am hoping Bella will get some help for her depression.  I am proud of Edward for not having sex with Bella while she was drunk (although I really don't think that was ever a doubt in my mind that he would do such a thing).  I am glad Masen is finally home and seems to be doing well.  I am so happy that they are engaged :)  YAY!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

Amazing chatper. You wrote PPD to the t! Its a miserable thing for a mother to go through. I cant wait for another update!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow.  Bella has a serious case of PPD.  I speak as a licenced psychologist.  You nailed it!  If that is not what you were going for, I am sorry, but the way everything was written was spot on PPD.



Author's Response:

It is exactly what I was going for! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

aww Edward is one nice guy. He's awesome to put up with not only Bella's post partum depression but his snotty spoiled brat too. :D I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: MoniNP Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Please... they deserve some happiness... :( too much, too bad...

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

WOW! :)

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

Woa Bella is really one big mess. Hope she gets her act together. Between having a baby and one big little sister giving her a hard time, poor Bella.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm glad Edward's being so patient with Bella. 

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Bella she is young and everyone treats her like shit.

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

me,me, me, me, me, me, pick me! The commas are in the right places? Aren't they?

I can't beta, but if you need a pre-reader....

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is really starting to bug me.   I totally understand about the post partum depression and all, but if she's not going to say anything to the doctor about it, then Edward sure should.   I mean, look what happened when she didn't tell the doctor what was going on before.     And Edward must have the patience of a saint to be dealing with her mood swings the way he is, and taking care of Mason, Emma and the house, basically all by herself.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

great chapter

Reviewer: Twi-Addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just found your story.  I really like the way you are descriptive in your writing, I can really picture it.  So far, like the story. 

Reviewer: graciegirlrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter. Update soon

Reviewer: IsaM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

Edward really behaves like an ass! Its not bella s fault.. Please update soon IsaM

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

Please let little Mason be ok so Bella doesn't think she is being punished.  I'm also hoping that Emma loves her little brother and this experience will bring her all the way back to Bella.  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

Did you change Emma's middle name?  I thought it was Emma Grace and now you have mentioned Emma Antonia twice.  Help a girl out here.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome job on the buttsex lemon!  And the declaration love for that matter.  I'm so excited for them.  You do a great job of making your stories flow well.  They are very easy to read.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

Don't let Bella sleep with Jake!!!  Great time for Kate to come back though.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love Daddyward stories and this one is very promising.  Great start. 

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

I hate Kate. Definitely. no second chances. End of story.

I feel really bad for Bella. I hope there is a chance for them.

Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

I knew it!, she was up to no good all along.

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

He should have never trusted Kate, she was a crack head as Rose so put it. She just screwd up Big Time.

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great story, Love the Lemon.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

WOW

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 2

Mmmm, what a lemon...

Okay, back to story: Rose is a cold bitch but i think there's more about her, maybe some sad backstory?

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I want to have this kind of DILF in my bed! :)) Thanks for the chapt!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

AM LOVING THIS STORY!!!! HAVE BEEN ON FANFIC.COM FOR A WHILE BUT KINDA NEW TO THE COFFEE SHOP.  IS THERE A WAY THAT THEY SEND OUT ALERTS TO TELL YOU WHEN A STORY HAS UPDATED OR DO YOU HAVE TO JUST KEEP CHECKING YOUR FAVS?  I WILL REC SOME GOOD STORIES FOR YOU SOME ARE ON THE COFFEE SHOP AND SOME ON FANFIC.  THE NANNY DIARIES, HELP WANTED(TOP 5 FAV), MASTER OF THE UNIVERSE, THE UNIVERSITY OF EDWARD MASEN, THE RED LINE, AND I COULD GO ON AND ON!!!  THE NAKED GUY UPSTAIRS, MILLION DOLLAR BABY....LET ME KNOW IF YOU NEED ANY MORE REC'S AND WAITING ON THE THE NEXT CHAPTER.

HAVE A GREAT DAY-

SHANNON

MSA121371@YAHOO.COM

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

Robicorn

Now that was a humdinger of a chapter!!!!

Bella should feel bad for lying and putting herself and their baby in danger since she knew how bad her condition was. But Edward could have been more understanding since Bella is so young. So I'm glad that Edward went back and talked it out with Bella!!!!

Let's hope the two of them can just go forward from here!!!

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter, bella is lucky and all is well so they should focus on the positives comparing bella to kate is real bad, little emmas is still not happy she needs a better councillor, thanks tracy

Reviewer: Marinitalita Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well, this perfect Love doesn´t seem so perfect right now. Is Jake marry? What are bellás issues, since she prefers to casually be with a guy compromised than with a hot, sweet, availlable guy? And this Kate girl, what the hell? LOL

Tough let´s face it, the sex and sexy flashbacks are so steamy...

I´l keep reading

Take care

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can understand Edward being mad at Bella for lying and putting them in danger. He loves them so much and doesn't want anything to happen to them. Bella needs to stop having a pity party and state why she didn't call the doctor. She needs to be honest. Luckily it looks like Mason will be fine.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

That is a brilliant well thought out

chapter!  I look forward to more! :)

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

Boy these two can they take any more? Please noooooooo. And as for a rec, try Confessions of a Nanny by Melissa 228. I don't know if she's on here but look on FF. Theres an age gap and daddyward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bring on the tissues that was so sad I am glad they are all OK and yes she was stupid for not calling the DR but she is so young and stuck in a house going stir crazy Edward should of been easyer on her yes mad but not mean.  cant wait for more

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter cant wait till she tells him that she has no medical coverage! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 17

those two crazy kids.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Aww that's exactly what Bella needed for Edward to forgive her. now she needs to forgive herself. poor thing. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye P.S. if you read Total Eclipse of the Heart, don't know if you have or not, that has Daddyward as a father and Bella the actress's bodyguard. Plus Tattoos. Very awesome. :D Also My Mistakes were made for you, that one is good too. I can't remember if that's the sequel or the very first one but reading both is good. :D thanks again

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17

I feel sorry about Bella.  She shouldn't feel guilty about irt.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

loved it although it was a little angsty, but i hope verything wroks out!

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

WOW!!!!  Such suspense.  Hope Masen and Bella are okay and that Emma gets over her anxiety and starts treating Bella and Masen as they deserve.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ohh, I really do hope that Bella gets out of this funk, she really needs to be strong for Masen, and I think that Emma needs a bit of an attitude adjustment, this anger she is holding in is getting annoying.  If this councillor is not working then get a friggen better one, because Bella and Masen is going to start taking a lot of Edwards time up as well. 

A bit of friggen happiness would be nice for these two, even if it is for a chapter, I think the world has shitted on them enough, don't you!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG...the angst is killing me! great chapter but I really think that these two need so HAPPY times! Cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter.

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can see both Edward and Bella's perspective on this.  Bella just wanted to get out of the house, I can't say I wouldn't have done the same thing.  I also can see why Edward be upset since the baby had to be delivered so early.  Sad situation all around.

Reviewer: nattieanya21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story, ALWAYS look forward to the updates! You have no idea! I hope there is lots more! Awesome, awesome job!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved the chapter and very worried for the both of them. A good story to read is Ripple Effect 17 YO Bella 25 YO Edward and Like a Moth to the Flame mobward and virginal Bella both angsty but very good update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hoping for some happier times fir them. Life keeps batting them down so they need so e smooth sailing for a while!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

That last sentence makes me think that with all this drama, Bella is gonna suffer from depression for awhile.

Reviewer: wallflower88 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

GO ALICE! And Emmett and Jasper are great too of course!

Reviewer: Alice R Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

:D :D :D 

Please please please update soon soon soon..*

:D :D :D 

Please please please..*

:D :D :D 

Alice R..*

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love the chapter :)

So much drama :(

As for story recs:

Ripple effect by shadowcat2009- Bella is 17 and Edward is 25  :) And hes quite posessive ;)

Getting lost by Vican- Daddyward :)

My Older Man by rparkerp- well the title says it all ;)

Only some of my favorites who fit your description. Maybe there is something new for you ;)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Edward is of course angry, but hopefully can pull out of it.  Truthfully, I can understand Bella's wanting to jsut get out of the house for a bit.  Maybe she didn't realize exactly how dangerous it was.  Hope they can get past this and can grow together.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella and Edward are really in a hard place right now. I feel really sorry for them. But for the most part, they seem to be handling it pretty good.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

I feel sorry for Bella and for Emma. Emma has been brianwashed that Bella is BAD. Poor Bella. Her hormones are all out of wack because of the baby and then to have to deal with Emma's outbusrt. THat is awful. I also feel sorry for Edward. He is caught in the middle. They have a lot to work out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

well the way you ended it there that is just begging fate to have something go wrong. and right now? with no issurance! so not good....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 15

i agree with bella - how the hell is she not gonna worry. i mean she has so much to worry and stress about!

Reviewer: lala Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

if you think emmas gonna get away with taking my fredward your nuts! lol love it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

nothing like slipping away durring your kid's birthday party for some grown-up lovin'! been there done that.

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

yay emma is home!! and it did not take that long to show that her daddy always loved and wanted her.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

why isn't emma home yet?!?!?!?!? this is so not fair! to anyone. bella, edward, emma, the rest home the family, and us the reader! i mean they had to move without her!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

what the hell?!?! they were supposed to have found emma by now! they better find her soon :(

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

that bitch!!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

well it seems kate blew a hissy fit over not getting her way, good now edward will kick the bitch outta thier lives for good! and daddy c to the rescue!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

you did good for your virgin run! heehee so happy that they are out in the open now. now things can move forward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

so sweet! they are so close to the little happy family they will no doubt end up.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

poor bella! and edward was an ass both knowingly and unknowingly here.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

i hope kate proves she's still a junkie bitch sooner rather than later. before edward and emma have a chance to get to attached.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

oh no this is just not going well for either of them. bella should not be trying to replace edward with jake, but hopefully she will realize it before things go too far. and kate? what the hell is she doing back? she better not be thinking she wants to play mommy again.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

yay they are gonna give it a go!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

well they both seem to want more than a holiday fuck but the distance seems to great. i wonder how this will play out?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

well now they  sure did hit it off!

Reviewer: noellebby Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love it, please write more.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

god i can feel the stress and worry in these chapters i just hope everything works out, they are going through so much!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow poor bella!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

i hope they can make it work!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

so i love this and i hope they can work it out!

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella, Bella, Bella, she should know better. Hasn't poor Edward been through enough, I feel like he is ready to blow a gasget one of these days.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

so good!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh crap!  Something is going to happen to Bella and Masen I can see it!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

Robicorn

Why do I have a sneaky feeling that something is about to go wrong for Bella and the baby???? (Gulp)

I'm hoping for some good things for the three, soon to be four, of them soon!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

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