Date: 06 Jul 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Really good chapter!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Of course Bella is showing her age, she is still young. I hope nothing bad happens.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
such a good chapter! cant wait for more! And yes Bella is being extremly immature. She apparently doesnt know that pre-eclampsia is life threatening. I would really like to smack her in the back of the head. Update soon!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
lier, lier, pants on fire!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Another lovely chapter. Bella is risking so much let's just hope it's ok.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
You left that open. the next chapter could go any
where. That's even better than a cliffy!! That is
a brilliant update! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Bella can be so stupid and immature. She does not understand how the world works. Edward just wants to take of them both. Bella should have called her doctor. Edward will forgive her, but will be extremely angry for awhile if something happens to Mason, because she was selfish.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG i hope the baby is going to be ok
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
She is young but this is her baby she should of called the doctor. Please dont let anything happen to Masen. I was so happy when Emma told Bella she loved her my heart melted.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
THANK GOD shes home Let me tell you your writing is awesome
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter, i hope bella knows what she is doing!! high blood presure in pregnancy is a serious issue and very dangerous, nice to see that emma and bella are back to how they were before, thanks tracy
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sorry but I hope Bella's immaturity doesn't cause danger to herself or the baby. You never think it will happen to you but it can. They have all gone through so much that they really don't need anything else. Also, not too pleased with Bree flirting with Edward & he knowing it.
Hope things speed up a little and in a good way. Think with everything that has been going on recently, they need some fun and lightness!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
that girl needs a reality check, poor thing. :) I love that Edward is so sweet to her and is Bree going to be a problem? if she is we might have to kill her. lol Keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
he is kinda lasse fair about her not having insurance. It is his baby too
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
well shes just stupid putting masons helth in jepordy! cant wati till the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Somethings gonna happen.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
That's like a foreshadowing. Something bad would happen to Bella.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Rut roh! she needs to be more careul, but i can understand not wanting to go to the dr. on e's day off. Hope she doesn't screw it all up...
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
"I mean it wasn't that big of a deal. It's not like anything horrible would happen because of it." These are going to be Bella's famous last words... you wait and see you are going to have something up your sleve where Edward finds out she lied to him, to have a day interrupted.
I can see the writing on the wall. Big black letters. I really do hope that her stress levels come down a little, she has had to deal with so much, it is like every day is another heap added to the sh*t pile.
Wonderful chapter as always.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
WOW! That is crazy she would lie to him about that! Can't wait to see what happens when he finds out!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Famous last words
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is taking this way too lightly!!! I hope nothing happens while they are out. I can't believe she didn't try to figure out some insurance first thing. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love that Emmett may get trades to Philly and all the kids will be together!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am really hopeing she doesen't mess this up by not thinking of the baby first update when you can thanks....
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
yeah...and i imagine wiht all the foreshadowing and hint dropping I can safely come to the conclusion from making inferences that something BAD will happen!!!!!!!!!!!! Just please don't let it be too bad!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow,didn't expect Kate to turn up.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Story continuing nicely. Enjoying it.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Only on 2nd chapter but so far it's a good read. I like sexy Edward.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
aw things were going really well for them all untill that nasty kate stuck her oar in i hope things work out
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter honey really enjoying it.. so hard.. and this is so real.. I feel for both of them..
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
awww.... baby steps... baby steps....
Date: 26 Jun 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am a little behind... I am glad I am catching up.. this is fabulous..
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
i get why she got the dog but talk about make life hard for yourself, things are difficult for the whole family and i can see why bella is worried, thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
emma will get there in the end, the whole family have a lot of adjusting to do, thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
thankgod she is finally home, i hope she is not too scared by her 4 months away, and bellas parents are a bit odd making rules that meant bella and edward would leave, thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
that poor little girl is going to have a lot of problems with the lies kate is feeding her, but i'm glad bella and edward can finf some happiness in the new baby, thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
blimy emma has been gone two weeks that is bad, why didden't riley turn kate in when he realised, i hope she comes home soon thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
bloody hell this is serious she kidnapped emma, the woman has to be mental, that poor baby wont know which way is up, thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter, i cant believe kate even has access to edwards house and she is not helping herself if she wants to know emma, and bella needs to find some closure over her abortion, so much going on each chapter, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
bellas well put out!!!!!!! some things are made for exit only!! unless you are with the right man cause that shit is well tricky, but things seems to be moving along for edward but not so for alice is it me or is she a bit reluctant? thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter a good xmas was had by all it seems, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh my the plot thickens, bella has been screwed over big time by dickhead past boyfriends, although i'm not sure bella will appriciate her business being told to edward like that even if it explaines her current love life, as for kate i'm still deciding on that front, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow great chapter, lots going on so edward is giving kate a chance i'm not sure i coud be that generous, and bella has kicked jake to the kerb and about time nobody deserves to feel the way he made bella feel despite the theory he used, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
you know this story is so much more than i thought it would be lots of different elements affecting the life of the main couple who seem to want to spend time together, they are already affected by the seperation and not understanding it, bella is easily slipping into unhealthy patterns (a married man or as near as) where as edward has a mighty big problem dropped in his lap, oh my what will happen next? thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
well well, they are giving it a go, long distance dosen't have to equal failure, but she is younger and he does have a toddler to consider, so what will happen?????? thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
well what started out as hot sex has transformed into something else they both feel a connection to each other, also emma is it just me or is she a bit of a madam the way the family undermine edward and give her what she wants is a recipe for disaster it's cute and not a problem when you are three but not when you are older, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
blimy i was not expecting that for an opening chapter, bella is not backwards in coming forward is she!!!! neither is edward for that matter, an exciting night was had by both i think, saying that i do believe i will enjoy this story, thanks tracy
Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm starting to like your story :)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Robicorn
Found your story and I'm loving it!!!!
Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!
Cory
Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
I soo happy they are going to try!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my, oh my, Edward is starting to fall.
Thanks for the fun story!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
WOW, this story was hard to read. They have a lot of issues to deal with. I'm not sure what the answers are. But then again, I'm not writting this story. LOL
All-in-all this is a great story. Such a different version of the ones I've been reading. You are a out-of-the-box thinker. Can't wait to see whats in the next chapter. Thx
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think it would so hard in Bella's situation. With Emma and her issues and the dog, well she didn't think that through. And I was clad that Edward blew a fuse, it made him a little more human.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love the story, keep waiting for Bella to leave because she can not handle it anymore and is willing to sacrifice her happiness for Emma's.
Can't wait to see how this plays out.
until next time :)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
OH no dont let anything happen to Masen. I have a bird named MOJO LOL. Emma needs help and Kate needs to be 6 feet under.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is going to be her own worse enemy. I agree with Edward. They did not need that dog and once again Emma was manipulating them. She knows exactly what she is doing. Kids are smart.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Really, now Preeclampsia, cant this couple catch a break.
How the hell is Bella going to keep her stress levels down with a child that hates her and think she is taking her daddy away? I am going to bet on this one that in a few chapters Bella is going to have to deliver the baby early because of Emma and the stress from that.
Then she is going to feel even worse, to the point that she is not a good mother because she could not even carry her child safely to full term. Hmm I think I would rather a Mac truck run me over instead of having to deal with that.
But then again you could surprise me and go a totally different way all together, I can't wait to see where you take this now. You have me guessing all over the place.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh that girl is such a spoiled brat. poor thing. and it isn't even her fault. :( that's so sad. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Jun 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
NICE CHAPTER UPDATE SOON
Date: 06 Jun 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
loved the chapter very much and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks....
Date: 06 Jun 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
love the name! I hope she has the baby soon :)
Date: 05 Jun 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
if feels like so much is stacked against them right now.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Such a good chapter! I hope everything is alright with the baby preeclampcsia is really dangorus my sister in law and niece almost died because they didnt inform the doctor about the protine in her urine. SHe had a siezure and her heart stopped luckily they got her back and her and the baby are fine. I hope you update soon!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope emma goes back to her old self again for bella's sake & what happens to kate?
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sometimes I really don't like how Edward reacts to certain things, it is a few chapters that he gives me the idea that Masen is a serie B son (maybe this is just because he isn't born yet and now he's just trying to deal with all the crap that Kate created). I get that he's been through a very stressfull period, but he is always complaining about something and then lashing out at Bella (I'm still mad at what he said to her after he found out that she was pregnant, of course it wasn't the right time for something like that but still), while Bella has been always supportive of him, she never tryed to take Kate's place even before the kidnap. Buyng a dog wasn't certainly a smart move with all their expenses, but she did try to call Edward and after all her wasted effort she tryed to do something more for the little one.
Maybe after this chapter things are going to be better? He seemed to put more effort in this one.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
poor emma has to one confused little girl
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! Curious to see how Bella is going to handle all the stress of Edward working so much and with Emma's issues!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
hmmm nice little lemon there.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
That's awesome!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I had pre-eclampsia.....I delivered my son three and a half weeks early.....my BP got up to 170 over 110.......but I felt absolutely fine! He is a thriving.....almost 10 month old now!!!!!!
I loved the update............man oh man you can tell Edward is really stressed out!
If Bella isn't careful...she is going to be heavily manipulated by Emma if she keeps buying her things.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
I know Emma is only 4 and she went through a very difficult time and it's all Kate's fault. I also realize she is "acting out" and there is therapy but she is being a brat and sometimes "tough love" is needed. It seems that Edward is trying but Bella is too afraid that if she is too hard on Emma, she will alienate her.
I feel bad for all of them. It was such a wonderful fairytale and then Kate had to come and ruin it. Not sure how much more one can take. Just want all of them to have the HEA!!
BTW - please don't let Bella deliver too early. The stress of a preemie is so not needed!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can see Emma getting way worse and doing the exact things Bella said, but it could also gothe other way too.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love it!! As always! More please!! :D
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Aww! Emma is getting better...and Edward are Bella are too...sigh...great job!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
awwwww... how sweet.. I know that there needs to be time to readjust to every thing that Emma is going through, but she needs to get a grip.. maybe this will bring Bella and Emma back together.. I really would love for them to happy aggain....;) and the bed room scene... holy crap... yummy!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
That is awesome! :)
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow that would be really stressful. I'm glad to see that Bella has not blown a fuse yet, you really do need a ton of patients with children even on a regular basis.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awww, i loved that ending there to this chapter. I can't wait for the talk with the parents!
Love, TEP
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
what an emotional rollercoaster of a chapter! great though, one of the better ones you've written so far. I was ready to punch Emma at most points in this chapter but I'm glad everything seems to be working out already in that regard at the end. Excited for the next chapter! How much longer until the baby is born?
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
My heart is breaking for all of them that poor little girl so confused. They do need to remember that Emma is not the only one that is affected by what happened. Hope they can heal.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
You know they are desperate it they are getting it on at a bday party.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow...I can't imagine how difficult that would all be. Man I just want to murder Kate, I swear! Psychotic Bitch! Sorry, it just really pisses me off when people do crap like that to kids and take away their security! Anyway, great chapter!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
ok, so why was i crying and jumping up and down and happy as ever?!! great chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
well damn, both daddy and daughter are happy in entirely different ways. lol I loved it. Emma is such a brat but understandable. poor thing. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am so glad that Bella told Edward that he can't ignore her to make Emma happy. Emma is being a brat. Yes, she went trhrough some trauma, but Emma is playing her dad snd she knows it.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
well, that's the first step at least...nothing like a little fast lovin' at a b-day party LOL
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, I am glad she was a happy little girl in the end.
I was feeling sorry for these guys for all the hard work Edward had put into his daughter for her to just throw it all away (not being her fualt at all) it must be hard at that age to understand.
Kate really did do a number on her poor little heart and brain.
I really hope Edward get a few hours with Kate to really tell her what he feels and what he is going to do to her if she ever don's his door step again.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was fantastic!! I just got caught up with this story!! I love it!! Poor Emma, Edward and Bella!! I hope this was the turning point for them as a family!! Thanks for a great story!!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
well hormones and an child that was taken is a recipe for disaster! cant wait till the next chapter