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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

yay!!!!  That was a good stepping stone!  Way to rock that lemon!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

I know you've probably heard this before but that chapter was HOT!  I absolutely love that Edward loves buttsex.  Not a big fan personally but you've made it hot, hot, hot!  TMI??

I'm so glad they are being patient with Emma.  They have a lot of mental damage to undo and it just takes time!  Thanks for the update and looking forward to more.  In the mean time, I'll just go back a reread some of the other chapters!  It's that good!

Reviewer: nattieanya21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

Missed this story! Please update soon!!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

yeah

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

I was getting kinda nervous that Emma wouldnt come around but I think she may just be alright. Great chapter looking foward to more!!!!

Reviewer: Missie33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

Im loving the drama between Edward Bella and Emma!!! I think Bella needs to finally breakdown and move out for awhile and let edward deal with Emma for awhile so they can re-bond! I know that may be harsh to do because i really think Emma needs them both but i also think edward needs to realize how much hes hurting Bella and i just dont think he has yet. I obviously believe in HEA but this has got some awesome drama going on right now!!!

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter. loved their little wedding. poor emma she is so confused i hope that they work through it soon

Reviewer: xMissCullenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was such a lovely end to the chapter :) 

Reviewer: junior88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved this chapter, it had been awhile. hope things start looking up now. update again soon

Reviewer: Teaste Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

I was getting worried that Bella was going to leave to protect the baby.  Glad to see it is going in another direction.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

LOVED IT!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was incredible!  I am so happy Emma is slowly but surely getting closer to Bella.  I wonder what will happen next?

Reviewer: timidvampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

this was a fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was a hard chapter to read but loved it I only hope things get better from here they need a break from all of this for awhile update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

The reunion made me cry- so glad she's back! And hopefully things will improve, I can't take anymore dramas either ;)

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

I saw on Twilighted that you extended your one shot which I loved. And went looking for more. I love this story. I found myself on an emotional rollercoaster. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

Really I think Bella took it too far leaving her parents house after they picked up Emma. Dramatic much? Also I thought Edward had just turned 27? I must be mixing up stories or something. Anyway it was good. Bella lost me at the end though. I hope Riley gets a pardon or something because he tried his and did take care of Emma better than Kate did. Emma would probably be dead without Riley there and that's the truth! Until next time I'm caught up!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

Riley turn her ass in she is losing her damn mind.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow I love how Riley ripped Kate a new asshole!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

So good! Damn you are bringing the drama!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

I'll read your other stories when I'm caught up on this one no doubts. i knew Kate was going to fall again. Its the drugs I thought it was the person but talking and helping people who are addicted changed my mind on that real fast. I don't work with that population any more but it did help me to understand why people did the things that they do for drugs. Some turn the corner some are life long users or functional but I'm glad to say some kicked the habit and helped other and returned to the lives they had before addiction became a problem became something more. I love your story but I have a feeling its going to be hard to read especially if they find Kate living for the drugs. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm not a fan but it was hot to read! Lemony goodness plus I love the story. I'm glad Jake will have some explaining to do with Leah. Yay they are together I hope Kate isn't getting high again I really hopes she makes a full recover either now or in the future. Until next time!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love it! Emma is so cute I thought her name was Emma Grace not Antonia maybe I read it wrong a few chapters back. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh poor Bella. That made my heart hurt it was so sad. Damn Mike and Jessica they fucking suck!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

I liked it. Its very interesting and I can't wait to read more tomorrow. I liked how Bella got Jake back because he was trying to be slick and hurtful. I think Bella was a little over dramatic with Edward leaving him that stank message but she is young and hurting. You think you know but when a child is in the mix the dynamic changes. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

Damn they are both going through drama and E/B relationship withdrawl. I likes it. Jake poor Jakey you are a jerk in this one I hate that but what can I do?

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

I was hoping Jake wouldn't be a jerk but I don't think that's not going to happen. Damn it! I liked it that's the only thing I'm concerned about right now.

Reviewer: pamirvine85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

great story, can't wait to read some more

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

I like it. Its getting interesting and funny!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far! Aw.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am soooo glad that Emma is back iwth Edward.

I can't believe that Kate got away with keeping her that long. I just knew that Kate would have screwed up before then. I hope Kate never gets anywhere close to Emma again.

My heart broke for Edward when Emma said she did not want to talk to him. That had to have killed him. But I am soooo glad that things did work out once Edward got to see Emma and talk to her face to face.

I can't not wait for your next chapter. You have done a wonderful job writing this story. I loved your Daddyward!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

I am so happy that Bella went out to Edward. This has to be sooooo hard on Edward. He has never been away from Emma this long. I definately do not like Kate. She lost her chance with me.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am so glad that Emma is back with Edward, but Riley doesn't really deserve the reward. He took too long turning Kate into the police. Bella's parents are so strange.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

How Beautiful, what a wonderful story, I love them all. Even Bella's crazy parents.

Please update soon. 

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

I like it & it's interesting how you were able to figure out how to get emma back.  Can't wait to read the next update.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

whew!  good chapter.

Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

YAY!!! She's back! I think Riley is the one who turned Kate in and I hope like hell he doesn't collect the reward. He had it in his power to get Emma back a long time ago. Now I am just worried that Kates mental state is going to an issue and that she'll get away scott free! Bitch is crazy and needs to have her ass thrown in jail!!!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm so lame! I didn't cry until he reminded her of Horton.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

So happy they have her back!

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

thank god she is back with them. I just hope she gets comfortable and can live a happy life she has been through enough shit!

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

I LOVE it soooooooooooo much :D

Reviewer: xMissCullenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

:) Emma's back with her family. I think I'd die if my parents were acting like that in front of my boyfriend-fiance-type-person.

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yay!! Emma's home!! I hope it isn't Riley trying to collect the reward money!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 13

Must have missed the story alert for the last chapter. No worries - got to read 2 chapters tonight instead! Yay me! Great job. So glad Emma didn't let the trauma & drama of her abduction affect her reunion Edward & Bella.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Ya Kate was going crazy it is a good thing that Riley went with them to help keep Emma safe but he should of turned her in. Is Riley the one that turned her in???  Tacos 14 days in a row ya she is off her rocker.  I got chills up and down my arms when I was reading that they found her Thank god and then my heart broke for Edward when she would no talk to him that bitch Kate brain washing the poor little thing so confused.  Then Bellas parent thank goodness they went and pick her up but the way they were talking to Bella they sould be ashamed of themselves.  I would love to join you on twilighted but I cant seem to get on very frustrated  and it is not because of my age unless I am to old LOL  46

Reviewer: nattieanya21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

Love this story! So weird, I didn't get the last update! But I just read it, and it's awesome! I love when you update!!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Can't belive I'm saying that I'm glad they are going to the motel!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter! :) YAY they finally have her back even though it will take some adjustments for a bit :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

im glad that shes ok and finally back with edward and bella but come on parents shes already knocked up what else can happen?

 

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

:-)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

I hope you're gonna give us EPOV involving the meeting with Bella's parents when they were reunited with Emma.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am so glad she is back but poor edward i don't think think the drama isa over just yet lol loved it

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

I hate Kate!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

what a tough chap to read but I know it was an even tougher chap for you to write. Well done!

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yaaaaaayyy!!! Emma's back home. I'm wondering if Riley was the one who turned in Kate or was it someone else?

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

Damn extra atm card!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

that poor little girl. she had me crying. :( I love Emma. she is too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: A Cullen Wannabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

aH...I'm so glad that they got her back safe and sound.  That was a nightmare!  

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love my Ambien!! LOL But if you have already taken it then I guess it is safe to say we will get our teaser tomorrow instead. LOL The first time I took it I was reading with my laptop in bed and fell asleep with it in my lap. I woke up around 2 am and scared the shit out of myself having the laptop on my stomach. Good luck with that!!! Anyway, great chapter. I'm so glad she is back with Edward and Bella. It seems like she is going to be ok since it didn't take long for her to come around. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: junior88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

i am so glad she is home, hopefully no more drama for abit. update soon.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

YES! Emma was found and Kate is in jail. I hope that Edward and Bella can show Emma through love and encouragement that Kate was wrong and they love her. Great chapter once again. Please post again soon.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yippee, I am soo glad Emma is back with Edward where she belongs. Kate so deserves what she is going to get.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13

THANK GOD!

 

I was so bouncy!  I couldn't determine if we would see Emma with her rightful parents in this chapter or not by the way you worded it in teh AN.  I wasn't sure if getting through B and E's POVs in this chapter.......meaning one more to go......

When they got the call I spit out my water!

YIPPEEEEEE!

I want her to call Bella momma again!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really hope we are all done with Kate thats as much Drama from her I can stand loved it update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter. happy that emma is back with her  parents where she belongs

Reviewer: lmjohn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh I had a feeling this was going to happen! I hope Edward gets Emma back and Kate pays BIG TIME!!!

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope & pray that Edward get's emma back & i wonder how he would get her back.  I also hope that Kate get's what she deserves.

Reviewer: Mrs Edward B Cullen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow. Awesome Chapter. So sad though :( And poor Bella. Edward snapped lik crazy. But I understand, it would be so hard for them to try anf feel happy about something.


Also Kate is fucked up in the head. I have created a team for this story that is

 

Team Kate is fucked up in the head and she should give Emma back and then go die in a hole because she is a heartless bitch.

 

Excuse my french there but certain things need to be said. More soon please :)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

fuck

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

fuck

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

I wish he never let her back in the damn house

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

yeah...okay.........this is getting old......bring Emma back!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: Miracle1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

FOr the love of god bring Emma home with no issues. Kate is seriously delusional if she thinks that she can get away from this. I hope you update soon and again BRING EMMA HOME!!!!!!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

damn!

Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Please tell me that Riley grows a conscience and turns Kate in before she can do more damage to Emma.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

great chapter. hope they get emma back soon

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hate that Kate in lying to Emma. I wish Riley was stronger and would do what he knows is right.

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

I really hope that they find Emma soon, it's not right that she's already been missing for 2 months and now that she knows that her daddy and Bella are having a baby she's going to think that they don't want her. And now she's calling Kate Momma, please end the insanity and figure out a way to get Emma back with Edward like ASAP.

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG, please say Emma will be coming home soon! Kate is hurting her without even knowing. That is so sad and will cause Emma to have abandonment issues when she finally does get back home with E and B. Thanks for another great chapter.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

Please Please Please let Riley man up and turn in Kate. I don 't think I can take much more. My heart is breaking for Edward, Bella and Emma.

Reviewer: junior88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

great chapter, i hope they can get her back soon and Kate doesn't say too much bad stuff.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

Kate's bf really needs to turn her in. Even if its just an anonymous tip. And shit! I keep forgetting B is only 19. Can't say I'd be psyched if I were E's family either.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

ugh....c'mon Riley.... do the right thing

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

See, you stupid blonde witch...you CAN'T hide from the Cullens...you hurt one of them, they'll hunt you down and take you out! 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

That hateful wench!  I have a horrible feeling that this is not the end of baby mama drama...

 

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

Kate just needs to make a little tiny mistake so someone can see her...or Riley needs to turn her in.  Its just horrible that things that she is saying to Emma to get her to forget her daddy!!!!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love the update! :)

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Nice update.

A bit of happy and sad.

I hope Emma comes home soon. Kate is her mother and i do understand that but she didn't have to kidnap her.

E/B moving on and having another baby is great but Emma deserves to enjoy it to.

Riley seems like heh as a good head ob his shoulders. To bad he wouldn't phone and turn Kate in.

 

Update soon.

 

=-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

I wanna rip Kate's head off right now.

Reviewer: BlackGreen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

Gee stupid Kate.... I want Emma back ....

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

Kate needs help she is off her rocker please have Rilley come to his scences and turn her in.  Bella gona have a baby how cool but so sad at the same time because there is no way they can enjoy this as much as they could.  Evil Kate using the baby as a way to trick Emma into thinking they dont want her I would like to hurt Kate.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

great chapter im sad that kate is just brain washing that little girl! i think riley should turn her in ! and cut a deal ! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 2

beautiful

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!! Totally yummy!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Riley should just turn her in.  She's crazy to think that she'll be able to get a job without being found out.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hate Kate even more after this chapter. What the heck is wrong with Riley, he knows it wrong, turn her in!

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hate Kate even more after this chapter. What the heck is wrong with Riley, he knows it wrong, turn her in!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 12

awww freaking awww! I loved the end but the whole thing with Kate is getting on my nerves. that woman is all sorts of freaking. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

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