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Reviewer: tania831 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

The text seemed so fimilar then I finally made the connection to greys anatomy quotes. The early seasons were the best.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

Lovely story.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

thank you for a great ending to this story - sorry that this is so late, but i'm only catching up on my reading now.

Happy New year

Michele

Reviewer: A Cullen Wannabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Watching a movie today that has reminded me so much about this story on Lifetime.  Still breaks my heart no matter what side of the whole story you're on.  Just wanted to say this story is staying with me.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

Absolutely perfect. Not much more to say. You wrapped it well, tied up the loose strings & gave them their HEA. Sadvthat Charlie had to lose his two girls duvet his religious beliefs butbthst was his choice!
Thoroughly enjoyed this story! Definitely one of my all time favorites!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am so glad they are happy. They are where they belong.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Really enjoyed reading this story.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

It was nice to see a happy ending for Bella and Edward.  Life obviously won't be perfect for them but it seems like they will be able to handle anythhing together.  That was another great story from you.  Can't wait to see what you've got in store for Teacherward :)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well, I really enjoyed this story. It´s  different and quite emotional without getting too cheesy.  You have found a nice way to let us in both worlds. Amish/English. E/B were great from the beginning. The struggles and feelings - well done!!

Thank you for sharing this with us and goog luck with your new story!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved the chapter. it was peaceful.

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

great job and great ending thanks for sharing your story!

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

so not weird...makes me feel like you used to be amish!

Reviewer: A Cullen Wannabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow...this was awesome.  I can't wait to see how you wrap it up.  Great story!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

poor confused eddie

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

Awesome! 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

this was an awesome chapter!  wow - powerful writing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

I think Edward will be ok now. He was reborn. He still has work to do, but he knows he has something to live for and he wants it.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow, I love the chapter. Even though some of it is heartbreaking. Hope they find a happy ever after......

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am so glad that Edward and Bella went to his home. Esme and Carlisle will be a big help in the long run. They can do whatever they want in the futere. Edward is slowly finding a sense of peace.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

I still love the story. Even though I don´t know how to comment. Hope they work it out. I am not sure if Amish is the right choice for them to go on together. I can see them in Edwards condo! But your story line has made so many turns.....I can´t wait to read more.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

How horrid. And a true story as well. I´m in tears. Hope they all will find the strength to get on with their lifes.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

this was a great chapter - I love that in many ways Bella is more mature and ready to be a parent than Edward :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

Aaarrrggghhhh.....first Edward wants to be Amish & Bella doesn't and now Edward thinks he can go back to being English & Bella is having her doubts! I get it, really and they do need to talk it out, listvthe pros & cons, see what they can live with and whatvthey can live without, what the future looks like, compromise and really, really talk!
When the were in Lancaster, age was not a factor but if they stay in Chicago, it will be. Also, I would hate to have Charlie & Renee lose bit their daughters but then it's not fair for Carlisle & Esme to lose their son & grandchild as well.
Wish there could be a middle ground where they could have both families in their lives.
I really love this story. I'm glad Edward & Bella recognize that it's fate that brought them together. Sarah would have been an easy second choice for Edward. He would have been satisfied & content but his heart would always belong to Bella. I think his dreams were telling his conscious mind whatvhis subconscious knew all the time!!
Great chapter!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

THey are both a little lost I think.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter. so sad for edward and bella right now though as they have many decisions to make and seemingly no real idea what direction they want to go in.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 15

I think Edward should go see his family. Go out to the real world with Bella and they can make some decisions on their own. Edward needs all the people who love him now.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 15

I so love this story. I'm sure Edward had feelings for Sarah & would have settled for her if Bella never returned but Sarah would always be the safe, second choice and eventually, she would have had to face it.
I'm glad Edward is going back to Chicago. If anything, to see his family & get some closure.
Charlie is actually taking the news of Bella's pregnancy much better than I expected. It's nice he's giving them the option to return but if he has no intentions of baptizing Edward into the Amish community, he should be upfront now.
Oh yes....I would live a teaser!!

Author's Response:

 

Soon, Edward and Bella were back at his Condo. Edward felt at home. “Home sweet home,” Edward yawned stretching his arms above his head. He was exhausted after the flight and all the revelations of the day. It felt good to open up, let people in. It felt good to swim. At least now he knew he was heading to shore.

 

“This is where you belong,” Bella said. She wasn't sure how she felt about it. She knew, that Edward didn't need to be Amish.

 

For the first time in months, Edward knew where he belonged and Bella was right. “Your right. I've missed it here.” Edward smiled at her. “Do you like it here? I mean I know we have only been here a day, but could you see yourself here?” Edward asked, because if she hated it, he would leave it behind for her. He missed his parents, even if things with his father were never exactly easy.

 

His father surprised him tonight. For the first time, Edward felt like his father had his back.

 

“I don't know,” Bella told him. There were things about being English she loved, but there were also things she didn't enjoy.

 

“I don't get it...I thought this would be what you wanted...not to be Amish. Not to be so restricted, I thought this whole trip was to see if I could survive without that crutch...?”

 

“Edward, I was Amish for sixteen years. That is sixteen Thanksgiving’s, sixteen birthdays, sixteen Christmas’s, and in one day I am supposed to make a choice to end that, to lose my family? A person doesn’t do that, not without a little hesitation. I’m entitled to a little uncertainty here. Just a moment to understand the magnitude of what it means to cut somebody out of my life. I am entitled to at least one moment of doubt and a little understanding from you would be nice.”

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is definatly lost, then so is Bella - i love this story, at this point i am hoping they chose to become Amish.  It has changed with the almost every other chapter.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 15

I saw a movie this past weekend based off this shooting.  I started watching it and then was like, hey, that's what Collide is based on.

My heart broke for Bella when she realized that Sarah and Edward were courting.  Yeah, she definite can't blame them.  She's the one who ran away.

I would like to get into Edward's head to know exactly what he's thinking and feeling about Bella.  I can tell he really did love Sarah and I wonder if that changes anything between him and Bella or if it reminded him how strong his feelings were for Bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 14

such a needless tragedy! but this is the same as most acts of violence. this unfortunately shows that no where is safe from the horrors the some humans are capable of.

may the Lord shine His light on the families and friends of these poor children and hold them all close in His arms and give them peace and the ability to forgive and move forward. and may He bless us all with His love, peace and forgivness everyday of our lives. Amen.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

well the dreams make sence now. i wonder how this will change the decisions these two will make.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

poor things in real life... poor eddie in the story

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

I remember that horrible day. Thank you for the update on how the real people are doing. I hope the town has found some peace.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

Tough chapter & I commend your bravery to write something so close to home.
I'm hoping you got my previous posts but I wanted you to know how happy I am you wrote it the way you did!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

I can't begin to imagine how hard that chapter was to write.  Edward broke my heart.  It was bad enough for him to have to relive his issues but to have to do it and face injured and dead innocent women and children was even worse.  I'm just afraid to know if this will set him back or be a step to help him learn to deal with his own issues.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Honestly, I would've expected no other reaction from Edward.  Sure he can control himself around just Bella but how would he be around a baby.  I can just see a colicky baby setting him off.  There is definitely a lot for him to consider.  I just wonder how Bella will react going back home to Rose and Em knowing that they sent Edward away.

I am assuming that Sarah was hurt by James.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter, glad they got to talk and begin to resolve things there must besome sorrt of disaster going on back at the armish community i'm off to google nickle mines, thanks tracy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

hmmm wonder what happened with sarah.......

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

I still love the story. They have to think about the future, with a little baby girl. Poor Sarah. I guess she is up for a tough awakening.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

I wish they would be honest enough to say that they love each other. The rest they can work out.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

I admit, I was scared Edward was going to walk out on Bella and stay with Sarah since it was easier & he'd learn to love her. I know the future is uncertain as Edward needs time to figure out the future he can live with. Either way, someone is going to get hurt.
I did google Nickle Mines and after reading it, remembered the tragedy of that community. Don't know if you are planning to follow history or just use it as a setting. The teacher escapes so I'm afraid that either Sarah will survive but be so traumatized that Edward would be guilted into staying with her even if nothing was formalized or...he will relive his dream that he leaves Sarah dying as he walks off with Bella. In any case, Edward will feel guilt

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter. he really never should have even gotten involved with sarah. I am still a little pissed at him over that.

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Now Edward will be taking care of Sarah in the aftermath I'm sure. Great chapter, but I'm nervous about the angst. He and Bella need to work it out.

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

good chapter keep up the good work, i assume you are going to use the news story where a man shot up the amish school house, and yet they (the amish) showed us their strength by forgiving the shooter!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

well at least it seems that the misunderstanding is being delt with quickly here. see i told you it was too soon for edward to try to move forward with sarah.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 11

ya gotta love how a simple misunderstanding can change everything. edward is right in trying to move on, not so sure about how fast he is doing it though.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

yay eddie is finally going looking for his bella! i wonder what he will say when he hears her reasons foor leaving? i wonder what bella will think when he shows up?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

oh boy what kind of sick future seeing is this? something bad is gonna happen....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow you have there dreams intermingling with eachother. and looks like eddie didn't pull out fast enough. see kids pulling out is not a good form of birth control. girls do your part and go see the doc for a shot or some pills or an insert... so many different ways to stop these little problems before they start. and guys wrap it up! this is a must! for helping with more than just babies!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

eddie's gonna be a daddy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

as i said before i think it is an extreme form of the 2 people from VERY different worlds coming together and finding love. this just take it to the n'th level of different worlds and it is a great and original idea. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow that was kinda quick and right tothe point. but bella is right sometimes it is not about the flash and glam and the o it is about how you get there and the love of the others sharing the experience.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 4

i think it is a pretty cool idea for a story.definately the extreme of 2 different worlds but definately original.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

edward is her bitch! too funny. but yummy that he is gonna be her rebel outlet!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

ooohhh! you gotta love the you turn me on and i hate you lets make out but i still hate you thing. heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

well this is not what i expected but it seems like it will be a fun ride. i wonder whos way of life will win out in the end....

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 12

It killed me to read Edward trying to move on with Sarah.  I'm not quite sure how Edward will react to the pregnancy.  I want to think he will be happy and want to be with Bella and the baby.  I just don't know if the news will completely freak him out.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

i hope that somehow bella and edward do end up back together.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

yucky flashback

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

yes i'm super excited for eclipse i go tonight midnight showing and cant wait!! bella realises her lies cannot keep her away from edward and calling carlisle showed her that i'm glad she contacted edward and that he's going but what will he do about sarah bella is very obviously the girl he loves he just had some miss information about how she was living, i'm hoping the baby is what spurs him on to get some help for his trauma/nightmares, great chapter now off to the thread for a teaser thank tracy

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Life is so complicated! Even for Amish. And wannabes. I feel sorry for Sarah.  But I guess thats life, too. And don´t we all just hate the fact that others always know what´s best for us. I hope Rose/Em will learn. LOL

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

You don't know how happy I was to read this chapter and see Bella reaching out towards Edward. Yes, Sarah will be hurt but it's better to be hurt now rather than when more time is invested. Thank goodness Edward hasn't had dinner at her house yet.
I so want Bella & Edward to get back together. He still loves her and she him! You do believe in HEA, right?
Oh, yes, please send me a teaser. I lovevthis story!
Btw, you will LOVE Eclipse!

Author's Response:

Oh I have seen Eclipse 3 times now! LOL!

 

Edward could feel the anger for her boiling inside him. He resented everything. The way she left, the way she moved on, mostly he resented how easily he came to her today. “Isabella,” he said unable to look her in the eyes.

 

Her heart dropped. There was no smile, no tearful hello, he had no need to hug her. She had never imagined such a cold reception.

 

“Uh...come in,” she said stepping to the side. Her eyes looking at the ground as she tried to hide the fact that she was on the verge of tears over his icy demeanor.

 

He walked past her and when his back was turned Bella wiped the tears and took a deep breathe. She turned to him slowly her hands buried in the front pocket of the sweatshirt.

 

“So, what's going on?” Edward asked aching to let go of his resentment, but still being distant. He didn't want to walk out even more heartbroken. He didn't want to get his hopes up. Hope for the best and expect the worst.

 

“I screwed up,” Bella began. “Like really screwed up,”she began to walk forward, closer to Edward.

 

“Listen, I know you moved on. I know you started seeing someone else. You don't really owe me an explanation, okay?” Edward said, wanting to get out of there.

 

“What?” Bella balked. “What are you talking about?” she asked.

 

“I went to find you Bella, your sister and her husband made it perfectly clear that I wasn't welcome. I wanted to hear it from you...so I waited. And you came home with some guy and I saw you kiss him. You left, and now your here to tell me your not coming back,” Edward said, walking closer to the door. He was itching to make his exit.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

rose thinks she is helping but she is not helping by lying and when bella finds out she will be hurt and upset, he should have just got out of the car and called out to her and kissing sarah is not the answer, i'm off to twilighted to catch the teaser thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

great chapter, bella dads was more reasonable that i thought he would be and hooray edward has woken up and realised how much he misses and wants her, trouble is he has to go through rosalie and something tells me she wont be hapy,  thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

james deserved it i know it's not the armish way but i wanted edward to hit him, the dreams they are both having some aspects are so in tune with eachothers they both miss eachother lots, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

edward war experiences are brutal no wonder rha man is in need of help, but he's getting pally with sarah whilst loving bella that's going to cause him more problems, i dont  think bella should give her sister her baby her and edward need to talk, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

i take it bella is pregnant then, poor bella what a horrible choice to have to make so she's leaving to protecy her family from shame and leaving edward to be his healing, but a baby he should know he's going to be a dad, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter, but somebody is going to cotton on soon to their relationship, james showed his true colours he is not a nice man, but if edward cant/wont leave and issy wont stay how will it work? thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter, thanks tracy

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Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter, they are getting closer all the time, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

great chapter, edward has a lot of problems, bella is all out for a good time but glad to see she can see the truth of edwards words, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter, bella going for the kiss ummmmm, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

i've started reading your other story a perfect love and then looked at the rec and saw this so thought i'd give it a go, great opening chapter and i'm intrested to read more, thanks tracy

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well, this is a great story. So many unexpected surprises. Your German is perfect! And my dutch husband had quite a laugh with the poem. So I will recommend this story to the German ff.de side and hope you will update soon.

You have put a lot of thought and details to this story which makes is special.

Can´t wait to find out how you will continue. S/E or B/E or B/M? :O)

 

Reviewer: nybellanena Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

Uggghhh NOOOOOO

Reviewer: krstn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Holy Hanna Batman keep them kissing like that  please

Reviewer: krstn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was a great chapter- I loved how it cames together from both of their POV's

thank you

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Bella left Edward with no choice.  Emmett and Rose didn't help either.  As far as Edward knows he wasn't enough to keep Bella at home and from what Em and Rose said and what he saw he could only think that Bella didn't love him and was moving on with her life.  It was so hard to read all of that chapter.  I was so happy to see Edward going after Bella only to have it all crumble thanks to people doing what they think is best for someone else.

I have a feeling by the time Bella finally makes it home she will see Edward and Sarah courting and it will completely break her heart. 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

yes he is but I don't want him to. I want him to wait and I want her to go back to him...

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

What are you doing? Edward doesn't want to marry that boring girl Sarah. You better get Bella back to him soon. Rose and Emmett better tell her that Edward came to see her.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

so stupid!!!

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

Al i kan think is NOOOOO edward don't that and i want to kick emmett en rose..

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

No no no no no no!!!! Edward can't move on with Sarah! I Hate this chapter! WTF? Sorry...would love to review but right now...I'm pissed. Outside people whom they think are helping are just interfering and are screwing up
people's lives. Please let it be a dream sequence and Bella & Edward will talk. Please update soon....I am falling apart here!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

ugh.  poor e and b.  everyone trying to keep them apart.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

I didn't even think about the whole statutory rape issue.

I did a little happy dance when Edward admitted to Charlie that he loves Bella and he decided to go look for her.  I hope Rose and Emmett don't treat him too aweful when he shows up.  I'm still worried about James's part in Bella and Edward's dreams.  You've got me wondering if he's going to follow Edward to Bella.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh thank God that Sarah gave in to gossip and spilled to Edward.  It was just what he needed to get his butt in gear and do something.  So sad that he thinks the baby could be James and not his.  I'm glad Edward is going to Bella and he confessed his feelings for her to Charles.  Here's hoping that Bella will receive him well and allow him to speak and to also tell him the truth about the baby.  I don't expect her to come willingly back to the Amish nor do I expect Edward to leave what he feels he needs to heal.  I am hoping they can find a happy medium where they can work on their issues together and find a compromise somehow.  I also hope Sarah is out of the picture (still don't trust her) and glad Bella has hung on to her morals and not encourage stupid Newton.  Charles reacted much better to Edward's love for Bella that I thought he would and I'm glad.  It must have been so obvious to all but B & E.  I love their story and cannot wait until you write more!  It has all the elements for a great love story!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

hmmm  Charlie is a smart man in this one.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward needs to be truthful to Bella not tell her the rumors. She needs to talk to her first not Rose or Emmett. They will try to send him away.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

thank goodness he is going after her. look forward to them being togehter again.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

at LAST her is going to find her!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

hmmm  they are dreaming together.  interesting

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

hope they are reunited soon.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 9

What do I think? I think that it was brave for Bella to tell th English that she was pregnant ( so no newton to bother), I think Sarah is up to no good - the sweet, innocent act is crap, Bella d tell Edward she's pregnant ( he has the right to know so he can make an informed decision with all the facts) & I think you should update soon! Good chapter but I love B&E together. They make for good times!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

Bella needs to write Edward and let him know that she still cares for him. He needs to know.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Them being apart is killing me.  Thanks for putting my mind at ease about Sarah and Edward.

James is really starting to creep me out.  I should've realized he wasn't just going to fade away.

Still loving this story and can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

poor b....was worried about that happening.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

Please don't let Edward start courting Sarah. She seems conniving enough to trick him into something he's not ready for (like the singalong?).
Can't imagine what is going to happen next & it's making me sick to think we will have to suffer 7 months before the possibility of a reunion.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great story! I tweeted a rec via twifans. Hope it helps!

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