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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 7:43 PM Title: CEMETERY

I love multiple and longer chapters.  You are right.  This story is pretty dark.  But I'm hoping that it will get a little lighter soon.  :)



Author's Response:

I think it will; I'm trying to fight some fluffy stuff into chapter 13 but it seems out of place, so we'll see.

Reviewer: yuiop Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 7:36 PM Title: CEMETERY

so sad what happened to past bella, Loved it, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 12:40 PM Title: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK

I love it!!! I would like to see Bella AKA Lucy, put Edward in his place. That would be funny to see. I can not wait to see how and what has happened with the pack and what the legend says about Bella.

Until next time :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  You may get to see what you want.  ;)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 9:59 AM Title: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK

VERY INTERESTING!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kt187 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 7:52 AM Title: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK

Sounds like another of Bella's children (or grandchildren at least) This should be very interesting!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  We will find out next chapter!

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 6:03 PM Title: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK

That was a really good chapter!! I'm on the dye of my seat waiting to what will happen between 'lucy' and Edward,Peter, and Jacob.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  More to be revealed next chapter!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 4:41 PM Title: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK

Omg that is so cruel to leave it there. I so can't wait till Sunday now!! Awesome chapter even with an evil cliffie! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: yuiop Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 12:13 AM Title: CIRCLING

can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 8:03 PM Title: CIRCLING

this was great i just started reading this story i wonder who it is



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Always nice to see newcomers!

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 6:03 PM Title: CIRCLING

Wow that was really good, was hoping that bella would dominate jasper.  Cant wait to see who is coming



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  That's awesome!  I couldn't decide who I wanted to win so this is what happen.  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 2:49 PM Title: CIRCLING

great chapter. enjoying the story. would have like to see her come out as alpha though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I like someone else's thoughts about that actually.  It's like they are both Alpha's; there's a male and female alpha.

Reviewer: Lily Eris Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 7:49 AM Title: CIRCLING

Lovely! Hmm i wounder who it could be? Maybe the rest of the cullens or the wolves or maybe some newborns come after maria's head or after bella. So many posiblities. I can hardly wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!     You will probably see the next chapter in a day or so...

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 6:50 AM Title: CIRCLING

Oh wow, now that was seriously cool. In a way it's fitting that Jasper and Bella are both Alpha's  as there is an Alpha female and an Alpha Male now. Hope you update some more soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I like how you think...Male and Female, makes sense.

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 5:38 AM Title: CIRCLING

Wow it is good to see Bella standing up for herself.  I am not really surprised she is Jasper equal without their powers being used but I am afraid Jasper would have been on the losing end if the poweres were allowed.  I am glad to see Bella open up a little to Peter and he is starting to realize how much their time together means to him.  I cant wait to see who is approaching them.  It would not be surprising if it is more of the Cullens but I have a feeling it may be the wolves.  Awesome work and really looking forward to the next chapter.

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Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm starting to write more of that in the story and it's so much fun to write.

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 3:20 AM Title: CIRCLING

Alice's whinning is a bit annoying. Lol I can't wait to see what's up next!!

Author's Response:

:) Thanks for the review; I needed it!

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 1:38 AM Title: CIRCLING

Not sure if you tried to post chapter 7, but just in case you are not aware of it. it seems like chapter 6 was posted twice but nothing shows up on the next page.

Now, to let you know about this chapter, I thought it was great to see Jasper and Bella go at it and determine that they are more equal. With out gives that is. I am sure if they were able to use their gifts, Bella would have won. I am excited to see who is approching them. I think it is the wolves but it could be Emmett and Rose also. Can't wait to find out.

until next time :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I needed a nice encoraging one.  Thanks for letting me of the double post.  I don't know how I got chapter six up there twice but it's taken care of.  Thanks!

Reviewer: EASEmama Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 10:03 PM Title: LUCY

I like it!

It's really dark, but there is something in it that makes me think of hope.

Love,
Rachel



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and a damn good one it is.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 10:59 AM Title: LUCY

Wow, Lucy short for Lucifer, 'cause that's not chilling lol. I am really looking forward to the next chapter and i really can't wait for the time when we find out her story as i'm sure that will be really excellent considering the names she has been giving, not to the mention the fact she had Maria's head!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  She has a long story; it will be coming up in the next few chapters.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Lily Eris Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 7:35 AM Title: LUCY

My god..Lucifer...Lucy...brillant. Its also kind of ironic that that would be the name given to her, because Maria once had two sisters, Nettie and Lucy and I am pretty sure Jasper was the one to dystroy the two sisters. Jasper's could have a field day knowing sweet little Bella now goes by the name Lucy...suits her in a twisted way.

Edward really fucked up. I hope she kicks his ass, maybe hides one of his limbs somewhere...possibly his 'tool' if you know what I mean. Sorry I am rambling. I can't wait for the next chapter, I almost had a breakdown waiting for this one, paitence is not one of my virtures but it was worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  You are so right; I forgot about her sisters, huh?  Good things to come.  Good things come to those who wait.  :)  Thanks again!

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 3:59 AM Title: LUCY

This is really great!!! I can not wait for more. I can not wait to see how this turns out.

Until next time :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review...I'm glad you are still enjoying it.

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 3:21 AM Title: LUCY

with Bella's oh so sweet disposition no wonder people call her god of destruction and Lucifer. I cant wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks again...I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 3:06 AM Title: HOME

Holy sh** i didn't see this coming! super good chapter:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I think I may have misled some of the readers...there will be happier times on the horizon.  Peter and Bella will get there sexy times...it will just take some chapters to get there.  Stay tuned!  Glad I was able to shock you!  :)

Reviewer: fanficfan1968 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 2:46 AM Title: RUNNING

I like the story. Excited to see where this goes and want to see what happened with Bella. Want to see how she is going to react to Jasper and Alice and what is going to happen when Edward gets involved, if he does at all. And really can not wait to see what is up with Maria's head and why she is not going to burn it.

Please keep writing and updating!!

Until next time :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I think I may have misled some of the readers...there will be happier times on the horizon.  Peter and Bella will get there sexy times...it will just take some chapters to get there.  Stay tuned!  Thanks...everyone is stuck on Maria's head...I didn't think it was going to be such an atrraction, but I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 11:01 PM Title: LUCY

This is such an original concept.  I really am enjoying it and hope you are a frequent updater!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I think I may have misled some of the readers...there will be happier times on the horizon.  Peter and Bella will get there sexy times...it will just take some chapters to get there.  Stay tuned!

Define frequent...my schedule right now is once a week.  Every Sunday...although I had some great reviews over on ff.net so I decided to update today instead.  I have ten chapters completed so until we reach that it should be once a week. 

"Original concept" is one of the best reviews I've ever gotten...thank you so very much!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 9:34 PM Title: LUCY

hmmm...interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I think I may have misled some of the readers...there will be happier times on the horizon.  Peter and Bella will get there sexy times...it will just take some chapters to get there.  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 1:14 PM Title: HOME

SO EXCITED FOR WHAT THEY DO NEXT CHAPTER!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  It should be exciting!

Reviewer: Lily Eris Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:06 PM Title: HOME

I loved it. I assume the whole Rosalie attacking instead of Jasper was on purpous? Knowing Rosalie she probably didnt feel to bad, probabbly wouldnt have even if Edward hadnt stopped her. Don't get me wrong I love Rosalie but she needs to get over herself. There are plenty of Humans who can not have children of their own and some can't even adopt because seriously that is expensive and you have to be married. I can't wait to next Sunday, such a long wait but so worth it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Yes, it was on purpose...reader request actually!  I hear you!  I never got that part with Rosalie either.  There are plenty of women out there that don't even want children...whatever.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:05 AM Title: HOME

oh .my god, that was such an intense chapter and it was brilliant.  i so cant wait for the next chapter as it is bound 2 be interesting what their reactions to bella are.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I can't wait to post it either!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:16 AM Title: HOME

wow amazing can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:07 AM Title: HOME

I'm confused.  Do Jasper and Alice not know Bella?  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

Yep...check ff.net review response!

Reviewer: yuiop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:34 AM Title: HOME

I love this!! I just found it, but am sad i have to wait a week to read more :( Thanks for the story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:09 PM Title: RUNNING

loving the story can't wait for the reunion and reactions.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.  Reunions and reactions will arrive faster in this story than my last.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:56 PM Title: RUNNING

Can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: Lily Eris Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:51 AM Title: RUNNING

Hmm...I wounder if she means Phoenix or Forks? I tink its the latter but I guess I'll have to wait. The whole 'God' thing, Love it. I also like that she doesnt plane to burn Marie. I assume thats why she only has her head, like trophy maybe? Can't wait for me.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for commenting on the fact she doesn't plan on burning Maria's head.  You're the first to comment on that and I love that part.  It makes Bella seem overly cruel and sort of demented; I think 200 years of war will do that to a girl, you know?  Thanks! again!

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:12 AM Title: RUNNING

your chapters are getting better and better! I just can't get enough of your Bella she is so freakin badass!!! I cant wait until you tell Bella's history or god of destruction's hip with story. But why is Bella not planning of burning Maria? and what will happen when Alice and Jasper meet up with them? gah!! i have so many questions! please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Updates should come every Sunday, unless I get bored.  :)

Reviewer: Lily Eris Cullen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:54 PM Title: COLLISION

I love the story, I can't wait to read more? Does Peter know who Bella is to the Cullen's or does that come latter. I wounder how Jasper would take to knowing Bella was with Maria? I wounder how Peter would introduce the God of War and God of Destruction..great name by the way. It is really hard to find stories were Bella has or will be with Maria, and I really love those kind of stories.

Keep it up.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much...stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:45 PM Title: COLLISION

hot damn they were hot



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:52 PM Title: COLLISION

Wow awesome job I think I am going to start reading more Bella/Peter stories now.  I hope you can update soon.

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Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:39 PM Title: COLLISION

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: COLLISION

Yay! Finally Bella is in the story.  Can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.  Love you Babe!

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:52 AM Title: COLLISION

dyyyammmm that was a freaking awesome chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bella is so totally kick ass! I cant wait to see how this story unfolds. please please pleas update soon, as you can see i'm not above begging.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 10:37 PM Title: COLLISION

well i have to admit. you have got my complete attention now lol... this is one story i will gladly wait for and follow until it ends.. good job



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.  Very sweet review.

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:05 AM Title: RUN DOWN

that was very interesting! *I cant wait for more; I've always loved Peter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you like it so far.  Stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:16 AM Title: RUN DOWN

Great start, can't wait to read more. Plz update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:42 PM Title: RUN DOWN

this is really good cant wait to see peter and this demon goddess



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:43 PM Title: RUN DOWN

i really love this story. i like that it's not the usual edward and bella. i can't wait to see where you take this... i hope you update asap and often lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Should update in a couple of weeks...stay tuned.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:22 PM Title: RUN DOWN

good story so far, please update soon. I know you said a couple of weeks but this is very interesting so far. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I will try my best.  I'm planning on finishing chapter seven tonight so we'll see...

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:06 PM Title: RUN DOWN

Love you!  Keep writing. :)



Author's Response:

You're awesome!  Thanks!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:37 PM Title: RUN DOWN

like it so far. looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:28 AM Title: RUN DOWN

Ok, i am loving this story. It's sad about Peter and Charlotte but i'm glad that there won;t be another person (apart from Edward) between Bella and Peter. I gotta say this was so worth waiting for and i seriously can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you like it so far.  Sorry that there won't be a post for a while.  Some readers were asking for a tease and here it is.

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