Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
That was the perfect way to end your wonderful story, although once again it made me cry. I'm really getting to be a weepy old broad! I'm so glad you told me to come read this tale of love and family, and magic. I absolutely loved all of it and thank you so much for writing it. I can't believe people read and didn't review, shame on them!
Author's Response:
i'm thrilled you enjoyed it, your reviews are the only ones i need
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 69- The Mom Card, and a Toast
That was quite a day! Taylen was the last one I thought would phase, and I'll bet it shocked her and her parents. Then to have Keegan stroll in and promptly imprinted on Tay. Unless she imprinted on him, oh who cares! That is a good reason to have a pizza party and celebrate. Nice to see also that the zip hasn't gone out of Jared and Kim's marriage.
Author's Response:
check out hey it's me, and the life i belong to as well. characters from there will be in my rewrite series!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 68- Somewhere Only We Know
Leave it to Aaron and Lua to do the phasing and imprinting thing in their own unique way. Now Jared can watch his little girl become a wolf's imprint, like Kim was for him.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 67- Chocolate Milk and Pound Cake, Hot Damn!
How time flies, the kids are growing up so fast,but then they all do. It's funny Aaron hasn't phased yet, especially with vampires in the area again. Wonder what the mystery is there?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 66- Fuck Bee's
Boy, is there anything scarier than your child in danger? That was a real close call. If Jared hadn't been able to phase, Lua may have died before they got her to help. Very nice that all three kids are cool with their dad being a wolf.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 65- Gawking Like A Fool
That's cool, them naming the babies for their parents. Lovely, unique names, for unique baies. Thank God, Kim had no problems with this delivery, so there's only joy this time.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 64- Not A Monster, A Protector
That was some pretty exciting payback, and I don't blame Jared one damn bit for punching out the guy's lights! It's probably a miracle he didn't kill him.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 63- Rambo Has Mommy Radar
Mr. Andre has no idea what a buzzsaw he's about to run into! Kim is my hero, the woman is fearless in protecting her family, rifle and all. Let's see if her mommy radar is working!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 62- I Don't Care It's My Baby Girl
That son-of-a-bitch is going to kidnap children! Specifically, the children of Quileute shape-shifters. He obviously has a deathwish. Wait until they get a hold of this snoopy idiot!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 61- Melting the Ice
This guy with the smart-ass idea for a book could be a problem. Hopefully the tribal elders can come up with a solution. On a happier note, at last, Jared and Kim have opened up to each other about another baby. Sounds as if they got a real good start on one, too!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 60- Family Pictures
This is definitely something Jared needs to talk over with Kim. It's no doubt scaring hell out of him, thinking how he nearly lost her last time. If they don't get things squared awy, it could ruin their relationship.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 59- Ayoladay
Sounds like life is really good for the Thails. Even the encounter with the clown worked out pretty well, since goddaddy Paul scared hell out of the clown!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 58- She's Mine, Gimme!
That moment between Jared and Mingan was pretty powerful and had me tearing up again. Did I mention I love stories that make me cry?This almost wasn't a happy ending, so it's much better because of that fact.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 57- The Most Pain In My Life, The Last Thing
Don't you dare let this girl go out like a light! She would take the light from Jared's world, too, and her daughter would never know her mother!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 56- You Wanna Get Kicked?
I love weddings, but I really, really love babies! This is so cool! Aaron Samuel Uley, Emily and Sam are so happy and the pack is happy for them.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 55- Silent Fury, Missing Sister, Proud Brother
What an exciting day! Kim's first published book and her dork of a brother apologizing. I guess it doesn't get much better than that!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 54- That Was A Bit Much
It's funny, but I have never thought of Bella that way at all. If she wanted to be something, or do something, I think she would find a way. Just a thought. Kim was really hurt by Elan's words, and I think Jared was kind of too. Brother Elan is going to have some big fence-mending to do here.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 53- Telling Our Parents We're Going To Be Parents
Jared and Kim may be characters in a story, but them telling their parents the big news, got tears in my old eyes, for sure! What passed between the two of them and their respective parents was simply beautiful.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 52- Don't Worry Silly, It's Yours
That was so sweet, that Paul thought it as wonderful as Jared and Kim. Two cubs coming to the pack, how exciting! The copy of Tale of two Cities was very nice, but I think Kim's present won first prize!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 51- You're Going To Name The Baby Kim, Right?
Emily should have known Sam would be happy about a baby, and not worry about phasing or not. It was cute that Jared and Kim wanted to be the first ones pregnant, but they have lots of time.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 50- Glowing Moonlight
This sounds like a great place for a honeymoon!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 49- I Married The Boy
The hioneymoon from the pack, as thanks for saving them from Drake, was most thoughtful, and a lovely gesture. The mode of transportation from the reception was rather unique, to say the least! How many brides get a wolf-back ride home from the wedding?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 48- The Most Cherished
Boy, I don't know what you could have done to make that any more perfect! Just a lovely, heartfelt ceremony and reception. A wonderful way to start their lives together.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 47- We're Here For Jared
These pre-wedding same-sex get togethers are really a lot of fun, and a nice tradition. I don't remember doing anything that much fun, when I was young.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 46- Yellow Roses and Wishes
I sure hope this doesn't mean trouble is ahead, because life looks really good for Kim and Jared right now. Their wedding is coming together, his art is selling and now her first book will be published.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 45- The Portrait
Jared's showing went great and he sold a lot of his art. How nice that he kept the portrait of Kim, his lobster.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 44- Abductions and Taffeta
Kim really hit the trifecta with her wedding dress, finding the perfect dress, at the perfect fit and the perfect price, on sale! It doesn't get any better than that.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 43- You Don't Want to Mess With Me
Yaya almost messed up there, giving Lulu the impression she wasn't happy about her and Elan getting married. It's good they can all talk to each other, and loaning the dress she hoped to use was sweet of Yaya. The fool never knew he passed up the best woman he would ever meet. Look at the wonderful children she raised.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 42- Fate's Foot and Shower Contentment
When it's right, you just know . If Jared and Kim are getting married in June, I'll bet Elan and Lu aren't too far behind.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 41- The Healing of Imprinting
Poor Collin, dead because some madman thought he could steal magic. That was so sad, not only for his mother but the whole pack and their imprints. Another example of the bond between imprints.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 40- Bait and Stolen Life
The crazy little bastard! He has got to be out of his ever0-loving mind! God, I hope the girls can pull this off, because otherwise, the pack is done for!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 39- Growing Tension, and Forming Plans
Somone, or something has stalked and trapped the pack. What the hell for is the big question. Who has them why they want them and how to get them back!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 38- Taken
This is most mysterious. No scent of vampire, but a bit of Sam's blood. Now Quil is missing too. Something weird is happening, but what?
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 37- Breaking and Entering
That was so sweet and romantic! Great minds , thinking along the same lines.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 36- Cart Races and Tears
I can just picture the walls in their room. How wonderful to be able to do that. I'm so envious of talented people! Such a labor of love!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 35- Nice Day For a Imprint Werewolf Wedding
I love weddings, real or imagined, in books or on disc. Sam and Emily's was great, and the topper was Billy proposing to Aiyanna. How nice that the Blacks and the Greystones will combine into one large family.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 34- Guaranteed Soul Mate
Stag parties and girl get-togethers, all the fun stuff that happens before the wedding. Sam and Emily are the first, but certainly won't be the last.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 33- I'm Not Going Anywhere
It's one of life's little ironies, that the two deadly enemies have helped each other out so many times. If wolves and vampires can get along, anyone can!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 32- Shaking Knees, a Hero, and a Birdhouse
Man, just when everything was going along smoothly, this had to happen. Thank God for Carlisle Cullen. Fixing and healing a werewolf isn't something you can expect your local g.p. to know how to do. Kim is going to be frantic!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 31- Night of Firsts
A rather wonderful way to christen their new home. Young people starting out together always kind of chokesme up a little. This chapter was very lovely!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 30- Wolf Girl
What a wonderful thing for Mingan and the pack to do, that beautiful home! That will bring a tear to your eye, did to mine. What a sight to see the girl in the red dress, riding the back of a golden wolf!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 29- Gilded Frisbees and Cliffdiving Couples
How nice for Leah to have found Joel. The pack and all their imprints cliff-diving was quite a mental picture! Life is very good in La Push, for now.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 28- Water is Clear
Okay, what's up with Leah? Something is going on with Mingan, too, if Pauls reaction is anything to go by. That was cute that Paul, of all the wolves, was the one to settle Seth down.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 27- Jaw Droppers and a Palm Kiss
Yaya and Billy Black, who knew? Kim is happy for her mom, and so is Elan. The pairing up is ongoing, so maybe there's hope for Leah.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 26- Return to Normalcy
Kim's lucky to be out of the hospital after only two weeks. Now time will be the healing power they all need. It will be a while before Jared can let down his guard again. He just came too close to losing Kim, to just put it all aside and act like nothing happened.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 25- Feels Like Home
Nicely wrapped up episode, now that Vance is dead and burned to ashes. Don't much blame Kim for being angry, fear will do that to you.Now maybe she can just rest and heal.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 24- Awaikenings and Forehead Kisses
This had to be the best of days for all concerned. Kim will be okay in time, her mom knows Jared's secret, and is good with it. Now all I have to worry about is Jared hunting Vance, hopefully not alone.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 23- I Can Do Anything A Boy Can Do
Thank you Lord! I think Kim may be okay now. That story Elan told Jared was so touching, It's awful to wait in a hospital for a sign from someone you love.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 22- Heart
I'm amazed Vance didn't outright kill Kim. It's a damn miracle she's even this much alive. Too bad he got away before the pack got a hold of him and tore him to pieces. That would be the very least that should happen.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 21- Blackouts
My God, poor Kim! That monster will torture and kill her if he has the time. How can Jared find her in time? I hate this!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 20- Precious Time, Precious Picture
Yaya is a fortunate woman. to have the loving family she has. That sounded like the most wonderful birthday!. Now, you have Jared saying that awful things are happening. Not good!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 19- Naked Monkey Lamp
Sounds like a lamp you might want to get rid of. That's so nice, Kim's brother and her best friend. They're like sisters anyway. Now, if only Yaya could find someone, like maybe Mingan?
Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18- Vamp, and Spend My Life With You
Looks like Bella wasn't the only one who took the legend of the third wife to heart. That was so brave of Kim, and selfless, but scary as hell for Jared. It also cemented Embry and Morgan's relationship. They owe Kim a lot.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17-Fast Forward, and Morgan
Embry and Morgan, Jacob and Renesmee, Quil and Claire, Jared and Kim and Sam and Emily. Makes me wonder who's next. Maybe Paul ?
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 16- New Introductions, Driving, Jacob, Faye
That was such a sad story. You wonder how Mingan could go on wothout his Faye. If not for Jared, he might not have. It's great that Kim has a surrogate dad now.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 15- She'll Be There
Never was a fan of Friends, so hadn't heard the lobster analogy. Makes sense, though. I'm glad Kim figured it out on her own and is fine with the magic. I always thought the shape-shifters were pretty damn cool anyway.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 14- Hello Jared
Well, why not? We knew Kim was a smart girl. It really didn't take long for her to figur out, either. The good news is she doesn't seem to be freaked out by the situation.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13- Yaya, Mingan, Worlds, and Suck it Rachel
That often dreaded step, meeting the parents, is out of the way. They all seem to like each other, too, even brother Elan. I hope Jared will now feel comfortable enough to tell Kim that he's the golden wolf.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12- Sunbeam
Of course Kim would be drawn to the golden wolf with green eyes, how could she not? Sure scared her big brother, though. Wait until they find out the truth.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 11- Aliens, Boots, and Ungrateful Basterds
Kim is worried about Jared being around her family, but I think they are great! I love her mom!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 10- I'm Gonna Marry That Girl
These short chapters are just like popcorn, or potato chips, you get started and just can't stop. Sure boosted Jared's confidence to hear that Kim has liked him all these years.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 9- Catching Flies, and Confessions
Well, just one embarassing thing after another! Her hot looking mom, then Louise spilling about Kim's crush in front of Jared. Doesn't get any better, I'll bet.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 8- Hide Jared, or Run?
Funny, this started out to be a good day, but seems to be going down hill. What's the problem now?
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7- Dance it Out, and Squeals
This is like the stereotyped boy meets girl story, squared. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Kim reacts to Jared being a wolf. The more I find out about her, and Lulu and Yaya, the more I like them all.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6- Butterfingers
I'm thinking that Kim is enjoying this. She and Jared are cute together, as they get to know each other.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 5- Apple
Jealous ex-girlfriends, oh what fun! Kim is still in the dark as to what's going on with Jared. It no doubt will be explained sooon. Let's see if Elan can embarass his sister. I'm betting on him!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4- Phase
So, what has our young wolf so angry all of a sudden? I'm betting it's his imprint, in the grip of some other guy. Will there be some explanation as to why the boys are phasing? I wonder.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 3- Stares and Shoes
Unless I'm very much mistaken, Jared has just imprinted on Kim. This should make both of their lives more interesting!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2- Five Days
I like this family already. Kim has quite the crush on Jared, she just isn't a fanatic about it. I also like her friend Louise. They both sound like nice girls.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy
You suggested I read this to get to know the Greystones, so here I am. Ilike your stories , so knew you wouldn't steer me wrong. This sounds like it may be pretty good, so I'll go now, and find out! See you later.
Date: 15 Jun 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
I so just read this in one go and am now crying... in a good way :) Thank you for such an awesome story!
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it! hope you read more
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
Aww...I just can't believe it is over. I have cried and laughed my ass off though. You have written an amazing story here and I am so glad I got the chance to read it. Thanks for sharing with us. : )
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i'm thirlled you liked it that much. and i researched native american names so thats where they came from for the most part. i'm going to be starting my third story this weekend, i hope you check that one out too. thanks again!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 65- Gawking Like A Fool
Very unique names, I like them..
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 26- Return to Normalcy
Ya know I started out reading this story cause your other one was so good. I didn't really think I would like it, but thought wth I'll give it a shot. I am surprised I like it so well. I don't usually like the whole imprint/werewolf thing. But this is a really good story. Can't wait to finish it.
Author's Response:
i'm glad your enjoying! i hope you keep liking it
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
loved the ending.....so sweet
You covered so much time in this story, more details in some parts would have added but I know when the thoughts are going in your head it is hard not to just get them all down. Keep up the writing, you will just continue to get better and better!
Author's Response:
glad you liked it!. it may not be much but its my first story ever and itl always be special for that. i'm posting a chapter on the other today hopefully.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 31- Night of Firsts
okay, definately can use some more emotions and details in the sex scene.................
Author's Response:
haha im gonna try and do that in my second story. the first one i wasnt as brave, im not holding back now though
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12- Sunbeam
nothing new to read so figured I might as well try your other story. I love it! I am enjoying the different characters, (that is one of the great things about your stuff) and the deeper look into the whole imprint thing. Plus it is so sweet!
Author's Response:
glad your enjoying it frekles! this story was my first i call it my baby haha. its a long one but keep at it, hope you like the ending.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 57- The Most Pain In My Life, The Last Thing
This story had more up than I expected. Phew. I can't wait to read what happens next; I'm actually kind of nervous. Eek.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 10- I'm Gonna Marry That Girl
Too cute! :-D
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5- Apple
Meanies! Can't wait to see what big bro does...
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy
Ooh, Imprint story. This is looking surprisingly cute. Love the banner BTW!
Author's Response:
thank you!