[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2015 6:31 PM Title: Confrontation
ok great ending to this short story but what will the volturi say when she appears human? thanks for sharing on here ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. It means a lot to me :0)
Date: 02 May 2014 4:42 PM Title: Rebooting the past
Bummer no cubicle fun times!
Author's Response:
Lol, this is one of the few stories I wrote for a larger readership...
Date: 02 May 2014 4:14 PM Title: More revelations
Wow I didn't expect this turn of events! I am glad that Bella & Edward fixed their issues in the bedroom. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. It's very unexpected for me to receive comments on this story :0)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 9:20 PM Title: Confrontation
interesting ending.
Date: 27 Sep 2010 6:03 PM Title: Rescue
Vickie is such an idiot
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:25 AM Title: Confidences after Twilight
She's going to kidnap Reneesmee isn't she? To blackmail the Cullens. I don't know, don't trust her, don't trust anyone who'd help a terrorist period. Youd think Edward would have figured that one out...oh I forgot...Bella is being stupid again..
Author's Response:
Jeez, if you want to know already, go read the whole thing on FF.net. I don't know if I will have time to put the three remainding chapters on TWCSLibrary today...
Milk
Date: 19 Sep 2010 3:13 AM Title: Research and discoveries.
I can't believe that Bella would be the type of woman to use sex as a weapon after all her whinning about Edward not giving in. Pretty disgusting actually, withholding affection is so immature and unloving. So where's Tanya when you need her huh? I think Bella needs a good dose of reality.
Author's Response:
Well I don't know about that. Bella is just pissed off because she thinks the courses Edward enrolled her in are too hard and that she will fail her semester. And she was about to surrender to Edward and reconsider her decision, actually, but then Edward aggravated her with his indifferent attitude towards their sick classmate. Yet she's been having sex with Edward every day ever since she gave birth to Renesmee and was turned. I don't think that withholding sex for a few nights will affect their relationship on the long term. Besides, as Edward pointed out, there are still the Science Library cubicles if it comes to that. I don't think Tanya would help solve their problem anyway...and it won't last for very long.
Milk
Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:35 PM Title: Confidences after Twilight
she is whiney isnt she
Author's Response:
If you mean Vickie, yes she is. However, someone complained about my Bella being a pain in the ass(on FF.net), which confuses me a little for I don't think she is anything but kind and compassionate. Anyway, my favorite character remains Edward ;-)
Milk
Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:06 AM Title: Meeting over Skype
i just discovered Fog Over Dartmouth & can't wait for an update! I truly prefer this genre b/c it's what happens after BD. Those are my favorite (2nd being AU-supernatural versions).
Keep up the good work!
Cyndi
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:39 AM Title: Meeting over Skype
hmmm wonder what sets off the volturi?
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: First Day on Campus.
Um, I'm having trouble swallowing the idea that Mike, or anyone, could have snuck up on Emmett & Edward while they were feeding. Edward's mind-reading ability aside, they would have detected him with their other senses long before he could have gotten close enough to see them in action. I assume, from the timeline placement of this story, that canon is true for this too. In SM's stories, Edward tells Bella he will never take her hunting because they fall into their instincts & vampire-ness when they do, which means their senses actually become more acute, and remember, their natural prey is human. They would have smelled Mike the Human immediately, and possibly even diverted their attentions to him instead of the animals, the way Bella did on her first hunt in BD...so, I just thought you should keep that in mind.
Author's Response:
If I'm following you, even SM got it wrong when Edward took Bella hunting the first time. They both should have jumped on the humans who were on Bella's path area instead of going away from them.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:40 AM Title: Getting ready for college.
Pretty good start, though there are some confusing parts... I'm glad that Jacob is not there with them, I always felt that the imprinting business made them kind of trapped w/Jacob--unable to go anywhere without him. So, are you saying that Bella remembers nothing but nightmares--not her wedding, not her honeymoon, not the pregnancy or birth of her daughter.... I don't think I like that, so hopefully that is not how this will be.
Author's Response:
No, Bella remembers a lot of things, however she doesn't remember much about the period when she had been dumped by Edward.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 5:42 PM Title: More revelations
hmm was wondering about vickie and the docs relationship
Author's Response:
For more of Fog go on FF.net I will publish chapter 15 later on, probably this evening.