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Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:36 AM Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading this fanfic! I fell out laughing w/ quite a few sections so my family had to come see what was up...Of course they don't get my fascination w/it, but no worries.

Looking forward to reading more of what you have written!

 

Cyndi



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it- laughing at what I wrote is even better! Thanks so much for reading! <3

Reviewer: littlefaith85 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:57 PM Title: Epilogue

Cute story!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:27 PM Title: Epilogue

so glad that they are getting their HEA. the phone calls from the neighbors were too funny! glad mine do not have my phone number! i have had the joy of neighbors banging on the wall god i was mortified! very satisfied but i coulda died!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 18

thank you for the insight into your writing and reasoning it does make sence.

so were is this gonna lead? i mean he is still in london and she is still in the states.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

glad to see we are moving towards the resolution of the problems with everyone.

so happy to see that daddy c pointed out how over dramatic everyone was being!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 16

well what ang did was wrong but what is up witht the way alice is going off on bella it is not like edward is a teenager or in a relationship. they were both consenting adults! alice needs to calm the fuck down and stop being a bitch!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

it is about time that alice and rose see that they have been self-absorbed. edward was a gent in not wanting to get too attached when it was over before it began. wonnder what is up with angela? did she break up with ben?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

as aparent thank you for the PSA, loved the tidbit of how to tell if it's sex, too funny, very true though.

 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

poor bella she feels left out and left behind

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

ooo... who the girl?

what is gonna happen tonight?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

just a quiet normal day wonder how the night will go....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

mad donna's sounds so cool!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:46 PM Title: Epilogue

WHAT??? just leaving it there? okay fine but it was a great story nonetheless. great job. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

looks like eddie is trying to get closer to bella. how can a & r not notice how much the wedding talk is getting to bella?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow do not know if i would like that. i think i would want to have the big question popping done with me being the only one saying yes in the room. bella is gonna feel so left out

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

poor girl, everybody does different stuff behind closed doors. to each their own.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 6

poor bella, all alone and surrounded by love

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

ok what is up with edward? spying on him what was he ding at 2 in the morning?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

eddie seems to be an asshole. but he better watch out or santa's gonna bring him an ass whoopin' at the hands of emmett!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

that is more like the edward we all know and love!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

well edward sounds like a dream!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

i just read what you have done of 'the girlfriend experience' i liked it so much i thought i'd read som more of your stuff.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:04 PM Title: Epilogue

NOOOOOOOO !! Oh please tell me there's a sequal..

til next time

ek

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:50 AM Title: Epilogue

This was a really great read that I thoroughly enjoyed. Loved the OOC of the characters in it.

Thanks for post...

Reviewer: conceivablyeternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hi I really love this story. Its great.

 

But I thought I would correct you on the spelling of Edinburgh. It's not Edinborough. I know it sounds pernickity or picky. But just for future reference.

I live there and trust me we get even more wierd and wonderful spellings.

Also just a quick question in this last bit about James are you implying that anal sex is wrong? And disturbing? Or are you just putting it in as the characters perception, because of what she has been through.

Cause I totally understand the latter and James seems like a total freak.

Cause I wouls just like to say lots of people like anal sex, and aren't disturbed.

God I sound like a total bitch, sorry no I really do like your story. I can't wait to see what happens with it. And where it goes.

I just had to ask that.

Anyway I will get back to reading and such.

Reviewer: CdrIvanova Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:50 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh, very cute story ... love an almost-British Edward!

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Read and loved..

Can't wait to see how it'll turn out for 'em,

I need to refresh my memory on this out.

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