Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:51 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Love love loved this story. You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 15 Aug 2021 12:33 AM Title: Ten Years Later
Love seeing into their future.
Date: 14 Aug 2021 10:40 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months
So glad they are back in the playroom.
Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:18 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
I'm so glad that the delivery went well. Glad everyone was healthy.
Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:18 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
I'm so glad that the delivery went well. Glad everyone was healthy.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 10:25 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
I am glad Esme finally decided to talk to Edward. It took her long enough. 3 babies!!!!!!! Wow.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 7:48 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Well, that was interesting. Carmen was jealous of Esme.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 7:18 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
What in the world was in that envelope that Charlie gave Esme?????? I can't wait to read Esme's pov.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 5:22 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
So much fun in the new playroom. Thomas was definitely having too much fun with his phone call to Edward. I can't believe Esme invited Tanya and her mother. I'm glad Bella was honest with them. Hopefully NOW Esme will see her mistakes and apologize to Edward and Bella.
Date: 13 Aug 2021 2:08 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
I hope what Emily said to her grandmother really opens Esme's eyes.
Date: 12 Aug 2021 8:13 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months
Their lives are coming together and they are closer to Happily Ever After.
Date: 12 Aug 2021 3:34 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year
Beautiful wedding!!!!!!!!!! Edward is the best.
Oh no, how did Esme find out they were returning from their trip. She didn't even know they went.
Date: 11 Aug 2021 1:03 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months
Boy Tanya and Esme both are a piece of work. Tanya I'm not surprised, but Esme, I definitely am. Does she not think Edward is lovable??? I just don't understand. Loved that Bella had Edward's back when it came to the school board. Also, loved the grocery store scene. Lol.
Date: 10 Aug 2021 2:02 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months
Wow, Esme must really have a problem with Bella even after her dad came and talked to her. Front page news. I would definitely say the cat is out of the bag now.
Date: 09 Aug 2021 4:16 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Who was in Bella's apartment and how did they get in?????
Date: 09 Aug 2021 3:32 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
So glad the kids were happy about Edward and Bella being together. I can't figure out what is Rose and Alice's problem.
Date: 09 Aug 2021 1:58 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2021 9:19 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Wow, what a scary situation for the kids. Love little Evan. Glad Charlie was as understanding as he was.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 4:20 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
So much going on in this chapter. Loved Bella's pay back from Edward. Lol. Glad Edward got legal custody of the kids. Still don't like Tanya gets them 50%. The only reason she wants them is to hurt Edward. So glad Bella and Rose are there for Emily.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 3:50 AM Title: The Second Six Months
Loved Bella playing with Edward. I am worried that James is going to cause problems. Will he and Tanya help each other? That could be bad.
Date: 07 Aug 2021 5:00 PM Title: Christmas Break
Love the cottage.
Date: 07 Aug 2021 2:38 AM Title: The First Six Months
I am glad that Emily feels so comfortable talking to Bella about those sensitive subject. Bella gave him very good advice about handling Tanya.
Date: 06 Aug 2021 4:33 PM Title: Be My Master
Bella had everything thought out.
Date: 23 Mar 2019 12:01 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
AMAZING JOURNEY
Date: 21 Mar 2019 3:42 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months
this is so good
Date: 18 Mar 2019 11:35 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
so so good
Date: 21 Jun 2018 4:15 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I was not expecting this ending! It was sweet but a huge tear jerker! You really did them right!
Date: 18 Mar 2018 3:58 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Having a diamond etched is cost prohibitive, and may be illegal if the diamond was registered.
Date: 18 Mar 2018 12:12 AM Title: Christmas Break
?????? No electricity, so her bath water should have stone cold. PNW in winter is cold as ice. Literally
Date: 17 Mar 2018 8:33 PM Title: Be My Master
Good job, very well written.
Date: 16 Sep 2014 5:05 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Lol I was wondering what was going to happen with Edward's tattoo! I guess not everyones Dad walks around in their underware like mine ;-)
Date: 13 Aug 2014 9:11 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Read this for a second time. Still makes me tear up. I do wish you would reedit this story and correct the errors
Date: 26 Jul 2014 6:05 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
There are tears streaming down my face. Thank you so much for this beautiful story, its a gift.
Date: 30 Oct 2013 2:23 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Not sure if you'll get yhis review. This is by far my favorite fan Fic story. Was absolutely beautiful. I cried terribly at the last two chapters. I am looking forward to reading all if your work. I'm wondering of there are other places to find work you have written?
Thank you!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 5:41 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Oh my, the fillings I had when I read the end was, I don't know how to explain, but wow. Thank you for a great story.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:48 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I read this fic so long ago when it was a o/s. I never knew you continued it, When I came across it two days ago I was pleased to see it. I loved the o/s and the fic itself was wonderful, however the end is what made this one of my top ten fav fics of all time.. You gave me a drama, angst, loving and unquestionalby the most rewarding fic I have ever read. Thank you for coninuing. I am so glad I found it. I will always love it.
E/k
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:27 PM Title: Be My Master
OK, so this E is crazy, outta his mind stupid, but this is fanfic, so, there you go. :-)
Date: 09 Jul 2012 8:04 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:11 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:09 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:33 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:24 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:07 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:35 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 12:15 AM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 11:02 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:28 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:22 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:29 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:36 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
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Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:11 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
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Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:16 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
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Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:44 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
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Date: 28 Apr 2012 8:53 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
i just started to read this story jesterday, i couldn't stop reading at all. I loved this so much and i'm kinda mad at myself for not reading this one sooner. it was a beautiful story. And i'm glad you told us what happend to seth i was wondering about that for a couple of chapters.. the ending of this was sad and sooo fitting. thank you for saring you're story
Date: 15 Feb 2012 3:33 AM Title: Be My Master
you are a tantalizimg writer that's for sure
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:34 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I am crying my eyes out! Brilliant story, amazing writing. Thank you for sharing such a amazing story and creating a unforgettable ExB story. We all know that those two will always belong together no matter what the situation. I am still crying though. Just brilliant! Have a safe and happy holiday!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading - beth
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:42 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Omg!!!!!!!!!!! You have got to warn people before you do that. I was all excited about all those hot sexy chapters then all of a sudden BAM tears. NOT COOL!!!!!!!!!!! Other than that I loved it. Now i need to find something to cheer me up.
Author's Response:
I wanted a definite end to the story. I cried when I wrote it - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:32 AM Title: Be My Master
this looks awesome.. I can't wait to read the rest of your story.. I did have this on my favort it for a while. God I glade I final reading it.
awesome..
Author's Response: Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 03 Nov 2011 7:44 PM Title: Be My Master
loved, loved,loved........they had a beautiful relationship, and were true to each other and didnt let the drama come between them....it is how we all strive to be......cried like a baby and the end!!!!!
Author's Response:
I creid writing the last chapter. Because of how their relationship was I wanted a definite ending to the story and having Edward die seeled too easy. Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:00 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Wow. What a story and what an ending. I cant remember the last time I cried so hard while reading a story. They had the type of relationship mst of us only dream of. Sometimes I even felt a little jealous of the depth of their love. Such an excellent & moving story. Bravo my dear, BRAVO!
Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 16 Sep 2011 6:17 PM Title: Be My Master
What a beautiful chapter, a complete story in and of itself. I look forward to reading the remainder of the chapters. XxOo - Fangs
Date: 09 Sep 2011 12:34 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
This story was so well written and I loved it. I've read it now three times and each time the ending is beyond expectations. Never did I see their forever going this route. In someways it reminded me of the Notebook...I don't know why except possibly the amount of tissues that were needed both during and after reading it. Both characters, especially Bella were exceptional ....their constant love,strength, and commitment were what we all dream about. Sorry to see it end, but am looking forward to your next story.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Aug 2011 9:09 AM Title: Ten Years Later
I loved reading this story, your Edward and Bella are very refreshing characters. I lmostly liked how strong they are together and how you didn't have that whole holier than thou Cullens BS. Bella is a very stong character in your story and I wish there were more stories like this, she isn't the naive pushover character that we always read and Edward too, his an equal in the story and it makes more enjoyable.I also like how beela goes for what she wants and doesn't let Alice, Roslie or Esme deter her form it. In essence she has good strong backbone. Thank you
Author's Response:
I have never liked how Bella was portrayed, especially in the movies. I feel she was enitrely too weak and it would take a strong person to sgtand up to that family. Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:02 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
My computer just shut down to update but I am totally pissed! I tried to leave a comment and it didn't let me. I had to recoup myself because I was crying so much. I thought this was just a simple BDSM story . you had a very good story line. This reminded me of the relationship I have had with an older man but nothing like this. I love that they finally found each other and the perfect life they deserved. I don't know what to say because I feel so emotional I will keep your story close to me and read it again and again. I love it!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much 'm glad you liked it - Beth
Date: 01 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
ALERT!! Don't read this without a packet of Kleenex!! LOVED IT.
Author's Response:
Thanks - Beth
Date: 25 Apr 2011 10:07 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
What a beautiful story...this ending has me in tears as I finish reading it in my office at work. Thank goodness I work alone here...no one to explain myself to.
Thank you so much for sharing this. I will read it again and I'm sure I'll cry over the ending just as hard as I have this time.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:18 PM Title: The Second Six Months
Good writing. Interesting story. Good lemons. San Fran was hot.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:28 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I was away on vacation when this chapter was updated. Things happen for a reason and I didn't get to read it until I got back home, which I think is a really good thing. Explaining to several people why I was crying while reading wouldn't be easy, especially in another language ;)
When I began reading I was to say shocked and surprised might be close. Of all the ways for this story to end, this wasn't one I would have ever bet on. It makes it even a better ending since it came so unexpected. Would Bella have been able to do what Edward had to? The fast and easy answer would be yes. She was always so strong and had such a will, but it was all because of Edward. Without him, she probably wouldn't have been the woman she was. I wouldn't have seen Edward asking Emily or any of the other children what Bella asked of her. That was all Bella's love for Edward and her family.
It is really hard to see this story end, it has been such a wonderful and amazing journey. Thanks for sharing it with us. But most importantly, thanks for ending it as you did. I am guessing it probably was a tough choice, as good choices tend to be. It takes an amazing writer to do things in such a way to surprise readers from start to finish as you have.
As weird, odd and out of place as this might sound, another reason for me thanking you for this chapter. My sinuses were really, really dry after the trip, the crying is helping them, a lot.... ;) Probably TMI but I had to tell you, sorry!!!
Author's Response:
I knew people would either love or hate the ending and I was pleasantly surprised by how many people loved it. It was a hard chapter to write - I cried the entire time. I wanted to give the story a definite end and having Edard die would have been the easy way out I thought. I am glad you liked it - hope you had a good vacation and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 21 Mar 2011 1:52 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
OMG!!!!!!!! i loved ur fic .. the storyline; the characters; ur style -- i felt like i was there with them and part of their lives ... u made them real .... and i'm still crying over the senseless death of bella and how broken edward was ... thank u for having edward and bella together again even tho in another dimension/afterlife
i'm also not a major fan of esme so i was interested to see her alienated by her own behaviour ... serves her right ... what sort of mother was she that she could sacrifice her son's happiness in an attempt to hide her past -- yes she had a breakdown but her lies led to so much suffering ... i'm not sure if her breakdown was due to her guilt, her lies, her fear of exposure or her inability to control the situation; or a combination of everything - either way glad she had minimal influence on edward/bella and edward/bella/kids
also glad that alice, the control freak everything has to go her way pixie didnt manage to interfere in edward/bella's relationship
upset that this fic is complete but lookng 4wd to reading more of ur work
xoxo ety
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 20 Mar 2011 10:54 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Wow... that was definitely amazing. I balled my eyes out the entire time. I love that you didn´t make us suffer long and reunited them in eternity quickly. I have enjoyed taking this ride with you tremendously and these two will definitely be missed. It´s always so sad when the really good ones end. Thank you so much for sharing your phenomenal talent with all of us. I´m definitely looking forward to more of your great stories in the future! Great ending to an even greater story!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:56 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I have to admit this is the 3rd time I have tried to read this over the last few day. I would cry every time and I would feel so bad for Edward. I did like the ending though. Thinking of them running off into forever makes me smile.
I hope loved this story from beginning to end. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
I cried writing it = thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 20 Mar 2011 9:30 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
that started out real sad but i liked the end of it they were together at the end i liked this story alot and liked how bella was always there for edward and helped him when she needed him and always new what to say to him i liked it alot i also liked the way u decribed the scences and the playroom
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanka for reading - Beth
Date: 20 Mar 2011 2:43 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
What a tear jerking ending.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:49 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months
What on earth is Esme's problem.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:20 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
i have been reading your story since practically the beginning. i have just balled my eyes out and now am all stuff up from the emotional roller coaster you have just pull us thru. the story was great and you have such a gift for writing. i thank you for all your hard work and time that you have put into this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 11:36 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I enjoyed this very, very well written story from start to finish but this is not the ending I was expecting, to be left in tears but still smiling. Congratulations.
Any chance you are going to continue Human Sexuality 101? I lurve it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
HS will update tonight or tomorow morning!!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 9:55 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I am sad that it is over but it was a great ride I enjoyed the whole thing even this last chapter that I cryed my eyes out. I think they are the perfect Edward and Bella that had a very happy life together.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 8:05 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
HEAE 'eternity' ha
<3
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:05 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Oh my Gosh, that was the saddest and resloved ending ever. I cried...
Great Story
Author's Response:
Me too - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:00 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I have really enjoyed reading your story and I will miss your Edward and Bella very much. I love how you wrapped this storey up, it was touching and made me feel how much love they shared. Thank you for one of the best stories I've ever read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:44 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Wow, that was an INCREDIBLE ending! I almost wanted to stop reading when I read what had happened, because I almost started crying so much, but I held on and boy was it worth it! You could post some outtakes if you are not ready to let them go quite yet, I am sure we wouldn't mind ;)
Author's Response:
I am actually taking suggestions for outtakes people want to see - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:50 PM Title: The Second Six Months
Is Edward sure the kids are his? With Tanya's past it's a good possibility they aren't.
Author's Response:
They are - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Mar 2011 12:38 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
How did you manage to pull an HEA?
You had me sobbing and snotty! I
just have to say Thank You for a
brilliant story!! I look forward to
read what you do next. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:25 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Lady you did it beautifully. This is one of my favorites. I'm sad to see it end, but it had a happy ending. Thank you for you story it touched my heart. Now when will you be updating Human sexuallity 101? It has become a favorite also, as are all your stories?
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
HS will update tonight or tomorrow morning.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:12 AM Title: The First Six Months
It's hard imagining them with the age difference. Edward's kids would be better with Bella.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 3:43 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
that was a beautiful ending!!! i basically cried through the entire thing!!! LOVED the story!!! cant believe that its over!! Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I'm not sure if I feel sad with grief or happy they are together for eternity.
Author's Response:
Understandable - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Mar 2011 12:07 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Right, so I wasn't expecting that. You seriously made me cry! However, I loved the ending :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Mar 2011 12:07 AM Title: Fifteen Years Later
I am so sad this story is over i am gong to miss these two. it was such a beautiful ending and you made me cry bb.
can't wait to see what you come up with next
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Mar 2011 11:35 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Briliant story.... this last chapter made my cry, but it was perfect.
Thank you for writing it.
Kudos from Portugal :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Mar 2011 11:22 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Whaaaaa! Sob. Sob.
This story is truly a gem and I am actually grieving over the loss of these two characters.
Ok, I must now go find a new happy sexy story to perk me up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Suggestions - Diamond in the rough, A sub Search or Be My Sub if you aren't already reading them should perk you up!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 11:03 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Well, I have to be honest here. I hated this. I am depressed and unhappy. I was so happy with where you left the last one. Maybe this is because 15 years went by so quick, one chapter, and the horribleness happened. It doesn't feel happy....I know that is life, but I loved the story so much and now I'm left ......yucky
Author's Response:
I knew not everyone would like it but I tried to stay true to the characters. I feel it is more of a beginning than an ending - thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:41 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
Sad. They died.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:26 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later
this haas been an awsome story thanks you and i love the forever thanksagain
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth