Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

Love it, I enjoy reading mature Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:30 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:06 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

Love this story- a good mix of love,  laughter, lemons, and actual plot! Esme is crazy- and I love that you did not make her change overnight. I still don't think their visit together will be a game changer- I could totally see Esme just continuing on about how Bella took her family away from her. I also love the kids- it's been a nice progression for them- seeing Em at 16 now, as opposed to so young, and being the protector of her brothers. Anyway, always happy when this story updates- look forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy it and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:03 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

As always I loved it...I have my own story going and i rec´d your story to to the great readers of FanFiction.net... It is truly amazing... even though Esme is a royal bitch..just saying... can´t wait for the next chapter.. loving that the kids all side with Bella... Bella and the kids living a tree house was really funny... let´s see how lunch with      Bitchme´goes. next time..lol

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you very much and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:39 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it all so much.  The house is GORGEOUS!  I wonder what is up with Bella?  I mean, was the passing out after orgasm merely what the French call "La Petite Mort" or what exactly?  I hope that she can go to the doctor and find out soon.  Hopefully this won't hinder their ability to conceive.  I love everything about this chapter, keep up the amazing work :)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 8:36 AM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

Bella is a badass loved it James in the hospital priceless.  Is Esme ever going to pull her head out of her ass????



Author's Response:

Maybe - thanks for reading

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:46 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

OMG I have never hated Esme in a story the way I hate her right now... I am not even done reading the chapter yet nad had to coem type this so I remembered to say it if I change my mind by the end of the chapter I will let you know. 

 

Okay still hate her right now!  LOL

I am glad that James is caught and find it funny that she beat the hell outta him!  that is funny!

Loving the story and I am so excited to see where you go from here!



Author's Response:

Sometimes it is fun to hate the always loveable character - thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 1:49 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

Well everything seems to be falling into place, except for Esme.  I can't believe her.  I am glad that Edward and Carlisle are still talking.  He didn't do anything wrong in this mess.  I hope Esme can accept thing.  Her son and grandchildren are happier then they have ever been...why can't she see that??? 

I am glad that James has been put away.  He deserved what he got from Bella! 

I can't wait to see how their lives are in Chicago.  I am sad they will be away from Charlie and Sue, but I hope they see each other often.  Great job..thanks so much.  I just love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Esme doesn't think anyome is good enough for her baby boy and it could cost her their relationship.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 6:01 AM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

ahhhh alot of turmoil. bella can kick ass. i am so proud of our laura croft. she will go to the end. i am thrilled she taught tanya a lesson. she is a mama bear and i am glad those kids know they are loved. they have 2 great parents that love them. man in the office was hot. way to go bella and keep your man by your side. i know he won't ever stray. you keep him on his toes. to bad mama esme has warmed up to you yet. she needs to come to peace that you are part of this family. i love carlisle and charlie they are great dads and role models. oh i love this story. they communicate their relationship is strong they have strong family values and loyal friends. i hope bella is right about rose and alice. but it is their loss that they are losing this time with bella. it is too bad being so jealous. i so love the story

i am thrilled their going to chicago. glad he took the job and thrilled she got a job where she wanted one. love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:20 AM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

As always, another amazing chapter!!!

I really kind of hate Esme.  The bitch needs to mind her business and stay out of E&B's.  I love that Edward layed down the law with her, and I think it was awesome that the kids sided with Bella over Esme.

I always figured James was the creepy stalker.  I am glad Bella kicked his ass!

That was totally hot the way Bella showed up at the school and they had SEX IN HIS OFFICE!!!  That was hot and dirty and all sorts of fuck-awesomness!!!

I can't wait to see what fun the going away party and the move to Chicago brings!



Author's Response:

Gotta love office sex - thanks for reading.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:57 AM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

That was incredible, even though I say it every time I review, I seriously mean it.  I am so proud of Edward and Bella, they are so strong.  I also so happy James was finally caught, even if I wanted to help join in the beating.  I love that they are moving to Chicago.  Also, loved reading about the Tanya/Bella smackdown, once again, wish I could have helped there.  I cannot wait to see what else happens next with these two.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:44 AM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

So fantastic. I can't wait till they move to chicago. I so hope his mum takes her head out of her ass.

Don't suppose you know how much you have left of this story because i am hoping it is heaps i will be sos sad when this is over.



Author's Response:

I think there will only be 3 or 4 more chapters.  It is hard to end I love writing this E & B.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

Not everything can be always good, or always bad, life tends to stay in the in-between. Esme is a proud woman. She has had control over her family for a long time, what she assumed was control and the best option. She was mistaken. She forgot the most important part, asking her loved ones, if they were happy. Her self-assurance made her blind to the reality in front of her. Also, it made her see things, according to her, not to the ones involved, Edward, the kids and Bella. Her strong will and mistakes are costing her dearly. Will she be able to realize things, to make the necessary adjustments? I hope so, especially for her.

The kids are impressive, wiser beyond their years and really sure of what they want, need and love. 

As for what happened to Bella with James. It was bound to come, sooner or later. Bella being able to defend herself was impressive and helped, a lot. If it hadn't been for it, perhaps James' information would have never gotten into the system and get him the help he needed.

They are moving, it will bring lots of changes and adventures. Can't wait!!! Nor for the party and their week in the Keys!!!!



Author's Response:

Very good observations and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:27 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

It seems to be coming together for them.  Lets hope Esme sorts her head out soon .

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:00 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

Best Parts:

"That's just it mother I don't care what you think any more.  I mean it, find a way to come to terms with this.  Bella has done her part and now you need to do yours and find a way to get along with her.  You need to talk to her, until she comes to me and says 'I talked to your mother' I do not want to hear from you.  Don't call, I won't answer.  Don't e-mail, I won't open it.  Don't make anymore unexpected trips to Washington.  If you show up on my doorstep, I won't let you in.  I will however call the Chief of Police to have you removed for trespassing and if you think he won't you need to remember that he is also Bella's father.  The father who loves her, sees how happy she is and is happy for us." 


 


I turn to my father, "You are welcome anytime.  You have been nothing but supportive and I have a feeling most of what has happened is as big of a surprise to you as it is to me."  He nodded but was still speechless.  I gave him hug.  "It was good to see you but I think you should return Chicago and Dad, come whenever you would like but leave Mom at home until she resolves her issues with Bella.  I will let you know when the invitation includes her."  With that I turned and walked away to go be with my family.

 

We know Grandma doesn't like Bella for some reason and we aren't asking to know what the reason is, but we do want you to know how we feel.  We stand by Bella.  She would never do anything to hurt you or us, whatever Grandma thinks Bella has done she is wrong.  None of us are happy with the way she is treating Bella, we love Bella and don't want Grandma to hurt her feelings any longer.  We know we have to be respectful to Grandma but if we have to make a choice we want you to know Bella is our choice."


"We want Bella to be our Mom.  I don't know if it ever has or will come up but we would be fine with Bella adopting us and truly being our Mom.  I don't know if I would feel comfortable calling her Mom because she isn't that much older than me but she does every thing for me a mom is supposed to and we want her to know that is how we think of her."   "Holy shit Headmaster you got married?"  The lunchroom instantly fell silent.

 "Yes I did Mr. Black and watch your language."

"Sorry Sir, you married Bella Swan?"

"Yes, over Christmas and she is Bella Cullen now."

"Congratulations, she is one hot piece of..."  I raise an eyebrow at him daring him to finish that sentence.  "What I mean is she is, you're one lucky bast..."  I put my hands on my hips and gave him a look that said really?  He had the decency to look at floor sheepishly.

"Mr. Black I'll save you the detention and just say thank you and watch how you talk about my wife in the future."

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:03 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

What a great chapter!  So much going on :)  Edwards mom is a real piece of work but I hope she comes to terms with Bella.

Thank you for the update and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:58 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

I really do love how they take care of each other and they love each other so much this story is the very best i have read in a long time and that says something because i read alot lol i like how bella kicked james ass that was awesome just like bella is



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Esme is a real trip in this story, I really hate her stuck up ass. I think she should have the baby with him but after she gets at least a year of some work under her belt. To me that sounds far

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:44 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

yay they got married. so glad that they got the perfect holiday and the perfect wedding, too bad they had to come back to reality. and they get to start reality with bitchy momma e! sigh

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:32 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

ok seriously what the fuck crawled up esme's ass??!?!?!?!? lady is a selfish bitch!any good mother only wants their babies happy, healthy, and loved. so seriously what the fuck? daddy c needs to tell her to sit down and shut up! maybe spank her?

so glad that they are moving forward in their lives. charlie and the grandkids thing was so sweet. definately a shocker with kyle and toms real life jobs. so awesome to have friends in high places!



Author's Response:

She is convinced that she knows what is best for Edward and very controlling - that often kind of attitude oftens ends up biting the person in the ass.  Thanks for reaading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:32 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

what the hell is momma e's problem?!?!? and why is she being such a bitch?

yay for bella in all areas of her life excpt the future mother inlaw.

can't wait to see the backlash from the story in the paper...



Author's Response:

While my mother-in-law wasn't nearly as bad as Esme it still took her a while to like me because I had the nerve to maryy her 'baby boy.'

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

These just can not seem to catch a break! Now we have someone breaking into b's house taking things, over protective esme messing in their lives, guilt tripping ex in laws for the kids, still pissy best friends and now nosey secretaries at work! They do not have nearly enough sexy time for all of this shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:48 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months

So glad everything is out in the open with the people they both care about. Not sure why alice and rose are being such bitches but I am sure you will let us know at some point, but I am glad to see that bella and edward are standing up for themselves!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:21 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

so close to being open with everyone.

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 11:55 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Oh this getting good. Can't wait to see what is next!!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:35 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

What a sweet chapter. Their time in England was just great. I didn't know that some german aspects of christmas markets are adopted outside Germany like the Glühwein. So cool.

And the proposel with the following wedding was also a great moment in this chapter.

Can't wait for the reaction of Edwards mom. That should be "funny".



Author's Response:

I didn't realize Dickens had a German influence either until I started researching this.  I took some liberty with the dates - the festival is acutally in early December.

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:38 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year

well again tanya has proven she is unfit, thankfully this time it was big enough to get the attention of the courts while not harming the kids.

the 2 years is almost up...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 4:01 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months

well she has met the parents and they got to see her not only with eddie but with his daughter, taking care of them both. so sorry that emily had to go through all of that but it will bring bella and emily even closer and tanya's influence and reaction should be reflected on her in the courts.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:23 AM Title: The Second Six Months

tanya is crazy! nuff said on that. the poor kids, i hope eddie gets them soon. bella taking charge was hot!

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:02 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

loved the chapter!!!  im really happy that edward proposed and that they got married!!! the wedding was very romantic!!!!  it was reallt thoughtful of edward to have given bella a trip to England!!! i was really happy when they got back to seattle and from that everyone was there to congratulate them for the wedding!!!! nut then esme had to go and kill the mood!!!! someone seriously needs to slap her!!! cant wait for more!!!!! :D



Author's Response:

THank you and thanks for reading!!

Beth

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:08 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

It was a wonderful Christmas, and an even better New Year's. Bella was pleasantly surprised, just knowing the first part of the trip, Edward was clever in the rest of the plan. Having Charlie there to help him was great, if not, things might not have gone as smoothly as they did.

It was a different kind of wedding, just the two of them, without the kids or Charlie, but it's what worked for them, and what would make things with Edward's parents easier. Or so Edward thought. How did Esme find out? And why is she so upset and making a scene in the airport? It isn't fair for Edward.

It was good for Bella to finally be able to talk honestly with her friends. They hadn't been true friends. Hopefully things will get better now.



Author's Response:

Esme didn't know they wre married or getting married until she saw the sign at the airport - she is there ofr another reason.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:22 PM Title: Christmas Break

Well bella sure is a responsive little thing isn't she?! So sweet to see them moving things forward by way of their feelings. It is odd but nice to see a more laid back easy going dom/sub relationship.

Author's Response:

They engage ina soft form of BDSM, especially since they do not have a lot of physical contact with each other yet.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:59 PM Title: The First Six Months

Wow bella is smart and very level headed! Good balance here for eddie.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:02 PM Title: Be My Master

So happy he gave it a shot. My guess he is too!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:57 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Wow that was such a beautiful wedding so frickin romantic what girl wouldn't say yes.

I hope Edward tells his mother to fuck off or maybe she will finally pull her head out of her ass.

AS fo the babies please tell me your going to write this story atleast through the first baby i would so love to read that.

Keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

It will definitely contintue through the first year after they have moved.  Then I can't decide if I want to do an epilogue 10-15 down the road or do a couple of chapters that span about 5 years each?

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:27 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

The most amazing vacation with the fairy tale twist but then have to come back to the wicked mother-in-law. 

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:04 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

dang and I have always liked Esme til now....damn it! Oh well life goes on...I sure do love this Edward and Bella and I really love this story....looking forward to more soona dn I am glad that you are such a good writer.  Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us all and keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:25 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

That woman needs to go away.  She has no right to judge them, she should just back the F off.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:07 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Oh my god that was soooo good .car hood sex so hot loved it esme is going to shit her self lol she needs to get over her self it's edward and bella's life they are happy and so are the kids can't wait to read the next update

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:49 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

What a wonderful christmas present! Poor Edward he can never get a break from his mom,when is Esme going to put on her big girl panties and just accept them.

Author's Response:

Edward has reached his limit and she is trying to sully what, to him, is the best time of his life.  Esme's day of reckonging is here.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:21 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Wow, that was incredible!  I am so happy for Bella and Edward :)  That was a WONDERFUL surprise!  Their rings are gorgeous.  I am happy Edward wants to have a baby with Bella, hopefully she will agree to this.  I wonder how Esme found out about the marriage?  Wonder what will happen now?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Esme didn't know about the wedding until she saw the sign, she is in Seattle to try to make amends.  She is still trying to control the situation and not admit she was wrong.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 1:42 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

WOW - LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter!!!!!  The wedding was perfect and so was the very hot sex on the lamborghini!  Whew!!! Thank you for the update!  If I could give you double the coffee - I would :)



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

This story is great! It is so great to see the charaters from Twilght being imperfect. Tanya being a even bigger b#$tch, Esme and Carlisle's marriage is on the rocks and Rose and Alice are little, inmature babys- sounds like real life to me! <!-- /* Font Definitions */ @font-face {font-family:"Times New Roman"; panose-1:0 2 2 6 3 5 4 5 2 3; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:auto; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:50331648 0 0 0 1 0;} @font-face {font-family:Georgia; panose-1:0 2 4 5 2 5 4 5 2 3; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:auto; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:50331648 0 0 0 1 0;} /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman";} table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-parent:""; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman";} @page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.25in 1.0in 1.25in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} div.Section1 {page:Section1;} -->

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:55 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

oh no mommys not happy...can't wait to see what happens next post soon please

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:47 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

What a fantastic chapter!!!  I loved the surprise trip to England and all surprises Edward included.  The sex on the lamborghini was un believably mind blowing!!!  That is mental candy that I will be holding onto for a while.

The proposal was beautiful and the wedding was perfect.  I loved every word of it.

Excellent chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much and love reading Use Somebody.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:58 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

I love that he also surprised her with a wedding!  It was perfect!!!  I thought he would propose, but that was it.  The whole holiday seemed perfect for everyone. 

I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

I thought about a proposal but Edward didn't want to give people moret imte to question and gossip about them.  Now they will have to accept things.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:13 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Loved this chapter and I really didn't expect that Esme would be there!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:47 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

That was a lovely marriage.  As for the lemon that was hot.  I hope his mother is not going to make too much of a scene.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:11 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Loved it esme is such a bitch i loved that bella stood up to her again i hope edward kicks james ass lol i am so hooked on this story it never fails to keep me wanting more

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:10 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

These two have been through so much!  They deserve to be together and not have to deal with all the crap!

I love that Charlie and Sue started getting to know the kids and is involved with them more. 

What the hell is up with Esme?  I thought since they showed up on Thanksgiving and Esme wanted to talk face to face that things would be better between them not worse.  It is sad that Esme can not be happy for them.  Who cares how old they are or their age difference.  Get over it Esme and anyone else that has a problem with it. 

I am glad that Tanya has no rights to the children. She wasn't good for them and didn't want them anyway. AS for her parents....I am not sure about them.  I wouldn't let them see them unsupervised that is for sure.  I think the kids should have some say in if they want to see them! 

I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job as always...thanks  so much!!! 



Author's Response:

Esme is VERY controlling and Carlisle and Edward are both just starting to realize that because it has always been disguised as concern and helpfulness. She has  a hard time coming to terms with the fact that she will not be able to control Bella and Bella wants the best for Edward - even if it means confronting his mother.

Thanks for reading - B

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:06 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

So Esme is a sneeky old bitch I loved Bella telling her off.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 9:16 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

I am so glad that Edward got his school stuff sorted out.  Bella was totally right to tell Esme what's what.  There is something seriously wrong with Esme.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 8:59 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

thanks as always awsome chapter

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 6:10 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

If I haven't said it before, I will say it now...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!

Your writing is amazing.  You tell such a fantastic story with just enough detail to keep me informed without boring the snot out of me (as most professional writers do).  The lemons are beyond hot and the character developement is outstanding!

I loved when Bella came into the school board meeting with her posse.  It was awesome and I swear I could visualize the whole thing go down.  Yes, she is the submissive in this story, but she has such a powerful presence that she really blows me away.  I want to be this Bella, you know?

The scene in his home office was unbelievably hot and I think I may need to read that part again just so I know I didn't miss any details (that's my story and I'm sticking to it).

The way they care for each other, both as D&s as well as their vanilla relationship is amazing to read.  Their love and devotion to each other is breath taking.  With each chapter, I fall more and more in love with these two.



Author's Response:

thank you and thanks for reading

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:08 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Small towns are a blessing and a curse.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes they are - I grew up in one.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:44 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Loved that Bella is so strong-willed, when she wants to be (or should I say is allowed to be by Edward).  I really did not like reading about Esme's involvement with Tanya but sometimes that happens.  I hope that she can learn that it hurt Edward and still hurts him that she would do such a thing and they can work on making their relationship better now.  I knew the witch-hunt would come eventually, but I am glad that it made Edward realize that he can move on from FCA and go on to better things/places in life.  Cannot wait to see what happens next.  Also hope they find the stalker soon!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 12:50 AM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

So, So, Sooo, good!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 7:43 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Whoa, I truely am having trouble understanding Edward's mother, although I do see my daughter going through something similar with her second husband's Mom, but my daughter is the one who came with the 2 kid package.   Anyhow, Edward's Mom paying off Tanya is disgusting, Tanya's comment about not wanting the kids or Edward to begin with without the money almost makes me want to vomit.   James is a one sick puppy....eeesh!  Bella's got balls, loved what she said to Edward's Mom.  But where are Carlisle's balls?  What a pussy!!



Author's Response:

Esme is used to having control of Edward and Carlisle.  Bella will not have her controlling Edward of the kids.  Bella went after and got what she wanted - Edward.  She is not going down without a fight.

While I don't agree with Tanya's reasons - sadly there are women out there like that.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 7:28 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months

:)

Reviewer: LAURENCEPL Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:24 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

I really love your story very much ! Your Bella is amazing I love her so strong !

can t wait for more, thanks to you for updated  

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

All of Forks found out, and as expected there were reactions, not good ones, but they knew it would go this way. One of the biggest shocks was the news Tanya gave Edward. Esme loves her son, but her way of loving him, isn't good, right or fair. She assumed she could handle his life from a distance, and it isn't fair for him. Edward felt really bad because of his mother's actions. Tanya's, sadly he expected. Now she is out of their lives, it's kind of sad, but she wasn't there much anyway. Bella has been there for them. The kids know it and rely on her.

The witch hunt was unfair, but sadly expected. Bella's explanation was really good. It's like a new toy everyone wants to figure out, and when they can't they get upset. Unfair, unjust, but that's how life is, sadly. Fortunately, they had big help by their side. Edward never expected such kind of help and support. Still the damage was made, and they are starting to put together their new life.

It seems more than logic that the stalker be James, funny how just as the restraining order was over, things began to show up again. Lets hope it doesn't escalate.

As for Bella and Esme's argument, sadly it was going to end like that. When we refuse to see things from the other's perspective, it can end badly. Bella is trying, really trying, but there's only so much she can take.



Author's Response:

Esme is very controlling and used to having some tyope of control over Edward even from afar.  Now she has Bella, who only wants Edward happy, to contend with and Bella isn't willing to hand over any control to Esme.

Edward became used to being on his own so to speak with Tanya and seeing the people who came to his aid at the meeting makes him realize even more so that Bella just wants him and how good she is for his family.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:59 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

I really truely love this story and I love it more and more each tiem I read a new chapter.  You are doing such an amazing job telling a story that is worth reading!  I look forward to more chapters and posts and please know you have this fan fiction fan hooked.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks you very much and thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 4:10 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

brilliant chapter - I loved it!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 3:22 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Fuck this story totally owns my ass god i love it.

keep up the excellent work

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 3:05 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

I loved the Halloween costume idea. Really enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 1:53 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

Bella doesn't  play. LOVE HER. It's funny, because she really does have all the control in the relatiohship, and not in a bad way. She just always has his back. I like that. They are a good combo, and the kids are great also. I also like that you have written a bitchy Esme. There are very few fics out there that make her a pain in the ass, rather than sweet. I like that she's a little bit salty, and not the kind of person you want around.



Author's Response:

While I loved my mother-in-law to death it took her a few years to warm up to me as I was the one to marry her baby boy.  She fully came around when I gave her a grandkid after being married 6 years.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:41 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

busy chap

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:40 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Oh wow I love this story A LOT!!!!!! I cant wait to read more of it!!!!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 5:12 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

I am enjoying this story, I've been reading it most of the weekend between interuptions.  I understand the problems, legal and otherwise that Edward was having with Tanya and appreciated your detail.  I think Bella gives great advice.  That being said, I see the main topic that keeps at the forefront of this story is the age differece and people's reaction to it.  Now THAT I do not understand.  I can understand the fact that he was her headmaster at school and that this actually started before the end of the term being the huge faux pas.  That would make a lot of people uncomfortable.   But you described Edward as handsome, hot.  Unless you are not telling the truth about his looks and he looks much older then his age, haggered and mid to late 40's I can't see where a man in his mid to late 30's and a woman of 20-21 (at the age they started to 'come out') would turn anyone's head.

Since when is a man of 35, 36, 37 an 'old man'???  He is years away from middle-aged at this point.  I have been confused since the beginning of this story for this reason but the last few chapters with Charlie, the Cullens, Rose and Alice's reactions have blown me away!  Men don't often show their age at all during their 30's and even early 40's, some could easily pass for mid to late 20's.  I actually turned and looked at my husband and asked him point blank if a man he knew to be in his late 30's walked in with a woman of 21 on his arm if people would even turn their heads or question it, and he immediately said "Are you kidding?  NO, it happens all the time, nobody would say a thing."  I'm not saying this just to nit pick, I'm saying this out of knowledge, my Dad was 13 years older then my mother, they looked like a perfect match on their wedding day and were married 52 years before my Dad's untimely death.  My great Grandfather had 10 children when he lost his wife, he hired a live in nanny, (turn of the 20th century, around 1900).  the live in Nanny was 15 years old, 2 years later he married her and they had 8 more children and were married until his death.  I know..it happened like that a lot years ago, but still, no one even turned their heads.  Ok, I'm rambling here, but seriously, if people on the west coast are that tight assed and judgemental I'm so damn glad I leve on the east coast...eeeesh!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and the review.  The age difference has to be one of the main focuses - the first chapter was written for a Forbidden Lemon contest.  And it was forbidden , by societies standards on almost all levels- teacher/student, 18/35, he was married, and BDSM, which the general public may not understand.  He is no longer married or her teacher that only leaves his age and BDSM.

Forks is a small town and it will cause a stir there - people know them and it would naturally raise questions of when it started.  When they go out in Seattle they turn heads because they are a handsome couple and are not under scrutiny because of the age difference for the reasons you mentioned - she looks older, he looks younger and it is not as big of a deal.  But in a small town where everyone has their nose in everyone elses business it matters to them and everyone has an opinion they just can't keep to themselves. 

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:20 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

ru roh...cat's definitely out of the bag...   I really enjoy reading this story its great

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 10:21 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

The kids are awesome!  I am glad they are so close with Bella.  They are all so good for each other.  I just don't get what Esme problem is.  She is going to give up her son rather then be happy for him.  That is crazy!!!!  It is awesome that Charlie and Sue are so supportive and Calisle too.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:11 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

I love that Edward has put his foot down with his mother.  She really needs a serious kick in the ass.

The cruise was a really cute idea.  I love that Evan wants Bella to be his mom.

The play party was very hot and Edward has admitted that he wants to marry her and have a baby with her...love it.

I am a little concerened about the stalker that Bella seems fairly oblivious about.  I hope someone stops him before it goes too far.

As always, excellent chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Some of the most open and honest things I have heard have some from children - who don't know to censor their feelings.

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

The mystery is solved. Everyone in Forks now knows who Edward's girlfriend is. It must have been a huge shock, since no one had recognized her yet. Did Charlie see the paper yet? Has he called Bella? Perhaps he is waiting for Edward to give her the news.

What is with people and their opinions about Bella and Edward? It seems that some of the ones that should be happy and glad, just keep finding reasons not to be. Bella's friends and Esme seem to have something going on deep that prevents them from seeing and acknowledging their happiness. It's not causing problems between Bella and Edward, but it is causing them to feel uncomfortable.

The worst was that the kids heard and saw their grandmother's reaction, and that was really sad, Esme should have been more careful, or perhaps she didn't want to be careful. 

The town's reaction will be interesting to see. Can't wait for it!!!!



Author's Response:

Sometimes it is the people who should stand by you not matter what that let you down the most -  due to their hang ups and preconceived notions rather than the truth that is  right in front of them.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:58 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

it was brilliant!!!

Reviewer: InLovewithEric Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:21 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Excellent chapter.  I hope Esme gets over her hangups soon - clearly effectign the children. 

 

The you know what is about to hit the fan - cannot wait to see how you deal with it.

 

Excellent chapter as always.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

OMG, fu*king amazing, I love this story.  From the playparty to the graduation, so much detail.  This is the first role I've read where Esme was such a bit*h of a mother.  I love it!  I love that fact that E is standing his ground.  Now let the juices flow since the that the cat is out the bag.  Let the EC games begin.  Work them E!!!!!!

Hurry next chapter pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

PS.  The secret admire will no doubt be part of this as well!



Author's Response:

GLad you liked it and thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 7:08 AM Title: Be My Master

Esme's behaviour on Bella's graduation day was the last straw.
She was warned to behave by Edward, Charlie and I am sure by Carlisle.
It was classless for her to behave so poorly.  She didn't even make an effort. Instead she had to go and make things miserable for Bella on the most important day of her life.  Esme is selfish and hateful. 
Tanya was/is a horrible wife and mother and was treated wonderfully by Esme. Bella has been wonderful to Edward and the children and has been treated dreadfully.  It is a sin to treat someone as good as Bella so badly.
I am glad that Edward stood up for Bella but I would like to see Bella stand up for herself.  Esme needs to be shunned forever.  There is no coming back from what she did. 

Author's Response:

Do ou know Esme was good to Tanya or if it was genuine?

Bella did stand up to Esme in Chicago on the sunporch but in a setting like her graduation she ignored things rather than create a scene in front of the kids.  In most ways, Bella is much more of a lady then Esme, regardless of upbringing.

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:28 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Best Parts:  

"I have told her several times, she doesn't need to apologize to me she needs to apologize to Bella and don't try to tempt her with some expensive gift, that would only prove Bella's point that mother thinks it is all about the money."

 

"I guess that explains the book."

  

"What do you mean, what book?"

  

"The first edition of The Nutcracker that we gave Bella, one of the maids found it in the room she stayed in after you left for New York.  It was on the desk with her address lying on top of it.  I didn't tell your mother because I wasn't sure what had happened between them."

 

 

 

"Before I start the meeting I need to address the issue of harassment.  When a man repeatedly asked out a woman or does so in sexually suggestive way, if the woman feels uncomfortable by these advances and says she is uncomfortable and they continue that is a form of sexually harassment."  The women were nodding their heads.  "Let me clue you ladies into something it is still sexual harassment if it is a woman asking a man out."  That had several female teachers' eyes going wide.  "I want to make this perfectly clear, I am not interested in dating anyone at this school.  I have witnesses that I am saying no and please stop asking me, if you continue to ask me I will take it as harassment and act accordingly.  Have I made myself perfectly clear?"  There were mumbled yes' and nodded heads.  "Good, let's get this meeting started then."

 

Charlie was amused by the fact that everyone wondered who Bella was and never considered it could be his daughter, she was the only Bella in Forks. 

 

 Plus this is her weekend, she has worked really hard to get to today for me, for us and if you can't at least appreciate her efforts than I prefer you just stay at the hotel tomorrow and not spoil what should be her day."

 

I no longer care what insane notion you have in your head for hating Bella, I warned you in Chicago not to force me to prove I had already chosen.  You are not welcome in our lives until you resolve things to my satisfaction with Bella and it will take her explaining to me that it is resolved not you.  I am sorry to say I don't trust you.  Do not call, e-mail or show up in Forks until you have talked to her."

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 5:24 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

I love it!  I know they are strong enough to weather this too!  :) Its all good

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 5:20 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Edward is not a child or even a younger man, but a full grown man that is being making his own decisions for years.  Esme needs to realize that he is not a teenager, because that is exactly how she is treating him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:42 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

What is up Esme's Ass she needs to pull it out.  Shit is going to hit the fan in Forks.  This will bring Tanya out of the woods to try and cause problems cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:53 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months

I am now addicted to your story!! Love it!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:52 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

so much happened in this chapter. so it seems the cat is out of the bag bella and edward are together. man the girls i can not figure out why they choose not to back up their friend. shame on them. esme what is your deal. the kids and edward are happier than they have ever been. i am glad that ev said what he did about grandma not caring for bella. she needs to know they see it and they love her. man she screwed up. i love that charlie stood up for his daughter and edward warned her not to make him choose. especially because their relationship is not just of boyfriend and girlfriend it is don/sub. i think they have a stronger relationship than most people. they do not lie and they ahve no secrets and what ever happens between them is whatt hey want. they have had to fight to get where they are and be damned if someone is going to come between them. she picked the wrong battle. edward and bella will preveil. i hope she comes to her senses. if not i hope carlisle continues to try and have a relationship with his son and his grandchildren. i am thrilled that bella graduated and at the top and early. she worked hard and deserves it all. i am worried as to who sent the flowers? who wants to do harm to her. i guess we will be finding out soon. i love it all, thanx for writing



Author's Response:

Because of how they started their relationship and the potential for stupid misunderstandings they both insisted on total honesty from the beginning.  They both recognized that even if they heard something painful it would be the only way to work through things and have their relationship survive. 

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:23 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

great chapter!!! that was really nice of edward buying bella a car for graduation!!!! and its pretty funny how now everyone in forks will know that they are together!!! :) cant wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

I so want to slap Esme up side the head to knock some sense into her.

I am a little confused however i am sure they got married in their thrid year from the first chapter maybe that is coming up next chapter.

keep up the excellent work



Author's Response:

The first chapter is the entire one shot I wrote.  It includes a five years later part in which they are married but it doesn't say exactly when they got married.  They go publis in their third year but are not married yet.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:25 AM Title: Be My Master

I love this story a lot! Just found it, really into it. I like that it is about their relationship and the kids, not just the lemons (which are still wonderful, haha). I just like the balance. Crazy sex can still have a plot mixed in. Esme is a strange bird...still wondering what her full deal is.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 1:11 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

Esme is really having a problem with Bella, rather unfairly.  Whose Bella's stalker?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:04 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

OMG who was in her appartment James?????  I am so upset with Esme tisk tisk LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:32 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

WOW, this was very entertaining.  This story just gets better and better.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:22 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Oh, oh! This isn't good. Someone was in Bella's apartment snooping around, what for and why, there's no clue. But it isn't something to take lightly. Bella might not have liked the locks and security system, but they will give Edward and Charlie piece of mind.

As for the picture and Edward being seen with Bella, it can be a big problem or something that goes on lightly. It will probably depend now on Mrs. Cope. Will she say or do something? Hopefully she will talk to Edward first.

Edward's mother was being an extremely protective mother, it's understandable. However she shouldn't have addressed things as she did with Bella. What Bella said is true, it does also reflect on Edward and that isn't fair. 



Author's Response:

Most people don't realize that with a couple when you speak badly about one of them it does to some extent reflect on the other person as well.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:00 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Nice update.  Ohh looks like there's problems to come..

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:54 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Wow...to be so obvious and take a picture of someone at the ballet.  I guess it gets them what they want...proof.  I hope they could not see Bella,  but I don't know if they will be so lucky. 

I am not happy with Esme either.  I bet Carlisle also had a few words for her. 

Great job.  I love it all!!!  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:27 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

thanks awsome chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:15 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months

wow so much happening poor dumb Seth I feel sorry for him..  what is Tanya up to???  Big Eddie lol i want one ha ha. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:06 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

holly shit that was so loving and hot.  Tanya is one sick bitch

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:58 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

another great chapter!! so hot and really good.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:37 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year

Tanya is such a nasty ho loser.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:20 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

I wonder who was in Bella's apartment?  Could it have been Tanya?  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:56 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months

I loved the part when Bella told Tanya off at the restrant.  Edward is so luck to have her in his life to help with Emily

You must login (register a new account) to review.