Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett is cute , i hope too much sugar, dont bother his health
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
how he could be reach what he study that he is 24 and he is working in a company ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh in fiction everything is possible isn't it !
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh Emmett , i wish my brother more like , he is funny in this chapter . good job , you know i hate when people dont put review when they read each chapter , they are too lazy
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
poor TANYA, did you check my email or read my E-mail . i change her charecter differently from others .
poor Emeth with all caked he have to eat every day he will get sick
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
its a lot of sugar if edard want test all the cakes and dsirt in bella bakery
Date: 04 Mar 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
Found your story today and read all 12 chapters. You got me hooked... hope you update soon.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would really like to start reading your story, but I am afraid you are not going to complete it. It has not been updated since November. Please let us know if you plan on completing the story. I dont want to start reading and be disappointed because its not going to be completed. Thank you
Author's Response:
I completely understand. I have the next chapter ready. I haven't posted it because my beta is on vacation. I'm just waiting on her and I'll post it as soon as she sends it back to me. I'm working on the chapter 14 right now, so hopefully you guys won't have to wait that long after chapter 13. (:
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is a great story, I hope you haven't stopped writing it
Author's Response:
I haven't stopped writing! The next chapter is ready. I'm just waiting for my beta. So right now I'm working on chapter 14. I'm sorry about the wait! I'm glad you are enjoying it, though! That's always nice to hear! (:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
nope not at all but like Bella I would have froze too at the thought of a threesome WITH Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tanya's about to be let go
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
off to an interesting start my only worry is that it hasn't been updated recently. I hope that doesn't mean you have stopped and will not finish. If so let me know before I get to attached
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG! How can you stop there. I so wanna know who is in that Volvo! Could it be Edward loaned the Volvo to Jasper to follow Isabella? After Jenks found her that is? Or is it just a coincidence (which I hightly doubt) MORE PLEASE!
Jennifer
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
a lil psychosis maybe? lol i feel bad for edward. she just left and he doesnt understand :(
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
i bet his cock was twitchin as she casted her gaze to the floor...lol! safe to assume that he will be ordering a different cake everyday just to see her?
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Her paranoia causes temper tantrums.....How will she explain this one?
Will Edward confess his obsession with her and his intendions?
Looking forward to more, please!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, two sexual assaults in one day. Does Bella have any experience with sex? At 19 is she still virtuous?
Edward is playing a dangerous game bringing Bella to his home. Stalkerish doesn't explain half of his obsession.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
How did he not remember his routine weekend schedule with Tanya?
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
Emmitt is delicious. Enjoy the way he runs off at the mouth.
Will Edward dump Tanya tonight after punishing her?
Must keep reading!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is sounding a little unbalanced. Does the rest of the staff know of his predilections? All that yelling should tip someone off.
Must keep reading!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
interesting introduction. Is Edward a creepy stalker guy or just bored?
Need to read more.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
PLEAS UPDATE SOON!!!!! Its so good!!!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
well it is either Jasper or Jenks.
LOL
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was great, I have been waiting for this update...really like these two and looking forward to keeping up with them as they make this journey.
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
I guess Bella just made a mistake. It's NOT Edward, is it? I hope she doesn't get into too much trouble.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
great chap!!! Well we know it isn't Edward hmmm.... Jasper maybe found her?? Damn I am not sure! Can't wait to find out tho!! :)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love it! I think she should
follow hir gutt. She knows
she is being watched. :)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
lol...i hope its not edward using that type of language towards bella!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
loved it awesome cant wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 29 Nov 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
whoops.... for the ending.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Could edward have made it back already? he is away this weekend. was it Jasper in the car - he has already evaded her once....
waiting patiently for the next update - have a great week (or two),
mic (irishmic)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oops! Whose car was it? Was it another silver Volvo? Was Edward there earlier?
Looking forward to more. We really need to have some interaction between Bella and Edward soon, please.
Author's Response:
I think the part everyone is waiting for is coming up soon! The conversation that Edward and Bella need to have!
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Intriguing....anxiously awaititng more chapters!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
SHIT IT WASN'T EDWARD WAS IT? I BET IT WASN'T AND IT SOUNDS LIKE THE DRIVER IS PISSED OFF BIG TIME. I THINK BELLA SHOULD HAVE TOLD EDWARD SHE SAW HIS PLAY ROOM SO HE COULD EXPLAIN TO HER WHAT IT IS. AND HOW IT WORKS THAT IT DOESN'T HAVE TO BE PAIN PEOPLE FEEL IN THE PLAY ROOM
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Is it Tanya?
Author's Response:
That's a good guess! I think I'd be more freaked out if it was Tanya than if it was Edward!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks, it's so great to get another chapter. And I think it's understandable that she thinks that he is stalking her - it's a little creepy to show up at her classes.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm thinking she hit Jasper. Glad to see you're back - I love this story! Your Edward borders on creepy, stalker behaviour but something about him pulls me in. I hope you update again soon.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
HAH!
And paranoia has set in...
So happy to get a new chapter.
I'd love to see a teaser on Monday!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Boy, Edward's not a little bit of a stalker, is he? I think he's gone a bit nuts.
Glad Bella's avoiding him for now. It's more entertaining this way. But is it really Edward's car she's smashed? I have a feeling it's his car with Jasper or Jenks inside.
Can't wait to see if I'm right!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Bella!!! She reacted, true, but wouldn't you have done the same in her situation? I guess I might have. If she had seen the car in Seattle she might have let it go, but it was in little ol' Forks!!!!! Then again, it can't be the only Volvo in the Olympic Peninsula.
Charlie is really nice and very happy to have Bella there for a few days. He even got her a phone, sadly the first call she will have to make won't be a pleasant one.
Author's Response:
I think I would have done the same! Maybe put a little more gas into it(:
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor poor Volvo!!! If it's Edward's car the one Jasper got he is soooo screwed!! I am soo gonna love Eddie-boys reaction!!!! (****looks around worriedly and whispers**** Please don't tell him I called him that!!)
I loved it!!!
I think a freaking out Bella is hilarious!! When will she google the torture room?? Or library it (OMG is that even a word?? My english prof will have a fit ***rolls her eyes***) lol
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
Marianne! I loved your review! I laughed the whole way through! Thanks for reading! And I hope to hear more from you!
XX-T
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh My!!! I am way too excited to find out what happens next. I have waited so long for this chapter and it was totally worth it. But now my greedy self just wants another. I like the slow burn and buildup and this story has such possibilities to keep the readers yearning for more. Brava!!
Author's Response:
I love the slow burn as well! (: Hopefully, I can have the next chapter out soon! I hate making you guys wait!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
I still can't believe Bella freaked like she did. Edward was nothing but nice to her. The only weird thing that happened was Tanya. Edward protected her from Tanya. Bella should talk to him. If she doesn't want to do it at his house fine, but stop running.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
would edward call her a bitch? is it even him? or is it..someone else...jasper? oh the suspense is killing me lmao!!!! can't wait for more hunny bunz. i had to take some stalking lessons from ed and added u on twitter lmao
Author's Response:
Edward would be a good teacher. Although I don't think I would learn anything. I'd be too busy starring and daydreaming. We will find out next chapter exactly who is driving the Volvo. Thanks for stalking me, unlike Bella I like it! :)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
well shes parinoid! cant wait to see what happens next! keep the chatpers comming
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait to find out who was in the volvo!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
lmao!!! natural reaction. i would've done the same thing. lmao GO BELLA! I LOVE THIS LMAO
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
loveeeeeeeeeddddddddddddd iiiiiiiiitttttttttttttt
Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
THIS WAS REALLY CUTE
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
AWWW POOR CONFUSED EDDIE
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
whoa, intense!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved it!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
i likely where this is headed honey bunches
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh no, it's not him! or it was before, but not now.....yikes
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
ooo would love to see look on his face when he realises who it is.awesome chapter hope they work it out.update soon.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for sharing!
Great chapter.
Please upadte soon.... :).
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Noooo, she hit the wrong car. LOL. I must admit if is or was Edward following around Folks that would have been super creepy. I am still smiling because she ran away from Edward because she saw his "torture room".
I just love this story and was so happy that you updated. Hope to have another update soon.
TTFN
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
So it has to be Jasper in Edwards Volvo??? Poor Bella so confused. I am so glad you updated I thought you left this wonderful story never to return. I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm a bit slow on updates, but I will never let this story die away! I love it too much! We will find out next chapter exactly who was driving the Volvo!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG, that was crazy!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
post the teaser! great chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG!!! Please tell me that was Edward she just hit?!? LMAO!!! Either way, that is too funny for words.
While we are on the subject of Edward...I don't think that stalking Bella at home and school is going to win her over. Any D/s relationship is based on a deep level of trust and I have to say that if I were Bella, I wouldn't trust Edward as far as I could throw him.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't trust Edward either. And i doubt Bella does right now. Hopefully, Edward can stop his stalkerish ways and fix things! (:
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
I really love this story but its very disturbing that the updates are so far between. My mom just recently discovered your story and she loves it too. Her pen is PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine and she is 65. LMAO she loves to read Dom/Sub stories so...... Anyway I hope your real life is ok and maybe we can get more updates faster. I didn't even remember her seeing his playroom. Last I remember she was running out of his house but I thought it was about what happened with Tanya. Anyway I guess I will have to go back and re-read. Take Care.
Author's Response:
I read your moms review and responded! I love her penname! I am so happy to hear that both of you are enjoying the story. I wish I could update more often, but I am in my last semester of school-it's hectic! Only two weeks left and then hopefully I can write more throughtout the break! All be all yours! (:
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh, wow, was it Edward? Why doesn't she just stell him to leave her alone taht she's not into all that kinky shit? Why act like a child? I don't get it. Of course, stalker Edward would be a little creepy as well.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
LMAO I hope it was Jasper he should not be following people loved it update when you can thanks.....
Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh heavens.. that's imbarrassing. i am so glad you are updating again.. i have missed this story.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'D LOVE TO HAVE MORE CHAPTERS. READING THE STORY'S IS A GREAD ENJOYMENT TO ME IT'S ALL I HAVE REALLY SO THANK YOU I DO ENJOY THIS ONE.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
MY DAUGHTER TOLD ME OF YOUR STORY SHE READ ALL YOU HAD UP AT THE TIME BUT JUST TODAY SHE TOLD ME YOU HAVE NOT UP DATED IN MONTHS IS THAT BECAUSE YOU DON'T PLAN ON FINISHING THE STORY OR YOU HAVE WRITERS BLOCK? IN ANY CAST I DO LOVE THE STORY ITS JUST I REALLY HATE TO GET INTO A STORY I LIKE AS MUCH AS I LIKE YOUR JUST TO BE LEFT HANGING I STILL HAVE CHAPTER 11 TO READ BUT WOULD YOU TELL ME SO I DON'T KEEP WAITING FOR SOMETHING THAT ISN'T COMING. I REALLY HOPE YOU WILL KEEP WRITING IT, IT'S VERY GOOD AND YOUR READERS WILL BE SO HAPPY AS WELL. THANK YOU
Author's Response:
Hey PattinsonDiscoStickIsMine! First I have to say that I love your penname. (: I know I take forever to update, but I do plan on finishing this story. I could never leave a story unfished, especially this one. (: The next chapter should be up later today. I was suppose to update earlier this week, but hopefully you can understand just how crazy this week has been, with Thanksgiving and family. Thank you for your support, for sticking with me. There's more to come from this story, I promise! (:
-T
Date: 25 Nov 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I DON'T LIKE BELLA'S BOSS AT ALL HE IS SO RUDE TO HER YELLING AT HER HE COULS TALK AND NOT YELL YOU KNOW BE NICE. I DON'T THINK EDWARD LIKES HER BOSS YELLING AT HER EATHER I BET HE GIVES BELLA A JOB TO GET HER AWAY FROM THAT PETER GUY. EDWARD WANT BELLA EVEN IF HE DOESN'T KNOW IT YET. I LOVE YOUR STORY YOU HAVE 11 CHAPTER'S UP NOW SO HOW OFFTEN DO YOU UP DATE CAN YOU TELL ME PLEASE?
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW OVER SEVENTY DOLLARS FOR A TIP I WOULD HAVE BEEN SHOCKED AS WELL I WORKED AS A WAITRESS FOR A FEW YEARS AND THE BIGGEST TIP I VEVR GOT WAS $ 50.00 AT CHRISTMAS TIME A VERY BIG DEAL BACK THEM IN THE 1980'S I'M STILL LIKING THE STORY I LIKE THAT EDWARD SAID HE WAS SORRY TO BELLA.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN BELLA CRASHED IN TO THE MAN THAT I'M GUESSING WAS EDWARD IT IS SO LIKE SOMETHING THAT WOULD HAVE HAPPENED TO ME WHEN I WAS YOUNGER IS WOULD HAVE BEEN FUNNY TO WATCH HAPPEN. I LIKE IT SO FAR.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
No, I didn't see that one coming. I thought Edward and Tanya were in a monogamous relationship, even though they weren't romantically involved, so her approaching Bella was the last thing I would have imagined. If anything, I thought she was coming to start screaming at Bella for enticing Edward away from her. Very interesting.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Missing this story.. hope you'll continue writing, hope all is well with you;D)
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am totally sucked into this story. Mysterious edward, stalking bella and pounding on her door. It's a lot for an innocent bella to handle - right? At least without any preparation.
Waiting, patiently for now, for more.
love this!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
awesome story love it.update soon.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
its awesome love it.just the thought of edward covered in frostin hmmm lol
Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hi,
I really like this story.
when is the next update?
I looking forward for the next chapter.
Ps. Can I subscribe somewhere?
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for reading(:
and of course thanks for reviewing! I'm glad to hear that you are enjoying this FF (:
The next update should be soon. The next chapter is off with my beta right now. If I don't post this week then for sure early next.
As of right now I do not have a blog. You can find me on twitter @tench11 or on FF(dot)net though!
-T
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks, that helps a lot. I'm looking forward for all to be revealed.
I saw that they cast Irina's part, but did not see who they cast for Kate or Tanya. I'm okay with who they cast for Irina, although I can't remember her name.....lol
I love, love, love who they cast for Renesmee, I think she is a perfect mix between E&B, such a beautiful little girl.
Author's Response:
Glad I could help!
MyAnna Buring is playing Tanya. Who I can not picture as.
Casey LaBow is playing kate and Mia Maestro portrays Carmen.
I think they did an awesome job at casting Mackenzie Foy as Renesmee as well. It freaks me just how much she looks like Kristen and Rob! :)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW! I can't wait to see how that first meeting goes between Bella and Edward. I bet he is pissed because she left without telling him. yikesss
Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was just wondering if I had missed something. We went from eating a burger to Edward waking up and her gone. It said a little about her finding "that" room, but when did that happen? Will that be explained? How did she come across his playroom? I feel like I missed something. I'm also at a loss as to why in the world she would be so hateful and disrespectful to Charlie.
And I must be coming in late, why would you not deserve our comments?
Denali Clan???? What am I missing? I didn't read anything about a Denali Clan.
I guess you can tell by now I'm a little lost :)
Author's Response:
When I insert an -X- throughou the chapter, it means that I skipped ahead. For example, after Bella and Edward left the diner there is an -x-, it just means that I don't want to write how they went back to Edwards, said goodnight, and went their seperate ways. Nothing interesting happens, so its best off if I just don't write it, therefore -X-. Confusing I know, but I hope that helps? How and why she stumbled across his PR will be explained throughout the next couple of chapters. A lot of people are wondering about that! Don't fear(:
The next chapter will explain things about Charlie and Bella's strain relationship! I am excited to be writing that!
And I don't derserve your comments because it has been more than a while since I last updated! But thank you for leaving one! (:
The Denali Clan, hmm. What I meant by that was how do you guys feel about the actors Summit casted for the Denali Clan?
And don't worry about being lost! I am here to answer any questions you might have! I hope I helped! (:
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
LOL, I did forget. I forgot it's Friday. How awkward!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love the update!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Obviously Bella don’t understand his lifestyle. Why would he even bring her there knowing what he was into? I would have left long before that. However, he does have a thing for her and she knew it. He should have at least told her something. Hell I would have felt the same way. With all that being said she knew he had some kind of fetish for her. Why the hell would he keep tipping her and following her. She’s not that stupid. Hum rich man and lovely home or broken down shack, let me see which is better?!!!! I do like this story though. Thx
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad to see you're back - I had almost forgotten about this story! It'll be interesting to get a bit more insight into Bella and her background. Hopefully Edward will clean up his act and stop being such a stalker soon - his behaviour earlier in the story was more creepy than dominant!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
When did Bella go into the playroom? I am confused. Bella is not very friendly or gratful at all to Edward.
Author's Response:
Things will be explained about how bella was led into the PR! (:
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I enjoyed that chapter. Better insight into Bella's relationship, or lack thereof, with Charlie. She should have told him she had a job interview that day.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
I was wondering about Tanya, haha that was great....on to the next chapter for me :)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so glad that you are back and continuing the story. I have loved it so far and cannot wait to see where it goes. I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I've really been missing updates on this story. Hopefully now you're on a roll and we'll be getting regular updates. You'll make us all so happy.
I hope that Edward gets to talk with her in the next chapter. He needs to undedrstand why she left and maybe he needs to explain to her what's up with the playroom.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
So glad to see this update! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I don't know what to expect from your Edward yet...
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
love it update soon
Date: 03 Oct 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
me encanta tu historia por favor actualiza pronto
Date: 03 Oct 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
I discovered your ff today... I'm hooked, can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! (:
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
aww where is edward
Date: 02 Oct 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
I feel bad for Bella. She really is alone. Charlie is just a manipulative check book and a means to an end for Bella to stay in school. Edward is a borderline stalker and Mrs Cope is a peeping tom. She needs to surround herself with some better people.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
well there is obviously a rift between bella and charlie. i wonder what eddie will do next in his bid to gain bella's time and attention?
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was just gong to send you a PM asking if you were going to finish this story. I am so glad you are still writing. I was surprised that Edward didn't hear anything from Bella stumbling around in his house. I would have feaked out if I was her too so I guess that is understood but he has been nothing but nice to her so I feel bad for him. He didn't even get a chance to explain anything. As for Charlie well I hate it when someone blackmails me into doing something. I mean he should not have told her if she doesn't come home for her birthday he wont pay for her school. That was a low blow. Anyway please dont keep us waiting so long for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Feel free to PM me! Keep me on my toes. I need a good reminder every now and then!
thank you for your support! :)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am so happy you are back I have missed you I keep on checking both site to see if maybe you were posting on the other. I cant wait to see what happen with these two and how is he going to get back with her??????
Author's Response:
I missed you guys as well! If I could write all day I would. I'd willingly let you guys glue my fingers to my keyboard! But RL calls for attention every now and then. :/
Thanks for your continued support!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad you updated. I had removed this story from favorites because it hadn't been updated in so long I thought it was forgotten.
Two questions: what was Bella doing snooping around Edward's house in the middle of the night? And why wasn't the playroom door locked?
Author's Response:
Thank you for R&R! I'm sorry to have taken such a long time in updating, but RL called for my attention!
You ask Good questions, and they will be answered! (:
I promise(:
Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
She should go talk to charlotte. Petey is just going to do it to the next girl. Wow Charlie....blackmailing your own daughter, nice.