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Reviewer: Teri Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hmmm, I can't believe she feels so threatened by Edward when he is anything but nice to her. She is a handful. Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad to see you're back and to have an update. I thought you had abandoned this story.

Maybe Bella should spend some time looking up BDSM pracitces at the library in order to understand.

Can't wait to see Edward's freak out when she's gone home for the weekend.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yes it was short, but I'm glad your back.  I look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella, she really is between a rock and a hard place.  I am looking forward to seeing Bella and Edward meet up again.

 

As for the Denali Clan, none of them looked as I imaged them, esp Tanya.  She is too small and sweet looking.  Esme, is the best looking, I think.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!

And I agree. I don't picture Tanya as the actress they have choosen. :/ Hopefully, though, she does her part right! :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

here's a thought...just don't stop...I really like the story..and I want to stick around and wait for you to finish...it really is a good one...oh btw Charlie is being a prick!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

glad your back and Im hoping it doesn't take as long again as I really want to no edwards reaction to bella leaving in the middle of the night

Post soon please

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, I can't believe she was able to sneak out. Charlie was a little harsh, you can't really force someone to spend time with you if you don't want to, but threatening I think makes it worse. Can't wait to hear from Edward

Reviewer: edwardschewtoy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Was the delivery to Alice?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

well i hope that charlie realizes that isnt how to win his daughter cant wait to see whathappens next keep the chaptes comming  

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Interesting chapter.  Can't wait to find out why Bella is so against Forks.

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

great to see you back

Reviewer: Missypooh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

Where have you been girl?  I had almost forgotten about this story but it all came back as I read this chapter. Poor Isabella. She is having the text book definition of a bad week...lol. I did like the chapter. A lot of important things revealed.   still intrigued and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: nise7465 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Welcome back.

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

Charlie is a jerk!

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter - I just wish it was longer. pout. I am interested in seeing what Edward does from here, though.

Please keep going!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

thanks can't wait for a new update and thanks for returning good chapter

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

I think bella's pride is going to get her into an awful lot of trouble.

can't wait to see what happens next.

A suggestion though when it is so long between updates a little refresher at the top of the chapter is good. I had to go back and read the last chapter just to figure out where we were at.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

Please tell me she is going to get some help she is on the crazy train update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: rarasnake Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh No.. She left... NO!!! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm curious about Tanya. Edward & her have a contract, did she somehow break it with her actions? I know it's over as far as Tanya's concerned. She's probably going to cause a lot of problems for Edward.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story.  I am sort of dreading Edward getting her into his play room but I suspect he will sooner or later.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

Tanya, what are you like.  Poor Bella seems to be a magnet for trouble. LOL.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Good on you Bella. LOL.

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

Possibly she moved rooms like he offered her earlier. She could have woke up and decided to move rooms so she could sleep.

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm assuming that no matter where she went, Stalkerward will find her... Really enjoying your story, hoping to see an update soon, but understandably RL gets the best of us sometimes... hope all is well...  

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am dying to find out what happens next, will there be an update soon?

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

love this story! Glad I found it! Can't wait for more!! Hope there is an update soon!!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

this is a good story maybe she went to find a job

Reviewer: edward08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

love it update soon

Reviewer: robsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

well done

Reviewer: graciegirlrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

I hope you continue this story. I love it so far. It is in depth, realistic and...almost...magical, in how romance could come from such a shaky start.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

well they had there first 'date' i wonder what he will do to get her back?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

wow what a fucked up day for the poor girl

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 8

wow eddie way to fuck up! heehee!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

my guess is that stalker eddie has made yet another appearance!ohhh i wonder what he will think of bella getting fired / quitting? will she cry on his shoulder? will he whisk her away from the crappy apartment, crappy job and bring her to his pallace?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

well now he can come and have 'lunch' with bella at the bakery! maybe she will get fired and mr. cullen will offer her a job...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

he followed her to school?!? wow. and man did she ever give him something to think about on her way out of the office! heehee way to go b!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

well the plot thickens! i wonder if eddie boy will ramp up his game if emmy asks bella out? oh she can have a taste of both brothers! yummy!

will you show us eddie's lesson for tanya? i hope so and i hope he breaks it off so he can move forward with bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

it's ok eddie you need to free yourself up so you can go tie bella up! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

well that sure did go better than their first meeting. and eddie is gonna get stalkerish? hmm.. i could go for a stalking eddie!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

well it looks like bella made the first move here. heehee i wonder how they will meet again?

Reviewer: Teri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

Well hopefully she moved to another bedroom or the living room.  I am really enjoying your story so far.  Thank you.

Reviewer: greeneyedgirl813 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Maybe she found the playroom, freaked out, and took off! HAHAHA.. Great Job! Update soon!!!

Reviewer: msbull Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

need more please love the story

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

I can't believe that Tanya tried that shit with Bella!! OMG I wish I could beat her ass for trying to force herself on Bella like that!!! I never saw that coming...WOW you really suprised me with that one!!!

I would like to say that your take on the Bella/Edward BSDM thing is really refreshing.  It's quite different from other stories with similair themes.  I am a huge fan of this story and I will follow it through to the end!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh NO!!!!!!!!! How embarassing! I wonder how Edward is going to explain this one??  If I was Bella I would have walked out too!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

WOW Edward was really cruel to Tanya.  I hope that he doesn't treat Bella that way.  I can't wait to see who is screaming outside the door!

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like your fiesty Bella! I am glad that she stood up for herself because Edward was soo rude to her!!! It's not nice to ask someone "didn't your mother teach you...."

I am looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: MrsEdwardCullenP Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

EWWW!

Reviewer: MrsEdwardCullenP Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Is he gonna offer her a post at his firm?

Reviewer: MrsEdwardCullenP Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope T doesn't appear in more than 3 chpts... I do not like her

Reviewer: MrsEdwardCullenP Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

The interaction was good... Off to the next chapter

Reviewer: Barbara666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ms. Long Legs sounds funny.

Little Isabella tried to lie...:D

Edward is going to punish Tanya, but what will he do with her??

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

OME epic loved it so interesting can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: Barbara666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's unreal interesting))

Thank you for the story.

Edward is so nice... But I think it won't last for long

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

OME epic all I kept thinking was awkward but loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it & Tanya was at the back of my mind wen I was reading this chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

OME epic Peter is a pig but loved the chapter

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it amazing

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it awesome

Reviewer: Shante17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

no bella!

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved this chapter.  I'm hoping that she's somewhere in the house studying, maybe the library, sunroom or outside on the patio if it's not to cold.

Bella really does need to let Edward help her get a job.  Getting a job without assistance is great but it's just plain stupid to not accept help when offered.  It doesn't mean you don't have to do a good job or work hard, it just gives you a foot in the door.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Cannot wait for more.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am not surprised...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it...he,he. Can you image Bella's.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Good writing I can feel my stomach churning...you can feel the upset.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ouch... she is falling for him, nicely done.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

Feisty what... this looks to be shaping up to be fun.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

I think it is Bella he would prefare to teach a lesson to...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice beginings...

Reviewer: loventwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 10

love the story is she going to become his sub.



Author's Response:

That is the question everyone wants answered...but you guys are going to have to wait and see(:

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 10

Aww... she slept in another room? please say yes and she is still there.. LOL

can't wait till you update now I have caught up..

I have put this up on the featured list on the site this week if you have any probs with that let me know..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

God.. i wouldn't have slept either..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOL nope.. funny huh?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

poor Bella.. she always did hate Peter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

awwww...... that is sweet...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

LOL he kissed her hand.. PROGRESS!! LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

LOL I am happy that this is taking time.. cause it always is way too quick.. so well done..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

oh god.. a scream out side his door?? and you left it like that for a cliffy?

LOL congratulations that is hillarious.. but evil...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

LOL great start.. I really like this..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh god what is going to happen to her when she gets back with the whole mess? Is she going to get fired?

Poor Bella.. cakes on a bike.. = disaster LOL

Interesting first chapter.. can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: zuwema Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter, looking forward to your next update. thank you

Reviewer: BUTTON Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 10

Maybe Bella found his playroom?



Author's Response:

Maybe (;

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

I am so glad you wrote this chapter from Edward's POV.  It cleared up a lot of what happened last chapter and exactly what his intentions were with Tanya and Bella together in the house.

I can tell that he really likes Bella, but I don't see him being satisfied with Bella only as his submissive.

And to answer your question, I think she went home.  I don't think she is comfortable with being in his home.  She is an independant soul and wants to remain that way.



Author's Response:

I was second guessing myself when i started writing it in EPOV, but honestly I could NOT write it. Edward was blocking any other ideas. (:

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

She went to the library to study.

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

yep i bet she is

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

lol why do i see bella comeing in saying "duh class today chill eddie" lol awww I love domwards especially when out of their element.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

well that sucks..................i am sooooooooooo glad two bit crackwhore got thrown the fuck out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

love it

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh this is so good.  I am truly enjoying this.  B is making E sweat and I am enjoying that!

Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! She better not have left, the anticipation is killing me. Will she end up in the playroom or won't she, is she a submissive and she doens't know it. Please hurry!

Reviewer: Ingenuity15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 10

So I'm thinking she either switched rooms or found his playroom. I'm hoping it's the second because that just means she's one step closer to actually being in it with him haha. Update soon!

~Ingenuity15

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story - great chapter! Tanya is freakish to say the least! Where has she gone? Home? To find a job?  Hmmm - please update soon, pretty please?

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

She LEFT??? But they were getting along so good.  I expect Tanya will be big trouble in the future. Gosh I cant wait for this love story to start showing.  I mean the physical part, its always the best. 

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

uhhh i hope she didn't leave!! post soon please

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