Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
hope she comes back cant wait till the next one
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
well written......looks like fun.........:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
I could kill Tanya! Seriously something is wrong with her. I hope Bella didn't leave without saying goodbye.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really cool chapter, especially to see, that Edward cared for Bellas well being and that he got rid of Tanya. Her behaviour was inexcusable.
And Edward enjoyed a "simple" dinner at burger joint, what is probably not really his scene for dinning at all.
I just hope that Bella just slept in another room and not left Edwards home at all.
I am excited for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
thanks good chapter
Date: 13 Jul 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is going to have to learn to trust again. She is also going to have to learn to let preople help her.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think she is in the living room sleeping
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
loved it but Bella is all over the place update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
I cant wait to read more
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hopefully Bella just moved into another bedroom....
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
SHITTTTTT!!!! I knew tayna would be there i just knew!!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter.. something tells me.. This Bella isn't going to like the "playroom" idea any time soon.. (What a shame...) BUT YEAH.. the wicked witchanya is gone.. YIPEEEEE..
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Aww, Edward doesn't even recognize that he actually cares for someone. How cute the emotionally stunted can be. I shall dub thee Emotard!
Great chapter, I hope Bella just went to get things for breakfast, but I doubt it. Emotard has his work cut out for him.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 10 Jul 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Honestly? nope. We had got a glimpse of Tanya's character when she went to the office, and through dinner, it was clear, she wasn't happy. But considering she would act as she did... not a chance.
She had to have been furious and wanting to get Bella out of the house. Her plan backfired, big time.
Poor Bella, she had had enough in one day, and then that... It will take lots of work from Edward to get her to feel calm.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
We might not, but Edward clearly did. And what a mess it has gotten him into. Bella won't stay, not a chance, and Tanya... well she will have every right to not be too happy now. Not to mention all the explaining and/ or calming down he will have to handle.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella seems to not be able to get a break, things just keep getting messed up for her. She thought it was going well, but oh what a terrible surprise. Peter seemed odd and scary from the start, we just had no idea how much.
Who could it be at the door? Hopefully not Peter.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
So Edward had decided he would stop seeing Bella, but his plans, even if gone accordingly, weren't what he wanted.
So he went looking for her, found her, too. But now, what will he plan in order to see her? I don't think he will stay away as he "said he intended to".
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awe, What's wrong with Edward? Why doesn't he "do relationships"?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving it. I could deal with a stalker Edward...lol
Date: 09 Jul 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Tanya is gone for good. You don't attack someone like that.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was a different turn.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tonya is a true nut case!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
of course you know this chapter is priceless.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
NO!!! OMG - great chapter!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya thought she was going to have a hot kinky weedend she fucked up. How much more confused can Bella get??? only one more chapter to go and I cant wait to read that one again and the the new one after that. So in love with this story.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
OK so I was surprised by Tanya's "attack" on Bella---but I'm sure Tanya was fucking with Bella! Great chapter.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
GOOD GOD NO.. I did NOT see that one coming,, and I have read lots of stories where Bella is attached, and this one FREAKED ME OUT.. I mean you really got the emotion of the situation in that.. I was having a hard time breathing with her.
Great.. really great chapter.
Thanks
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
Never expected it!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow I didn't think Tanya was going to do that. I am glad he made Tanya leave though. It was strange that he had them all 3 eating dinner together. I mean what did he think was going to happen? Did he just want to keep Tanya and Bella both? Well now we can get down to the good stuff. I hope you can make the chapters longer. That would be nice.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
no i didn't but was pleasantly surprised....good move! Looking forward to more................especially when she finds out what the hell is going on!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
man that was a suprising chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
thanks good chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
totally did not see tanya hitting on bella...can't wait to see how they spend the next day. post soon
Date: 05 Jul 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hmm.. how is Edward going to punish Tanya. And what is Tanya thinking through all this.
2 sexual assualts in 1 day. Bella must feel special. ha.
good chapter.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder is Tanya really gone for good?
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great story, a nice build up and good degree of plausability. It would be really great to see Bella's character develop a little more. Your Edward is very readable
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
update soon pwease....
Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
poor bella twice in one day..seriously i can't wait to see how bella is gonna react when she finds out about edward's life style...and i'm glad you updated btw i was soo curious about how she would handle it
Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
I don't know who creeps me out more, Tanya or Edward.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well I think Tanya ia going to be a problem later lived it update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Holy crap! Tanya is a twisted bitch! Poor Bella, how will she ever trust Edward now?
Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
HOLY CRAP! Nope I didn't see that one coming! I cannot wait for this story to develop, it's so awesome.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter again. love it. And Tanya is a bitch (once again). Is she really gone for good?
Date: 01 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hope you update soon, love this story already
Date: 30 Jun 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hey, there. I'm enjoying your story so far. It's very... *chuckle* amusing? All the mood swings must be driving Bella crazy by now, it sure is for me!
One thing I did notice was you have a mistake. It's in this sentence... "None. I'm 24, so I guess that would be half a decade."
In fact, a decade is ten years, so he's actually gone through two and half decades. There's no term for fifty years, but there is for 100 years - that's a century. Half a decade would be five years old. He's a bit... too tall for that. half a century is 50 years.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
I did forget about Tanya! How's he gonna get her to come back? This should be interesting!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh no....can't wait for more post soon
Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ah i forgot about Tanya! Love this story :)
Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hi, thanks for the wonderful chapter. Do you put the banner online?
Author's Response:
Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just posted it right now. It was the first time I had ever tried to post a picture on this site, so I was a little confused. But I got it. (:
Once again thanks for taking the time in doing a banner!
-tench
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok Mr Cullen. How are you going to explain all that to Bella? I seriously can not wait to see how he tries to talk his way out of that one.
Please, please give us Bella's POV for that moment she walked in the door???
Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
omg how could he forget about that? but its kind off funny
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
very nice
cant wait to see what happens next!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hmm, great first introduction to his home-scare the poor kid. Probably thinks thats what he has planned for her.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
well hes only thinking with his dick! cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward does have mood swings that confuse Bella and us. He is interesting, I guess we enjoy, as much as Bella, the daily delivery. Although finding him at school, that was a surprise, not really an unpleasant one, unless it happens again.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Emmett's flirting was fun, especially since it made Edward so angry. Bella's reactions were simply out of nervousness I think. As for Tanya, she didn't like what she saw outside Edward's office, she was in trouble before it, but now, it might be worse.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a day for Bella! Even Edward couldn't fix the amount of screw-ups that happened!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
hes gotta get rid of tanya and go after bella
Date: 26 Jun 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is more than intrigued with Bella, so much he is ordering everyday from the bakery, just to see her. If this goes longer than a week, will someone realize he won't order on days she isn't working?
No one seems to notice anything. Even Tanya seems to see things in a different light. He didn't like that, he got upset, and someone seems to have heard something.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
He did a good job tracking her down. And she did a good job too telling him more than he had asked for. He has to be grateful for the extra information, and apparently will be using it, and soon.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG LMAO I didn't forget about Tanya. I knew exactly what was going to happen. Well that's what he gets for wanting two women. So now where is Bella going to go????? I hope Edward takes care of Peter. Oh and you said in the last chapter that you had chapter 10 at your beta's already. I was wondering where is chapter 9????
Author's Response:
Where is Bella going to go? We'll find out the next chapter, which is already ready. I will be posting that up next week. Chapter 10 is with my beta right now. I hope to have that posted late next week as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing! (:
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
omg I did forget plz update soon can't wait!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well I hope who is at the door is Edward. I dont think he is going to be too happy when he finds out what peter tried to do today.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME??? I loved the chapter but HATED the cliffie!!! please update soon...
:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh no freaking way! he'll never get her back in the house now...i can't wait to see waht he does to Peter
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
haha, I'm so ready for Bella to put Edward in his place. I know Bella's a little timid and shy, but I like her to be someone who isn't gonna just do whatever she's told.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
He is a DumbAss !
Run Bella, RUN! :)
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
LOL!! What a funny way to end a chapter!!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
Haha I so forgot about Tanya. Wonder how he'll explain this to Bella
Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Only one more and I am caught up. Love the way she trys to ack brave when she is scared shitless. Tanya I dont like her LOL.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
OH MAN!!! how is Edward going to explain that! Too crazy! LOVED IT!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
I noticed that on FF you are up to chapter 9. when will this one be updated to the same?
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope it is Edward and he is at her apartment to save her.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can we say sexual harrassment and labor laws? Good chapter, obviously Edward is at the door.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
OOOO IT'S GETTING GOOD! I hope Edward kicks Peter's ass. Please tell me Bella eventually ends up in the playroom!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great start!
Emmett is so funny!! I love the listening at the door part!!
Peter is disgusting!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow peter is such an asshole update soon
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh nooooo - poor Bella! An attempted rape & an invasion? Who is it??? Can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward + stalking = pure joy!!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder if Bella is figuring out things about Edward, and what he is?
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
What? edward has another sub? And he is trying out all of Bella's sweets? why that sneaky, low-down, sob....
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice second encounter ... I am looking forward to more!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think I started readin this before, but let me say again - I love it so far! Edward & frosting - yummy!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that Peter is a slime ball! I am glad Bella got away from him, but what the hell is she going to do now?
I'd bet that at the door we will find one Edward Cullen standing there looking like sex on a stick. ;)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope its Edward at the door and NOT Peter. Peter doesn't have the balls to show up on her turf.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmm, I'm assuming it's Edward...
Date: 17 Jun 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow Bella seems like quite the ditz there, doesn't seem to keep her head out of the clouds for more than 2 seconds.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
well I hope Edward would be the one at the door!
Atta girl Bella for getting Peter where it hurts.....slimey douchebag!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
New reader!!! Love it so far, hope thats Edward at the door. Post soon please
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the update!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
He he... Domward's a stalker.
Nice.
karina
Balti K
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am guessing Edward is at the door; but who broke in?...hmmm. I love how you incorporated the pull between them into your story. I would love to see Edward fix Peter!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
i'm hoping its edward at her door but not sure cant wait till the next one
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Its Edward right? But was he the one who knocked down the chair???
Date: 17 Jun 2010 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
can't wait for the new chapter.