Date: 17 Jun 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
We are geting closer to being caught up I get so excited when i see you have updated. I think I said yhis before Peter is going to be lucky to keep his balls when Edward is done with him I am sure he wont try that shit on anyone else. I had the same offer from a boss I had when I was still in Collage the bald headed fat little fuck needless to say I didnt work for him ant more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
when you were on fanfiction i had gotten up to chapter 0 will you keep writing here and then continue the story from there i really want them together both edward and bella as a couple and eventually as a dom/sub you are a great writer keep up the great work i await the next chapter
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
I need more. Edward needs to drop Tanya and get Bella out of the bakery.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
peter is an ass!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am loving the story wonder what is going to happen with tanya, peter and their relationship. looking forward to the next update.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like this story alot but I feel like I got cheated in this chapter because really it was just the same thing in BPOV. So I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yeah I like the softer side but it is a Dominat story so we need to see the possesive love sick sexy as hell sensual side of Edward too. lol.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Sneaky BElla and funny Emmett. I should have known he would have crept up and listen in on the conversation. I would have screamed too. LMAO. Ok it seems Tanya is possesive of Edwards sexual abilities. lol. I would be too. But oh well we all know its Bella turn so Tanya must move over.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
I thought it was cute that he went out of his way to order something just to get to talk to her again.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
WEll that was an interesting way to meet the man of your dreams. lol. I cant wait to see more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yup, Edward has no willpower, guess he'll be breaking that contract with Tanya soon
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the update, thanks! :)
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yes still as good as it was the first time. Still dont like Lauran or Peter he is a dick.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for another update, went ahead on FF.net because I am so impatient ... eagerly awaiting to see where this story goes. Great job!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Edward has a bit of a crush. LOL. So, hhow is he going to break his contract with Tanya?
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love this fic - keep going!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Like this story. Hope it continues on past where it ends on ff.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think he should just get rid of Tanya. I can't believe Bella is only making minimum wage. That is crazy.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
As always another great chapter! :)
Date: 31 May 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh why did you have to go and bring two bit slut bag cunt whore into this?
I like your story so far! I just really hate Tanya!
Date: 31 May 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
i can see where in his mind he would think that she had great submissive abilities...always looking down...
Date: 31 May 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
that would suck! But think about it.......after they get their relationship going.....wouldn't it be fun to lick all that chocolate off of him?!!!
Date: 30 May 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
hehe I liked this chappy i'll have to follow you on twitter cause so far i am just follow most of the twi cast.
Date: 30 May 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am very curious what Edward has up his sleave and how he plans to make Bella his sub. That is his plan, yes?
Date: 30 May 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like Bella's parting shot.
Date: 30 May 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
cant wait till the next one
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
i love these two!! the slow burn is the best :)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm, wait till she finds out what he does on the side......
Date: 30 May 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Still love it second time read I dont know what I am going to do when you get caught up with ff and I will read through only once LOL. I love the playful banter they have
Author's Response:
Let me just say how awesome you are. You've not only already read this once, but you're taking the time to read it again. That means so much to me. To know that there are people out there who are really enjoying this. I am almost done with Chapter 10, so I hope to have that up soon. Sorry for taking so long. I've re-written so many times already. Its getting to the point where i just want to say to hell with it and post it, but I won't because that wouldn't be fair for the readers or myself. Again thanks so much for reading, and for reviewing!
Date: 30 May 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story - Bella is no shrinking violet and fiesty which is great!
Edward is obviously used to getting his own way true to Dom form but he has bitten off a little more than he can chew this time I feel.
Tanya will not be letting go anytime soon I fear - cant wait to read on -
Debs (UK)
Date: 27 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Does Emmett know about Edward's lifestyle?
Date: 27 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
this slow burn is killing me!!
Date: 27 May 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
He needs to get rid of Tanya and start building trust with Bella.
Date: 27 May 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ooooh I love this story but I am desperate for BELLA to be strong - she seems sassy enough so I do hope he gets a run for his money.
Date: 27 May 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 27 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Such a good story I have read what you already had on the other site but decided it was so good I better read it as you bring it over here hurry I cant wait for more
Date: 27 May 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
I feel like with every chapter you dangle the carrot just an inch closer. I am giddy with anticipation.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
oh i would love to see if Emmett tries to ask her out what Edward would do....hmmm wonder what's in store for Tanya?
Date: 23 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Please don't tell me Bella was listening and Jessica snuck up on her ass or vise verse? Classic, can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 19 May 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see what's next..
Date: 19 May 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
thanks for the cliff!! was that bella screaming? Does she know Tayna? or maybe James works in the office and is learing? or maybe Emmet attacked her for the daily delivery! lol :) can't wait to see what's going on!
Date: 19 May 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am waiting to deliver an opinion on this Edward. I am not sure I like the side he has shown thus far. He is lusting after a girl who he imagines as a sub when he already has a sub in Tanya? I can't wait to see who is outsire the door screaming and why.
Date: 19 May 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
cant wait till the next one
Date: 19 May 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
I have enjoyed reading this story so far, please continue.
:)
Date: 10 May 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
I guess he will be ordering daily if he's trying everything on the menu!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter - I like the way that you have fleshed their characters out. I am enjoying your story - can't wait for what happens next!
Date: 07 May 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is a cool story.. I cant wait to read more.. please up date soon. I can seee him eattting the chocholet off her shirt and her doing the same.. oh sorry this is your stroy.. hope to read more. soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
i like it, i wanna see how he's gonna get her to trust him enough to bring up his uh "lifestyle"
Date: 07 May 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
sounds good so far
Date: 06 May 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like the chemistry .....Bella needs to keep up the spunky attitude!! :)
Date: 06 May 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am looking forward to a stalker Edward! Loved it!
Date: 06 May 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting!! Can't wait to see how this relationship begins!
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am hooked!!! :-)
Date: 06 May 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like this story. I want to know what's up w/ Edward. I love a dom Edward and a not wimpy Bella!
Date: 06 May 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
I've been reading on fanfiction waiting for it to catch up on this site.
Date: 05 May 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter. I love the awkward interaction between them (well, awkward on Bella's part). I can just see what is coming..Edward will order a delivery for every day but Wednesday, right? LOL. Hmmm, I can only imagine how that will sit with Bella.
Date: 03 May 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward to more!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I fell in love with this perfect story! :)
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like how you started this off. I am curious how these two will come face to face again. Will he seek her out or will it be another random incounter?
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am definitely interested in seeing what will happen next. You've got me caught on your hook...don't leaving me hanging for too long! Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Now it begins! The meeting was great!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think it sounds great and cant wait to read more.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
They met in a rather unpleasant situation, for both of them. At least the lady Bella was delivering to had a good sense of humor and let it pass. Hopefully they won't be too harsh at the bakery. Also lets hope she doesn't crash again this time.