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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

Just found this story. Sad to see it was never finished. 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT SHE RAN AWAY FROM EDWARD AND WENT TO JOIN JANE!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN YEAH SHE'S A NEWBORN BUT STILL!!!!!!!! BUT ON THE BRIGHT SIDE SHE WENT BACK WITH EDWARD SO  EVERYTHING WILL BE GOOD!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

LOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!! BELLAS GONNA BE A  VAMPIRE IM HAPPY THAT MEANS ETERNITY WITH EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!! IF THEY LIVE OF COURSE WHICH THEY BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG THOSE VISIONS MAKE ME WANT TO FRICKIN CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOO HOPE THEY DONT DIE!!!!!!!! I DONT WANT THEM TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: roselynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

I liked this story you should finish it

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 21

Are you going to continue with this?

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

OK so I reread this over the past 18 hours...

YES all 21 chapters as I love this story & so want you to update asap!!!

So cruel to leave us in the waiting game ot see what happens...

Cliffies are cruel but so are writers that don't update for months (sorry was trying to write it less harsh than that!!!!) But I love this story so much that I need you to finish this story & put us out of our misery :)

 

Thank you & I do hope your book is going well....

T2M x



Author's Response:

My appolgizies on the delay. I have been a bit busy with writting another orginal novel to be released in August. So it will be finished i just have to work it into my other writings. thank you so much for reading and reviewing it! I deal with an editor trust me harsh is the norm for me, but she is the greatest and i wouldn't have it any other way. I will see about putting you out of your misery very soon. And yes thank you, Mocked by Destiny has done quite well concidering it ws my first, Am hoping Mocked by Faith does just as well. :) 

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Amazing and original plot ! I can't wait to read next chapter !!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21

glad to see ya posting again.

 

Great mix of POVs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

glad for the update.  REally enjoyed it, glad they were able to get to Bella, what happened to her after they pulled her into the shed?  Just Jane tryignher thing or did anythign else happen

Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Sharing my love in both places for the story. 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter!  Of course Ed should have yelled Isabella instead of Bella when she went through the glass.

Its all good now though!

Yay!  I cant wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.  Congrats on your book!

Keye

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hi, Just recently found this story and have really enjoyed it...I thought it would be a simple human kidnapping story, never considering it would be vampires behind it, so that was a great twist.  Glad Edward and Bella finally got together, and that she made it thru her transition okay... can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

great chapter

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter and I cannot wait to read more. It was interesting to see the differences in the two transitions.  Thought you wrote them very well.

Keye

Reviewer: celtic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Whoopee!!!!! I was afraid you were going to be one of those authors that decided they didn't want to write anymore and just leave the story hanging. This is one fantastic chapter. I loved it that Edward and Bella finally got to make love, that was so sweet. Go Alice, damn that little pixie can get down right vicious, haha. I also love the way Jake was able to control Stella when she woke up, damn that boy is smart.

Thank you for continuing this awesome story and this wonderful chapter. I hope Santa was good to you.

Happy Holidays to you and all your loved ones.

hugz, celtic



Author's Response:

Never! i care too much about my fans to torture you like that. I was just too swamped with my first original story being published in February to get anything else done. there was also the issue that i have 12 or 14 fanfiction stories running so i had to catch up on all of them one at a time. I also have two more orginal books that are scheduled to be published in the next year, but i plan on stocking up on the chapters so i have them to send out slowly once my break is over.

I promise more to come real soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Happy Holidays to you and yours as well!

Michele / Nails233

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

WOW, I think I like your way better!

 

Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh I cant wait to see what else is in store to shock everyone with Bells's reaction!!

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

woo hoo their changing.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 20

Yes, this was worth the wait.  I love that two being changed at the same time with all POVs.  Excellent chapter.  BTW good luck on your book.  I will be on of the first to purchase it when it comes out.



Author's Response:

I cannot Thank you enough for being one of my fans! I have read all your reviews and look forward to seeing more from you. I will make sure to announce the date as it gets closer to my release date. I hope you have a Wonderful Holiday season! Nails233

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

oooh this is so good :)



Author's Response:

Thenk you for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! nails233

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow interesting 1st chapter!!!

got to keep reading!

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh geez - this is like another cliffie but with lemony citrus attached :)

I can't wait for the next chapter....

PLEASE post soon :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Fantastic chapter - I'm actually loving all the different POV's... 

Thank goodness there is one more chapter to satisfy me for tonight...

But please post another one soon :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG - a cliffie - sorry another chapter to get too.... yes please, pass the tissues!

I hope you are writing another chapter as I get to the last chapters that are posted so far?!?!?!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome - have to keep on reading....

On to the next chapter - thank goodness there is still another one to read for me :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

OMG - you can't seriously think I want you to leave this story - even for just alittle while!!! NOOOO!!!!

It's great but really getting juicy now :)

Stay with it please.... I love this story!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

Something or someone's coming.....

T2M x

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

I really love this story. I just started reading it last night and I can't stop! Oh well, I guess dusting and cleaning can wait...lol Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I say the same about my house cleaniing everytime i write! LOL

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

Can't review - have to get to the next chapter NOW!!!!!

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your wondersul reviews! more to come soon. I hope you keep reading.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

What did Bella ever do to Bree? Why has she got such venom towards her?!?!

Loved Bella & Edward's little lemon - getting a bit citrusy :)

Glad that Bella is going to Alice & Esme for advice too...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

This was a brilliant chapter... loved every word :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10

Glad she came back...

Edward would be in lots of trouble if she didn't.... LOL

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Bella - her trust is broken!

Loved them riding Jake :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

Geez how many graves did they find?

Interesting Bella is getting jealous of Stella's attention from the men... 

Atleast Edward is kissing her - giving her all the love she is needing!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

WOW - he did take alot of girls...

I love how Jake imprinted on Stella - perfect :)

I'm reading this in my iphone as well & it wont let me leave reviews! 

I'll have to go back & review if I get to the end of a chapter :)

I love this story - you have me hook, line & sinker!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

As Edward said - baby steps but I like the fact Charlie knows all about the Cullens & the werewolves.... makes life alittle bit easier :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Bree - who is she with now? 

I'm glad Bella & Stella have got there homes sorted out...

Only to get better - well, I hope so...

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews! I am glad you were recomended to my story! I hope you continue to enjoy it. there is still so much more to come.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

I just can't imagine the readjusting these girls are going to have to deal with & how long it will take to reeducate them.

Amazing story - I have to say once again :)

Got my heart beating so fast reading this :)

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Brilliant chapter - didn't see him coming back to take the girls again!

Awesome chapter :)

All I can say is - thank goodness I have a few chapters to catch up on.... lucky for me!!

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

WOW - poor girls... how will they adjust?

Interesting story to say the least...

T2M x

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was recommended this story & it's got me hooked already :)

T2M x

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

I like the story and hope that you continue it to its completion. 

 

Keye



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews. I am sorry it took so long to get back to you, but I do apprciate everyone of them! Happy reading!

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

I can only imagine how tough this would be for Edward to have to re-train Bella.  I mean, it goes completely against his nature to order her around as she is his mate and all he wants to do is everything for her to make her happy.  It is going to be interesting to see how Bella comes around.  Stella too if she is going to remain much in this story.

 

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am liking the story so far.  You never really read a story with Alistair in it so it is already different than what I have read before.  So, curious to see where you are going with this story.  How Bella and the other girls came to be with Alistair and the lack.  How the girl's are going to recover from being abused for so long.  I think this all has the makings of a very interesting story.

 

Keye

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

awwww he is so sweet

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!! HE is so fucking sweet it hurts!!

xx

Marianne

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

Ouch, and the cliffie ends with needing a cold shower... burn!

 

LOL

 

Loved this shapter, I cant wait to see what happens with Alice's visions now  :)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

thanks good chapters

Reviewer: unicorngirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

this is good update soon please

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 18

well it seems they have quite the fight ahead of them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

Tanya cause mischief as always.



Author's Response:

Acrually it was Kate who caused the mistchief and Tanya was trying to smooth it over. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank yoiu for reading it!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

but we don't have to wayt much?right? ***bats her eyelashes shamelessly***

loved it!

xx

marianne



Author's Response:

Ah, now that is really a good question. And the answer is the  next chapter is already written. Now it up to the Beta to send it back.

Thank you for reading and reviewing it!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

I can't wait for the fight, I hope the kick Jane's (you know what)!!!!!



Author's Response:

I think you are going to love the twist coming. Thank you for reading and reviewing it!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Alec can´t destroy his twin. He will take Bree to Volterra and Aro will allow them to live ....ever after.... Jane will accept Bree, torture her now and then for fun and games .......and otherwise be a good girl. for her beloved Aro...because this is about Edward and Bella! And as much as I love Alec.

My brother would not kill me because of one bad decission in life. And I am not nearly 600years old. LOL



Author's Response:

I can't give away too much, but i think the twist i have planned will shock everyone! Dont fret it will be worth the wait. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Come on, the Volturi are not that bad! Edward did not follow the rules. Why do they always want "help" from Alec, cutting of senses - but otherwise blame him as witchtwin??? He has feelings, ya know!

Here ist comes, my dark side!!! Still love the story. (I usually read dark Volturi stories; :O)

But you post whatever you like and I will wait for updates and maybe one of your other stories is any good?!



Author's Response:

Thank you again for your review! Next two chapters are being beta'd and i will post as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

hey....are you going to update? i want to read more this is so good. jane and the volturi. that bitch...lmamo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews. Yes, I have two chapters at the beta's to be gone over. As soon as they come back I will post them immediately. After consulting the readers they have made my choice for me, so it will definately continue its course. This is far from the end. Thank you again!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

oooohohh that bitch.

Reviewer: celtic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

That vision of Alice's can't come about, nonononononono. Since Bella is a mental shield someone needs to change her to a hot fierce vamp, then maybe she can throw her shield around everybody to protect them. Or maybe she can just whip the shit out of Jane, yeah I like that idea. Some payback on an evil vamp after what Alistair did to her. I wonder why Alec can't just destroy all of Jane's feelings and senses to give someone a chance to destroy her? He can do that with other vamps. Especially since Jane will destroy his mate if she gets the chance.

Thank you again for such an awesome story. Now I am waiting anxiously for the next breath-catching and/or jaw-dropping chapter. Or maybe another gigglefest like chapter 15.

celtic

 



Author's Response:

The only reason Alec hasn't done anything to her is he hasn't seen her to do anything. Alice cant see what he will do until he decides and he is trying not to think about destroying his twin sister. So we have to wait for them to confront each other and then when he decides Alice will see it.

Next two chapters are done as soon as my beta sends them back I will post them. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story!

Reviewer: celtic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh My Gawd, please you have to continue this story. I love it so much. This has been the best chapter yet. I was laughing so hard I cried, "Alice and the fruit". Esme comments and Edward's reactions had me laughing so hard I had to hold my stomach. Your description of their facial expressions and inner dialog are hilarious, I love it. This is such an awesome story, different from any I've read. I really, really like that everybody is friendly and gets along. Although, I feel horrible for Seth. I hate that his father has treated him this way over something that isn't his fault.

Thanks for sharing your time, talent, and wonderful story with us. It is greatly appreciated.

celtic

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a wonderful review! Rest assured this story will be continuing, the next two chapters are already being beta'd so when I get them back I will post them immediately! Thank you again, it's nice to hear when people like what I write.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well, I like your funny side as well....sex is like naked wrestling! LOL.

I can see Esme furious about Edward. Good one.

And as for Bree and James....the Cullens help and fight them?



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long to answer your review! I have been writing up a storm over the last week. Next two chapters for this story are already done and being beta'd. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to follow it!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

Seth was changed and now his dad doesn´t want him back - thats soo sad.

I really like this story! The only thing I thought was strange was the Walmart bit. Isabella feels inferior because of her clothes....

I guess Isabella goes thought a lot of emotional changes and she does not unterstand.....but would she really act like that with her Master? It´s almost like blackmailing...... Nevermind - thats just me: I coulnd care less for designer clothes and shopping in general.

I like the dark side of this story. It is not easy but you did a great job so far!

Thank you

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

where do you get all these ideas from?

love the story. poor bree. hope she finds happiness

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

....the private vampire stalker made me laugh...but Charlie is odd..... after 10 years without his daughter...".I can't watch my child groveling on her hands and knees on a 24/7 basis.".......GET A GRIP, DADDY!!!!!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMG. he is back? followed the to the hospital? Sorry I have to go and read the next chapter

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! What an opening. What did they do to the girls that they are so .....submissive.  thanks for sharing ..

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

awwwww poor baby!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

i loved every bit of this continues reading

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh my on to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews! I am so glad you found my story! Happy reading!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

uh oh

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it i can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

ooooohhh this is intresting

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 17

wow that was one hell of a vision! poor alice to have to see it all. sometimes knowing the future is a heavy burden to carry. i wonder what they will do to change things?



Author's Response:

Thank you again for all your reviews! The good thing about Alice's vivsion is once you see it it's like the story of a butterfly wings. one flutter can change everything. Unfortunately she has to relive it until the one thing does change it. I dont know about Alice but I cried writting it, Thanks again!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

well i am glad that the nonsense of not turning bella has been taken care of quickly!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

did i miss something? how did bella get the claw marks? where on her head are they? who gave them to her?

i wonder what bree will do?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews. as for your question Bella did it to herself when she was locked in the closet her scratching when the fabric touched her. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well I got my seth time so thank you :) I wonder if dimitri is bree's love?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Holy shit!!! And smoke is over I gotta go back to work:(

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love that they have like 'sex homework' thie week only use your hands... I think they both passed with flying colors!
And bree is gonna be trouble! I wanna se what is going on with seth

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

Heehee I loved the line- 'see that is what happens when you do wear clothes' too funny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

yay bella woke up! and she seems to really be moving forward... for now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

well shit eh eddie? eddie needs his gaurd up at all times with bella. she is so unsure and insecure about everything, there is no room for eddie to make even the smallest mistake. i wonder if bella will talk to stella? will stella be able to explain?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

ok so james is not the one who took on bree so who was it? and now bree has been changed i wonder what they will do with her? what will happen when bella and stella see bree again?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

i will admit that the clothes wereceedpy but not so bad.

time to visit stella

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

So awful to see everything be a huge deal for bella, things that 'normal people' don't even think about are panic inducing for her

Author's Response:

Thank you for review each chapter! I am glad you chose to read my story. This was my first shot at the darkside, I hope you are still enjoying it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor bella and stella total new world and they don't have eachother anymore

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4

My goodness your heart just breaks for them all

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Really enjoying the story so far. Things should get really. Interesting once bella is home

Author's Response:

Thank you again for giving it a shot! I hope you continue to enjoy this story!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

Question why is eddie, I'm assuming it's eddie, keep coming in her room? How old is bella now? When she was taken?

Author's Response:

sorry it so long to get back to you i am sure by now you have figured out that bella was taken when she was 8 ind is now 18 he held her for 10 years. Thank you for reading and reviewing it.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well this one looks like it will be full of twists and turns

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

aro is such a wuss

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

I say leave it to Jasper to re- evaluate.  He is the tactician. 

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

Its on now!!!

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

Ah oh! o.0



Author's Response:

Yes ah oh is right they will be scrambling to prevent what was seen. but can all be saved? hummm, i hope so. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

holy cow! That is crazy!! I hope they change that! maybe Bella will get changed and use her shield??



Author's Response:

only time will tell what they all do to fix it. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: TheTTys Diamon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 17

This chapter was not what I thought it would be. Hopefully the Cullens wil not die.



Author's Response:

I am sorry if you didn't like it. As for them dying? I couldn't do that then the story would end. And sadly at that. I had a hard time writing it as a vision. Thank you for reading it.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great so many twists to this story.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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