Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Excellent job, so realistic. Can't wait to see what happens and if they find out who's doing this. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love it as always! Looks like Vickie is showing her true colors. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
Uh-oh. Is it Vicky? Or some girl who's jealous of Bella?
Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Amazing update.
Author's Response:
Thank you :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
I liked this plot line however at eight and a half weeks it is still known as 'products of conception' and not 'a baby'. Ive had scans at 8 weeks three times so I know this.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
aww i love it!!!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
i love it1 as always:)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
i love it!
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
aw thats sad.....
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Laughed when Bella Goggled Kissing!!!! I feel so sorry for Bella. I hope her flashbacks don't happen very often. Poor thing.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
i love it!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
lol i love it!!!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
aww i like it cannot believe viky and emmett are datting thats why alice is angry
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
omg i couldnt stop laughing! i love it!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
yay! i love it!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
poor bella! i hope renee goes to jail!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
i love it!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
i love it hope phil dies! i love it!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
omg!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
yes shes gonna go to jail!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
awww that was nice of edward i love it!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
i love it!!!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
whoa alice! i love what she plans to do if she ever sees renee!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
i wonder what the file said poor bella!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
lol i like the cullens! i love it!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh i love it!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
poor bella!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it!!!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
This story has had me hooked since I started it. I can't wait for updates. Fantastic writing!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! Looking foward to more.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh, Bella is doing so well, little by little she's overcoming her insecurities and fears. I looove Charlie, every time you describe his interaction with Bella, and even Emmett, you make me smile. I can't wait either for the moment when Bella calls him 'dad', I'm guessing Charlie will melt when that happens.
I hope you're feeling much better, and see you soon!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
I can't wait for Bella to call Charlie Dad or Daddy. I might actually tear up when that happens.
I get this strange feeling that Vicky is not taking the break up with Emmett very well. Is she going to be bunny boiling, Fatal Attraction psycho about it?
I love that Edward pours his feelings into his kiss but is still mindful not to do something that will set Bella off.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
:D
I really do love this story. Thank you so so much for writing it
Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is doing so well. I love the relationship between Bella and Edward. It is so sweet.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Keep writing please. your story is AMAZING. i love the story line and your writing style. i just recomended this story to 3 of my friends and i really hope you can keep writing. keep up the good work=)
Date: 07 Jul 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter, I loved Charlie pov it was great.
Looking forward to the dance.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
Such a sweet version of Bella and Edward loving your story!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
Therapy is going well for Bella but without the family and friend support she has it would work so well. She is breaking out of her shell with Edward her home (I love that) and being more assertive with him. Love Emmett but he needs to get it together and help Rose where is she????
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
"Why don't we talk about something lighter for the last bit of today's session. Bella, why don't you tell about something in your life that makes you truly happy?"
"Noel." I say softly.
"And who is Noel?"
"My baby." I sigh a little happy. "She is cute and fluffy and she loves me no matter what." I pull out my cell phone and show her the picture of Noel that I have as my wallpaper.
Where Bella is quietly excited, Alice on the other hand has been going nuts around the house in happy overdrive. She dances at random moments and squeals with delight that she is going to see Jasper in a suit. I'm worried about my sister's mental state.
I love just holding Bella quietly. She's warm in my arms and smells of her sweet pea scented body wash from Bath and Body Works. I close my eyes and breathe in the calming scent of Bella. I can feel her relaxing in my arms and I squeeze a little tighter and she squeezes me back. It's a perfect moment. Just Bella and I.
My tongue thanks God that she no longer bites down on it, while I thank God for the woman in my arms.
"Eww! Shit people, some of us have to eat in here!" Emmett exclaims coming into the kitchen. "My eyes, I need bleach, my eyes!" He yells. Bella does what I expect least from her, she starts giggling. Then it turns to a full on laugh.
"Wow, Bells, I bet a sample bowl wouldn't be missed from that pot of good smelling food..." Emmett uses puppy dog eyes on her and she giggles again.
"One bowl." She puts her hands on her little hips and stares at him sternly, but with a beautiful smile on her face.
"Promise, sis, one big bowl." She rolls her eyes and fills him a healthy sized portion.
"Anyone else?" She offers and both Charlie and I agree.
Charlie tells us about his day, which includes breaking up Jessica Stanley and Mike Newton having a fight in front of Newton Outfitters. He didn't go into details, but did warn us that Mike has a black eye now.
"I can't believe how many people wanted my chili recipe." Bella says shyly.
"It went over well." I agree. The girl cooked like a dream, something I know for a fact she didn't get from her Mother. I'd like to think it was my own late Mom's genes that gave her that little something extra that makes her such a wonderful cook.
And I'll never forget the day she went to address me after therapy and she went, 'Da... Charlie...' So close to being called Dad. I can't wait for that day. And if she ever calls me Daddy, I know I will die a happy man.
These were my favorite parts. It took awhile to do but so worth. *waves to baby Alex* you know I couldn't review without giving him a shout out. Until next time I even got my Noell fix well kind of you know what I mean lol!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
I've had this on my favorites list for a while and barely now had time to finish it. This is such a good story.
For this chapter, I'm so glad that Bella is opening up a lot more. Not only is she letting Edward get closer to her, she is letting herself go and take some control with him. I was afraid when Emmett came into the kitchen yelling that she was going to shut down. I'm so glad she didn't and she just laughed it off.
Charlie is so adorable. I love how outgoing and loving he is with his kids. He reminds me of my own dad. I really can't wait until Bella can love and trust him enough to call him dad.
Great Job. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am so happy how close Bella and Edward are getting. She is really starting to come out of her shell. And her "homework" with the therapist, with words to describe each person in her life - right on the money - for everybody. And how sweet to describe Edward as home. That right there speaks volumes.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love it. There were several chapters where i cried a little. You certainly have a way with words.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks for Charlie's POV. I always love knowing what he is thinking!!! I love seeing how far Bella has come. She deserves all the happiness in the world. I can't wait until she finally calls Charlie Dad/Daddy. That will be a huge day!!! Great job...thanks so much!!! I hope you are feeling better!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
wonderful chapter :)
Date: 06 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
aww...i see improvement... makeout session in the kitchen...lol.
bella is getting better
poor em and rose.. i hope they can work it work
plz update soon
Date: 05 Jul 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love the progresesion
Date: 05 Jul 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter. I love how she is getting closer to Edward. I just hope no one does anything at the dance to upset her. Thanks for the update.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
I really like how she is gradually adjusting and trusting. Not just the instant changes you read so many times. It makes it so real. Great job!
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome chapter! So sweet. I'm happy you feel better and look forward to updates on both stories.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good chapter! I like how Edward wanted to take it further but stopped.
Can't wait for the update!
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter!!!! So glad Bella is benefiting from therapy. I thought Charlie's POV was very sweet. Looking forward to the dance.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
I couldn't believe Charlie said a pizza. My first thought was what Emmett won't be home for dinner. Am surprised two pizzas would do the trick for a growing boy with two hallow legs.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
Lol, I have two aunts named 'Cindy' except they're two different spellings. But because of getting married, they also have the same last name.
Date: 05 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
so sweet of em to go with angela
Date: 27 Jun 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks so much for your story so far! I can't wait for you to write more : )
Date: 27 Jun 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
aww, that was so cute!
thanks for the story
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ohhh, a puppy, that is so cute!!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Woah, this is going to get intense with the whole Renee thing.
Best line ever - "I'm absorbing info so when Jasper realizes that I'm it for him, I can woo him with my knowledge." that was so so funny, I laughed for ages.
I am jealous of peanut butter ice cream, in NZ we have nothing like that : (
Thanks for your story, I am really enjoying it : )
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
poor rose : (
I like your story lots
I love Esme, she is my fave in all the stories I read and you have done her justice : )
thanks
Date: 26 Jun 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yay, I really love your story
Makes me sad that I don't have a brother
Thank you
Date: 25 Jun 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Just read this story for the first time and I love it. Can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
Dang and just like that ice ice baby is back in my head! why? Lord why? I loved the scene between Vicky and Em it was raw but if I was Vicky I would have laid into but she was more classy about it than I would have been. Poor Jake get a clue or Vanessa Wolf aka Nessie haha. I got my Noel fix and Charlie fix he tries so hard. Until next time. I would love for all the outtakes to be in one place but if you want to put into the story I think it works better than having to go elsewhere to find them that's annoying but that's me. *waving* to baby Alex who's the baby? You're the baby, Alex, yes you are! Man I need fucking help I know. Don't mind me. see ya!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it! God you have me addicted.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward, omg I want him for a boyfrieind!
Loved it!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome!
Loved it!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett= best big brother ever
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
Noel makes my heart warm. LOVE IT!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love Bella's POV, she is so sweet.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awwww loved it!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Alice I wish you were my BFF! Loved it!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
I feel so bad for Rose and Bella. Love this so much
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the fanfic/P&P reference.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love this one too!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Going back and reviewing the chapters I missed :) LOVED IT BB!!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Personally, I prefer when outtakes are in a separate chapter, it's less confusing to me.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
yay a gazillion chapters.... umm sorry. yeah therapy can help my theripist was the one who called my parents and the school to convince them a change in schools is what i needed and it helped. let's hear it for therapists the unsung heroes of many. btw awesome chappy.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Im glad that Bella is in therapy I think it'll be good for her and her family in the end! Im loving this story and look forward to your updates!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Amazing update. loved it.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
He defenitly need to go and talk to Rose. I also think the outtake should just be labled posted in the stories as outtake 1, that would just be easier. Great chapter loved it thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
post in the story labeled please!! Thanks!
Also to Emmet: Come on dude!! Go talk to her already!! ***winks***
lol
I liked it!! i am proud of bella!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
talk to rose talk to rose.
Next chapter please.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great job with this chapter :) I'm glad that Emmett decided to not be with Victoria. Even if he doesn't get back with Rose, it's just not a good time for him to be with someone right now. I LOVE how she stood up to Jake. It takes a strong person to be able to stand up for someone they live like that. And I find it incredibly ironic how Jake said that Edward was too old for her, when she's older Jake by the same amount....heehee
And no worries about the shameless self promotion....we all do it!
~Rachel
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter! Glad to see Bella is so willing to go to therapy.
And I wonder if Edward will speak to Jacob?
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter i think the out takes should be separate
Date: 23 Jun 2010 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Please dont leave To The Extreme as a oneshot I need this story to be more so get on it LOL.
Bella told someone off this is great she stuck up for herself she is healling. Is Jake going to get the shit beat out of him??? I am glad broke it off with Vicky and I am glad he has for givin Rose about the baby. Bella needs to talk to him I think to help him move forward with Rose.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
i see panic attacks and nighttime call to liz in bella's future. but hey dealing with this shit is not gonna be easy. i am proud of em for breaking things off with vicky. it was just more drama and un needed stuff for him to deal with. i just hope she doesn't turn into 'a woman scorned' because em doesn't need that either.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
omg... firstly i think bella is finally healing with Edward by her side making her really happy... i really hope nothing happens to destroy their relationship
and emmett i think he did the right thin with vicky and now he can try and repair his relationship with rose... cause a) she is hurting too b) they belong together c)they could help heal each other
plz update soon:)
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, I never can expect what will happen in your chapters. You always have a variety of emotions in them. Excellent job, however you decide to post the outtake is fine with me. Just let me know if it's a separate story. ;)
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
well i hope emmy is able to pul himself out of this rut. he better be using his 2 weeks to actually think this all over. he knows he loves rose now he just needs to forgive her grieve and move on.
so glad bella and charlie had a daddy daughter day - they are so important.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Post outtakes with the story. I am so glad that Emmett got rid of Vicki. She knew Emmett loved Rose even though they are having troubles they are in love.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
Look at shy little Bella telling off Jake!!! I was very impressed by that. Usually, she is so soft spoken and quiet when she's in situations she's not comfortable with. But having Jake talk bad about Edward and she was all over that!!!! Good for her.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
I thought Bella's first session was promising, it will be difficult and painful, but the end result will be worth it, she will be finally able to step out from her mother's shadow and that's priceless.
Emmett's talk with Victoria was long overdue, they were both getting hurt by being in a relationship. Victoria's reaction was not unexpected, she didn't want to let go of him and was hanging on to the illusion of a romantic relationship with him, but it was not real, hopefully when she has time to process it, she can be friends with Emmett or at least maintain her friendship with Bella.