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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:17 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

I liked it a lot! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 9:16 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

Awe!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:48 PM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast

They are sweet! 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 2:16 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

GREAT LITTLE STORY

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 12:49 PM Title: Making Our Future

so not going to actally have sex hmmm

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 12:42 PM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast

interesting

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 12:33 PM Title: Prologue

great start

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:59 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

Great story, full of love! 

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:52 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

beautiful :)

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:05 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

Wow, very intense that last scene. Loving this story so far!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:20 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

This was short story but Beautiful..  awesome..  Your a great writer.. 

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:50 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

and baby makes 3, and girls make 5, and baby boy makes 6 a prfect little family.

i decided to try kickin it old school and i am so glad i did.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:40 AM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

they finally all gave in to what they were feeling. and they made it beautiful.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:12 AM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

oh that would be horrile! poor bella she is trying so hard not to get any deeper involved in this.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:23 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

nothing makes you realize your feelings better than a life or death situation.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:31 AM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

well she may be falling but at least she knows enough to try to step back

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:40 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

twin girls! wow! i wonder how long it will be before bella gives in and moves in with the boys?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:20 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV

poor bella she does not need to deal with james and his bullshit.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:48 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

oh my twins! and bella is feeling .... something....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:35 AM Title: Making Our Future

so cute how eddie is embarassed about taking care of things at the hospital and everyone knowing what he is doing in there.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:22 AM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast

such proud poppas! and it would seem that both eddie and jasper are not opposed to bating for the other team....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:07 AM Title: Prologue

poor eddie and jasper

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Making Our Future

natural baby that is the way you should go and bella wants to too!!1

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:18 PM Title: Prologue

go boys go boys getcha a baby mama!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:44 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

i just love the poly stories with e b & J... they just seem to complete each other. short, sweet story



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: bufster Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 12:30 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

Adorable ending! This story was very cute. I wouldn't mind a few outtakes ;D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: froggyqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 1:45 AM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

cute story! I'm glad they ended up together.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much  for reviewing!

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2010 9:58 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

that was good i liked it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Kagome-Lilian-Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:09 AM Title: Making Our Future

Lol this story is really interesting, it has me hocked...but when i saw you used the Quad Cities in here i was highly amused, that and you are using iowa. I don't think i have seen someone use them yet. I am from the Quad citites so it amused me alot to see that in a twilight fanfic!

keep up the good work, i am going to go finish this then look at your other stories.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I have many more stories on my fanfiction page than here, although I'm slowly bringing over my others. 

I grew up in the Sterling/Dixon/Rock Falls area

Reviewer: jaclynheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:24 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

Loved it! It was a really great story, good job :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:39 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

:)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:09 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

This chapter almost makes me sad. It seems like Edward and Jasper are closer than ever but Bella seems like an outsider. Like she is the mean step-mother or something. They are talking about getting Bella mad at them just so they can run off together and have sex by themselves. I am sure Bella would like to run off and spend some alone time with one of them too.



Author's Response:

This is just a brief glimpse at a twenty minute period. After fifteen years together, people go on vacations. Sometimes they want time apart. If there were more chapters, I might have shown E and B going off, or J&B, or all three while Carlisle and Esme watch the children. Triads aren't always 100% equal in how time is divided. 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:56 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

I loved every line of it!

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:21 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

Loved this story and I am sad to see it end.  Great job.

Reviewer: julie70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:41 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

I have really enjoyed reading this story..it was just fantastic..

Reviewer: paola2208 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:33 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

Great story, beautifuly written. I enjoyed reading every chapter. Congrats!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:29 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV

woo hoo.  great short story

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 10:23 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

:)

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 7:10 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

“Does this mean I can call you 'Baby' again?”

(Thud..Faints) Soooo good...

Wait..Epilogue? Nooo..Not with all the loving and coming to terms with what all three of them coming together means... A few more happy, blissful or even trying chapters, please?? Pretty please??



Author's Response:

Unless someone bids on more chapters in the FGB auction, this story is complete- sorry.  This was a short story from the last FGB author auction.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 6:19 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

FANTASTIC!! I loved this chapter - so tender and sexy!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 5:36 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

woo hoo.  Yummy togetherness

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:24 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

So beautiful! Love these three!

Reviewer: Story Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 5:06 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

This is an exciting story because with each chapter I feel certain I know what's coming next and you continually take an unpredictable path instead.  I love that, especially as it's so rare.  The time you are taking in bringing these three adults into a new relationship with one another and peeling back the layers of resistance bit by bit are making this more believable and a more intriguing journey.  This is some wonderful writing!

Story Girl (Wanda)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

this was such a happy and sad chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 1:51 AM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

geez guys.   giut trip the poor girl

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 12:11 AM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

OMG! How can she say no to that?!? LOL

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

:)

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 10:30 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV

I hope Bella stays!!! Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:20 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Great start. Can't wait to see how it evolves.
As allways wonderful story telling skills. Meg

Reviewer: GigiB Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

arrg! cliff hanger!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

I am really liking this story! I am a little afraid that jasper and edward are so in love it would be awkward for bella to be with them. They have known each other for so long its hard to think they could love her as much as eachother. I cant wait for the babies to be born though they will be such cute parents!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:05 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Loved it!

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Yay I finally figured out how to review from my phone.. Ok I love this story. It's very sweet how Bella is giving them what they want and also what they didn't think was possible. I am in shock that Bella kissed Edward, wonder how that will work out. Can't wait to see what happens between all three of them.

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 10:51 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Wow, you had me really worried there about Edward..Glad he's well and being kissed...lol.. Update soon, please!



Author's Response:

 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: felon12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Things are really heating  up! Can't wait for the next update. WHICH I HOPE WILL BE SOON!



Author's Response:

No later than next Wednesday.  I was impatient this week and broke my Wednesday posting schedule.

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a smiley face. I'm glad you're enjoying the story

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 9:57 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

please tell me that this is going to be the beging of the three of them and maybe bella opening her heart to jasper and edward i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon



Author's Response:

The latest chapter 8: Transitions will be is next Wednesday.

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Oh! Oh! Oh! MY!!!*Doing happy dance!*  she kissed one of them!!! keep going - coz i'm loving it! that little bastard James - I wish he was dead!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Roxyrae Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 7:41 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Wow I love your story!  I have never read an Edward/Jasper story because I'm really not comfortable with reading details like that but your story has become one of my favorites!  You write it so tastfully that is seems natural and sweet.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

Woo Hoo.  Maybe now they can prosecute James.  He threatened and also admitted to previous assaults.  Maybe Mama Renee will get her head out of her ass now.



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb. and I doubt Renee will.  She hadn't by the time I finished writing the epilogue...

Reviewer: carrangi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

ahhh I am loving this story! cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: wickedlovely731 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

wow, i love it, please post soon.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 10:58 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

:)

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 9:21 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

Love this story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 5:18 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

Well at least she is being honest.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 4:06 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

loved it!

Reviewer: wickedlovely731 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2010 3:20 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

awwww i love this story, jasper is so cute

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 9:06 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV

:)

Reviewer: jkoch812 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 8:40 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

Aw Bella can't go! :(  I'm sure things will work out... *crosses fingers*  I love that they both have real feelings for her.   And I hope that James gets what he deserves soon.   Great last two chapters!  Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 5:47 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV

Why would she go to dinner at her mom's house to see James?



Author's Response:

She didn't. She told James she would meet him there, and then called Jake to come get her- keeping her away from James while he thought she was coming to him.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 5:08 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV

Ugh  the scumball is back.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV

Ugh  the scumball is back.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:17 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

awww 2 girls.

Reviewer: jkoch812 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 4:21 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

*phew*  I thought she'd lost the baby.  Twins!!!  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: laraspain Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:01 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

This is such a new and wonderful idea for a fic! I'm loving it. Great job

Reviewer: JenRar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:26 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

Oh my!  Twins!  And hot shower sex!  Woohoo!  LOL



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Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JenRar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:22 AM Title: Making Our Future

Cute!  :)

Reviewer: JenRar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:17 AM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast

Oh yes she will.  :D  More please!  haha

Reviewer: JenRar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:07 AM Title: Prologue

Damn, so sad!  Great start!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:06 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

OMG twins, yeah. So will the boys keep both. silly question had to  ask. or will bella get one and the boys get one. but then that would break up the twins and I hear they need to be together. maybe they will all live together. I can't wait to see what happens next. love it



Author's Response:

sorry- I don't answer plot questions. You have to be patient. :)

 

As a mom of 2 y/o twins, I can promise that the pregnancy, delivery, and newborn days (or should that be 'daze', given the sleep deprivation?) will be realistic.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 1:59 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

wow  twins

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:50 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

this is good



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Thank you!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:35 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:15 PM Title: Making Our Future

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:03 PM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:46 PM Title: Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: brit77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:45 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember

I like the story so far and Jasper + Edward+ a story written well = awesomeness!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Now that the story is caught up to its posting on ffn, it will only update weekly.

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