Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:09 AM Title: Making Our Future
Lol this story is really interesting, it has me hocked...but when i saw you used the Quad Cities in here i was highly amused, that and you are using iowa. I don't think i have seen someone use them yet. I am from the Quad citites so it amused me alot to see that in a twilight fanfic!
keep up the good work, i am going to go finish this then look at your other stories.
Thanks so much! I have many more stories on my fanfiction page than here, although I'm slowly bringing over my others.
I grew up in the Sterling/Dixon/Rock Falls area
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:09 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
This chapter almost makes me sad. It seems like Edward and Jasper are closer than ever but Bella seems like an outsider. Like she is the mean step-mother or something. They are talking about getting Bella mad at them just so they can run off together and have sex by themselves. I am sure Bella would like to run off and spend some alone time with one of them too.
This is just a brief glimpse at a twenty minute period. After fifteen years together, people go on vacations. Sometimes they want time apart. If there were more chapters, I might have shown E and B going off, or J&B, or all three while Carlisle and Esme watch the children. Triads aren't always 100% equal in how time is divided.
Date: 31 May 2010 7:10 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
“Does this mean I can call you 'Baby' again?”
(Thud..Faints) Soooo good...
Wait..Epilogue? Nooo..Not with all the loving and coming to terms with what all three of them coming together means... A few more happy, blissful or even trying chapters, please?? Pretty please??
Unless someone bids on more chapters in the FGB auction, this story is complete- sorry. This was a short story from the last FGB author auction.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 May 2010 5:06 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
This is an exciting story because with each chapter I feel certain I know what's coming next and you continually take an unpredictable path instead. I love that, especially as it's so rare. The time you are taking in bringing these three adults into a new relationship with one another and peeling back the layers of resistance bit by bit are making this more believable and a more intriguing journey. This is some wonderful writing!
Story Girl (Wanda)
Thanks so much!
Date: 26 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
I am really liking this story! I am a little afraid that jasper and edward are so in love it would be awkward for bella to be with them. They have known each other for so long its hard to think they could love her as much as eachother. I cant wait for the babies to be born though they will be such cute parents!
Date: 26 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Yay I finally figured out how to review from my phone.. Ok I love this story. It's very sweet how Bella is giving them what they want and also what they didn't think was possible. I am in shock that Bella kissed Edward, wonder how that will work out. Can't wait to see what happens between all three of them.
Date: 25 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Things are really heating up! Can't wait for the next update. WHICH I HOPE WILL BE SOON!
No later than next Wednesday. I was impatient this week and broke my Wednesday posting schedule.
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:57 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
please tell me that this is going to be the beging of the three of them and maybe bella opening her heart to jasper and edward i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
The latest chapter 8: Transitions will be is next Wednesday.
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 7:41 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Wow I love your story! I have never read an Edward/Jasper story because I'm really not comfortable with reading details like that but your story has become one of my favorites! You write it so tastfully that is seems natural and sweet.
thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Woo Hoo. Maybe now they can prosecute James. He threatened and also admitted to previous assaults. Maybe Mama Renee will get her head out of her ass now.
Thanks, bb. and I doubt Renee will. She hadn't by the time I finished writing the epilogue...
Date: 13 May 2010 8:40 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
Aw Bella can't go! :( I'm sure things will work out... *crosses fingers* I love that they both have real feelings for her. And I hope that James gets what he deserves soon. Great last two chapters! Can't wait for more!
Date: 13 May 2010 5:47 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV
Why would she go to dinner at her mom's house to see James?
She didn't. She told James she would meet him there, and then called Jake to come get her- keeping her away from James while he thought she was coming to him.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:06 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
OMG twins, yeah. So will the boys keep both. silly question had to ask. or will bella get one and the boys get one. but then that would break up the twins and I hear they need to be together. maybe they will all live together. I can't wait to see what happens next. love it
sorry- I don't answer plot questions. You have to be patient. :)
As a mom of 2 y/o twins, I can promise that the pregnancy, delivery, and newborn days (or should that be 'daze', given the sleep deprivation?) will be realistic.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing