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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 7:58 PM Title: Finale

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 7:03 PM Title: Ending the Nightmare

Awesome!

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 6:57 PM Title: Finding Bree

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 5:15 PM Title: Busted

Fabulous

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 5:07 PM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

Excellent

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 4:58 PM Title: Overload

Awesome

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 4:45 PM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 4:34 PM Title: Creeps

Fantastic

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 4:12 PM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style

Excellent

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 10:00 AM Title: Up in Smoke

Loved it!

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 9:48 AM Title: Declarations

Great!

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 9:43 AM Title: Full House

Awesome!

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 9:30 AM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 9:19 AM Title: To Save a Rose

Loved it!

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Date: 10 Sep 2020 9:08 AM Title: The Date

Loved it! Uh-oh!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2020 12:07 AM Title: When did this happen?

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2020 11:40 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You

Sweet chapter! Poor Bella!

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 11:30 PM Title: The Price of Insanity

Loved it! Poor Jasper!

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 11:15 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss

Great

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 11:02 PM Title: Yardwork

Loved it!

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 8:18 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders

Excellent

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 7:57 PM Title: Trying

Loved it!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2020 7:47 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 7:12 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations

Sweet

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 6:58 PM Title: Finding My Way

Awesome

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 6:37 PM Title: First Day Pt 2

Loved it!

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 6:21 PM Title: First Day Pt 1

Great

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Date: 09 Sep 2020 6:08 PM Title: Moving Day

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Lmadams Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 4:24 PM Title: Finale

I love your story 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:40 PM Title: Finale

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:13 PM Title: Ending the Nightmare

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:08 PM Title: Finding Bree

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:35 PM Title: Busted

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:20 PM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:05 PM Title: Overload

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:59 AM Title: It's a WTF Kind of Day

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:28 AM Title: Creeps

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:50 PM Title: Big Bang, Emmett Style

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:35 PM Title: Up in Smoke

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:22 PM Title: Declarations

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:02 PM Title: Full House

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:48 PM Title: Return to Nightmare Alley

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:35 PM Title: To Save a Rose

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:22 PM Title: The Date

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:06 PM Title: When did this happen?

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:08 PM Title: Fix Me, Fix You

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:34 PM Title: The Price of Insanity

loved it! poor jasper!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:23 PM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:30 PM Title: Yardwork

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Confessions and Cold Shoulders

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:31 PM Title: Trying

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:19 PM Title: Out of the Mouths of Babes

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:08 PM Title: Lunch Time Revelations

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:51 PM Title: Finding My Way

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:31 PM Title: First Day Pt 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:05 PM Title: First Day Pt 1

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 5:23 AM Title: Moving Day

loved it!

Reviewer: raedeath13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 10:22 PM Title: Finale

SEQUEL!!!!!! please! i beg of thee!

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 11:54 PM Title: Finale

i just found yor story and loved it i was hoping that you might still decide to try and write a sequel to this story i think it would be great i would love to know what is up with bree and her family i would love to find out what happens next so please let me know if what you think



Author's Response:

originally I was going to, but a million other things ended up capturing my attention lol Thank you so much for giving me the chance to entertain you :-)

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:52 AM Title: First Day Pt 2

im very torn... Jacob and Edward?! Really?!   but alas i have relenquished my trust to your previous work, so i'll let the pro take me where she will...



Author's Response:

lol thank you for trusting me dear!

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:24 AM Title: First Day Pt 1

oooh can't wait to meet Alice's brother... :))

Reviewer: kissinbuttaflyz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:43 AM Title: Moving Day

I've read other stories by you, and again you do not disappoint! normally don't care for the flashes, this one tho, has reeled me in... so glad this story is finished and i don't have to wait for the updates :))

Reviewer: lynista Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 6:36 PM Title: Moving Day

Just wondering if you are planning on going through with writing a sequel. I really hope you are!



Author's Response:

I think I might, but right now I'm writing a Dragon Age story :-)

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:37 AM Title: Finale

that was god i liked it

Reviewer: mazcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:39 AM Title: Finale

yes i think u should write a follow on carnt wait to read it

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:36 AM Title: Finale

Thank you for the wonderful story i hope that we definitely get a sequel because i would love jasper and bella to get their HEA.

 

 

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:26 PM Title: Finale

you ended on a stupid clifhanger...i liked your story but you messed that up by ending on a stupid cliff hanger.  if you are just going to do the same messed up ending on the sequel don't bother.  if this is how you end your stories i am not sure i'd want to read any more of your work.



Author's Response: Well, actually this is the first time I've ever ended a story like that, but why shouldn't I? It's good to be different hun. I understand that your rudeness is born from frustration, but threatening not to read any of my other stories doesn't faze me in the least. I'm sorry that you got your panties in a twist and felt the need to be nasty though. Happpy Reading!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:26 PM Title: Finale

that was a little bit at the end with Bree was definitely a weird ending...thank you for a unique wonderful story.



Author's Response: lol thank you, I like breaking the mold

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:18 PM Title: Ending the Nightmare

i liked that she kind of got her revenge for what he did to her although Emmett and friends beating the crap out of him wouldve been nice too..lol.



Author's Response: I felt that her getting some sort of revenge on James by shooting him was a small justice in comparison to what he did to her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Finale

Been a great ride.



Author's Response: I think so lol. It's amazing how rl drama changed the path of the story

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:04 PM Title: Finale

Wow...I didn't see this coming.  What a twist!  I hope you do write a sequel.  I feel bad for Bella though.  She though all this crap was over.  Great job...thanks so much!  I'm going to vote now... 



Author's Response: I think I am going to do a sequel, but not for a while. I've managed to talk my husband into co-writing a story with me lol So far we've decided to step away from the drama and angst and do something funny

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:43 AM Title: Finale

Sorry I missed a few reviews, I just got caught up with the story.  I am glad James and Renee are dead.  How could they not know Bella woudl react that way about a huge party for goodness sake.  and WTH Bree is her sister by blood from Renee or a nutjob or Victoria?



Author's Response: the only real explanation that I have for their forgetfulness is that they're only human and were eager to celebrate something happy after so many bad things happened

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:08 AM Title: Ending the Nightmare

thanks for the short limbo time. 



Author's Response: It's the least I could do after you guys waited so patiently for new chapters

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:38 AM Title: Ending the Nightmare

YAY!  I like it so much better when Bella gets to kick ass rather than being rescued!  Great job!  So nice not to leave us with the cliffy for too long.

Cheers,

Balti K



Author's Response: lol me too!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:47 AM Title: Ending the Nightmare

Thank you!!  It looks like James got what he deserved.  I hope Victoira/Renee gets what she deserves too.  Thanks for the quick update!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response: I think he got exactly what he deserved :-)

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:07 AM Title: Finding Bree

Rut Roh Shaggy!  The rest of Mystery Inc better find her and quick.  A good scream should send the running toward her.  Can't wait for the next update.

Cheers!

Balti K



Author's Response: rofl yeah, I'm on the countdown for the screaming to begin!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:40 AM Title: Finding Bree

OMG...please tell me she still has her gun!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response: lol you know I can't give anything away yet :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:19 PM Title: Finding Bree

ugh  she would be the one to run into him



Author's Response: I know, she has the crappiest luck sometimes

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:02 PM Title: Busted

I totally understand the build up and needing to get into the right headspace for a big fight.  They're a bitch to write.  So thanks for this chapter in the meantime.  I'm glad the gang is with her and armed, so she's not running in alone to just get killed herself.  That would have accomplished nothing.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:30 AM Title: Busted

Glad to see you back and I just knew her gank of misft family would find her as they should.  Now they need to kick some ass.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Busted

go team.....  LOL

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 1:26 AM Title: Busted

welcome back...WONDERFUL CHAPTER! I definitely wasn't expecting that but Im glad it happened. Have I mentioned that I love your characters?

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 11:16 PM Title: Busted

Wow, I didn't expect Leah to slap Bella.  I guess I wouldn't have been very happy with her when I found out she left by herself.  I am afraid what is going to happen next.  I hope everyone will be ok...we except for James and Victoria/Renee...I hope they get what they deserve!  Great job...thanks so much!!!  I hope things are going better for you.

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 9:47 PM Title: Busted

I'm glad things are getting a  bit bettnext chapterer for you. no rush getting out the chapter. your fans will understand if you need more time. I know i have no problem waiting.

Reviewer: ggmt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:31 AM Title: Moving Day

I am so sorry for your lost. Take all the time you need and I hope for the best for you and your entire family.

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 6:27 AM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

*pouts* I went to press next....

...And there wasn't a next.

 

But I guess this just means I get to practice more patience and wait for the next amazing chapter to be released!!! I really love your story, the plot is amazing and the characters very deep. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 5:36 AM Title: Up in Smoke

*bursts into side-splitting laughter*

 

"No Mom, I did not set the school on fire this time, I swear!"

 

Oh, now THERE'S a story I'd definitely want to hear! Hahahaha!

 

*hurries off for more reading*

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:53 AM Title: Lunch Time Revelations

*is still laughing from the countless things that cracked her up this chapter*

 

Usually, I would be highly annoying and point out every single part I found funny, somtimes even saying why and adding inane comments that come from my twisted mind.... But right now I just want to read more, so you're spared the torture of my usual MO. ;)

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2010 2:43 AM Title: Finding My Way

"I had the perfect way to dispose of the body too. I was going to put it through the wood chipper and shoot it out into the lake." <Bwahahahaha! Okay, so I read that and I thought "Heeheehee... I think I'm being sold on this story full-time!" And then NCIS is brought up which is one of my all time FAVE shows (yes, I'm a bit of a dork. I blame my mom though, she's the one that got me hooked. Now we always race to figure out who did it first, lol!) soooo.... I'm your loyal reading slave now. ;D

 

I mean, I liked it before all that, it was funny and well written, but with those added in.... ;)

 

Yeah. I'm a strange one. BUT ANYHOW.... I love the story very much and am off to read the next chapter! Great job and hooray to you for stepping outside of the box!

Reviewer: Panda_Blitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 7:38 PM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

Bad Bella Very bad Bella!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:42 PM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

ugh silly girl going alone

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:04 PM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

ok...definitely didn't see this change in the plot coming...but i like it, looking forward to seeing how things go.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 2:35 PM Title: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

Oh Bella, I worry about you girl!  Charlie is not going to be happy with you!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: thank you hun

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:25 AM Title: Overload

i like those songs too



Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Overload

great amazing chapter.....the whole mystery thing was cool, im pretty bad at mystery stories so i missed the inconstances of the previous chapter statements and glad you put them together..thanks for wonderful update :)



Author's Response: I'm actually horrible at mysteries myself lol

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 10:14 PM Title: Overload

love it



Author's Response: so glad to hear that!! :-)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:24 PM Title: Overload

Wow...too much for all these people to be going through.  I hope all these bad people can be taken care of once and for all. 

I loved it when she thought of Carlisle as Doctor Dad.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job as always...thanks!!!



Author's Response: there is a lot going on, but so much of it is connected too, so I hope it can be taken care of in one fell swoop...and I can't take credit for the Doctor Dad thing, my friend dementedevilpixie came up with it

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:14 AM Title: The Price of Insanity

Poor Jasper.  Such a horrible childhood to live through.  No wonder he needed time to process everything Bella told him and settle his anger.

Not only do we have to worry about Royce and James, I can totally see Maria showing her crazy ass up too.  Fun times ahead.



Author's Response: Yeah, it was hard to write out Jasper's horrific past

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:58 AM Title: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss

It was awesome that Bella could defend herself but even better that the gang stepped up and defended her as well.

I guess we all know exactly how Jasper now feels :)



Author's Response: It is seldom that you find such friends in life *sigh*

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:45 AM Title: Yardwork

I feel better about Jasper and dhis reaction.  I'm afraid to see what Lauren the harpy has planned for Monday.



Author's Response: Glad you don't hate Jasper :-)

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