Date: 13 Apr 2021 5:06 PM Title: Jane's Story and Aro's End
I'm glad Jane got to tell her father how she really felt. That was a gruesome death. Aro deserved it. I feel like Edward and Bella will help Jacob.
Thank you for your review
Date: 08 Apr 2021 8:21 PM Title: Jane's Story and Aro's End
Thank you for the update...well done!! Aro finally got what he deserved..I like Jane's story telling, Aro had to feel like a piece of sh$t although I know he didn't..tha's crazy that you ould treat your own children like that...I hope Jake gets his family land back and Aro is in Hell!!! until you post again
Thank you for reviewing, i was worried this chapter would be too hard for some to read. I just wanted to give Jane a chance at justice and to send Aro off to hell while showing just how far reaching Aro crap went. I hope to post my next update soon, but i have an assessment for my collage due on monday so ive had to delay working on the next chapter till after that! Thank you again, rodeinti for your continued support of this story it means the world to me :)
Date: 03 Apr 2021 2:31 AM Title: Jenny's Surprise
Thank you for the update..Jane got her revenge!!! now what if Jenny is pregnant with two baby daddies..I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again
Thank you so much! i cant wait till i feel satifide the next chapter is perfect and that you liked this update so much! it means the world to me!
Date: 01 Apr 2021 1:54 PM Title: Jenny's Surprise
Wow Jenny. Don't know what to say. I've heard of the birth thing before. One baby was white and the other black.
thank you, I wanted to show in some way how messed up Jenny was and further show how awful Aro was.
Date: 29 Mar 2021 3:59 AM Title: The Christening
Oh my. I'm so happy to get this update. I have missed this story. Glad everything went as planeed. What in the world does Carlisle want them for.
Thank you so much for your review! And I am sooo very sorry it took me a bit to get to updating.
Date: 30 Nov 2020 9:41 AM Title: Mole Extermination
I admit I just slipped most of this! No torture descriptions for me!
sorry you couldnt read most of this chapter, but i am glad i put the warning up and you still took the time to read and write a review, so thank you!
Date: 23 Nov 2020 4:43 AM Title: Bringing down the Moles
Okay I do like most of your story not the BDSM part! I skip through that
Sorry you didn't like that part, but its ok its not going to be a main thing in this story and i dont plan on having it again. Thank you for you review all the same!
Date: 19 Nov 2020 6:14 PM Title: Bringing down the Moles
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see how they get there answers..I hope its before Aro can do any damage. until you post again, hopefully tomorrow..smiley face
Thank you for your review! it means a lot!!! Sadly can't post today, but i am hoping by next thursday i'll have the next chapter up for you all. Smiley Face
Date: 18 Nov 2020 8:17 PM Title: Kinky Fuckery
Sounds like Will and Cindy are going to regret messing with them. Poor Ryan getting stuck in the middle of this.
ooohh Hawt hawt hawt chapter!!!
thank you for your review. Yes both Will and Cindy wont like what is coming for them!
Date: 02 Nov 2020 1:58 AM Title: Beginning of the End
Was this story always BDSM? Thanks for the update.
No it wasn't, this is just something that i've added as a way for them to just get have something different in their relationship and with what they do, it can be hard to get out of that dominant frame of mind and be vulnerable, so BDSM can help with that especially when it is with someone you trust and love. Thank you for your review.
Date: 01 Nov 2020 8:44 PM Title: Beginning of the End
I am a little worried about Aro hanging up as abruptly. Surely if Jane knows something is wrong she will let them know. Also love that Edward and Bella are a little kinky. Love reading about Dom/sub.
Yes it is alarming that Aro did that and I am sure Jane would say something if she knew of something to say. I just thought to add a little kink in there to just show that with their lives they need to have a safe space to get out of a dominant frame of mind and be vulnerable but also be in complete control when things may not be going as planned. If that makes sense. Thank you for your review
Date: 25 Oct 2020 5:08 AM Title: Unexpected Deliveries
ROFL for the birthplace of the babies. What a story to tell. Glad Edward put Annette in her place. Smart of E telling her about the brothel ahead of time too
Thank you! I'm so glad someone thought that my choice of birthplace to be funny. I just wanted something that wasn't 'the norm' because they are not a normal family in a way and so that it was a story to tell for them other than the mess after their conception.
Date: 13 Oct 2020 3:43 AM Title: Back to Reality
I hope their meeting goes well. Love that Bella had to got on to Edward about toughing up. Lol.
Thank you, i thought it would be funny to reverse the roles between Edward and Bella for at least a moment because everything is changing for them so quickly and Edward is still trying to get his head around it all. This is why they work good as a team!
Date: 24 Jul 2020 12:41 PM Title: A well-deserved holiday
Is this story going to be finished
Yes it is going to be finished, it is unfortunately taking me longer than i want to finish it. I deeply apologise for the delay in finishing this story
Date: 09 Aug 2019 12:53 PM Title: The final stretch
I hope the babies will not be named Volturi. They are Edward's and Bella's. They need their true family name. Who cares if Aro finds out he lost everything. He signed it all away.
without giving too much away there was some things that although Aro signed them away there was a stipulation that someone with the Volturi name has ownership of it, however, the babies offical name wont be Volturi. Some false documents will have to be written though so as far as Aro knows they will have one set of names for him and then there real ones.
Date: 09 Aug 2019 4:10 AM Title: The final stretch
ugh. That "family" makes the Manson's look normal. I want to scrub myself for the ick factor. Glad its almost over.
Yes this 'family' are very awful, it is almost over, about half of the next chapter and then she is home. I promise :)
Date: 09 Aug 2019 3:32 AM Title: Bye-bye James, Hello home - Part 2
Buh bye to the first of the filth. Creepy is too mild of a word. I need a shower now.
Thank you for the review! Bella is almost home now and i agree i needed a shower after this chapter too :)
Date: 05 Aug 2019 8:25 PM Title: Bye-bye James, Hello home - Part 2
I love this chapter. James is gone and Edward got to feel the babies.
Thank you, i thought Bella needed a bit of Edward time after dealing with James and that was the best way. Thank you for your review
Date: 23 Jun 2019 1:32 AM Title: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly
Wow Aro is really buying what she's saying. Duh.
Wow thank you for all of your reviews. I really apreciate them. I just want to put out there that i am trying to convey how much Aro and his whole family's operations have become complacent with how well their run in the crime world has been and how comfortable they are with how much power they think they hold. This is why E and his team have gone to great lengths to enhance what James has screwed up so to make sure Aro cant refute what B tells him, however they are working with the ignorance of Aro's complacency to their favor to make this take over as quick and smooth as possible, especially for B sake.