Date: 17 Feb 2023 3:19 AM Title: Epilogue
I absolutely loved this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2022 7:28 PM Title: Epilogue
great epi
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 17 Nov 2022 12:01 PM Title: A Helpful Gentleman
twilightobession, kerareeneeatchley29, TheLadyKT and troberts Thank you all for you reviews
Date: 16 Nov 2022 4:29 PM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
This is fantastic! ;)
Author's Response:
thank you :)
Date: 16 Nov 2022 3:06 PM Title: A Show of Heart
I love them! ;)
Author's Response:
so do I :)
Date: 16 Nov 2022 2:14 PM Title: Conditions
I love the way they went about this! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 16 Nov 2022 1:35 PM Title: Meetings and Unexpected, but welcomed Changes
Love this! ;)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 16 Nov 2022 1:11 PM Title: Introductions
I'm excited to read this! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you enjoy!
Date: 29 Oct 2022 8:18 PM Title: The Formal Dinner
She got her just desert.
Author's Response:
Yes she did. thank you
Date: 29 Oct 2022 4:57 PM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
How lovely
Author's Response:
it was. thank you
Date: 29 Oct 2022 4:14 PM Title: Just One More Condition
They are talking and making small plans, that's good move in the right direction right!!
Author's Response:
It was the smart move! thank you for your review
Date: 29 Oct 2022 3:07 PM Title: Meetings and Unexpected, but welcomed Changes
Oh mama, this is going to be just fun.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2022 12:24 PM Title: Epilogue
I have loved this story and how everything flowed from one thing to the next.
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and thank you so much for reading! Sorry it took me a bit to get there though, but again I thank you for reading til the end.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2022 8:07 AM Title: Epilogue
Sweet ending. Ty for writing and sharing with all of us.
Author's Response:
Thank you and your welcome! Stay tuned as I am updating my other fanfic's soon and I have another on the way.
Date: 19 Oct 2022 7:58 AM Title: Jane meets Will and Jenny's fate
Glad Jenny can finally be at peace. Van will Def learn some things from E and company.
Author's Response:
I couldn't not have her have some kind of peaceful end as she had already been through enough. Thank you for you review.
Date: 17 Oct 2022 5:13 PM Title: Epilogue
Love it!!!!!!! I an sorry to see this story end. But thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it like I loved writing it. I almost didn't want to end it, but I also didn't want to ruin it by continuing and drawing it out when it didn't need that. I will be starting on another fanfic as well as I am writing a new fanfic that is a different take on what happens from new moon. So please keep an eye out for more from me. Thank you again for following alone with this story, your awesome!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2022 5:00 PM Title: Jane meets Will and Jenny's fate
nice update
Author's Response:
thank you. I've just updated again, hope you like it too.
Date: 02 Jul 2022 2:54 AM Title: Jane meets Will and Jenny's fate
What is up with Jack coming and staying? Will this be trouble? Can't wait for more. Glad you updated. I have missed this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am hoping to answer those questions and more in the Epilogue, but basically i'm also leaving things a tiny bit open in case i wish to write a part two to this story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2022 10:10 PM Title: Jenny's Twins
good update
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 14 Nov 2021 3:04 AM Title: Jenny's Twins
I think J would be better off if she passed too. Glad the kids are OK.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 14 Nov 2021 2:49 AM Title: A much needed trip
Glad they got to go see J & N. Lol for telling him about the shop that way. Yea I can't blame the elders for being wary.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I felt some humour was needed there so im glad you thought it was funny as i was so worried that wouldn't come across that way.
Date: 06 Nov 2021 3:05 PM Title: Mole Extermination
I thought Bella was beast feeling the twins?? If so to be away several days, she would need to pump her Milk.... and pinching her nipples would be really painful and messy as milk will shoot out
Author's Response:
Hello, thank you for your review. I am sorry for any confusion with this and i do think i forgot to mention or clarify this as i felt i didnt need to at the time of writing this chapter so again sorry for that, but while Bella did start off breastfeeding, it became difficult for her after a few days of them being born and she could no longer breastfeed them. These dificulties were that she never got the supply needed for twins and she didnt want to feed one via bottle and the other breastfed, the twins also just couldnt latch on properly in order to feed so they just had to feed them with bottles. Also being assassins she knew that there would be times that she wouldnt be with them for their safety and to get work done so she didnt really want to breastfeed anyway and it turned out that she couldnt so it worked out for them all and that is how it was possible for them to be away from their twins for a few days.
Again i am very sorry for any confusion or anything like that, i didnt intend that and as a mother who cant breastfeed i just didnt think to clarify whether or not this was something she was doing or not and thought that my readers would just know and understand that she wouldnt be breastfeeding.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2021 9:41 PM Title: Jenny's Twins
waiting for more
Author's Response:
thank you!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2021 11:38 PM Title: Wedding Bells, Surprises and Drama Part 1
getting caught up to you
Author's Response:
sweet, hope you like the rest of the story
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2021 1:07 PM Title: Getting Will's help and Jenny going to Sleep
ENJOYING THIS VERY MUCH
Author's Response:
thats so good
Date: 28 Oct 2021 2:23 AM Title: Jenny's Twins
Awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 28 Oct 2021 1:23 AM Title: Jenny's Twins
So glad the babies are ok.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 27 Oct 2021 3:59 PM Title: Jenny's Twins
Great chapter...so glad the twins are born and doing well.
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2021 10:06 PM Title: Bye-bye James, Hello home – Part 1
very intriguing
Author's Response:
thats good
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2021 2:41 PM Title: A race to the finish line, Bella style
wow
Author's Response:
i know right
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2021 11:01 AM Title: Calm Before The Storm
why would senior ruin his peace?
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews, i dont have time to respond to them all, but in answer to your question Edward doesnt like change a lot and he likes the peace he has now at this point in the story. I hope you read til the end as there is only a few more chapter to go in this story before its finished and thank you again for your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2021 2:02 AM Title: Returning the Favor
wow
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:09 PM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
rough edges are starting to smooth
Author's Response: thank you
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2021 9:50 PM Title: Just One More Condition
awkward
Author's Response:
Sorry
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2021 9:20 PM Title: Conditions
liked this chapter
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2021 7:29 PM Title: Introductions
not sure what I think at this point
Author's Response:
Keep reading. thank you for your review
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2021 12:13 AM Title: A much needed trip
So so awesome. I couldn't out it down. Read straight thru. I hope there is more to come. I love that you out Jake & Nessie together. Can't wait for more. Going to check if you have anu completed stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reveiw. While this isn't my only story, it is by far my best one so please be kind :) I only have a few chapters of this left before it is completed. so thank you for your review again, it gave me a nice boost that i needed today.
Date: 24 Sep 2021 4:15 PM Title: A much needed trip
Nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Date: 14 Sep 2021 5:31 PM Title: A much needed trip
Love Jake and Nessie's relationship.
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 01 Jul 2021 4:09 PM Title: Wedding bells, Surprises and Drama Part 2
Great Update
Author's Response: thank you
Date: 11 Jun 2021 2:53 PM Title: Wedding bells, Surprises and Drama Part 2
Glad B and A got to work things out. The house sounds AWESOME. Woo Hoo for married.
Author's Response:
yeah those two are just good friends, they just needed to have some boundries and take time to understand where each other were coming from. the house is literally my dream home! thank you for your review
Date: 11 Jun 2021 4:32 AM Title: Wedding Bells, Surprises and Drama Part 1
Glad Jake is taking them up on their offer. Nesie is just a bonus. 😊
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 19 May 2021 1:28 AM Title: Wedding bells, Surprises and Drama Part 2
Love love love ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 19 May 2021 12:49 AM Title: Wedding bells, Surprises and Drama Part 2
Long and terrific.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the length, but i didn't want to cut of off at a weird/ awkward spot, but glad that it was a good chapter overall for you so thank you for your review
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2021 11:36 PM Title: Wedding bells, Surprises and Drama Part 2
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 5:48 PM Title: Wedding Bells, Surprises and Drama Part 1
great update
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 06 May 2021 12:36 PM Title: Wedding Bells, Surprises and Drama Part 1
Glad Jacob decided to work for them. Happy that Edward is so aware of what is going on with Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 25 Apr 2021 12:51 AM Title: Playtime with the Kids and a Heart to Heart
I think what Alice said to Bella about her previous wedding needs to be addressed and not brushed under the rug. That was very hurtful and out of line.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and i agree with you. rest asured i have something planned.
Date: 25 Apr 2021 12:51 AM Title: Playtime with the Kids and a Heart to Heart
I think what Alice said to Bella about her previous wedding needs to be addressed and not brushed under the rug. That was very hurtful and out of line.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. What Alice said was out of line and i wont let it be brushed under the rug, but i fell that is something that Bella needs to talk to Alice about it and she hasn't had the chance too....yet
Date: 23 Apr 2021 2:58 PM Title: Playtime with the Kids and a Heart to Heart
Aww sweet family time
Author's Response:
Yes those three big tough men fawning over cute babies was adorable.
Date: 23 Apr 2021 2:46 PM Title: Alice
Glad E calmed her down a bif
Author's Response:
he is a good big brother
Date: 23 Apr 2021 2:41 PM Title: Jacob Black
Yea Alice needs a chill pill. Glad they are going to help Jake.
Author's Response:
She is a ball of energy isnt she
Date: 23 Apr 2021 2:20 PM Title: Getting Will's help and Jenny going to Sleep
Jenny is Def messed up in the head. I kinda wish she doesn't make it. Hate for her to mess with the kids minds in the future
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I am hoping the same thing with Jenny, but i am not sure on what to do because its not fair that her life ended like this, but at the same time it will be a mercy for her to go and be at peace. You'll find out soon.
Date: 23 Apr 2021 1:57 PM Title: Jane's Story and Aro's End
Glad Jane got to say her piece. Hope Jake has closure now too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Keep reading and find out
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2021 8:17 PM Title: Playtime with the Kids and a Heart to Heart
Thank you for the update..Yes I am very pleased with the family. They really know one another. Hopefully Bella will be ok soon. I can't wait for Jacob to get there and see what the Cullens can do for him and his family. until you post again. Well done
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and i am glad you liked the chapter
Date: 20 Apr 2021 7:52 PM Title: Playtime with the Kids and a Heart to Heart
Loved seeing Charlie, Edward Sr. and Edward together.
Author's Response:
yeah i had to put in there about three tough guys being goo goo ga ga over some cute babies :) thank you for your review
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2021 6:30 PM Title: Alice
Thank you for the updates..well done..I'm sorry Bella hurts her hands, but when she recounted everything that has happened it was a lot..Poor Alice..Edward Sr is very strong..I hope Edward and Bella can give him back his land. Aro was one sick puppy..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and your right Aro is very sick, thankfully he wont be hurting anyone else anymore. Edward jnr was trained by someone so Edward snr is a very complex man like his son and i just wanted to show one side of him that wasn't all emotionless. Everything will work out for the best for everyone as well as they can :)
Date: 19 Apr 2021 2:12 PM Title: Alice
Love Edward's relationship with his sister.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Edward is a very good big brother.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2021 8:46 AM Title: Alice
great updates
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Jacob Black
Uuuu poor Jacob and he’s family
Author's Response:
Yeah, but there is good things for him coming. Thank you for your review
Date: 17 Apr 2021 5:47 PM Title: Jacob Black
I love the talked between Bella and Edward Sr.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I felt that he needed some more air time and that i wanted to show his softer side. plus he had to deal with Edward when he was younger so...
Date: 15 Apr 2021 1:03 AM Title: Getting Will's help and Jenny going to Sleep
Alot going on in this chapter
Author's Response:
Yes sorry if that was too much, i was on a roll and didnt know where to end the chapter. thank you for your review
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2021 8:41 PM Title: Getting Will's help and Jenny going to Sleep
Thank you for the update..well done..Wow I can't wait to see who the babies belong to...until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review as always
Date: 13 Apr 2021 5:06 PM Title: Jane's Story and Aro's End
I'm glad Jane got to tell her father how she really felt. That was a gruesome death. Aro deserved it. I feel like Edward and Bella will help Jacob.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review
Date: 13 Apr 2021 2:30 AM Title: Jenny's Surprise
I hope Jane can out behind her what her father did to her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. It will be a long road for Jane, but i think she'll get there in the end.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2021 8:21 PM Title: Jane's Story and Aro's End
Thank you for the update...well done!! Aro finally got what he deserved..I like Jane's story telling, Aro had to feel like a piece of sh$t although I know he didn't..tha's crazy that you ould treat your own children like that...I hope Jake gets his family land back and Aro is in Hell!!! until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, i was worried this chapter would be too hard for some to read. I just wanted to give Jane a chance at justice and to send Aro off to hell while showing just how far reaching Aro crap went. I hope to post my next update soon, but i have an assessment for my collage due on monday so ive had to delay working on the next chapter till after that! Thank you again, rodeinti for your continued support of this story it means the world to me :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2021 2:31 AM Title: Jenny's Surprise
Thank you for the update..Jane got her revenge!!! now what if Jenny is pregnant with two baby daddies..I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! i cant wait till i feel satifide the next chapter is perfect and that you liked this update so much! it means the world to me!
Date: 01 Apr 2021 1:54 PM Title: Jenny's Surprise
Wow Jenny. Don't know what to say. I've heard of the birth thing before. One baby was white and the other black.
Author's Response:
thank you, I wanted to show in some way how messed up Jenny was and further show how awful Aro was.
Date: 01 Apr 2021 1:55 AM Title: The Christening
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 29 Mar 2021 3:59 AM Title: The Christening
Oh my. I'm so happy to get this update. I have missed this story. Glad everything went as planeed. What in the world does Carlisle want them for.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! And I am sooo very sorry it took me a bit to get to updating.
Date: 28 Mar 2021 1:09 PM Title: The Christening
Glad the christening went well. Hmm wonder what Carlisle knows that freaked him out so much
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'll try to make sure to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2020 11:22 AM Title: Mole Extermination
10/10
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 15 Dec 2020 3:38 AM Title: Mole Extermination
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
Date: 02 Dec 2020 4:50 AM Title: Mole Extermination
I enjoyed your BDSM. Good job. They do work good together.
Author's Response:
Thank you, in their line of work they need good teamwork in all parts of their lives. Thank you for reiveiwing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2020 3:08 PM Title: Mole Extermination
Love it !
Author's Response:
thank you for reveiwing!
Date: 30 Nov 2020 9:41 AM Title: Mole Extermination
I admit I just slipped most of this! No torture descriptions for me!
Author's Response:
sorry you couldnt read most of this chapter, but i am glad i put the warning up and you still took the time to read and write a review, so thank you!
Date: 29 Nov 2020 2:14 PM Title: Mole Extermination
Wow Jenny has a lot to answer for as well. Glad they will spare the baby.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review
Date: 23 Nov 2020 4:43 AM Title: Bringing down the Moles
Okay I do like most of your story not the BDSM part! I skip through that
Author's Response:
Sorry you didn't like that part, but its ok its not going to be a main thing in this story and i dont plan on having it again. Thank you for you review all the same!
Date: 21 Nov 2020 1:33 PM Title: Bringing down the Moles
ACK Evil place to leave it there at the end!!! Loved thier play time though.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the ending, but gotta have suspence somewhere lolz thank you for your review
Date: 21 Nov 2020 10:52 AM Title: Bringing down the Moles
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! More should be coming in about a week or so... dont want to keep you all waiting too long again
Date: 21 Nov 2020 2:11 AM Title: Bringing down the Moles
Can't wait to see how they interrogate the both of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, i have some fun stuff planned for these moles.... well fun for Edward and Bella
Date: 19 Nov 2020 10:04 PM Title: Business dinner’s and Unexpected results
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2020 6:14 PM Title: Bringing down the Moles
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see how they get there answers..I hope its before Aro can do any damage. until you post again, hopefully tomorrow..smiley face
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! it means a lot!!! Sadly can't post today, but i am hoping by next thursday i'll have the next chapter up for you all. Smiley Face
Date: 18 Nov 2020 8:17 PM Title: Kinky Fuckery
Sounds like Will and Cindy are going to regret messing with them. Poor Ryan getting stuck in the middle of this.
ooohh Hawt hawt hawt chapter!!!
Author's Response:
thank you for your review. Yes both Will and Cindy wont like what is coming for them!
Date: 15 Nov 2020 3:00 AM Title: Kinky Fuckery
What was sent to Aro??????
Author's Response:
That is the million dollar question ;) Thank you for your review
Date: 13 Nov 2020 3:28 AM Title: Working out the kinks
Ugh... No just no no no
Author's Response:
what do you mean?
Date: 12 Nov 2020 11:44 PM Title: The Formal Dinner
Perfect. she should be delighted she wasn't shot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review
Date: 07 Nov 2020 2:13 AM Title: Beginning of the End
Can't wait for creepy Aro to be taken out. Ewww.
Sounds like a yummy playtime ahead.
Author's Response:
Yes Aro is awful! Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2020 7:28 AM Title: Beginning of the End
great updates
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 02 Nov 2020 1:58 AM Title: Beginning of the End
Was this story always BDSM? Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
No it wasn't, this is just something that i've added as a way for them to just get have something different in their relationship and with what they do, it can be hard to get out of that dominant frame of mind and be vulnerable, so BDSM can help with that especially when it is with someone you trust and love. Thank you for your review.
Date: 01 Nov 2020 8:44 PM Title: Beginning of the End
I am a little worried about Aro hanging up as abruptly. Surely if Jane knows something is wrong she will let them know. Also love that Edward and Bella are a little kinky. Love reading about Dom/sub.
Author's Response:
Yes it is alarming that Aro did that and I am sure Jane would say something if she knew of something to say. I just thought to add a little kink in there to just show that with their lives they need to have a safe space to get out of a dominant frame of mind and be vulnerable but also be in complete control when things may not be going as planned. If that makes sense. Thank you for your review
Date: 25 Oct 2020 5:48 AM Title: Unexpected Deliveries
Omgosh!!!!! The stories they can tell. Lol
Author's Response:
Yep :P
Date: 25 Oct 2020 5:08 AM Title: Unexpected Deliveries
ROFL for the birthplace of the babies. What a story to tell. Glad Edward put Annette in her place. Smart of E telling her about the brothel ahead of time too
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad someone thought that my choice of birthplace to be funny. I just wanted something that wasn't 'the norm' because they are not a normal family in a way and so that it was a story to tell for them other than the mess after their conception.
Date: 24 Oct 2020 2:22 AM Title: Unexpected Deliveries
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 19 Oct 2020 3:47 AM Title: Business dinner’s and Unexpected results
Good advice the guys gave Edward. Sounds like Skellini is going to be a great ally.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Having Skellini on their side will be really good.
Date: 18 Oct 2020 5:21 PM Title: Business dinner’s and Unexpected results
Awesome!!!!!! What good luck for all of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you for you review. It was really lucky the Aro pissed off the wrong people.
Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:13 AM Title: Back to Reality
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 14 Oct 2020 3:17 AM Title: Back to Reality
Thanks for the update 😊
Author's Response:
Your Welcome. thanks for reviewing.
Date: 13 Oct 2020 3:43 AM Title: Back to Reality
I hope their meeting goes well. Love that Bella had to got on to Edward about toughing up. Lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you, i thought it would be funny to reverse the roles between Edward and Bella for at least a moment because everything is changing for them so quickly and Edward is still trying to get his head around it all. This is why they work good as a team!
Date: 12 Oct 2020 8:39 PM Title: Back to Reality
The plot Thickens. Can't wait to see how this meeting will go.
Author's Response:
Thank you