Date: 02 Jan 2019 12:58 PM Title: Working out the kinks
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 12:22 PM Title: The Next Step
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 12:13 PM Title: A Brand new day, brand new dramas
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 12:04 PM Title: Let's Party, Our Way
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 12:02 PM Title: Let's Party, Our Way
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 11:53 AM Title: The Storm Has Begun
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 11:40 AM Title: Calm Before The Storm
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 11:31 AM Title: Returning the Favor
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 11:22 AM Title: The Formal Dinner
Loved it! Go Bella!
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 11:13 AM Title: A Helpful Gentleman
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Date: 02 Jan 2019 11:02 AM Title: Best Goodnight Ever
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Date: 01 Jan 2019 10:52 PM Title: Gift Revealed
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Date: 01 Jan 2019 10:42 PM Title: Family Dynamics and an Unexpected Surprise
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Date: 01 Jan 2019 10:01 PM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
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Date: 01 Jan 2019 8:57 PM Title: A Show of Heart
Loved it! Poor Bella!
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Date: 01 Jan 2019 8:50 PM Title: Just One More Condition
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Date: 31 Dec 2018 12:13 PM Title: Conditions
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Date: 31 Dec 2018 11:11 AM Title: Meetings and Unexpected, but welcomed Changes
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Date: 30 Dec 2018 7:32 PM Title: Introductions
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Date: 23 Dec 2018 7:25 AM Title: Introductions
Thank you to everyone who has reviewed. I cant get to all of you, but thank you all for readying this story and sticking with it despite the long release of new chapters.
Date: 20 Dec 2018 7:04 PM Title: Working out the kinks
This is a crazy plan. I hate that Bella is going to marry James before she marries Edward. I think Edward and Bella should have a secret wedding before the mission.
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I was thinking of letting Bella and Edward marry in secret, but then the Volturi could have means to find that out and besides they will do checks to make sure she is being genuine in her decision, how ever i could have them get a tattoo of some decription that only Bella and Edward's families would know what they meant....but that is something to think about. Thank you for your review.
Date: 20 Dec 2018 3:41 PM Title: Family Dynamics and an Unexpected Surprise
I love the giddiness of Edward. I hope Bella is feeling it also.
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keep reading and you'll find out.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 9:03 PM Title: Working out the kinks
I hope Bella doesn't get hurt with James.
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Bella is a lot stronger than James knows about as he and the rest of the Volturi havent heard the rumors about Bella, but your hope is the same as Edward's so your going to have to keep reading to find out. Thank you for your review.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 4:51 AM Title: Working out the kinks
I hope she doesn't go easy on Rose. No matter what has happened to her attitued is not warranted. Bella has been through so shit too and she is not a bitch unless is needed.
I hope nothing bad happens to Bella while she is with James and she is able to kill him soon after the wedding. Maybe he could have a heart attack from all the drinking he does.
I hope for another chapter as soon as you can. Thanks :)
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Your right, Rose's attitude isnt warranted and it is why Bella wont take her crap, however Bella also doesnt want to piss of Edward or the rest of his family, so she tries to put Rose in her place in a repectful manner while letting her know she wont take her crap. There will be some more funny moments to come between them later in the story, til Rose learns to take a chill pill lolz.
James doesnt know about what Bella is capable of and he may just get a rude awakening.
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Date: 17 Dec 2018 4:08 AM Title: The Formal Dinner
nice punch. glad she put rose in her place, but i dont think that will be the last of it.
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yeah i just had to punch Rose as it felt right, not sure if it will happen again, but in my story Rose is kinda hard to get on with until she fully knows someone and they prove themselves, so there could be more. Thank you for your review.
Date: 12 Dec 2018 5:55 AM Title: Working out the kinks
So that’s what they are after I like how mature Rosalie is being
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Thank you, I didnt want Rose to be too stand off-ish for too long and also she is a lawyer and so i wanted her to just be professional rather than bitchy towards Bella and Edward.
Date: 04 Mar 2017 3:22 PM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
good storyy cant wait for the rest
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Date: 17 Jan 2016 12:12 PM Title: The Next Step
Bella is very brave to put herself in this position. Edward is going to go crazy with Bella not being with him and in danger.
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Edward is already very protective of Bella, but he is learning that she is way stronger than a normal female. Bella is all about the greater good and with the arragement between Edward and Bella being all about avoiding a war and blood shed, this plan is a way better course of action then what they were going to do as it means that if she needs to be recused or needs help in anyway she can get it, where as being in another part of the states they would be on their own and there was too many variables to try and work out.
She already loves Edward and his family for the help they are giving to her and her father so this is the least she can do for them, plus she can get her revenge on him for her mother!
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Date: 16 Jan 2016 1:04 PM Title: Returning the Favor
So sweet.
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Date: 16 Jan 2016 12:53 PM Title: The Formal Dinner
Good for Bella. Rosalie needed that to readjust her thinking.
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Thank you for your review. Rose does need to learn to loosen up a bit more in my story, but there is a reason why and i'll get to that....unless you want to see more fights between Bella and Rose before i explain?
Date: 12 Jan 2016 6:59 PM Title: The Next Step
OMGosh, I am surprised that Edward did not go all caveman on that idea. Lol.
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I was going to have him go all caveman, but he has seen Bella in action and knows that she isnt a weakling and has started to see her as an equal.....although i think he may have some things to say to her before she leaves to start this mission.
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Date: 12 Jan 2016 3:16 PM Title: A Brand new day, brand new dramas
Their 1st time. Great chapter.
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Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:46 PM Title: Let's Party, Our Way
I hope you did a Bella POV.
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Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:01 PM Title: The Storm Has Begun
I hope Alan is feeling all wrong this time. I hope Edward and Bella will be ok.
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Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:35 AM Title: Calm Before The Storm
What does Edward's dad want with them?
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Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:02 AM Title: Returning the Favor
Love love love this chapter.
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Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:43 AM Title: The Formal Dinner
Hot damn!!!! A chick fight !!!!!!!! Lol. Glad Bella did not take any shit off of Rose.
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Thank you for your review! I wanted to make Bella a bit of a kind hearted bad ass in this story and Rose with her attitude still. I will get into why later in the story, but if you want more chick fights between them let me know!
Date: 12 Jan 2016 12:15 AM Title: A Helpful Gentleman
Love how Bella teased Edward while she was getting ready.
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Date: 11 Jan 2016 10:37 PM Title: Best Goodnight Ever
I can not believe that she already ducked him off. They just meet that day. Wow.
Author's Response:
hey they are both lonely adults who are facing death all the time so they both have the mindset of there is no time like the present and they don't waste their time mucking around
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2016 9:47 PM Title: The Next Step
I love this story
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Date: 11 Jan 2016 5:24 PM Title: Gift Revealed
What does he say? I am so off to read the next chapter. Ao,glad I do not have to wait for an update.
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Date: 11 Jan 2016 3:03 PM Title: Family Dynamics and an Unexpected Surprise
Edward's attitude sure has changed from this morning.
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I wanted to show that hw had this softer side inside him, but he didn't know it was there yet at the same time he is someone who goes with his gut instincts a lot. thank you for your reveiw
Date: 11 Jan 2016 2:42 PM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
Glad Alice accepted Bella.
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Date: 11 Jan 2016 2:16 PM Title: A Show of Heart
Edward is more software heartedthen he thinks. I am wondering if we will get Bella's POV.
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Date: 11 Jan 2016 1:57 PM Title: Just One More Condition
Love that they are taking the time to really talk to each other and are not hostile with each other.
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Date: 11 Jan 2016 2:53 AM Title: Conditions
I am glad that things are going so well for them.
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Date: 10 Jan 2016 4:11 AM Title: Meetings and Unexpected, but welcomed Changes
Definitely not dull moments.
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Date: 10 Jan 2016 3:38 AM Title: Introductions
This sounds like they are going to have some fun. Lol.
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I was looking through all my reviews and i found this, your very first review of my story! I just want to say a personal thank you for sticking with me and my story despite the many years it has taken me to write it! Thank you thank you thank you!
Date: 07 Jan 2016 1:34 PM Title: Conditions
Ok, this sounds interesting. Looking forward to catching up.
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Date: 07 Jan 2016 5:19 AM Title: Introductions
Ok i am going to give this a shot.
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