Date: 17 Feb 2019 11:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it! Binged the whole thing in one day! thanks for posting!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 2:13 PM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME!! FANTASTIC!! I LOVE THESE CHARACTERS! I LOVE NASCAR! You have made me very happy!! Thank you! ;)
Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:51 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Fantastic!! :)
Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:08 PM Title: Legal Eagle
WOW!! Have I mentioned my love for this? *giggles* Yes, I believe I have!! I love this!! lol :)
Date: 06 Apr 2016 12:27 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
HOLYSH*T!!! James has sent them both to the hospital!! I love that Bella beat the shit out of him!! He deserved it!!
She is a beast!! I Love her!! :D
Date: 05 Apr 2016 5:37 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal
OMG!! I love this!!! :)
Date: 05 Apr 2016 5:06 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
LOVE TO LOVE THEM!!! :)
Date: 05 Apr 2016 2:55 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
This is freakin awesome!! I love that Carlisle isn't a DH anymore and that they are going to start their own team with his help!! I especially love the part about the team name and how it will someday be hers if he has it his way!! ;) lol I LOVE IT!! :)
Date: 05 Apr 2016 10:32 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
This is completely awesome!! I am so happy that Carlisle got his head out of his ass! ;) The 'proud of you', 'thank you' and 'I love you' were so fantastic here!!! :)
Date: 01 Apr 2016 10:14 PM Title: Additional Motivation
I LOVE THIS!!! :)
Date: 01 Apr 2016 9:08 PM Title: Helpful Wagers
Oh for the love of cheese!! Another key!! LOL I love this story!! I love Gordon. I miss him on the track!!! :'( Anyway, I am excited to read the next chapter!! :)
Date: 01 Apr 2016 7:37 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
NICE!!! ;)
Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:31 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
Absolutely perfect!!! :)
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:49 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Well, OMG! I love it!! I am glad she listened to Edward and I am supper happy he got the key back from Tanya!! lol
Date: 31 Mar 2016 10:13 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
OHSH*TBALLS!! Poor Bella just when she thinks she can trust...she is reminded of the bad sh*t! :(
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:30 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
Awww...this is so great! They are so cute!! :)
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:34 PM Title: Sweet Awakenings
HolyfreakinLOVE it!! ;)
Date: 18 Mar 2016 2:28 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
Oh my!! I love this!!! :)
Date: 18 Mar 2016 2:37 AM Title: Attacking Walls
HOLY SHIT!! I LOVE THIS!!! WOW!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2016 11:17 PM Title: Breakaway
THIS IS AWESOME!! :)
Date: 08 Feb 2015 5:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Liked this very much. Your writting is great, have read most all your finished stories.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Awesome story! Thanks for completing it ;)
Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:30 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
I love your story but wanted to let you know that visiting hours are no longer enforced in hospitals any longer outside of icu. You can't get info about their condition because of government hippa laws but you can even stay the night; they provide sleep chairs for friends and family within reason. It's been that way for more than 10 years due to studies showing recovery, even in coma patients, is greatly improved by visitation of caring well wishers.
Keep up the fabulous writing.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:50 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
Sorry I couldn't review every chapter, I just couldn't wait to read the next. I grew up near Bristol and would drag race on open nights there in college. So fun and this story brought it all back to mind. I'm getting old! I will go cry now, great story!
Annie B
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:52 PM Title: Epilogue
I thoroughly & completely enjoyed going on this journey w/ you & your Edward & Bella. It made me very happy & smiley inside & out. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 1:28 PM Title: Breakaway
This has been on my faves for quite a while now. I'm not really uh understanding why I've not read it before now. Either way, I'm here now & loving it.
Date: 07 Apr 2013 8:43 AM Title: Epilogue
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH. My poor fiance was looking at me all like WTF as i was woop wooping when reading.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:08 AM Title: Epilogue
It seems aspects of your stories keep invading my personal life. My 'hometown' in southern VA less then 20 miles from VIR. Right now we are fighting against uranium mining in the area that had the abillity to devestate the entire area if thing went wrong. A local paper released in the past week the VIR was combinging forces with General Motors and other huge corporation to bring a tire research and testing facility into the area. The millions of dollars backing this endevor such hopefullly quell any contined grumblings about mining in the area. Being raised solely on NASCAR I hadn't ever really paid attention to VIR but I have read 'Chasing Victory' and have a new a apresiation for 'Road racing' which it seems may bring my hometown out of the current slump and focus on furture that involves research into tires and not uranium mining. Thanks for a wonderfull story. I've thourghly enjoyed everthing I've read from you so far. Best wishes in your fuutre indeveres.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 11:03 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 11:01 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:23 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 10:10 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:03 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 11:33 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 11:12 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Fantastic story, I'm not a NASCAR fan by any stretch, but you made it far more interesting by not making me watch actual cars drive around in circles, lol. Thanks for the time and creative energy you put into this.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:26 AM Title: Epilogue
Favorite line through this whole story “First Mom in NASCAR wins Sprint Cup.”
Wonderful story darling! I'll be looking out for more of them.
xoxo
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:26 AM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
You've got to be fucking kidding me! Cosma?!?!?
AND a baby? lmao
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:26 AM Title: Legal Eagle
What a riot! The Volturi Brothers got bit in the ass! And the funny part of all of this clusterfuck? They did it to themselves! lmao
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:25 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Somebody PLEASE do something to Daniels! Arrgh!
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:25 AM Title: The Home Stretch
What's up with Cosma and Daniels? James is up to no good again, and I just KNOW that he was behind the whole Ben fiasco!
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:24 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
I kinda knew that Ben and Angela would be staying at Bella's place for awhile. And OMG – he already has a ring!~!~!
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:24 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Awww... that's great of Bella. I bet you it was James Daniels that did it!
Pam
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2012 2:24 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
Holy shit! Oh, to have parents that are that loaded! Lol I'm so glad that they did that for 'the kids'! :D
Pam
Date: 27 May 2012 2:23 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
I'm so fucking glad that I was wrong! I love how this Carlisle turned his thinking around about his son's occupation. Turned it around to the nth degree, I might add! Lol
I love this story!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:23 AM Title: Meet The Parents
I'm holding onto my opinion of Carlisle for a bit. So far, it's not a very high one. We shall see if this changes as the story continues. Hopefully, I'm dead wrong about him!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:22 AM Title: Rewards
I absolutely loved the lemonade!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:22 AM Title: It's Just Business...
That's just bullshit! It should be all about the racing, NOT the PR!~!~!~!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:22 AM Title: Additional Motivation
No sex for three days? That's just mean! lol
Date: 27 May 2012 2:21 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
Oh fuck! Well, now. I'm beginning to really like this Tanya! lmao
Date: 27 May 2012 2:21 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Yeah, Cullen had better watch what he's doing if he wants to be able to be on the same team as Swan!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
Sigh... ;) Beautiful, just... beautiful!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Interruptus
Let me introduce you to Dave the Driver, cockblocker extrodinaire! ;)
Date: 27 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Wow, Edward better start communicating with Bella a lot better, and quickly!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
You are one evil bitch for leaving this chapter right here! You DO know that, right? LMAO
Date: 27 May 2012 2:19 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
I didn't realise that there was such a difference in between racing series! Wow, learn something new every day, huh? lmao
Date: 27 May 2012 2:19 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
I swear that that was the most perfect first date EVER! Especially being able to keep those evil Paps away.
Date: 27 May 2012 2:18 AM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
I'd love to be his neighbor too! lol
Date: 27 May 2012 2:18 AM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
My favorite line: “If a kiss on the cheek would affect him so much, how the hell was he going to handle a full on kiss?” Bow chicka wow wow!
Date: 27 May 2012 2:18 AM Title: Sweet Awakenings
She WILL be getting over that fear of driving again, right?
Date: 27 May 2012 2:17 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
And Edward surely will be walking through that hole, eh? ;)
Date: 27 May 2012 2:17 AM Title: Attacking Walls
Hell yeah! It's about time he figured it out. Now, how will SHE react?
Date: 27 May 2012 2:17 AM Title: New Connections
Jake is such a jackass. Edward's turning into a sweetie.
Date: 27 May 2012 2:16 AM Title: Breakaway
Awesome start sweetheart!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:02 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
OMG! Okay so this is like the third story of yours I've read in the last two weeks and the first time I'm reviewing... Lame I know...
Anyways what prompted this review, besides the fact that I LOVE your stories anf style of writing, is the fact that I have a '68 Dodge Charger R/T thats Skittles Green (as I lovingly refer to it as the Green Machine (again lame I know but it IS my baby!)) And you totally had me bouncing in my seat when I read that section of this chapter! :-D
Happy Writing!
CMS
Date: 23 Nov 2011 6:42 PM Title: The Definition of Bad Timing
Only one review per chapter-- so I am having to back track a chapter:
You really nailed the NASCAR world. As a racing fan, I found your story so relatable in many ways. This story is well worth reading again as are your other stories as well. Phenomenal writer!
Date: 23 Nov 2011 6:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow!! This story is fantastic. It is hard to believe you write fanfiction. This was so well-written-- and the plot was exciting.
I have been power-tripping through all your stories this week. You are a spectacular writer, and I thank you so much for sharing with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the awesome reviews. YOu know, I've been lucky too...by doing this fanfiction writing, I ended up getting published through the TWCS Publishing House as well. I still write FF for fun and to write the things I come up that would mortify my Mom to read...LOL. Thanks for your words of encouragement. I know I took a lot of creative license, so I'm glad it rang relatively true for a real fan :) Thanks again for taking the time to let me know what you thought!
Date: 23 Nov 2011 1:32 AM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
This story is really good. It is well-written and as a NASCAR fan myself a few years back-- very well done.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:13 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
Great Chapter! Loved his last statement "One day you will definitely be Bella Cullen"
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:47 AM Title: Epilogue
that was an amazing story!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 10:21 PM Title: Attacking Walls
Wow what a mess just because officials didn't wan to spend money, people could have lost their lives.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:36 PM Title: New Connections
Wow Jake is such a jackass. Why even tell her if they were over allready? That was just to hurt her more. uugghhh some guys have no brains.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:16 PM Title: Breakaway
Can you believe I just found this story? I have been a fan of your since Femm Doc and Kevlur Knights. I am sure I didn't spell that right but you get the picture. OMG I am loving this story. Great 1st chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL...well I'm very glad you are enjoying it!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:09 AM Title: Attacking Walls
FREAKIN AWESOME CHAPTER!!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Breakaway
i read a couple of your other stories and thought i would give this one a go - enjoying so far - onto the next chapter :)
Date: 27 Jan 2011 9:30 PM Title: Epilogue
I just found this story and could not stop reading it.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:15 AM Title: Epilogue
great story, you kept the theme in the forfront unlike some writers who throw a them and not make it realistic and have it just be a Bella and Eward story. Awesome job