Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Bet it would have been a sight to see Bella beating the crap out of Daniels..I worked in a recovery room for 18 years and it was very very rare family/or anyone was allowed in.. but there were times, especially late at night when there were not other patients, we did allow visitors... sometimes even if busy we would let someone in just for few minutes then, ,, just so everyone could see for themselves that the other was okay... thanks for the update... Pam B.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 6:29 PM Title: The Home Stretch
James being nice must mean something is up... glad things are going well still for our power couple...
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:29 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
OMG!! I cried like a baby on this one!! But I'm so glad Edward is ok!! Please post again soon. :)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:35 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
i love it!!! amazing! i hope edward gets better
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:05 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
oh poor bella and edward they'll be fine though!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:31 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge
oh i'm so glad Edward's going to be ok. i hope he's able to race again. this was such a good chapter! they're engaged :):) i LOVED that Bella punched the shit out of James. i can't wait until Edward find that out :)
Kristi
Date: 28 Aug 2010 8:41 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
First, the proposal was perfect for them.
second Tell me Daniels at least gets banned from racing, if not jail time for all the sh*t he's pulled, still think his whole team is behind all the sabotage.
was glad when Bella beat the crap out of him.
Edward is in for a long recovery, but Bella will help him every step.
It did sting, but it was a great chapter anyway. Cant wait for the next one.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:39 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
great chapter.....
Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:09 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Way to go Bella for beating the crap out of Daniels. Poor Edward.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:31 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
awww double chapter YAY!!!!
cant wait for the next installment!!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:22 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Okay, I feel better now that we know he is going to be all right. He does have a long recuperation period coming so I'm guessing he'll spend most of the time getting the new team up and running.
Sanctions against Daniels???? Lets hope so, for everyones sake!
Great chapter!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:12 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Sweet chapter. James is just horrible! He caused the accidents.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:24 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Okay as much as I hate to say this because I know this story is about to come to an end but, I need the next chapter please! LOL!
Rhonda
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:22 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Oi. Two chapters in one day and all that love and angst. I loved every letter of it. I'll be sad when this fic comes to an end. These two are adorable.
I can't wait until James gets his though. What a *insert expletive of your choice here*!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:07 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
thank you for letting edward be alright. that was really scary
i have no idea what's going to happen to their professional lives right now. we don't know yet if edward is physically and mentally capable of racing anymore. and with bella's outburst, i don't know if she will be facing a lot of trouble for that... but i also hope that they won't let james off the hook, like they've been doing for so long. hopefully with his accident, public outcry will force the authorities to take action against james. it isn't right that he purposefully hurts other racers to get ahead.
btw, what's going to happen to this race? this was a very important race that will help determine who makes it to the chase, right? did they continue racing after edward was taken away in the ambulance? or will they rerace at a later date? obviously, edward is out of the running, but if they rerace later, bella probably will still be able to race, maybe? and she might get to go to the chase...i dunno..what usually happens after huge accidents like this during a race?
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
Well I just squealed at an embarrassing level at the thought of Bella beating James, and fingers crossed that Edward recovers well xx
Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:53 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
that ass James, it wouldn't surprise me at all if Aro didn't pay him to screw Bella & Edward up. i hope he'll be able to race again
Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge
didnt see that one comming! cant wait to see what happens next ! keep them comming
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: The Home Stretch
well Cosma is a new guy we need to watch out for even if he is calm cool and collected. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:05 PM Title: The Home Stretch
This was such a nice smooth chapter. Life is nice when it is calm and all the pieces fit together.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:24 PM Title: The Home Stretch
Daniels and Cosma really have my "this is not good" vibe standing at attention. We know that Daniels is a creep and up to no good all the time but is he dragging Cosma along with him? I'm thinking that Cosma is being given orders to take out Bella and or Edward if possible. That is, if Daniels hasn't done it first.
Will Edward wait until after the final race to give her the ring? I hope he doesn't wait that long!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:48 PM Title: The Home Stretch
it's coming along!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: The Home Stretch
ok, so I am thinking the person behind the sabotage to Bella's care was Stephan. Great chapter, sad its coming to an end, but have enjoyed it.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:15 PM Title: The Home Stretch
i love it!!! i wwonder who the guy is i think its james....
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:32 PM Title: The Home Stretch
Hmm, Daniels & Cosma....those 2 must have something to do with the sabotage. Its the quiet ones you gotta watch out for...
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:13 PM Title: The Home Stretch
I think Daniels and Cosmo are up to something. Good chapter.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:59 PM Title: The Home Stretch
The plot thickens! I really hope that Daniels gets tossed from racing. I don't know how, but he has to get what's coming to him.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: The Home Stretch
i'm worried about what james has planned...seeing a crooked guy like him smiling is never a good thing
i didn't understand what it meant to 'make the chase'? is it like, only the top racers with a good ranking can move onto the next round??
Author's Response:
Sorry...I think I explained it before, but maybe not. The whole season is about getting points trying to get into what's sort of like the finals, called The Chase for the Sprint cup. Only the 12 drivers witht he most points gets in
Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:04 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
Why would someone be out to get Bella???? Ben is so lucky he is not sleeping with the fishys. When is Edward going to ask her when when when??????
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:33 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
It is a good thing Bella has a heart of gold or Ben would be talking out of his ass because his head would be shoved up it.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:07 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
OH happy days that is asking a person to marry but not yet LOL
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:56 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal
Edward needs to listen to those whispers and soon.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:09 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal
ok...transition chapter, i get it, had to be done, but the engagement ring thing at the end...ooooh, what a tease! Edward is so funny....choosing between ben and ang in bella's house and bella moving in with him, and not being able to choose, haha! such a freak! can't wait to see who's behind all this shit...still thinking daniels, but i don't know now, maybe it's volturi...who knows! see you next time.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:14 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal
bella is so nice, can't wait for more!!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:55 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
awww i love this story! in fact, i love all your stories! lol i thinkk this one is my favorite tho! i'm really glad that angela and ben were proven to not be bad people. amazing writing! thank you for sharing!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:53 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
great to give someone a second chance in life, even though trust would be an issue as well. Someone take advantage of the trust Bella was placing in Ben. Edward's skepticism and protectiveness understandable... great post as always... Pam b.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:44 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal
great chapter
Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:50 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
Good chapter, so sweet that he cant wait to propse to her. I wonder who is behind the stuff with her car?
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:37 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
Bella is so compassionate with Ben and Angela in letting them move into her home for their safety as well as their unborn child. The added benefit for Edward is tha he will have Bella living with him 24/7. Win Win!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
ooh yay! an engagement ring! that was very nice of Bella to let Ben and Angela stay at her house. i would've done the same thing. really great chapter :):)
Kristi
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:02 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
i love it! bella is sooo freakin nice!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:52 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
Drama, drama, drama. I still think Volturi brothers are behind the sabotage.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:52 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
aww no lemon loving but that's okay, i like the 'love' bella gave Angela and Ben even though Ben tried to hurt her. I love it. thanks again bye
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:51 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
wow, Bella has a heart of gold....glad Edward realized why Ben did what he did.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:26 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
Still wondering who is behind it all, Daniels? the Volturi? Great chapter. Sad that it is winding down but looking forward to the next few chapters left.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:14 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
love it and it is sad to know that this story is coming to an end
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
no matter the circumstances, i am glad that bella's finally relented and agreed to move in with edward... i love that bella is such a good person, that she was so willing to help ben and angela. i just hate that things outside her control keep causing her to lose her ranking... i want her and edward to always win and then win some more and get only first and second place.. yeah, that's not realistic, but still....
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:10 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal
:-) They're so cute! I can't believe you cranked out 5 chapters this week! That's crazy woman! I bow down to you. The chapters I write for my fic are usually about double the size of these, but I am strictly limited to one a week. Haven't been able to push out more than that.
Can't wait for the ones to come. I love this little fic and have rec'd the shit out of it for you.
Until next time...
H
Author's Response:
Awe well thanks for the reccing! Normally I only get out about one or two chapters a week, but this week I had a lot of backup to get out since my finger was injured and I couldn't type for a week. Not only did I do five chapters of this, I also did a 5,000 word entry for All Hallows Eve Contest and 1,000 words for my original story. It must be true...I don't write cause I want to...I write cause I need to! LOL
Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:56 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal
great chapter
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:37 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
cool.,..it's dumbut isn't it. he's so in trouble...he'll get his one way or another won't he? i sure hope it isn't the volturi, that would suck, but i don't think they would ruin the reputation and do something so stupid. oh well, can't wait to see what happens, see you next time. btw, you are an amazing updater, i can't believe you get so much out of that crazy head of yours in such a short time, but thanks for the crazyness!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:22 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
great story, look forward to more
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:42 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Bella is a good person. I hope Ben's clues can help them figure who it is that is trying to get rid of Bella.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:26 PM Title: Breakaway
awesome start.. interested to see what these two kids have in store..
thanks a million
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Who is behind Ben's sabatage? James, The Volturi, or any other racing team/fans who are against a female driver??? What do you have in store for us next week?
On a side note: I live less than 40 miles from the Texas Motor Speedway and have never been to a race. The facts that you are throwing into this story have peeked my interest into NASCAR. I may have to go to the next big race to check it out for myself
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:58 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
i love it! thats really nice of bella i love it!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:15 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Wow, that is pretty underhanded for someone to sabotage Bella's car. I'll bet anything it was the Volturri assholes. It just seems like something they would do.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:27 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
It was probably James trying to secure his spot for the Chase.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:25 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
oh that was interesting!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:16 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Two words - more please?!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:13 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
So many possibilities for "who wants Bella out of the races". My guess would be Daniels who has tried "bumping" her out of a race with not much success. I feel like he has the most to lose if she continues to race well.
Interesting piece of backstory for Bella and why she feels compelled to "pay if forward" now.
Thanks for another great chapter!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:37 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
hmmm I wonder who hired ben to take Bella's car out of the races?? and the ending to this was so sweet. :)
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:14 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
well,, that was certainly an interesting chapter.. Hard to be an understanding person and not just want to beat the hell out of Ben for messing with the car..suprised sort of that Rose had not already done so before ever taking him to Bella..great restraint by all concerned... hopefully Bella will get her groove back for this race and the upcoming ones... Daniels have something to do with her car or Volturi?? thanks for the update... Pam B.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:17 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Love the pay it forward aspect of this chapter. I just hope it doesn't come back and bite Bella in the ass. I don't think it will but you never know.
Rhonda
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:08 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
great chapter......
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:05 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
it had to be from Volturi racing right....or maybe the Daniels team???
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:06 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
Aww, what a cute "pay it forward" story. I wonder how Bella is going to catch up in the points ranking?
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:45 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
lol. Bella's such a sweetheart. anyone else would've had Ben arrested. really great chapter :):)
Kristi
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:35 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
I have two guesses as to who would do that to Bella's car. First would be James. Second would be the Volturi (They might do something like that to discredit her).
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
first off, I'm so glad they got the situation figured out. that's great and I know Volturi's behind it, I just know it! Second: Cockblocker. how could you just leave us like that meanie? lol thanks so much for the update. i love it even if you did leave us hanging. lol thanks again bye
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:22 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
cant wait to find out who was paying ben! keep the chapters comming!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
:) update soon!!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:16 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
no matter the circumstances, what ben did was inexcusable. racing is very important to her and he cannot tamper with her career like that. he should have been punished in some way instead of being offered help out of his difficult situation. but i guess that's what makes bella a much better person than me. i am soo angry on her behalf. he should have just gone up to them and told them about his extenuating circumstances along with the man's bribe. arghghhg... i am still soo angry on her behalf...
i wonder who bella's benefactor is. will they be playing a big part int eh story later?
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:06 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them
My money is on either Volturi racing or James for the set up. Yes, I know that Volturi racing should want Bella to win, but they might want the publicity of her having a car crash instead. Make sense? Probably not.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:18 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
I feel a little bad for Carlisle that he didn't know what he was doing when he took on Isabella Swan. lol That girl will tell it like it is. I think Carlisle needed to get some perspective as a parent. It is sad that he has never been to one of his races, but it is better late than never. I think it is a great idea that they can get the full experience from the pit. Ease some of the worry. I don't think that the connection is completely gone from Carlisle and Esme. He just needs to put the hospital second, and his family first. I liked that part about 'his kid(s)'. Good job Carlisle with telling him that he was proud. He will never know how much that meant to Edward. And, I think he proud of his future daughter in law as well. But, that's for another day.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:52 AM Title: Meet The Parents
That does sound like Esme to collect all the magazines she could find. lol I do like how this time the 3rd P.O.V was watching them from another stance. I am not a fan of 3rd P.O.V. as you well know, but I like how it can work with this story. I do like the anonymous tip though. Genius. lol The ironic thing for me reading this chapter is the meeting with all three. Bella, Esme and Carlisle are just meeting with each other, right? My nephew (through marriage since I am only 26) just meet his girlfriend's grandmother tonight, and he was nervous. I was also telling him how terrified I was meeting his grandparents years ago. Truth be told I still get extremely nervous around all my in-laws. You better believe that in private that Carlisle would have his ass handed to him for that blatant attitude. It bothers him about Edward's career choice? So be it, and get over it. It's over and done with. He has, but one child, and therefor needs to do something about it. Being neglectful of his wife doesn't make for a happy marriage, either. I am pretty sure that the girl in question had a lot to do with the change. Then again for Carlisle truly know since he avoids his boy 98% of the time.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:08 AM Title: Rewards
First I just have to say that they should have used Midway. lol O'Hare International so congested and a pain in the ass to drive to. lol Secondly, the lemon was breathtaking. And, third Bella, sweetheart no worries and good luck! Esme and Carlisle will love her.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:26 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Carlisle to the rescue!!!! I am so glad he and Esme are backing E&B up with their business venture. That is just too awesome.
I loved Edward's reaction to the ringing phone that morning. I could totally picture him sitting there frozen just staring at it.
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:07 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Oh, darn it! That was a great chapter!
The end, of course, was my favorite. I think the best quotes that Edward can say are: I love you, Bella; I'm going to make you my wife one day; make love to me; I wanna fuck you; and will you marry me (all with variations that pertain to the story, of course).
I can't wait for another chapter from my favorite author in the Twilight fanfic world.
Author's Response:
awe...thank you honey! thankfully i have a couple in reserve because i hurt my finger and have to hunt and peck...;not conducive to writing a chapter :(
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Meet The Parents
Wow I really don't like Carlisle in this story right now. Poor Esme and Edward.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:28 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
I knew his parents would help him out. I thought he was going to propose, guess we will have to wait and see. Good chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:54 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
I loved the chapter. Bella needs to sell her house and move in with Edward. It will save them money, since she really doesn't use it anyway. We all know she will be Bella Cullen pretty soon.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 7:32 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:01 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
aww Edward's so cute. and yay for Carlisle and Esme investing in Cullen Racing :) great chapter!
Kristi
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:57 AM Title: It's Just Business...
I was/still laughing so hard when he ran into the room like I child wanting his parents pride! lol Business is cold, hard, and calculating. It is difficult to say what some will do when it comes to fame, money and power. It is beneath this version of Aro. If they want gossip then they need to look other places. I am proud that these two stood up for their relationship. I wouldn't have expected anything less from these two. Most wouldn't have the morality. I mean look at reality t.v. They both have some hard decisions that they are going to have to make. And, a smile he shall wear to his mistress's room.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:51 AM Title: Additional Motivation
Poor Edward to not realize that Bella is definitely not a switch hitter. lol I think it is a great idea that Bella (formally known as Izzy sometimes) will get her locks changed. haha That must be weird to walk around a house that only weeks prior was yours. Bella is a evil genius! I LOVE IT.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
A good motivation is sometimes all you need. lol Albeit it might have been dangerous for him to have the visual. I do think that he will remember that it the future to stay focused. haha He might not have had the grand prize, but the consolation prize is well received. I am glad that it worked out in Bella's favor though. Edward wouldn't want her to do something she wasn't 100% comfortable with in the bedroom. I am guessing that Edward wasn't hungry for lunch. I like that Bella had a great advantage on the track in Darlington. Edward will eventually be able too, with future lessons from Bella. Even though it was really sweet of Tanya and Shannon I would be pissed that someone had gone through my things. But, o well lol
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:16 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
great chapter...
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: The Trouble With Money
génial, j'adore!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:40 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
yay! i love it!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Wow!! way to go Carlisle!!! I sure hope all goes well with this adventure, I guess we shall see :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Hmmm, lemons..... Ssssllllurrrp!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
They are going to waste away if they keep missing meals like that! But then again lemons for breakfast can't be all bad!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:05 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Great post.. Everyone is always grateful when they have their parents support in what they do.. monetary or otherwise.... Thanks for posting, and I think it's time to place Bella's house on the market.. why make 2 house payments when she is at Edward's most of the time?? Pam B.
Author's Response:
LOL...next two chapters will reveal the fate of Bella's house :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:51 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
That's was really generous and awesome from his parents. Good I hope they stick it to VR really good.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:42 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Carlisle is so generous! That's a lot of money.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:39 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
yay! I hoped maybe Carlisle would help them. That's definitely a way to stick it to the Volturi outfit!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:02 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
i'm soo glad that carlisle and esme are now playing a much bigger role in edward's career. it's about time that his family is on board with his decision to race. and i like that even after edward and bella get too old to race, they will have this to fall back on and to earn their money. i just hope things go well for them...
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:30 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Cullen Racing...I'm liking the sound of that!