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Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Bet it would have been a sight to see Bella beating the crap out of Daniels..I worked in a recovery room for 18 years and it was very very rare family/or anyone was allowed in.. but there were times, especially late at night when there were not other patients, we did allow visitors... sometimes even if busy we would let someone in just for few minutes then,  ,, just so everyone could see for themselves that the other was okay...  thanks for the update... Pam B.

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 6:29 PM Title: The Home Stretch

James being nice must mean something is up... glad things are going well still for our power couple...

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:29 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge

OMG!! I cried like a baby on this one!! But I'm so glad Edward is ok!! Please post again soon. :)

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:35 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge

i love it!!! amazing! i hope edward gets better

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:05 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge

oh poor bella and edward they'll be fine though!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:31 PM Title: Waiting on the Edge

oh i'm so glad Edward's going to be ok. i hope he's able to race again. this was such a good chapter! they're engaged :):) i LOVED that Bella punched the shit out of James. i can't wait until Edward find that out :)

Kristi

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 10:14 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

awesome

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 8:41 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

First, the proposal was perfect for them. 

second Tell me Daniels at least gets banned from racing, if not jail time for all the sh*t he's pulled, still think his whole team is behind all the sabotage. 

 

was glad when Bella beat the crap out of him.

Edward is in for a long recovery, but Bella will help him every step.

 

It did sting, but it was a great chapter anyway. Cant wait for the next one.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:39 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

great chapter.....

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 7:09 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Way to go Bella for beating the crap out of Daniels. Poor Edward.

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:31 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

awww double chapter YAY!!!!

 

 

cant wait for the next installment!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 5:22 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Okay, I feel better now that we know he is going to be all right. He does have a long recuperation period coming so I'm guessing he'll spend most of the time getting the new team up and running.

Sanctions against Daniels???? Lets hope so, for everyones sake!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:12 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Sweet chapter.  James is just horrible!  He caused the accidents.

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:24 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Okay as much as I hate to say this because I know this story is about to come to an end but, I need the next chapter please!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:22 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Oi.  Two chapters in one day and all that love and angst.  I loved every letter of it.  I'll be sad when this fic comes to an end.  These two are adorable.

I can't wait until James gets his though.  What a *insert expletive of your choice here*!

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:07 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

thank you for letting edward be alright. that was really scary

i have no idea what's going to happen to their professional lives right now. we don't know  yet if edward is physically and mentally capable of racing anymore. and with bella's outburst, i don't know if she will be facing a lot of trouble for that... but i also hope that they won't let james off the hook, like they've been doing for so long. hopefully with his accident, public outcry will force the authorities to take action against james. it isn't right that he purposefully hurts other racers to get ahead.

btw, what's going to happen to this race? this was a very important race that will help determine who makes it to the chase, right? did they continue racing after edward was taken away in the ambulance? or will they rerace at a later date? obviously, edward is out of the running, but if they rerace later, bella probably will still be able to race, maybe? and she might get to go to the chase...i dunno..what usually happens after huge accidents like this during a race?

Reviewer: macca_99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:01 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

Well I just squealed at an embarrassing level at the thought of Bella beating James, and fingers crossed that Edward recovers well xx

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:53 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

that ass James, it wouldn't surprise me at all if Aro didn't pay him to screw Bella & Edward up. i hope he'll be able to race again

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Waiting on the Edge

didnt see that one comming! cant wait to see what happens next ! keep them comming

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 12:47 AM Title: The Home Stretch

good chapter

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: The Home Stretch

well Cosma is a new guy we need to watch out for even if he is calm cool and collected. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:05 PM Title: The Home Stretch

This was such a nice smooth chapter. Life is nice when it is calm and all the pieces fit together.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 9:24 PM Title: The Home Stretch

Daniels and Cosma really have my "this is not good" vibe standing at attention. We know that Daniels is a creep and up to no good all the time but is he dragging Cosma along with him? I'm thinking that Cosma is being given orders to take out Bella and or Edward if possible. That is, if Daniels hasn't done it first.

Will Edward wait until after the final race to give her the ring? I hope he doesn't wait that long!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:48 PM Title: The Home Stretch

it's coming along!

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:33 PM Title: The Home Stretch

ok, so I am thinking the person behind the sabotage to Bella's care was Stephan. Great chapter, sad its coming to an end, but have enjoyed it.

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 8:15 PM Title: The Home Stretch

i love it!!! i wwonder who the guy is i think its james....

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:32 PM Title: The Home Stretch

Hmm, Daniels & Cosma....those 2 must have something to do with the sabotage. Its the quiet ones you gotta watch out for...

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 6:13 PM Title: The Home Stretch

I think Daniels and Cosmo are up to something. Good chapter.

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:59 PM Title: The Home Stretch

The plot thickens! I really hope that Daniels gets tossed from racing. I don't know how, but he has to get what's coming to him.

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: The Home Stretch

i'm worried about what james has planned...seeing a crooked guy like him smiling is never a good thing

i didn't understand what it meant to 'make the chase'? is it like, only the top racers with a good ranking can move onto the next round??



Author's Response:

Sorry...I think I explained it before, but maybe not.  The whole season is about getting points trying to get into what's sort of like the finals, called The Chase for the Sprint cup.  Only the 12 drivers witht he most points gets in

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:04 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

Why would someone be out to get Bella????  Ben is so lucky he is not sleeping with the fishys.  When is Edward going to ask her when when when??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:33 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

It is a good thing Bella has a heart of gold or Ben would be talking out of his ass because his head would be shoved up it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:07 AM Title: The Trouble With Money

OH happy days that is asking a person to marry but not yet LOL

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:56 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal

Edward needs to listen to those whispers and soon.

Reviewer: tracybell Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:09 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal

ok...transition chapter, i get it, had to be done, but the engagement ring thing at the end...ooooh, what a tease!  Edward is so funny....choosing between ben and ang in bella's house and bella moving in with him, and not being able to choose, haha!  such a freak!  can't wait to see who's behind all this shit...still thinking daniels, but i don't know now, maybe it's volturi...who knows!  see you next time.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:14 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal

bella is so nice, can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: deeoris09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:55 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

awww i love this story! in fact, i love all your stories! lol i thinkk this one is my favorite tho! i'm really glad that angela and ben were proven to not be bad people. amazing writing! thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:53 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

great to give someone a second chance in life, even though trust would be an issue as well. Someone take advantage of the trust Bella was placing in Ben. Edward's skepticism and protectiveness understandable... great post as always... Pam b.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:44 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal

great chapter

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:50 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

Good chapter, so sweet that he cant wait to propse to her. I wonder who is behind the stuff with her car?

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:37 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

Bella is so compassionate with Ben and Angela in letting them move into her home for their safety as well as their unborn child. The added benefit for Edward is tha he will have Bella living with him 24/7. Win Win!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

ooh yay! an engagement ring! that was very nice of Bella to let Ben and Angela stay at her house. i would've done the same thing. really great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:02 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

i love it! bella is sooo freakin nice!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:52 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

Drama, drama, drama.  I still think Volturi brothers are behind the sabotage.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:52 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

aww no lemon loving but that's okay, i like the 'love' bella gave Angela and Ben even though Ben tried to hurt her. I love it. thanks again bye

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:51 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

wow, Bella has a heart of gold....glad Edward realized why Ben did what he did.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:26 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

Still wondering who is behind it all, Daniels? the Volturi? Great chapter. Sad that it is winding down but looking forward to the next few chapters left.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:14 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

love it and it is sad to know that this story is coming to an end

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

no matter the circumstances, i am glad that bella's finally relented and agreed to move in with edward...  i love that bella is such a good person, that she was so willing to help ben and angela. i just hate that things outside her control keep causing her to lose her ranking... i want her and edward to always win and then win some more and get only first and second place.. yeah, that's not realistic, but still....

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:10 AM Title: To Protect and Conceal

:-)  They're so cute!  I can't believe you cranked out 5 chapters this week! That's crazy woman!  I bow down to you.  The chapters I write for my fic are usually about double the size of these, but I am strictly limited to one a week.  Haven't been able to push out more than that.

Can't wait for the ones to come. I love this little fic and have rec'd the shit out of it for you.

Until next time...

H



Author's Response:

Awe well thanks for the reccing!  Normally I only get out about one or two chapters a week, but this week I had a lot of backup to get out since my finger was injured and I couldn't type for a week.  Not only did I do five chapters of this, I also did a 5,000 word entry for All Hallows Eve Contest and 1,000 words for my original story.  It must be true...I don't write cause I want to...I write cause I need to!  LOL

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:56 PM Title: To Protect and Conceal

great chapter

Reviewer: tracybell Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:37 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

cool.,..it's dumbut isn't it.  he's so in trouble...he'll get his one way or another won't he?  i sure hope it isn't the volturi, that would suck, but i don't think they would ruin the reputation and do something so stupid.  oh well, can't wait to see what happens, see you next time.  btw, you are an amazing updater, i can't believe you get so much out of that crazy head of yours in such a short time, but thanks for the crazyness!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:22 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

great story, look forward to more

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:42 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

Bella is a good person. I hope Ben's clues can help them figure who it is that is trying to get rid of Bella.

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:26 PM Title: Breakaway

awesome start.. interested to see what these two kids have in store..

thanks a million

Reviewer: My Friend Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:17 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

Who is behind Ben's sabatage? James, The Volturi, or any other racing team/fans who are against a female driver??? What do you have in store for us next week?

On a side note: I live less than 40 miles from the Texas Motor Speedway and have never been to a race. The facts that you are throwing into this story have peeked my interest into NASCAR. I may have to go to the next big race to check it out for myself

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:58 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

i love it! thats really nice of bella i love it!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:15 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

Wow, that is pretty underhanded for someone to sabotage Bella's car.  I'll bet anything it was the Volturri assholes.  It just seems like something they would do.

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:27 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

It was probably James trying to secure his spot for the Chase.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:25 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

oh that was interesting!!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:16 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

Two words - more please?!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:13 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

So many possibilities for "who wants Bella out of the races". My guess would be Daniels who has tried "bumping" her out of a race with not much success. I feel like he has the most to lose if she continues to race well.

Interesting piece of backstory for Bella and why she feels compelled to "pay if forward" now.

Thanks for another great chapter!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:37 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

hmmm I wonder who hired ben to take Bella's car out of the races?? and the ending to this was so sweet. :)

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 2:14 PM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

well,, that was certainly an interesting chapter.. Hard to be an understanding person and not just want to beat the hell out of Ben for messing with the car..suprised sort of that Rose had not already done so before ever taking him to Bella..great restraint by all concerned... hopefully Bella will get her groove back for this race and the upcoming ones... Daniels have something to do with her car or Volturi??  thanks for the update... Pam B.

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:17 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

Love the pay it forward aspect of this chapter.  I just hope it doesn't come back and bite Bella in the ass.  I don't think it will but you never know.

Rhonda

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:08 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

great chapter......

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:05 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

it had to be from Volturi racing right....or maybe the Daniels team???

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:06 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

Aww, what a cute "pay it forward" story.  I wonder how Bella is going to catch up in the points ranking?

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:45 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

lol. Bella's such a sweetheart. anyone else would've had Ben arrested. really great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:35 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

I have two guesses as to who would do that to Bella's car.  First would be James.  Second would be the Volturi (They might do something like that to discredit her).  

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

first off, I'm so glad they got the situation figured out. that's great and I know Volturi's behind it, I just know it! Second: Cockblocker. how could you just leave us like that meanie? lol thanks so much for the update. i love it even if you did leave us hanging. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:22 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

cant wait to find out who was paying ben! keep the chapters comming! 

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

:) update soon!!

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:16 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

no matter the circumstances, what ben did was inexcusable. racing is very important to her and he cannot tamper with her career like that. he should have been punished in some way instead of being offered help out of his difficult situation. but i guess that's what makes bella a much better person than me. i am soo angry on her behalf. he should have just gone up to them and told them about his extenuating circumstances along with the man's bribe. arghghhg... i am still soo angry on her behalf...

i wonder who bella's benefactor is. will they be playing a big part int eh story later?

Reviewer: siriusyellowlab Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:06 AM Title: One Hiding Amongst Them

My money is on either Volturi racing or James for the set up. Yes, I know that Volturi racing should want Bella to win, but they might want the publicity of her having a car crash instead. Make sense? Probably not.

Reviewer: lilmissfireball Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:18 AM Title: Growth of Understanding

I feel a little bad for Carlisle that he didn't know what he was doing when he took on Isabella Swan. lol That girl will tell it like it is. I think Carlisle needed to get some perspective as a parent. It is sad that he has never been to one of his races, but it is better late than never. I think it is a great idea that they can get the full experience from the pit. Ease some of the worry. I don't think that the connection is completely gone from Carlisle and Esme. He just needs to put the hospital second, and his family first. I liked that part about 'his kid(s)'. Good job Carlisle with telling him that he was proud. He will never know how much that meant to Edward. And, I think he proud of his future daughter in law as well. But, that's for another day.

Reviewer: lilmissfireball Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:52 AM Title: Meet The Parents

That does sound like Esme to collect all the magazines she could find. lol I do like how this time the 3rd P.O.V was watching them from another stance. I am not a fan of 3rd P.O.V. as you well know, but I like how it can work with this story. I do like the anonymous tip though. Genius. lol The ironic thing for me reading this chapter is the meeting with all three. Bella, Esme and Carlisle are just meeting with each other, right? My nephew (through marriage since I am only 26) just meet his girlfriend's grandmother tonight, and he was nervous. I was also telling him how terrified I was meeting his grandparents years ago. Truth be told I still get extremely nervous around all my in-laws. You better believe that in private that Carlisle would have his ass handed to him for that blatant attitude. It bothers him about Edward's career choice? So be it, and get over it. It's over and done with. He has, but one child, and therefor needs to do something about it. Being neglectful of his wife doesn't make for a happy marriage, either. I am pretty sure that the girl in question had a lot to do with the change. Then again for Carlisle truly know since he avoids his boy 98% of the time.

Reviewer: lilmissfireball Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:08 AM Title: Rewards

First I just have to say that they should have used Midway. lol O'Hare International so congested and a pain in the ass to drive to. lol Secondly, the lemon was breathtaking. And, third Bella, sweetheart no worries and good luck! Esme and Carlisle will love her.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 9:26 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Carlisle to the rescue!!!!  I am so glad he and Esme are backing E&B up with their business venture.  That is just too awesome.

I loved Edward's reaction to the ringing phone that morning.  I could totally picture him sitting there frozen just staring at it.

Reviewer: lauralouwho Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 6:07 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Oh, darn it!  That was a great chapter!

The end, of course, was my favorite.  I think the best quotes that Edward can say are: I love you, Bella; I'm going to make you my wife one day; make love to me; I wanna fuck you; and will you marry me (all with variations that pertain to the story, of course).

I can't wait for another chapter from my favorite author in the Twilight fanfic world.



Author's Response:

awe...thank you honey!  thankfully i have a couple in reserve because i hurt my finger and have to hunt and peck...;not conducive to writing a chapter :(

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Meet The Parents

Wow I really don't like Carlisle in this story right now.  Poor Esme and Edward.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 10:28 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

I knew his parents would help him out. I thought he was going to propose, guess we will have to wait and see. Good chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:54 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

I loved the chapter. Bella needs to sell her house and move in with Edward. It will save them money, since she really doesn't use it anyway. We all know she will be Bella Cullen pretty soon.

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 7:32 AM Title: The Trouble With Money

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 6:01 AM Title: The Trouble With Money

aww Edward's so cute. and yay for Carlisle and Esme investing in Cullen Racing :) great chapter!

Kristi

Reviewer: lilmissfireball Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:57 AM Title: It's Just Business...

I was/still laughing so hard when he ran into the room like I child wanting his parents pride! lol Business is cold, hard, and calculating. It is difficult to say what some will do when it comes to fame, money and power. It is beneath this version of Aro. If they want gossip then they need to look other places. I am proud that these two stood up for their relationship. I wouldn't have expected anything less from these two. Most wouldn't have the morality. I mean look at reality t.v. They both have some hard decisions that they are going to have to make. And, a smile he shall wear to his mistress's room.

Reviewer: lilmissfireball Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:51 AM Title: Additional Motivation

Poor Edward to not realize that Bella is definitely not a switch hitter. lol I think it is a great idea that Bella (formally known as Izzy sometimes) will get her locks changed. haha That must be weird to walk around a house that only weeks prior was yours. Bella is a evil genius! I LOVE IT.

Reviewer: lilmissfireball Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Helpful Wagers

A good motivation is sometimes all you need. lol Albeit it might have been dangerous for him to have the visual. I do think that he will remember that it the future to stay focused. haha He might not have had the grand prize, but the consolation prize is well received. I am glad that it worked out in Bella's favor though. Edward wouldn't want her to do something she wasn't 100% comfortable with in the bedroom. I am guessing that Edward wasn't hungry for lunch. I like that Bella had a great advantage on the track in Darlington. Edward will eventually be able too, with future lessons from Bella. Even though it was really sweet of Tanya and Shannon I would be pissed that someone had gone through my things. But, o well lol 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:16 AM Title: The Trouble With Money

great chapter...

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: The Trouble With Money

génial, j'adore!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:40 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

yay! i love it! 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Wow!! way to go Carlisle!!! I sure hope all goes well with this adventure, I guess we shall see :) 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Hmmm, lemons..... Ssssllllurrrp!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

They are going to waste away if they keep missing meals like that! But then again lemons for breakfast can't be all bad!

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:05 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Great post.. Everyone is always grateful when they have their parents support in what they do.. monetary or otherwise....  Thanks for posting, and I think it's time to place Bella's house on the market.. why make 2 house payments when she is at Edward's most of the time??  Pam B.



Author's Response:

LOL...next two chapters will reveal the fate of Bella's house :)

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:51 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

That's was really generous and awesome from his parents. Good I hope they stick it to VR really good.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:42 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Carlisle is so generous!  That's a lot of money.

Reviewer: sugunary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:39 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

yay! I hoped maybe Carlisle would help them. That's definitely a way to stick it to the Volturi outfit!

Reviewer: reesessweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 7:02 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

i'm soo glad that carlisle and esme are now playing a much bigger role in edward's career. it's about time that his family is on board with his decision to race. and i like that even after edward and bella get too old to race, they will have this to fall back on and to earn their money. i just hope things go well for them...

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:30 PM Title: The Trouble With Money

Cullen Racing...I'm liking the sound of that!

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