Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:26 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
Too perfect! I'm so happy for them! The only sore spot is the Voturi. I cannot wait for the day when they can tell them to shove it!
Kat
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:11 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
aw i'm so happy their business venture is working out, they are so happy, can't wait for more!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:10 PM Title: The Trouble With Money
YEAH they got their loan! I'm so happy. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:11 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
great chapter
Date: 06 Aug 2010 11:51 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
aw this was so sweet!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 5:13 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
génial, j'adore
Date: 05 Aug 2010 6:12 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
What a beautiful scene with Carlisle. I'm glad we got to see it from his perspective.
Still loving this!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
ok this will be all girly but i don't care.. AAAWWWWWW
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:23 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
aww i'm so glad that Carlisle came around. really great chapter!!!
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:03 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
aw i love it!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 3:03 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
Awe, I really loved this chapter. I'm so glad that Bella's declarations about her own father and Carlisle really getting out there and seeing what his son could do was could but them in a better place! LOVED IT!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 2:28 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
Awwwwwww.... Carlisle got his head out of his ass. Yay!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:54 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
Wow! Carlisle finally understood.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:20 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
I am so happy Carlisle pulled his head out of his ass.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 12:02 AM Title: Growth of Understanding
aww you had me crying like a baby on that one. :) too sweet. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 11:52 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
awww, *sniff* i'm all teary now ;) that was beautiful! screw Volturi racing, they can't mess with a love like that!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 11:32 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
I totally loved Bella sweetly telling Carlisle off at dinner! That was the best!!!
The end was pretty cool too where Carlisle finally gained a respect for what his son does for a living.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:38 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
Finally! Carlisle got the bur out of his ass and realized just how awesome his son is! The ending makes me happy!
Rhonda
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:34 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
Wow!! That was Awesome!!! All it took was Bella to get Edward's dad to see his son for what he is!!!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 10:29 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
Glad to see Carlisle changing and supporting his son.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:59 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
aww...i'm soo happy to see that carlisle has had a change of heart regarding edward's career path. even bette,r that it was due to bella that he had this epiphany. yay!!!!! i can just imagine how happy edward is right now, seeing that he and his dad have reconciled.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:39 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
so glad Carlisle finally has come around and has hopefully a new found respect for his son.. hooray for Bella not backing down when asked what her dad would think about her possible future business ventures. hopefully all this will also see Esme and Carlisle's relationship inhanced as well.. Pam B.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
So great! Glad Carlisle finally came around. Wondering how the Volturi will take the true spin on their relationship coming from Alice and the gang? Cant wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
Bella has really become the miracle worker in Edwards life especially now with Carlisle.
Edwards relationship with his father has certainly changed and all for the better. Will Carlisle and Esme become a little closer as well?
Now that Carlisle has experienced racing in such an intimate way will he decide to help finance the new racing team?
Good for Alice in trying to get the "correct" version of Edward and Bella out to the media.
Author's Response:
:) Either I am extremely obvious in my plots or you are very intuitive ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:19 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
So happy for Edward in this chapter. He gained his father's acceptance, he's living in the love he has for Bella and Alice is counteracting the negative press! I loved Bella's answer to Carlisle's question concerning Charlie's opinion of her profession and her future in it! Feisty!
Kat
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:33 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
EXCELLENT chapter!! I am so glad Carlisle can finally see what Edward's passion is all about.
Glad to hear you have good news, and Congratulations on the NEWS!! Hope you can share soon!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:17 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
What a wonderful and beautiful moment for the Cullen family. I loved this chapter.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
What a great turnaround for Carlisle!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:11 PM Title: Growth of Understanding
See my review on FFN.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:49 AM Title: Meet The Parents
I just found this and I absolutely love it it..but Carlisle needs swift kick in the ass...and I think Bella could be just the one to give it to him..can't wait for more
Date: 03 Aug 2010 1:44 PM Title: Meet The Parents
I don't think I like this Carlisle. He needs to change into the family oriented Carlisle that we know and love.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 2:50 AM Title: Meet The Parents
oh Carlisle lol... great chapter!!
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2010 12:05 AM Title: Meet The Parents
Well, that was much less painful than Bella expected. Can I just say that I LOVE Esme!! Carlisle leaves a little to be desired in his attitude towards his family.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2010 11:34 PM Title: Rewards
Hot, Hot, Hot! That chapter was amazing!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Meet The Parents
so B got to meet the parents. Esme of course seems delightful. Carlisle have a stick up his butt, having a true affair of some sort, or just really overworked?... glad to see he and Esme having a pleasant converstion in the elevator as opposed to the one on the phone earlier. looking forward to the next post (as always) to see how the remainder of the visit plays out. thanks muchly for the update.. Pam B.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:14 PM Title: Meet The Parents
i feel bad for esme, can't wait for more!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 7:48 PM Title: Meet The Parents
Poor Esme she is alone what happened with Edward and Carlisle to make him so distant??????
Date: 31 Jul 2010 12:39 PM Title: Meet The Parents
great chapter
Date: 31 Jul 2010 10:17 AM Title: Meet The Parents
Im liking this story alot, Difficult to see carlise as a bit of a prat, but Im still lobving the story. Looking forward to the update
Date: 31 Jul 2010 8:29 AM Title: Meet The Parents
This is a sweet chapter. Carlisle is a little bit anal in my opinion.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 6:35 AM Title: Meet The Parents
I love this story
Well I read most of all other stories and there wonderful
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:37 AM Title: Meet The Parents
wow why is carlisle soo dense and un-carlisle like?
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Meet The Parents
I new she would win over Carlisle and Esme. I just love them. Good chapter.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 3:22 AM Title: Meet The Parents
God Carlisle seems like a real jerk but I totally get it. He's upset about Edward's career choice but at least he likes Bella. that's great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Meet The Parents
i hvae to say, i'm not liking carlisle very much... sure, his job as a doctor is important, but he really needs to set his priorities straight or he will lose his wife along with his son. luckily for him, esme lvoes him dearly, but something's gotta give. he can't keep forcing his wife to accept his long hours the way she has been.
and i like that his parents approve of bella. i was afraid that carlisle would put up more of a resistance because of her racing career, and her humble background. i was scared they would be these snobby, rich people, but i'm glad they're not
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Meet The Parents
ell look at Bella winning over the mean old crank...lol, now if she could just do it to Aro.......
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 2:16 AM Title: Meet The Parents
aw i love it!
Date: 31 Jul 2010 1:12 AM Title: Meet The Parents
Our sweet, unassuming, level-headed Bella seems to have charmed the gruff Dr. Cullen. I hope she wins him over completely, and heals the breach between Carlisle and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 9:16 PM Title: Rewards
J'ai hâte de lire la suite, j'adore.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 8:49 PM Title: It's Just Business...
J'adore!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 8:39 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Passionnant!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 8:01 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
génial!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:15 PM Title: Rewards
She is meeting the parents. This shoud be interesting since they dont approve of Edward racing.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:52 AM Title: Rewards
excellent chapter
typical guys - cant get their heads! out of the gutter
loved it
thhanks heaps
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:25 AM Title: Rewards
Seriously, does anyone skip the best parts????????? You do write some of the best lemons out there!
How they can even think about the racing is beyond me. Now on to Chicago to meet his parents. Should be interesting!
Thanks!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:25 AM Title: Rewards
Bella must've been really stressed.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 4:38 AM Title: Rewards
oooh time to meet the parentals. lol good luck Bella! :D lol nah like always I have faith Esme and Carlisle will love her. thanks again bye.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:29 AM Title: Rewards
had forgotten about this site but after what you said about lemons, i had to track it down again.. great posting as always... the massage oil treatment was just epic...They have to learn to deal with their distractions with each other to concentrate on racing as well...very interested to read what happens when Bella meets the family.... thanks for posting... Pam B.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:06 AM Title: Rewards
FUCKHOT GIRL!!!! i wouldn't be able to stop thinking about that either!!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Rewards
ooh time to meet the parents. Edward and Bella are so friggin cute lol. great chapter :):)
Kristi
Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:23 PM Title: Rewards
Fuck this chapter was HOT!!!!
I think i need to go and find my husband.
keep up the excellent work
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:26 PM Title: Rewards
How come I have a bad feeling that something big is going to happen soon?
Loved the lemon.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 9:44 PM Title: Rewards
That was one hot night for a job well done LOL. Poor Bella making herself crazy cant wait for more I am sure the family will love her????
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:26 PM Title: Rewards
Well, if anyone did skip that section, it is certainly their loss. That had to be one of the hottest scenes I've ever read! And yet, it was so sweet. Some how you were able to make it both erotic and loving at the same time. Excellent writing. Then, I couldn't help but chuckle at Bella being so apprehensive about meeting the parents! She can race a machine that could kill her with no problems; however, ask her to meet Edward's parents and she goes into a panic! Hehe. We've all been there...no getting out of it. On a different note, it's absolutely awful what the owners are pulling on Bella and Edward. To offer up a couple's relationship as a sacrafice for publicity is just....well, there are no words. But it is disgusting.
Kat
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:24 PM Title: Rewards
Great chapter. That was worth the wait. Have fun with your family!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:13 PM Title: Rewards
Aw!! Citrusy fluffiness!! A-.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 8:08 PM Title: Rewards
meeting the parents soon!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:36 PM Title: Rewards
Edward really appreciated Bella's reward! It seems like she stunned him silly.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Rewards
The sexy times were hawt. I read the teaser for chapter 19 and I must say Carlisle is an asshat of epic proportions.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:25 PM Title: Rewards
HOLY HELL, THAT WAS HOT......damn lucky Edward!....lol. hope meeting the parents goes well and that they will survive the Volturi relationship drama
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 7:16 PM Title: Rewards
i love it!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:34 PM Title: It's Just Business...
The Volturi brothers are a bunch of ass wipes! I really hope Bella and Edward are able to find another race team that will take them both.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: It's Just Business...
Great chapter. Everybody loves drama! I love the new twist you are putting on the story. At least you gave us a warning before hand. lol Can't wait to see how they deal with it. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:56 PM Title: It's Just Business...
Wow I didnt see that coming, the whole PR u need to be in the spotlight thing. I bet they will set up some messes for them.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: It's Just Business...
Aro should be ashamed of himself but we all know he isnt. I am glad that Bella and Edward are not going to go with what they want. I cant wait for Edwards reward wink wink
Date: 22 Jul 2010 8:30 PM Title: It's Just Business...
Bella and Edward should start checking into other racing teams. They are racing well as a team and I don't see why they can't market that aspect. If they were on other teams they could not help but help each other. They love each other and they are going to look out for each other.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 8:08 PM Title: It's Just Business...
they really need to start they're own racing team...that would be cool...hope things get better and see you next time.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:36 AM Title: It's Just Business...
great chapter...
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:30 AM Title: It's Just Business...
great chapter, they should find a new team to work for, thanks tracy
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:50 AM Title: It's Just Business...
love that bella and edward stood up to them.
cant wait for the next chapter and his reward
have a great time away
thanks
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:38 AM Title: Additional Motivation
fantastic chapter
love how she teases him with the outfit
cant wait for more
thanks
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:50 PM Title: It's Just Business...
oh wow. what douches (the Volturi). maybe Edward and Bella will find somewhere else to be. can't wait to see how you have it planned out! :):) great chapter
Kristi
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:39 PM Title: It's Just Business...
yessh... who cares whether or not these two have media attention? it all depends on how good their racing skills are. i hate it when publicity becomes this big business and there is so much planning involved. yeah, that doens't make sense, but it really makes you wonder how much of the stuff out there in the media is true... i like the idea of them switching teams, but i am afraid that it will be hard for them to be togther. even if they're not, at least they can still come home together, right? but if they're not, they will be on opposite teams...
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:12 PM Title: It's Just Business...
How many lives have been screwed over in the name of "it's just business" ? Plenty I'm sure, so it isn't like you are writing a fantasy!
Good for both of them for standing up to Aro and team Volturi. If they do well in the upcoming races any team will want them. If not, have Edward call me!
Give your RL a kick in the shorts and don't stress. As I've said before we will all be here waiting patiently for the next update. You did say lemony, right????
Thanks!
Author's Response:
lol...six whole pages of straight up lemon! ;D
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:37 PM Title: It's Just Business...
i feel so bad for them! can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:39 PM Title: It's Just Business...
that sux that they would treat them like that, but sadly that's how it is when you're in the spotlight....BROVO to both of them for sticking to their morals and hearts.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:13 PM Title: It's Just Business...
well Aro like always is a dick. lol. I love it. he's suppose to be the villain so that's okay. :D I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:08 PM Title: It's Just Business...
I'm disappointed in Volturi Racing, too. Somehow there's a solution to all that mess.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:05 PM Title: It's Just Business...
omg! i love it!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:59 PM Title: It's Just Business...
Damn Volturi!! Maybe Bella and Edward will start their own team ...
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:59 PM Title: It's Just Business...
I hate the Volutri Bros for what they are trying to start...but the sad truth is that crap happens on a daily basis for high profile relationships.
Rhonda
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:55 PM Title: Additional Motivation
great chapter, thanks tracy
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:03 PM Title: Additional Motivation
whoa.....lol i love it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:55 PM Title: Helpful Wagers
lol i love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 5:47 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
i love it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:48 AM Title: Additional Motivation
Sweet chapter. I can't wait to see if Edward can do his task.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 3:55 AM Title: Additional Motivation
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Additional Motivation
The conversation between the girls had me giggling...she likes hardwood...funny.
This outfit of Bella's must be something for Edward to even consider having his entire house unpacked in three days. I can't wait to see if he gets it done.