Date: 19 Jul 2010 6:22 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Loved it!!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 11:21 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Great chapter, I will patiently wait for you to update because I love your stories!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 7:23 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Yep...that would help to motivate and get the house unpacked quicly.
It will be a LONG three days, huh?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:22 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
i love it as always ur stories alway amazing
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:53 PM Title: Additional Motivation
poor guy. i hope they are going to make it hell on both of them. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye p.s. don't worry about this, deal with RL things and then get back to us when you can. :D
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:58 PM Title: Additional Motivation
BAHAHAHAHA! Bella the ball buster! I love it!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:47 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Edward is just so adorable! I enjoyed his reaction when the girls where trying to talk her into "switching teams" and his reaction to their little wager. He is just so cute! I wanna jump him!
Kat
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:53 AM Title: Additional Motivation
that outfit better be fuck asume poor Edward is going to be working really heard for it lol
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:12 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
that was great Tanya wants to be friend
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:21 AM Title: Interruptus
they were close. i love it!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:20 AM Title: Additional Motivation
What motivation, I bet he gets it done. LOL Good chapter. Loved the girls asking her to "try" their team.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:11 PM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
i love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:44 PM Title: Unexpected Visitor
oh boy!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:40 PM Title: Additional Motivation
The scene when Shannon and Tanya asked Bella is quite funny. :-) Love it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:10 PM Title: Schooling Cullen
i love it!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 9:05 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Bella's being evil...but I like it! LOL!
Rhonda
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:51 PM Title: Additional Motivation
hahahahahahaha I love the way they are together!!! And I laughed at Tanya trying to get Bella to play a little!! hahahahahahahaha
Date: 17 Jul 2010 8:13 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Oh I'm betting bella will be torturing him until then. Can't wait to see how they both handle the no sex for three days..
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:29 PM Title: Additional Motivation
They are both going to be dying by the time Thursday rolls around. So does that also mean no sleepovers? Hope your RL settles down for you. take care!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: Additional Motivation
WOO HOO.... BRING ON THE LEATHER LOVIN'!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Pushing Boundaries
awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! they are sooo cute!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:33 PM Title: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood
the house sounds wow! i wanna live like that! i love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:15 PM Title: You’re Asking Me This NOW?
awwwwwww i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 6:01 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Damn, she drives a hard bargain... Lol, I don't think he can go being denied twice for that oufit. He'll unpack in time
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:53 PM Title: Sweet Awakenings
more feelings are coming! i love it!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:38 PM Title: Additional Motivation
awww...their relationship is soo cute! i love how they are when they're together. i hope that with their houses literally connected, they won't ever sleep alone ever again..
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:31 PM Title: Additional Motivation
"...a scream that would give Sarah Brightman a run for her money" Yes! And we know that Sarah can hit the high ones!
Bella would make a great motivational coach when she stops driving. She certainly knows how to get Edward motivated. But I can't see them going for 3 whole days without sex. Bet he has the house done well before the time limit! Has he thought about calling a service to unpack?
And Bella preferring hardwood to carpet...PRICELESS!
Have a great time at the reunion. We'll be here waiting patiently for your return. You have us spoiled with your regular updates so we can't complain when you have to slow it down some.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:13 PM Title: Additional Motivation
haha they're so cute :)
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Additional Motivation
i love a little teasing.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:46 PM Title: Additional Motivation
they are so cute!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:45 PM Title: The Edward Shaped Hole
awww i wonder when they will be together so cute! i love it!!!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:42 PM Title: Additional Motivation
Bella sure knows how to motivate Edward. I wonder if he'll get the whole thing done a day early?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:08 PM Title: Attacking Walls
omg.........i hope shes ok!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 7:46 AM Title: New Connections
i love it!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:12 AM Title: Breakaway
I love it!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:50 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
aw so cute!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
For once I like Tanya. She is spunky & funny!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 10:32 PM Title: Helpful Wagers
I love Bella's form of motivation. Edward is such a typical guy. He is motivated by either his hunger or his 'hunger'.
Loved it.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 7:35 PM Title: Helpful Wagers
oh i do love a little competition with an edge...dombella...good one! and edward all possessive over tanya'a girlfriend, omg how funny. I kinda like this tanya, she's really funny with her comebacks. and how i love how you've redeemed bella with her confindence. She's getting fun. I read it here just in case you left something (wink, wink) out, but to my dismay, it was just way to clean haha. i think all us readers are in for a treat now that they are both home and edward def wants her in his house. maybe a little pursuastion is in order...with details. i know, we're all horny fanfic readers, but we love the story to...we just want both haha. see you next time...
Date: 12 Jul 2010 5:07 PM Title: Helpful Wagers
I do have to say that Tanya's intention was quite nice. That's definately a way to say sorry. Damn cockblocking Jeff Gordon. LOL! Bella just needs to move in with Edward cause she's already pretty much living with him while on the road anyway. Ah well, until next chapter!
Rhonda
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:27 PM Title: Helpful Wagers
great chapter,
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:07 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
Two banged up cars and a week off, hmmmm. We know what Rose will be doing for two weeks but Edward and Izzy? Hopefully we will find out in the next chapter and I can't wait for the lemons!
Oh yeah, love the racing stuff too !
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:26 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
love it and can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:25 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
LOL, how cute and funny that Tanya wanted to be nice. Looking forward to reading more chapters.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:02 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
lol Bella is getting checked out by a girl. that's too funny. I loved that chapter and as for RL, don't ever quit. Not just writing, everything. That's my personal advice to you. When the going gets tough, take a breather and try to figure it out no matter how long it takes. don't give up. :) thanks for the great job. thanks again bye
Date: 12 Jul 2010 3:59 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
hahaha i love Tanya! great chapter :):)
Kristi
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:58 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
I actually like this Tanya, she seems like a riot!
Sorry to hear about your RL troubles. I'm really glad you were able to keep writing, but if you had to take a break I don't think anyone would blame you. You've been keeping us entertained for so long, you deserve a little time to yourself!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
Tanya got in again? That was funny!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
LOL Well if that is not weird the crazy ex coming into your home and unpacking your shit! I hope she doesn't have a copy of the key to Edward's new home. Great chapter. So happy your RL is ok and allowing you to continue to write. Thanks for the update.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:26 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
Haha bellas got it going on with tanya and Shannon poor Edward is jealous of allthe attention shes getting.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:12 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
I love it. I am ready for some new home lovin'!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:04 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
ahh, I think Bella needs to change her locks LOL, Tanya and her girlfriend seem to be a little too appreciative of Bella's looks for Edward's comfort. Great chapter, cant wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:04 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
well that's one way for them to motivate each other...bribes...lol. And that was nice of Tayna to do that, intrusive but the sentiment was nice
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:02 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
Sorry to hear about your RL drama. I hope it gets better soon.
But also, just in case I haven't told you before, your updates are so awesome! I literally grin when one hits my inbox :) You're such a fantastic writer. Your stories actually have plot and purpose. They're such a joy to read. So thank you so much for writing, and for updating even when you don't really feel like it, or don't have the time or energy. I know it might sound weird or strange, because it is just fanfiction, but your stories mean a lot to me and I'm sure other people. So thanks again :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 2:00 AM Title: Helpful Wagers
I wanted Edward to see the boots-n-bustier outfit. Damn that Jeff Gordon.
Author's Response:
Chapter seventeen...that's all I"m saying ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:52 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
great chapter and nice to ee bella wiinning even if edward i helping, thanks tracy
Date: 09 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
haha cool chapter keep going!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:12 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Moving in together at this point is much to early. Everything is so fresh and new that of course it just feels perfect together. Until you realize that you are going to get angry for leaving wet towels on the floor, or for when they get mad at you for talking during the game. lol I love the trash talk between them on the track. It is quite entertaining. Bella is right though about Edward needing to take care of himself more on the track. Bella always has been and always will be a racer. She knows what she is doing. Yes, I am sure that there will be more accidents in the future from both of them. But, that is a fact they are going to have to deal with. Edward needs to keep his head focused. The girl definitely deserves an reward!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:10 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
That is truly a good man you have when he is willing to stand up for you. You have a good man when he wants to create new memories for you, with you. That may take some doing on Edward's part to get her to agree to move in with him. But, I did kinda see that coming. He can't stay away from his drug. :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:08 AM Title: Interruptus
Girls these days so rarely have a positive role model anymore. Izzy should be proud that she can be one. Edward was right when he told her that Dave had pretty much figured it out. People are not blind when they are around the happy couple. And, they are going to be under the public scrutiny much more now. I liked how the nosy reporter and one of Edward's first were both named Jane. haha
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:05 AM Title: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado
Communication is the key to any good relationship. Before you jump to conclusions you should get the facts. You know the saying sometimes truth is stranger than fiction. Well, how people do you know have their ex-girlfriends pop in because she had a tiff with their girlfriend? That's what I thought. lol Bella knows exactly how to be an vixen apparently. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:03 AM Title: Unexpected Visitor
That is an spectacular way to wake up your boyfriend in the morning. It is a very good thing that Bella is more comfortable when she is able to set the pace of their physical relationship. I do have my suspicions that HQ want him to come alone. That doesn't bode well. They better not be trying to start publicity crap. I feel for Bella shaving after taking a salt bath. lol. I really don't think that it is what it looks like. Considering Tanya is a lesbian right? haha I thought it was funny that Bella didn't realize that she was being checked out by her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:01 AM Title: Schooling Cullen
Edward's intentions were understandable in hindsight, but maybe he should have watched the words about the road racing. lol I think I know which car is Flo. I already hated the first curve. I hated working for the Horseshoe Casino. lol. Not only did Edward have his ass handed to him on a silver platter there was a nice bottle of wine with it. It sad that at this point there time together at night would be coming to an end. But, it is good that they shouldn't rush things.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:59 AM Title: Pushing Boundaries
First off, I know that I have been very neglectful in my reviews. For that I am sorry. RL really blows. Secondly, here is the first of my many pitiful reviews: I have to give props to Bella for wearing the fancy gown. Atleast she can chalk it up to being for charity lol. That would be pretty much the only way that would happen with me. Reporters are so nosy; she had no right to show up at her residence. Aro is funny with his match-making talk. haha The date was beautiful and memorable.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:13 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Izzy and Edward sittin' in a tree....they are just so cute together!
Now I might consider taking up racing if he is the reward for a win!!!!!
A little racing and a lot of loving...perfect chapter! Thanks!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 3:19 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Great chapter!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:24 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Horny horny HORNY couple. I LOVE IT! lol I like that he went all caveman on her and lost his position to put Daniels in his place. that was sweet. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:18 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
yeah Bella won the race! Boo that Edward might loose his position on the team. I'm sure that Aro is loving all the free publicity that their romance is giving the team though. Ah well, until next chapter!
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 1:09 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
These two are too cute together. But I have to agree with Bella because if Edward doesn't get back into the game, he won't be there to protect Bella at all.
I'm glad Edward took Bella's rejection about moving in together well. Granted I think she is crazy and personally would have had my shoes in his closet and Cherry Garcia in the freezer before he could say house key. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:53 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
I have to agree with Bella, edward cant be like that. He needs to worry about his own race position. I did love their time at the bed and breakfast.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:29 PM Title: Breakaway
I really like the concept of this story!!! LOVE that Izzy stood up for herself!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 2:20 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
can't wait for more and i hope she agrees to move in with him soon!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 12:41 PM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Aw - you really can't resist the fluffy citrus can you Jen?! A+.
Author's Response:
LOL...no I really can't. I am a girl though! I think it is in my DNA :)
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:32 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
great chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2010 8:19 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
aww i love how comfortable Bella is with Edward now. they are so friggin cute :) great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Kristi
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:00 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
WOW what fun to have a whole fancy place to yourself how cool. How long is it going to take before Bella decides it is silly to pay for a home she is never in??? I think Edward has relesed a sexual little beast LOL.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:03 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
I'm really glad Bella is opened up more about her relationship with Edward. Hopefully caveward doesn't mess it up.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:54 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
Great chapter! I loved their little mini-vacation. I know they still worked, but their time at the B&B was such a nice retreat. It gave them a chance to bond away from outside influences.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:37 AM Title: The Sacrificial Lion
at least he wasn't hurt by sacrificing himself. but i think the 1 time he doesn't protect her and something happens, all hell will break loose
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 12:23 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
Well it is about damned time!!! That was so hot and so romantic all at the same time. I almost cried when the condom chat killed the mood earlier. I was very happy to see when things picked up where they had left off. ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:24 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
I loved how you had Edward stand up for Bella to Em. That is exactly what she deserved after the ASS Jake & pack were to her. So sad that there are guys like that who talk about the girls/women they are supposed to really love and care for.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:27 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
ok...so thanks. that was really nice. i usually read over at fanfic, but when i read your authors note, i thought i might better jump on over here. ok...let the hijinks begin! love you and your stories and read you soon!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:47 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
That was a great chapter. How sweet is Edward to re-create her prom night for her to make it better. Thanks for a great chapter.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:56 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
WOW.... Love the lemony goodness you have given us.... How long do you see this story being? I love the story, i dont think I want to see it come to an end... Keep up the Great work your doing, Looking forward to whats going to go on next
Author's Response:
I'm not entirely sure. When I started, I figured it would be done by now...but as usual, it has taken over a life of it's own. It's probably bad that I can't be more concise....lol. I have quite a bit planned, so I guess we will see how it pans out. :)
Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:34 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
aww i'm so glad Bella trust Edward so much. and i hope she does move in with him ;)
Kristi
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 3:15 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
What a perfect chapter!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:29 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
Wow, that was so sweet. Great chapter.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:05 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
Sweet and sizzly! I hope she moves in with him!
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:20 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
The story is amazing. Keep writing please! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
Edward is so damn sweet!! Great Chapter!! FINALLY they got to have some lemony goodness!! AND it was HAWT!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:47 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
Well done. I really want Jacob to get his ass kicked after this chapter.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:45 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
thanks - absoultely loving this story
Glad to see them finally happy - very sweet chapter = so perfect
thanks
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:14 AM Title: A Cosmic Event
wow great chapter ! im happy they are moving on with their relationship... cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:40 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
beautiful, loving and tender...just perfect to keep her feeling safe ans secure
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:22 PM Title: A Cosmic Event
Edward is just so thoughtful and loving. Is there anything he wouldn't do for her? I don't think so. And such a marked improvement over Jake.
Beautiful loving scenes all the way through. Thank you!