Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh...busted hehe....
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yea..they are dating.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awww...they are so innocent..
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Kiss? What's just happened..
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
So they made up..eoh Edward you're an angel.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
I hate this Bella.. she's just a fool ..and stupid.poor Edward...
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
If I were Edward i wouldn't want bitch Bella to be my friend ever..pretentious much.run Edward run.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
So brief encounter...nice
Date: 22 Oct 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella ...what have you done?..
Date: 08 Oct 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
amazing story ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 28
That was a great story and I sure loved the hopeful, forward looking way you ended it!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 27
And thus the name of this story! I wasn't real shocked that Jessica made the effort to set things things right with Bella. I was sure it wouldn't be bitchy Lauren! Too bad she and Mike made a baby they might not be ready for! Looking forward to Bella and Edward and their future together!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
After all the drama, trust good old Charlie to come up with a solution for his baby girl! Actually, this is a pretty good idea!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
He had to have known, deep down, that this was going to be a big hurdle, and didn't know how to tell her! I have no idea how this will be reconciled!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
How realistic and probably true to life! Oh well, at least they are happy to have done the deed!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
It's been a long, long time, so I have forgotten what a big deal this might be to some tens! Ouch, when thinking about Charlotte kicking him in his junk!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was a very nice birthday I think! The tickets were great, but the anchor was a darling gift from Edward! It was sweet of Charlie to bring him along to pick up Bella at the airport, too!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
Things happen the way they are supposed to, I firmly believe that! It was a kind of wrenching choice to make, choosing between her momand sister , and Edward and Charlie! I think she made the right decision, though!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
The apology from Rose sounds like she really wants to be friends with Bella again. Of course, if she is the other two won't be nice about it. Interesting to watch how that all plays out! Hope nothing's wrong with Bella's mom amd the baby.
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
I just knew when she told him Charlie wouldn't be home for hours, that they were bound to get caught! I can't wait to see what Charlie is going to say!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
This will go either really well or awful! I hope they catch some fish and the day isn't ruined!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think it's really sweet that they are taking things slowly! What's the rush, right?
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella, she sure was having an insecure moment there! I'm glad they talked it out and things are back to normal for them!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
This anti-prom thing turned out really well! Especially the part where they both said "the words"!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
That answers the question of whether Rose was as bitchy as the other two. Guess Bella was right about her being nicer by far that Lauren or Jess! Too bad about her throwing up in Edward's car, I'll bet he hated that!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
It must be old age, because I don't get what the big deal is over Bella and Edward dating, or being together at school! What is it they are doing that justifies all the bullshit going on with these little twits?
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
So far, so good! Like they said, at least Charlie wasn't cleaning his gun! That might have scared them both!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
See kids? All you had to do was talk to each other, rather than imagining all kinds of awful stuff! It's nice, too, that Angela and Victoria still want to be friends and came over for a girls night!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Good for Charlie, why shouldn't he find somwonw to make him happy? It was sweet of him to bring home the chick-flicks, too! I figured Bella could get along n icely without the bitch twins, Lauren and Jessica. Now, on to who is at the door?
Date: 30 Oct 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well Bella girl, it's about time! I hope she stays away from those nasty little girls, who seem to think they have a right to tell her who to hang out with! Can't wait to see how Edward reacts to this kiss!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Frankly, that barbeque sounded like a lot more fun than the parties Bella's other friends go for! The house may not be in great shape, but the people living in it are nice! I thought Edward was about to hug Bella, and chickened out at the last second!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Okay, tentative, but a start, neverthe less. I'm more convinced than ever Bella shouldn't move back in with her mom.
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just as I suspected, Edward isn't going to forgive and forget easily! I wish Bella would grow a spine and tell Lauren and Jessica to get lost and just go her own way! I'm betting that the subject of dinner conversation in the Cullen family, was Bella Swan!
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Epiphany moment, I see! Good for her to see what was happening! I'm really glad Bella made the effort to try to make up for her hurtful words. Wonder if Edward will accept it for what it is, or blow her off?
Date: 29 Oct 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm very disappointed with Miss Bella! How could she have said that to Rose, just to placate her bitchy friend? Sure hope she is going to grovel a little and apologize to poor Edward! It's about time she grows up a bit and realizes what is important in this world!
Date: 29 Oct 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella isn't quite sure how to feel about her mom's big news, but I don't think she should move to Florida. She might end up being the nany to her new sibling and that wouldn't be fair. She does seem to be fairly happy over spending some time with Edward, though!
Date: 29 Oct 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
That is a most embarassing way to meet someone, alright! At least he was gentleman enough to not rag on her about it! He must have really appreciated the fact she didn't laugh at his humiliation in the cafeteria.
Date: 29 Oct 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
That just made me want to smack those girls in the back of their empty little heads! Maybe that jerk, Mike the tripper also!
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
Lovely story!! I loved this. Thank you!!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
I found this story thru TwiFicRecs. I have loved every chapter. It makes me sad that it may not be completed. Because, even though it says COMPLETE, it's not. These characters are NOT done yet. I understand that RL happens but perhaps another really good author could be given permission to finish their story. You are, without a doubt, very talented. The story is great, but, the story is not done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The story is done on FFn, I just recently updated it to match what FFn has posted. I forget to update on TWCS because I mainly use this just as backup. Glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter, I was so excited this update.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the update.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yay!!! You recently added and it was great!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great job!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great job!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just started reading your story, it's great. :)
Looking forward to more.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the update.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
i am loving edward just too much, he's so freaking adorable. why weren't there any guys like that when I was in high school? so unfair
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
aww edward is way to sweet to have those things said about him! bella is such a... TURD
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
haha i love meatloaf, green beans, and potatoes too! me and charlie have SO much in common!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was TOO CUTE!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens on the date!!! as for a song from high school is "Time Of Your Life" by Green Day.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
I thnk this story is really sweet. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
i also thought charlie would be worse
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great job!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
i loved it cant wait till the next one
Date: 03 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just found your story and I enjoyed it. I'll put it on alert.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank god you aren't ending it there. I could see it too but there would be so much room for a sequel. Good job and update soon please!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Where are you I want more
Author's Response:
Hey Emo585! Thanks for reviewing! I kinda forgot about posting here, so you'll get two updates at once!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
What!?!??? Omg amazing and damn you Rosalie
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
i really enjoying your story please update soon
i want to not what edward will do
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, poor Bella. I hope everything works out.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, hope you enjoy the latest two chapters!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Rose, Jessica, and Lauran are bitches, i hate when people do that, tell other people's secrets. if Bella wanted to tell people she would have.
I love your story and i can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
I think mostly everyone can relate to so called 'friends' who tell each others secrets. It sucks.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
I feel really sad after reading this chapter. Is this how people really are?
Rosalie- once a bitch, always a bitch- A leopard never changes its spots.
I really want to see bella be ONE person. Right now shes just so many different personalities, i just wonder who she really is.
and Edward and his friends can definitely do better than that.
good chap- cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hey AzraCullen, thanks for reviewing! I think some people in high school and in adulthood can be like this! Hope you enjoy chapter 10 and 11!
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
This is the best geek/nerd and popular/beautiful/handsome type if story I've read keep it up
Date: 10 May 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GEEKWARD = LOVEEEEEEE
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I love GeekWard too!
Here's a teaser of chapter 9!
I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"
Date: 08 May 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
This story is great! I like how you're writing about Edward in a non-typical way. I would love to pre-read the chapters before you post! Just let me know!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'm still considering a prereader, thanks for the offer! Here's a teaser of chapter 9.
I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"
Date: 08 May 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Here's a teaser of chapter 9
I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"
Date: 08 May 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
uhm, Eddie's point of view?? PWEEZE!
Author's Response:
Hey! If you're interested in an Edward POV, I have an exciting announcement along with chapter 9! Here's a teaser of chapter 9
I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"
Date: 08 May 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
love this story. i like how you're slowly building the relationship between them can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hey! I'm glad you like the slow build up and don't think its dragging! Here's a chapter 9 teaser.
I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"
Date: 07 May 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the review! Here's a teaser of chapter 9
I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"
Date: 02 May 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
That's much better Bella. Glad her mom had a talk with her. Now if she can just not be a bitch to him in front of her 'friends' she may turn out to be a decent human being.
Date: 02 May 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella needs to be more like Rose. Maybe she should go to Jacksonville and try to grow a heart...
Date: 01 May 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a bitch! Bella if you are going to be someone's friend then have the balls to do it properly or just leave them alone!
Date: 01 May 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nawww. I love geekward :)) Keep it up!
Date: 01 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hey I would buy you. I mean I'm not overflowing with money but I would spend some dough on a HM story or outtake. I loved how she is rolling with outsiders at lunch it will bite her in the ass when she has to face her two b*tch crew but they suck so no problem there. I love love that Edward was honest with her and let her know how hurt he was. Why was Edward calling her anyway that would be a good Edward outtake for FGB. I'm just saying okay HM, until next time. Now update this story please. love you!
Date: 01 May 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Damn Bella is trying she needs to put on her big girl panties and ditch Jess & Lauren they suck. Until next time.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yeah Bella needs to atone with Edward. That gossip was brutal Bella's friends not Rose of course need to get f*cking lives. I loved the how can I apologize with 140 characters? Good question. Does Esme know that Bella f*cked up or does she have super mom senses or is still grieving over her papa. Until next time.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward he heard their whole exchange. Bella is a b*tch right now to me for hurting Edward. Rose was on to Bella all along she has no man present so she can see sh*t. I like the intro of Angela & Ben plus Carlisle & Esme. I feel so bad for Edward he seems so her about his granddad dying I mean who wouldn't it was so sad. He loved him you can tell by how he was acting and what he said. Okay I can't wait to read the next chapter. I loved this super long chapter by the way. Until next time.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh sh*t Renee is preggos! Aw sh*t! I being distracted by your tweets but seriously this f*cking good I love it. Em pussy whipped that is so true. I guess Rose is dick whipped or sprung by Em, so its a balance. Yeah fun times or not in the library to come? Man I'm getting hungry thinking about the meatloaf, mashed potatoes and green beans. Its my favorite too especially in HS. I might make some next week. Until next time.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMFJ! This was too funny: As far as parenting went, their belief was one of 'let them learn from their own mistakes.' Meaning they were lazy as fuck when it came to being parents.
Man I think you have channeled my inner HS persona with this: More time passed and I had to pee horribly. In my drunken mind I felt horribly guilty for leaving my spot incase Rose decided to come back. But hey, the bitch left me for like an hour.
Tanya is a super skank! Jess & Lauren suck so bad. They make me sick tramps.
Aw I knew she threw up on Edward but I was hoping no because that sh*t is nasty but hey its fiction why do I smell throw up? I like how you reversed the intro and how Rose was talking sh*t about not throwing up in her house.
Okay I'm on to the next chapter.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I hate Bella's friends I had friends like that my freshmen year of HS and I ditched them and went from being very popular to social pariah in one day. I bounced back and had real friends quality over quantity. Anyway, I love that Edward is not popular and being hit on. This is very interesting and refreshing. I want to read more so I'm continuing. Until next time.