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Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

That was...ummm...

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh...busted hehe....

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 17

Hahaha...lemon..

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yea..they are dating. 

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

Awww...they are so innocent..

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

Kiss? What's  just happened..

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

So they made up..eoh Edward  you're an angel.

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

I hate this Bella.. she's just a fool ..and stupid.poor Edward...

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

If I were Edward i wouldn't want bitch Bella to be my friend ever..pretentious much.run Edward run.

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh my....

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

So brief encounter...nice

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella ...what have you done?..

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

amazing story ;) thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 28

That was a great story and I sure loved the hopeful, forward looking way you ended it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 27

And thus the name of this story! I wasn't real shocked that Jessica made the effort to set things things right with Bella. I was sure it wouldn't be bitchy Lauren! Too bad she and Mike made a baby they might not be ready for! Looking forward to Bella and Edward and their future together!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

After all the drama, trust good old Charlie to come up with a solution for his baby girl! Actually, this is a pretty good idea!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

He had to have known, deep down, that this was going to be a big hurdle, and didn't know how to tell her! I have no idea how this will be reconciled!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

How realistic and probably true to life! Oh well, at least they are happy to have done the deed!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

It's been a long, long time, so I have forgotten what a big deal this might be to some tens! Ouch, when thinking about Charlotte kicking him in his junk!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

That was a very nice birthday I think! The tickets were great, but the anchor was a darling gift from Edward! It was sweet of Charlie to bring him along to pick up Bella at the airport, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 21

Things happen the way they are supposed to, I firmly believe that! It was a kind of wrenching choice to make, choosing between her momand sister , and Edward and Charlie! I think she made the right decision, though!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 20

The apology from Rose sounds like she really wants to be friends with Bella again. Of course, if she is the other two won't be nice about it. Interesting to watch how that all plays out! Hope nothing's wrong with Bella's mom amd the baby.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

I just knew when she told him Charlie wouldn't be home for hours, that they were bound to get caught! I can't wait to see what Charlie is going to say!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

This will go either really well or awful! I hope they catch some fish and the day isn't ruined!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it's really sweet that they are taking things slowly! What's the rush, right?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella, she sure was having an insecure moment there! I'm glad they talked it out and things are back to normal for them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

This anti-prom thing turned out really well! Especially the part where they both said "the words"!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 14

That answers the question of whether Rose was as bitchy as the other two. Guess Bella was right about her being nicer by far that Lauren or Jess! Too bad about her throwing up in Edward's car, I'll bet he hated that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

It must be old age, because I don't get what the big deal is over Bella and Edward dating, or being together at school! What is it they are doing that justifies all the bullshit going on with these little twits?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

So far, so good! Like they said, at least Charlie wasn't cleaning his gun! That might have scared them both!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

See kids? All you had to do was talk to each other, rather than imagining all kinds of awful stuff! It's nice, too, that Angela and Victoria still want to be friends and came over for a girls night!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good for Charlie, why shouldn't he find somwonw to make him happy? It was sweet of him to bring home the chick-flicks, too! I figured Bella could get along n icely without the bitch twins, Lauren and Jessica. Now, on to who is at the door?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well Bella girl, it's about time! I hope she stays away from those nasty little girls, who seem to think they have a right to tell her who to hang out with! Can't wait to see how Edward reacts to this kiss!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

Frankly, that barbeque sounded like a lot more fun than the parties Bella's other friends go for! The house may not be in great shape, but the people living in it are nice! I thought Edward was about to hug Bella, and chickened out at the last second!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Okay, tentative, but a start, neverthe less. I'm more convinced than ever Bella shouldn't move back in with her mom.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

Just as I suspected, Edward isn't going to forgive and forget easily! I wish Bella would grow a spine and tell Lauren and Jessica to get lost and just go her own way! I'm betting that the subject of dinner conversation in the Cullen family, was Bella Swan!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Epiphany moment, I see! Good for her to see what was happening! I'm really glad Bella made the effort to try to make up for her hurtful words. Wonder if Edward will accept it for what it is, or blow her off?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm very disappointed with Miss Bella! How could she have said that to Rose, just to placate her bitchy friend? Sure hope she is going to grovel a little and apologize to poor Edward! It's about time she grows up a bit and realizes what is important in this world!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella isn't quite sure how to feel about her mom's big news, but I don't think she should move to Florida. She might end up being the nany to her new sibling and that wouldn't be fair. She does seem to be fairly happy over spending some time with Edward, though!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

That is a most embarassing way to meet someone, alright! At least he was gentleman enough to not rag on her about it! He must have really appreciated the fact she didn't laugh at his humiliation in the cafeteria.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

That just made me want to smack those girls in the back of their empty little heads! Maybe that jerk, Mike the tripper also!

Reviewer: JGM1721 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 28

Lovely story!!  I loved this.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2013 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!  

Reviewer: homebody Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

I found this story thru TwiFicRecs. I have loved every chapter. It makes me sad that it may not be completed. Because, even though it says COMPLETE, it's not. These characters are NOT done yet. I understand that RL happens but perhaps another really good author could be given permission to finish their story. You are, without a doubt, very talented. The story is great, but, the story is not done!



Author's Response:

Thanks! The story is done on FFn, I just recently updated it to match what FFn has posted. I forget to update on TWCS because I mainly use this just as backup. Glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

like the story

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter, I was so excited this update.

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yay!!! You recently added and it was great!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great job!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great job!

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

I just started reading your story, it's great. :)

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: StrongerThanYouSince1915 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

i am loving edward just too much, he's so freaking adorable. why weren't there any guys like that when I was in high school? so unfair

Reviewer: StrongerThanYouSince1915 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

aww edward is way to sweet to have those things said about him! bella is such a... TURD

Reviewer: StrongerThanYouSince1915 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

haha i love meatloaf, green beans, and potatoes too! me and charlie have SO much in common!

Reviewer: ACullen35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

That was TOO CUTE!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens on the date!!! as for a song from high school is "Time Of Your Life" by Green Day.

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

I thnk this story is really sweet.  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: pennsara123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

i also thought charlie would be worse

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Great job!

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

i loved it cant wait till the next one

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

I just found your story and I enjoyed it.  I'll put it on alert.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thank god you aren't ending it there.  I could see it too but there would be so much room for a sequel.  Good job and update soon please!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

Where are you I want more



Author's Response:

Hey Emo585! Thanks for reviewing! I kinda forgot about posting here, so you'll get two updates at once!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

What!?!??? Omg amazing and damn you Rosalie

Reviewer: pennsara123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

i really enjoying your story please update soon

i want to not what edward will do



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, poor Bella.  I hope everything works out.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, hope you enjoy the latest two chapters!

Reviewer: SatansDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 9

Rose, Jessica, and Lauran are bitches, i hate when people do that, tell other people's secrets. if Bella wanted to tell people she would have.

I love your story and i can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

I think mostly everyone can relate to so called 'friends' who tell each others secrets. It sucks.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AzraCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

I feel really sad after reading this chapter. Is this how people really are?

Rosalie- once a bitch, always a bitch- A leopard never changes its spots.

I really want to see bella be ONE person. Right now shes just so many different personalities, i just wonder who she really is.

and Edward and his friends can definitely do better than that.

good chap- cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey AzraCullen, thanks for reviewing! I think some people in high school and in adulthood can be like this! Hope you enjoy chapter 10 and 11!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

This is the best geek/nerd and popular/beautiful/handsome type if story I've read keep it up

Reviewer: Vampsarelovee Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GEEKWARD = LOVEEEEEEE

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I love GeekWard too!

Here's a teaser of chapter 9!

I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"

Reviewer: ACullen35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

This story is great! I like how you're writing about Edward in a non-typical way. I would love to pre-read the chapters before you post! Just let me know!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm still considering a prereader, thanks for the offer! Here's a teaser of chapter 9.

 

I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

I loved it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Here's a teaser of chapter 9

 

I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"

Reviewer: cblgam Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

uhm, Eddie's point of view?? PWEEZE!



Author's Response:

Hey! If you're interested in an Edward POV, I have an exciting announcement along with chapter 9! Here's a teaser of chapter 9

 

I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

love this story.  i like how you're slowly building the relationship between them can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Hey! I'm glad you like the slow build up and don't think its dragging! Here's a chapter 9 teaser.

I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)



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Hey, thanks for the review! Here's a teaser of chapter 9

 

I was sitting at the cafeteria during lunch. The table was oddly silent, Mike and Tyler had detention for disrupting their math class, or something.
The tray in front of me held nothing remotely appetizing to eat. A dry looking turkey sandwich, a pudding cup and a carton of apple juice. It was oddly reminiscent of any meal I had ever eaten in a hospital.
I was mulling over this thought and the fact that I had been in a hospital enough times to warrant such a comparison, when Rosalie broke the silence.
"So, guys, did you know Bella has been hanging out with Cullen and his friends for the past few weeks?"

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

That's much better Bella. Glad her mom had a talk with her. Now if she can just not be a bitch to him in front of her 'friends' she may turn out to be a decent human being.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella needs to be more like Rose. Maybe she should go to Jacksonville and try to grow a heart...

Reviewer: Natsar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

What a bitch! Bella if you are going to be someone's friend then have the balls to do it properly or just leave them alone!

Reviewer: cblgam Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Nawww. I love geekward :)) Keep it up!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hey I would buy you. I mean I'm not overflowing with money but I would spend some dough on a HM story or outtake. I loved how she is rolling with outsiders at lunch it will bite her in the ass when she has to face her two b*tch crew but they suck so no problem there. I love love that Edward was honest with her and let her know how hurt he was. Why was Edward calling her anyway that would be a good Edward outtake for FGB. I'm just saying okay HM, until next time. Now update this story please. love you!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

Damn Bella is trying she needs to put on her big girl panties and ditch Jess & Lauren they suck. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

Yeah Bella needs to atone with Edward. That gossip was brutal Bella's friends not Rose of course need to get f*cking lives. I loved the how can I apologize with 140 characters? Good question. Does Esme know that Bella f*cked up or does she have super mom senses or is still grieving over her papa. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Edward he heard their whole exchange. Bella is a b*tch right now to me for hurting Edward. Rose was on to Bella all along she has no man present so she can see sh*t. I like the intro of Angela & Ben plus Carlisle & Esme. I feel so bad for Edward he seems so her about his granddad dying I mean who wouldn't it was so sad. He loved him you can tell by how he was acting and what he said. Okay I can't wait to read the next chapter. I loved this super long chapter by the way. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh sh*t Renee is preggos! Aw sh*t! I being distracted by your tweets but seriously this f*cking good I love it. Em pussy whipped that is so true. I guess Rose is dick whipped or sprung by Em, so its a balance. Yeah fun times or not in the library to come? Man I'm getting hungry thinking about the meatloaf, mashed potatoes and green beans. Its my favorite too especially in HS. I might make some next week. Until next time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

OMFJ! This was too funny: As far as parenting went, their belief was one of 'let them learn from their own mistakes.' Meaning they were lazy as fuck when it came to being parents.

Man I think you have channeled my inner HS persona with this: More time passed and I had to pee horribly. In my drunken mind I felt horribly guilty for leaving my spot incase Rose decided to come back. But hey, the bitch left me for like an hour. 

Tanya is a super skank! Jess & Lauren suck so bad. They make me sick tramps. 

Aw I knew she threw up on Edward but I was hoping no because that sh*t is nasty but hey its fiction why do I smell throw up? I like how you reversed the intro and how Rose was talking sh*t about not throwing up in her house.

Okay I'm on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it! I hate Bella's friends I had friends like that my freshmen year of HS and I ditched them and went from being very popular to social pariah in one day. I bounced back and had real friends quality over quantity. Anyway, I love that Edward is not popular and being hit on. This is very interesting and refreshing. I want to read more so I'm continuing. Until next time.

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Date: 01 May 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 6


Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

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Date: 01 May 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

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