Thanks for the update. I hope we get more.....soon :)

thanks as always awsom,e chapter

I almost forgot the story, so glad to see the update pop up on my favorites.  Please keep going.  this one is a little hard for me to read because I feel like Siob.  I couldn't possibly live with a man who had other women that he 'loved".

ty for updating i personally agree with Siobhan on how she wants in a family.

love this chapter and really like siobhan... always look forward to an update

Wow that was an interesting lunch.  If that was the first time Bella got overwhelmbed it sure wont be the last time. 

I just found this 2 days ago and have been reading it every chance I get.  And I absolutely adore this!  I have never read any stories about polygmists(sp?)  and I am loving it.  I just love your Edward, he truly seems one of a kind.  So caring and that he really does love them to his very core.  Sad that I am caught up but excited to read more when you update!

Love, love, loved this so far!!!

Thanks for the update;D)

OK girly.  This is the last completed chapter.  I am now on the same page as everyone else... I hate waiting so please don't make me wait tooO long.  I am really enjoying your story.  It's funny, sexy and it makes you think.  They've got a weird family dynamic but its also based on ideas that all family should be founded on.  If that makes any sense...

So with that said; hopefully life will finally cut you a break and allow you to provide your faithful readers with prompt and exciting updates.

I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. I have so many of my own ideas of twists and turns that it's going to kill me to wait and see if I was on track on not...

Much love and God Bless!!!

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Hahaha... funny on the movie choices.

I'm glad to see the girls bonding.  It's still a weird concept but I'm learning to go with it.

Now... onto the next chapter.  Pretty soon I'll be out of them so I sure hope you are one of those thoughtful authors that update quickly.  You're story is rather enjoyable, you know!  and with over 640+ reviews... it seems well liked :)

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With every chapter I fall more and more in love with this story.  It's really beautiful and I am so hopeful that the walls won't come crashing down when Edward tells his wives (mainly Rose) that he and Bella are dating with the hopes of her joining the family...

THANK YOU for writing it!

~xoxoxoxo~

^.^ i'm so glad you updated i started to miss the chapters and the characters...

Love the direction of the story.  I'm sure Alice will be estatic and Rosalie will blow a gasket.  I love your story...

On a personal note; girlfriend... never say never in your household.  I am so sorry to hear of all your personal turmoil.  I know my review is coming well after it was originally written but I'm sending prayers your way, none the less...

God Bless!!!

~xoxoxoxo~

ugh! Aro is a dick! What horrible things Rosalie had to endure. It was painful to read :(

I'm so glad she had Edward to rescue her!

oh Geez... wow... ummm... that was kind of hot!  I'm not sure how I would feel if I were Bella... does Bella even know how she feels?  Gah!  Onto the next chapter to hopefully find out!

Very interesting.  I researched between chapters.  You seem to have a good understanding of what it is and the difference.  It's not my belief but I love the way you're writing this story.  Who wouldn't want Edward for their husband; he's the idea man.  Thoughtful, kind, caring, sensitive, attentive and gorgeous... geez... I'm jealous.  LOL

Now, onto the next chapter!!!

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You did a very good job writing this chapter. As always, I have enjoyed reading this chapter. Can't wait to read more. I love how you had Edward handle Alice's little outburst. I hope Edward and Bella get som more one on one time. Lemons!!!! lol

Awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more

glad to see you back. cant wait for another chap

Had a fantastic holiday - just got home after a month away!!!

Glad to be home safe & sound... I live in Queensland, Australia. And it is extremely wet here & floods everywhere... fortunately not in my town! We are the lucky ones...

Great chapter by the way... I loved it :)

Can't wait for more,

T2M x

Loved it. Great chapter and can't wait to see what Bella and Sioban get up to or what Edward's dad thinks.

amazing as usual! yay! lol you finally updated! :)

i loved it and i squeeeeddddd when i saw you update

I loved it.  Such a sweet story... I have actualy been thinking about this story a lot.  (I know. I am a bit cookoo.)  but I can't help but think that Rose is going to leave the family.  She just doesn't seem to like to share as much as the others, and she does put herself on TOP alot.  Just wondering.. Loved the chapter.

I hope you had a great holiday as well.

Cant wait for more great FIC.

awesome story love it can't wait for next update

I love your story. Nobody writes stories about Christian Polygamy. I love that fact that you do and make it interesting and realistic.

I think any woman is an idiot to have feelings with a man already screwing two wives.

Great chapter. I love these updates. Bella seems to be taking things very well. I thought the domestic dicipline would have her running for the hills but I guess since he is HOT!!! Then it is ok. ;) Can't wait for more.

I am glad that Bella found something she could do with Alice's charity. It will make her feel like part of the family. I can't wait for more Edward and Bella time.

:)

thanks good chapter

i don't really know if i could do this kind of relationship....men in general rarely pay enough attention to one wife let along multiple wives...and then to have to share his spare time?  on top of that Edward is a doctor!  he hardly has any spare time to begin with as it is...i really find it hard and heartbreaking to have to share someone that i love with other women...its demeaning and hurtful!

Thank you for the update. As always, all I can think is wow. I can't wait to get some alone time with Edward and Bella so we can see how their relationship will develop or if it will. Thanks! :~)

what a wonderful glimpse into all of Alice's doings

eager to see Edward coming back into the story

well the talk would worry me a little. it seems bella didn't believe in the same punishment rules as the girls and i am right there with her. i wonder if she has to agree tot he rules or can she have her own. i love that what alice does for all those women and children. a great cause and they deserve a chance. love it

i hope the lunch goes well. it seems edward has the hots for bella like being a 14 yr old boy all over again. love it

Yes of course your forgiven, now go update again;D) JK

So, nice insight into Alice, you've inspired me to up my charity to the community!

Washing their mouth out with soap!?

Rosalie needs to see a specialist because she has severe mental problems...

These women don't want a husband, they want a Dom. They seem to enjoy being humiliated and demeaned.

I would love to see what would happen if Bella said she wasn't interested in that sort of lifestyle change. I wonder if Bella decided that DD wasn't for her, would Alice support her or would Alice side with Rose?!

awww   Shy eddie is so cute.    Great, REALLY LONG chapter.   LOL  

I think Rosalie purposely wants Bella to see the worst.  She wants to scare Bella off so that she doesn't want to be any part of the family, securing Rosalie's place.  She knows that the spankings and the unknown polygamist ways scare Bella, because she didn't grow up in that lifestyle.  I think Rosalie is going to go out of her way to make Bella see the worst and want to run as far away from them as possible.

I think Rosalie will always put herself first.  She really doesn't care about Edward or Alice's feelings.  Maybe I just feel that way because that is how I perceive her in the books, as being too narcissitic to put anyones feelings or happiness above her own.  It definately is an unhealthy relationship, with everyone sacraficing their happiness for Rosalie's, especially Edward.  In a way, his whole adult life has been a compromise to keep her happy and not living the way he wanted to live all along.  

Heavy stuff!  I just don't see Bella being able to live that kind of lifestyle of sharing her husband, although I think she desperately craves people in her life that wont leave.  She's been lonely her whole life with all the moving around her mother made her go through.  I think she really wants the permanent friendships and that appeal may be enough, but it wont be easy for her (hence any of them).

Then there's that chemistry she shares with Edward that the others don't.  IDK.

Love love love love this story. Love how you've explained their family arrangements its really an eye opener

Although  i don't think  I could share the good doctor, that was hot.  I'm anxious to see how Bella will feel and fit in.

Talk about getting it all at once!! This is a great fic can't wait for more!

Maybe this is a weird statement, but I kind a feel that in the effort to make everything politically correct that perhaps the concept of this lifestyle (DD) is forgotten. Don't get me wrong I really love this story and you are writing it wonderfully. 

I'm just confused on a few things. From Rose/ Alice's explanation it seems like Edward has very little to say in the relationship. He really only enforces rules they have picked out and only with consequences that they have chose. In some ways I think that sounds great but in others not so much. Does he have the right to implement a rule by himself? And do they give him a list of consequences he can choose from or do they select their own consequence from the list that they deem appropriate?

The reason I ask is because I know that as people we struggle seeing our own shortcomings and when we do it is not likely that we would choose to implement a rule to contend with our shortcomings.

And as I read this I thought of what rule Bella would be likely to break. I think for Bella she seems like a self-neglecter or someone who would put herself at risk. Which makes me think that she is not going to be able to formulate her own rules about what she should or shouldn't do, or at least not without help.

  All in all I want to thank you for such a wonderful story; it is truly a joy to read.  I cannot wait to read, how Bella begins to incorporate these things into her life. It will be interesting to see if Edward will slowly implement the changes or if something will just trigger it like Bella breaking a rule.

Thanks again

Did he say the same thing to his oyher wives?

Uhm...they are a Christian, doms and subs?  I usually like little S&M stories, but this was...I don't know.  Very controlling, but I like the story, it is very interesting.

great chapter,  wow lots of rules to get used to,  i wonder what ones bella will add to the list, thanks tracy

great chapter love how the girls are working things out very positive moves for everybody,  thanks tracy

Well I am glad that Bella isn't running for the hills because I think that Rose may like to have another person when she is against Alice on something.