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Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:19 PM Title: Girl Talk

keep it up!



Author's Response:

I'm trying....

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 11:22 AM Title: Girl Talk

Brilliant chapter - Rosalie is going to be a tough one to break in!!!

LOL

Alice is just as gorgeous & spritely as ever :)

T2M x



Author's Response:

Thank T2M!  I just have no idea what we are going to do with Rosalie....... Maybe we should get Edward on her.

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2010 6:05 AM Title: Girl Talk

love this chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:31 PM Title: Girl Talk

great chapter love the fact that they're all bonding



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 9:27 PM Title: Girl Talk

MAN I give BIGGGG props to the people that live in this life style because I would not be able to do it. First I would not be able to share my husband or his time, and I know he would go crazy if he had more wives. Just reading this story man Edward keep yourself health  because with so many wives you aren't bound to last long!!!!!hahahah



Author's Response:

OMG I know right. I guess I am just a selfish person because I would never be able to share. I'm sure that Edward will be able to keep up and if not there are always little blue pills that can help....lol

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 8:00 PM Title: Girl Talk

I was hoping that the domestic discipline would be the one thing that Bella would be strong enough to make a deal breaker.

It is ridiculous for a husband to treat his wife like a child. Spankings, loss of privileges, loss of favorite items, essays and lines?!

What absolute nonsense!!

So much for respecting women and equal partnerships...

If Bella agrees to this then she is just as weak and pathetic as Rose and Alice.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

wow! While I don't agree with DD, I would never be able to live like that. Some very well educated women live this way and are happy. I personally know a woman that has 2 master degrees and she has explained it that her work life is filled with things that require her to be 100% in control and for her it is refreshing to not have to live that way in her private life.

I don't think that makes her weak. To each their own. As long as their happy and not hurting anyone else then I don't see how anyone has the right to judge them.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to let me know what you think.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 6:52 PM Title: Girl Talk

I am so glad that Bella is not scared of Rose. I really enjoy reading your story. You have done a great job writing it. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks  I'm a little proud of Bella for that one. 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:59 PM Title: Girl Talk

It is not that this was not a good chapter but I am curious to see how they work out the jealousy issues involved with sharing Edward. I also like to have at least a little Edward time in each chapter. After all, he is who we are really interested in, not the girls... lol Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response: You have to remember that Bella and Edward have not been out together yet. So even thought it's out there that they are dating, the girls have not been faced with seeing it yet. So I'm sure that jealousy will play a part at sometime.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:42 PM Title: Girl Talk

I'm surprised that you didn't address how they handle jealousy.  I would think that it would issue - resenting the time that he spent intimately with the other.  Logically they can accept it - but emotionally it has to be hard to handle or hear.

Loved the chapter, as always.

Kat



Author's Response:

Bella is not fully in a relationship with Edward yet, it has just started. Jealousy will he handled when / if it accurs.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:14 PM Title: Girl Talk

Sometimes ya just wanna smack rosie a good one.



Author's Response:

I know but that is Edward's job.....lol

Reviewer: babypixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:06 PM Title: Girl Talk

This was a great chapter. I enjoyed reading it...and I loved the movie choices. The Last Airbender is a really good movie, and I am a huge Twilight fan (obviously I like it enough to read a Twilight-based story). I haven't seen Last Song, but I want to.



Author's Response:

I know I had no desire to see the last airbender but my daughter is obsessed with the cartoon and she wanted to go so I took her and loved it.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:55 PM Title: Girl Talk

I loved the way you have written the growing friendship between the girls and the understanding that Bella is coming to.  I can't wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Oh hun you do make me blush...... 

Reviewer: gg_galaxy2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:12 PM Title: Girl Talk

well i am glad bella finally had her little freak out, still was'nt enough though! what the hell is she thinking!



Author's Response:

I'm sure we are not going to see the end of Bella's freak outs.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:54 PM Title: Girl Talk

Can't wait for the next update! Loved it!



Author's Response:

I am going to try to update in the next few days. Things have just been crazy and I am trying to find a grove that will allow me more time to write.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:43 PM Title: Girl Talk

I am so glad to see you back and updating this story...I only recently found your story and have found it to be very intriguing thus far.  I think it is really neat having Bella be the voice of the reader, because her thoughts are pretty much exactly what would be going thru my mind in this scenario.

There is so much to cover now that Bella seems committed to this. I can't wait for the next chapter and hope you will get to update more regularly now... [Iknow, I know, I am one of those impatient readers you probably hate]...Keep up the good work.

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad to see that it's working. I knew that everyone would have questions and I thought that having them be Bella's questions would be a great way to get everything out there.  Thanks

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:39 PM Title: Girl Talk

I am glad that Bella didn't back down to Rosalie. I also liked how you explained that they made the rules. I hope Bella gets some input on the new updated rules, especially the personal ones. She is more moderate than the other two.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Bella may be quite and shy but she is not a doormat. I'm sure that the updated rule talk will be very interesting.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:22 PM Title: Girl Talk

thanks good chapter

 

i have a question what if edward did something wrong does he get punish, are there any rules for him?

 



Author's Response:

No sadly Edward would not get punished. In everything that I have read and heard about DD the man is given no phyical consequences when he does something wrong. They believe that the man is in charge and he would have to deal with his own wrongdoing or something like that.

But Edward being Edward is hard on himself and he sets himself at a higher standard. Yes he messes up and makes mistakes he is just human...lol   He follows all the same rules that the girls have. It's only fair.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:22 PM Title: Girl Talk

I WANT MORE!!! i knew rosalie was staking claim when she went to fuck edward at work.  but what i really can't wait to see, is when they do the night time ritual and edward either goes to sleep or fuckes his wives with bella around now that their feelings are out there. i can't wait to see if she is strong enough for that. I kinda think bells needs some space away from those crazies lmao. but she is provig she is what is needed.  Alice and rose still have alot of animosity, i don't understand why if rose wanted edward to herself , then why chose the lifestyle. She's such a bitch. I also want to know are bella and edward soulmates in this story? or are they just really in deep like. Also, if they are souldmates, isn't he going to find it hard to stay away from her? I know Rosalie won't let bella in with open arms. but i wonder though. even if alice is so happy about this,will you let us see her break down about bella being there? having two is something. but three has to get overwhelming. Rose broke, and even though ALice is strong, i'm sure she'll get jealous or throw a tantrum. It's instilled in a woman to be at least a little jealous of our men lol.

I really,really,really,really, Really,really,REALLY want more! this story is so good. I'm addicted and i really wish you'd update soon! thanks for the update 



Author's Response:

You forgot that it was Edward' idea for Rosalie to come to his office. He is a dirty, dirty man...lol  I'm sure that Rosalie will stake her claim in many other ways....

Thing will be getting very interesting at the Cullen home soon. I do love the drama. And you have to remember that Rosalie thinks she will never be able to have a baby so that combined with the fact that she loves being in control and grew up in a polygamous family makes for the situation that they are in now.

Just remember that I love the drama so there is sure to be a lot of that in this story. I am trying to find time to write but life is kicking my butt and I have had no private time to write I promise to try to get the next out in the next couple of days.

Reviewer: cheermom13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2010 1:27 PM Title: Girl Talk

so excited when i saw this chap today. i understand the back to school and pto stuff myself



Author's Response:

Thanks. I am trying to find my grove and it is not going very well......

Reviewer: salli21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: Risky Business

I love this story, but I think Bella should have more time to think, I mean, she just find out about the life style...please, dont take this the wrong way, I really love YOUR story, and because of that I'm not trying to tell you what or whant not write, is just an advise ;)!



Author's Response:

Of course I won't take it the wrong way. I promie that everything is happening for a reason. Yes Bella is getting way to much information all at once, but I think he needs all the information at once so that she can really 'see' what it would be like. I'm sure that Bella will get some time eventually...

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 12:44 PM Title: Risky Business

Glad that Edward and Rose had this time together. Sorry it has taken so long for me to review. I read this just as soon as you posted it but I think I am getting close to catching up on all my reviews for all of my stoies. Can't wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

OMG! There is no reason to say sorry. I have been so busy that I just finished the next chapter. It is with the Beta and should be posted in the next couple of days. I'm the one that should be sorry and I am. Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 4:13 AM Title: Everything On The Table

Glad that Bella did not back down from Rose. Boy Edward just thought he had his hands full before. LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Seriously, I don't know how he will do it....lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:54 AM Title: Fire's Blazing

I am sooo loving this stoy. For some reason this story has pulled at my heart strings. You are doing one GREAT job writing it. Thanks!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:27 AM Title: Revelations Before The Fire

I really loved this chapter and this story. I am sorry that I am just now reviewing this chapter. I read each chapter just as soon as you post them because I am soooo excited to get an update from you. But RL has been so hecked that I have not had time for reviews (plus I am on dial up:()But I will find time to revies each chapter.

I just have to tell you that I saw on the Today show this morning about a new show coming out called "Sister Wives". It is about one husband and 4 wives. I immediately thought about this story. lol.



Author's Response:

Please don't say sorry it will just make me feel bad. I am having a horrible time finding time to write and then answering everyone back. It takes me forever. I do read every review when they come in on my phone but it takes forever to get to a actually computer, takes forever.

I heard about the show, I haven't seen it yet though. And I have no idea why it would make you think of my story...lol

 

Reviewer: alifarrow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 11:23 PM Title: Risky Business

Love your story. Can't wait for an update



Author's Response:

Thank You. The update is with my beta should be up in a few days.

Reviewer: Dme Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:27 AM Title: Explaining The Pain

My wives "are the most important things in my life and I would rather die than ever hurt them."  "If everyone isn't honest it can create hostility and someone could get hurt."  Hmmm..... like siding with one wife to keep a secret and lie to the other wife for over a year?  Hypocrite much Edward?



Author's Response:

Yeah maybe just a little.

Reviewer: DaleStateShorty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:31 PM Title: Everything On The Table

Was very surprised on how Bella assertively took control of the situation and manned up to Rose, good on her.  She sure put Rose in her place, but I can still see Rose being very sneaky and making sure she gets her own way.  Rose was too adamant during her phone call with her sisters for one to believe that she is now on board the B/E love boat.  I guess only time will tell how this will be played out.  Was wondering, what would happen if Bella was the one to become pregnant, would that appease Rose at all?  Do Alice and Rose find no other men desirable?

*jEsSaH*



Author's Response:

Well in this story there are no Emmett or Jasper so I guess we will never know if Rosalie and Alice would find anyone else.

You may just be right about Rosalie she is very sneaky......

Reviewer: DaleStateShorty Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:23 PM Title: Risky Business

Nice chapter.  Can't wait to see how things will go for them all when Bella is officially inducted into their Cullen Triangle.  This cannot seriously work out right?  I mean, Rose has a point in saying that Edward's time will be even more stretched with Bella so how does he propose this shall work I wonder?  Was heartbreaking to read about the domestic violence that led to abuse on those 3 children and their mother, kudos to Edward for extending an olive branch to help support this lady and her family to keep them all safe.  Alice is awesome.

*jEsSaH*



Author's Response:

I know that his time is very little and that will cause some problems, but there are polygamist men that have a whole lot more wives and they make it work. This family will find a way to make it work too.

Sorry it took sssooooo long to respond to.

Reviewer: Dme Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:41 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth

I will admit that i have generally enjoyed your story, up until the part where Alice and Edward confess to lying and keeping secrets from Rose regarding having a baby.  Granted, Alice should not have one until she is ready, but to belittle Rose and her ability to cope is appalling.  Furthermore, the main component of a poly marriage and a domestic discipline relationship is communication and trust.  For the husband and head of household to be granted the ability to make and enforce rules through physical punishment, TRUST is the key element.  Not occassional trust, no trust when its convenient, but ABSOLUTE trust.  He forfeited that when he kept Alice's "secret".  And his little monologue about sometimes you have to weigh the needs of each wife and sometimes keep a secret to protect one over the other is complete crap in this particular situation.  This is not a minor issue.  It is one that the family had discussed at length and if Alice changed her mind, which was her right, then it should have been immediately addressed with Rose whether or not she was in a perfect emotional state.  I feel that you dismissed and belittled the very real hurt Rose has suffered from their betrayal.  And betrayal of trust is exactly what it was.  And now she is expected to still accept Edward as head of the household and his decision to date Bella.  Edward shows no real remorse and understanding of his betrayal of Rose and is arrogant enough to think that he should just be able to go about business no matter the cost.  I do not feel it is a realistic portrayal or does justice to Rose to have her just say okay and 5 minutes of explaining her hurt. Her marriage to Edward and relationship to Alice has been severely damaged and the story should reflect that.  She should have second thoughts on being in this relationship and whether it is truly healthy for her.  Her hurt and lack of trust in Edward should be shown and explored.  The very foundation for which this unique and complicated relationship(s) exist has been shattered and to ignore it is unjust to Rose.  I understand that she comes across as moody and bitchy but that is no excuse to dismiss the hurt and betrayal caused her.  Edward needs to be held accountable and should see that his actions have damaged his relationship with Rose and maybe he might just lose her.  I, for one, am of the opinion that she may be better off without him. 



Author's Response:

Sorry it took me so long to replay. I did read it as it came in to my mail. But I read all my reviews thru the email option on my iphone and for some reason I am unable to respond or review on my phone. So please don't think I was ignoring me, because I was not. I just have had a hard time finding time to sit down and write. I appriciate that you took the time to let me know how you were feeling.

Now I wrote Rose's response to the meeting in front of Edward the way I did for a reason. I can promise you that Rosalie ha not forgiven them and that will come out in the next few chapters. Yes Alice and Edward will both have to win back Rosalie's trust.

I have done a lot of research on polygamy in school, on the computer and I personally know a women that is a polygamist. And everything has pointed to the same thing, the man has ultimate authority and this is especially true in Domestic Discipline. But everything I have read says the same about when a man makes a mistake it says that he is only human and can make mistakes. The difference between a man and a women is that the man has to answer to no one but himself and to god. (I do not agree with this at all, but this is the way they feel.) When a women makes a mistake a mistake she is accountable to her husband and he takes care of her punishment so that she can be cleansed of this. They feel it is harder on the man because there is no one to cleanse him of his mistake.

Now in polygamy a wife is said to have no say in what happens between a husband and his other wives. I have written Edward as including both Rosalie and Alice is almost all decisions because for me that is the only way that I can justify this lifestyle.

 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:45 AM Title: Risky Business

I am glad that Rose seems to be ok with Bella coming to join their family.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing every chapter, it means a lot to me.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:25 AM Title: Everything On The Table

I didn't think that Bella would put that out on the table this soon but I think that it was the best for her to do.



Author's Response:

After all that she has heard it was only right for her to do the same.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:56 AM Title: Fire's Blazing

I wonder if Rosealie is going to let Bella into their lives because it seems that she is a part of it already without trying that hard.



Author's Response:

Do you even have to wonder, does Rose ever make anything easy.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:31 AM Title: Revelations Before The Fire

I am really shocked that Bella is willing to try this because she seemed in awe of what was going on around her. I wonder what Rose and Alice are going to thing about this.



Author's Response:

I know but you know what they say love is blind.

Reviewer: mj43068 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 5:12 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth

I do not know why, but this story is extremely hard for me to swallow. I enjoy different...i really do! I read the different fanfictions and i have nothing against pologamy, although i would never ever be able to have a relationship like that! I guess coming into this story i expected that Edward and Bella would end up together alone, like i really feel they should be-i expected for Edwards feelings for Bella to surpass any feelings he felt for Alice and Rosalie and for himself and Bella to end up together in the end. I guess what really irks me is that this isnt a 3-some, and while i am glad thats the case, it just absoutely kills me that these women have to share---i mean, really fight for time with Edward! It is horrible! The emotional strings that tie up a relationship are not fully tied together---Edward has to be the "partner" to 2, and now possibly 3 different women! Therefore it is no longer a partnership! I cannot imagine that type of life and why anyone would settle for it---i understand that people have their reasons and i respect them for that, but its painfull for me to see that be the case with our Edward and Bella. No women deserves to need someone and have to live with the fact that his time is split and you are not his only priority. I really thought that i would enjoy this story, and i have been sticking with it hoping for some better outcome, but im losing hope now and it is painfull to watch Bella settle for this and Edward work so hard in trying to be split...

Maybe im just too cannon...because i find the lemons and limes between Edward/Rosalie and Edward/Alice hard to read---i actually skim them, which is crazy cuz i love my smut! But it just seems so wrong for the Edward and Bella that i love. I keep waiting for Emmett and Jasper to appear and stir things up, but at this point, i dont see that happening and it makes me very sad for all of them...Rosalie clearly needs someone whos focus is 100% on her, and i wish the same for Alice...I honesty do not see any of them particularily happy with this arrangement...



Author's Response:

I have to admit that I am a Edward/Bella fan myself and it kills me when they are not together. But I got the idea for this story and just felt the need to go with it. I can't say if they will end up alone, but I also can't say that Edward's feeling for Bella wont surpress those of Rose and Alice. I honestly haven't decided how they will end up in the end. I have three possible paths and I am just going to go with what I know for sure is going to happen and see what fits best for the story. You never know what could happen.

I know that I could never share, I agree that it must be horrible to know what the love of your life is doing when he is not with you. But people live this way and they are happy. I have a friend that is in a polygamist marriage and she is very happy. There are many reason for people to live this way.

I have to admit that when I write the lemons I don't whrite them as Rose or Alice.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I understand if it's too much for you, but I'm glad that you let me know what you were thinking.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:00 PM Title: A Woman's Perception

That was a horrible story that Rose told and it is good that she told someone else and that it made her feel better because parents shouldn't do those things to their children.



Author's Response:

I know and the worst part is that there are monsters out there that are really like this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:26 PM Title: Explaining The Pain

Well it is a good thing that Bella is so intregued about this lifestyle because I think that anyone else would have run away from what they saw with Alice.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:08 PM Title: Money Problems

Well I bet that Bella never thought that she would witness this when she got started on this story.



Author's Response:

You know it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:51 PM Title: Family Ties

I wonder what Alice spent allof that money on? I also wonder if Rosealie is getting the vibe that Edward is attracted to Bella.



Author's Response:

But really with they way Alice shops it really wouldn't be hard for her to to spend that much.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:28 PM Title: The Most Basic Facts

Well I think that Bella is starting to really see what is going on with this lifestyle and how different it is thank she thought it was.



Author's Response:

They had to open her eyes eventually. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:01 PM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Well it looks like Edward might just have his work really cut out for him with Rose.



Author's Response:

Of course, I couldn't make it easy on him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:05 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth

I am thinking that Bella is going to get more than answers to the questions that she has.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. And I think you may be right.

Reviewer: lluvy21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:03 PM Title: Risky Business

Ok so I have no problen with polygamy as long as its consensual with the people in the relationship. BUT idk it's just so weird to read this (its good don't get me wrong!) and see Edward try to get Roasalie and Alice to get on his side with wanting to bring Bella into the family then just turn around and sleep with Rosalie. Idk I guess I just favor Edward and Bella to only be together. But it's a good story keep up the good work!!!



Author's Response:

I know it weird and I am sorry about that. I am totally team Edward and I love him and Bella, but I just got the idea for the story and went with it. And I hate to say it but sometimes sex is just sex and I hate to admit that in this chapter that is exactly what it was.

Reviewer: maggiejoma Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2010 10:30 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth

really well written..... looks like being an amazing story....



Author's Response:

Thanks. I hope you like it. 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Risky Business

Nope...still couldn't share...lol.   I would want that hunky man all for myself.  Loved the chapter sweetie.     Kat



Author's Response:

I know right. If it were me I would chain him to my bed and never let him up.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:38 PM Title: Risky Business

oh awesome chapter great office lemon very hot

Author's Response:

Thanks I think it was 120 degrees in there.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 4:40 AM Title: Risky Business

I think the ladys in Edwards life need to get loving when and where they can LOL.  I am suprised at Roses reaction to Bella and Edward dating but I think she really likes the idea deep down inside because she knows Bella is ment for all of them.



Author's Response:

Thanks. You are so right about getting it where they can. I hope that Rosalie will come around, but the way there is sure to be drama packed.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Risky Business

Rose is so selfish at times.  hope things work out for them all



Author's Response:

I am trying to stay as close to the real characters as I can but I am making them so really messed up things.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 10:58 PM Title: Everything On The Table

I am glad Rose is taking thing well

Reviewer: Stargirl888 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:59 PM Title: Risky Business

I liked the office sex, and didn't think it was too much. As always another great chapter. I'm just curious about this whole Edward making the ultimate decisions i,r,t, dating - does this extend to taking on a new wife? Generally I agree that in most cases Edward should be the one to make the final decisions but I'm torn when it comes to dating - I get Edward being the one to decide when he dates, but I really think his wives should get more imput in it since yes, he is the one attracted to Bella and the one who will have sex with her, but dating is a prelude to marraige and if they marry, Bella will be marrying all three of them - now I doubt Edward would force a wife on them, but technically could he if say Rose refused to accept Bella and Ed really put his foot down - would Alice support him in that senario or would she feel Rosalie shouldn't be forced into marrage? (I doubt this situation would occure but just supposing it did...). Idk, maybe I'd just feel better if Rosalie was more like 'I don't agree but I'll support it and we can see how it goes' rather than 'I'll agree because you're the final decision maker' - I just felt Edward could have tried to convince her more first, rather than just being 'this is the way it is' - he could always have reverted to that if trying to convince her didn't work.

 

Anyway, just some random thoughts. It was a good chapter & I look forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Ok I am going to try to answer your questions. But before I do I want to make it clear that I am no expert, I have taken 2 classes that discussed polygamy, I am friend with a woman that is a active polygamist, and I have done some research on my own before starting this story. So please don't take what I am saying as law, because I am not. So with that being said here goes.

Different religions see polygamy differently. In Islam (again not all believe this but there are a few that do.) they believe that no man or woman has the right to deny someone their god given right to polygamy. So while a man should consolt his wife before engaging in polygamy, she does not have the right to deny him his god given right. There are rules to this that are not seen in christian religions. For example a man is to take no more then 4 wives, and he does not need permission to do so. But he must treat each wife the same, no wife can have more then another. This is the same for all who practice polygamy. And the main reason it is allowed is to protect orphans and widows. Christians who practice polygamy believe that there are passages in the bible where men had multiple wives. Both King Soleman and King David are said to have many wives and concubines. So those who practice say that if it is in the bible then it can not be wrong. No where does it start that a woman has any right to protest their husband taking another wife. I know this is a very basic answer, but that about sums it up. Some rationalize polygamy by saying that because women outnumber men it is necessary for a man to have more then one wife. Also they say that it stops divorce and protects the wife. There are a hundred different reasons and I could go on all day, but I wont sorry about rambling, but I wanted to let you know what I was basing this story on.

Now Edward/Rosalie/Alice live a dd lifestyle. That means the Rosalie and Alice have given over the head of household role to Edward. He is in charge of his famlies well being and it is his job to do what is right for them all. This means that he has the final say when it comes to decisions. By mixing these two lifestyles and how they are handles it would be said that while Edward should consault his wives on all major decisions the choice is his.

Now what Alice said about her not wanting a say in the chosing process there are many reasons that wives do not want to be in that process. My friend had explained it to me this way. What if a wife helped to pick a girlfriend and things did not work out. This could cause negative feeling between the husband and wife, so with that thought in mind she would want nothing to do with chosing of the girlfriend. It has also been said that by giving the wife the choice she could never agree so that she could have control over the marriage, where in polygamy they believe that the man is responable for the family.

This is what I went with when deciding not to have Edward ask permission if he could date. I really gave it a lot of thought and just thought that it would go better if he didn't ask, but was open with them about it. I thought that it would be underminding his authority as the head of household. Now with that being said he would not marry anyone if his wives were 100% against it. I am going with the fact that Edward would never do anything to hurt Rosalie or Alice so if they couldn't accept Bella then he would not force them to accept her as a sister wife. He strongly feels that Rosalie is just scared and that once she gets to know Bella that she would know that she belonged with them.

Alright sorry if this was TMI but I wanted to get things as clear as possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad that you felt comfortable enought to ask.

Denise

 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 5:04 AM Title: Risky Business

Okay, I watch stories like big love & think that it seems fine for people to share the polygamist life style if that's what they want, more power to 'em & to each their own. But for some reason I have a hard time with the Edward sexing up anyone other than Bella, and it strikes me as dishonest or unfaithful to his feelings for her. I know it conflicts with previous sentence as these 4 are all knowledgeable & agreeable, but I must just be stuck in cannon pairing ville;( ha

I'm enjoying the read though, thanks for the update;)



Author's Response:

I know I have a hard time writing it at times. I love Edward and Bella, but I felt the need to mix it up a bit. I'm glad that you are reading still. I hope that you can continue to read. Thanks

Reviewer: mylovemichael Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 12:57 AM Title: Risky Business

love the update. I hope Bella gets to spend some quality time alone with edward soon. thanks for writing and sharing your story.



Author's Response:

Bella and Edward will be alone soon. But first I think a little girl time is needed don't you think.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2010 12:48 AM Title: Risky Business

thanks good story



Author's Response:

anytime   ;)

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:39 PM Title: Risky Business

Awesome update. Great lemon



Author's Response:

Thanks. I was a little worried there for a minute.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Risky Business

There's such a thing as too far? ;o
I liked it!

-Sofia(:



Author's Response:

I didn't think so but you never know, I was just checking.

Reviewer: xSofiax Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:30 PM Title: Everything On The Table

I'm glad they seem to have everything out in the open. Also that Edward and Bella's relationship has finally begun to blossom. :)

-Sofia(:

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Risky Business

I liked this chapter. I feel like they made some progress. Rosalie finally realize that she is not incharge of the family.



Author's Response:

I don't know if I would go that far, Rose will be Rose.... The history portion is over for the most part now we are going to see what can happen.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:05 PM Title: Risky Business

This is interesting to say the least.



Author's Response:

Thanks..... I think..... lol

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:32 PM Title: Risky Business

Loved the office sex!



Author's Response:

I'm glad... I have trying to find interesting places for some loving, with Edward sexen up two wives I just feel like the bedroom isn't enough.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 11:21 AM Title: Risky Business

Office sex is ALWAYS a great thing to do :)

The rest of their conversation went well.. I suppose as good as it's going to get for awhile anyway!

Glad Rosalie is being putting her place once again! Tuff little thing she can be!

Will Alice always be this accepting of Bella coming into their lives?

I do hope so....

Great chapter - thanks!

Can't wait for more now you have the time...

Enjoy the quietness :)

T2M x

 



Author's Response:

My daughter came home 5 days early, so there is no more quite at least not for 2 weeks. but thanks, I enjoyed it while I had it.

I always thought Alice is so easy go lucky she always go with the slow. She knows how things are going to end so how they get there doesn't concern her to much.

Rosalie is a tuff cookie and I love it.

Reviewer: mommyofthreeboys Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:36 AM Title: Risky Business

Loved it like always. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm interested to see if there will be a baby anytime soon. I'd love for it to be Bella. Looking forward to the next update; soon please.

Author's Response:

I love babies.....

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: Risky Business

Oh no I like the office sex scene, it was HOT!!! I am really getting into this sotry and I cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I was hoping people would like it.

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:21 AM Title: Risky Business

Ok so the office sex was definitely hot but it felt a little ooc for this edward a felt a little like sex for sex sake.

the rest of the chapter was great though keep up the good work



Author's Response:

I hate to say it but it was sex for sex sake. They have to get it where they can right. Plus Edward felt the need to reconnect with Rosalie on a physical level after the punishment and meeting.

Reviewer: elizabethjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:16 AM Title: Risky Business

Sorry you miss your daughter....but no didnt mind at all....if you are really bored you could write somemore....im just sayin...lol



Author's Response:

My daughter came home after only 4 days. I had just started the next chapter when I got the call so my free time is gone again until school starts. But there are only 10 days of summer left so I'll have more time to write them.

Reviewer: adhita Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:35 PM Title: Risky Business

I think the office sex, apart from hot-hot-hot!, was believable; with him being in a polygamous marriage, every little free time must count for something, and it will be even more necessary when he deepens his relationship with Bella.  Also, this intimate moment served to reassure Rosalie that they are a couple with a strong bond that won't be damaged by adding Bella into the equation.

Good chapter!

P.S. It's good that doctors keep a change of clothes in the hospital, isn't it?  If not, what could Edward have done with his ripped scrubs?  lol



Author's Response:

Exactly I'm so glad you are seeing things my way.....  ;)    

My mom is a midwife and my best friend is a hospital pharmacist so I know for sure they all keeps extra scrubs around, because you never know what can happen....

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:00 PM Title: Risky Business

No such thing as going too far! Great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

Thanks... I was just worried because it was Edward and Rose... Glad to know you liked.

Reviewer: deazucar Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:12 PM Title: Risky Business

I don't think it was too much at all :) After all a little break from Edward/Bella interaction is good. However, I do hope that there is plenty of Edward/Bella interaction just them two is in the future ;)



Author's Response:

There will be some Edward/Bella but I think there is some girly time coming up first....

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:14 PM Title: Risky Business

Of course we don't mind. The sex was great. Although I'm a little jelous. Don't know if it's for Bella's sake or mine. Either way, please update soon. I can't wait to see Bella living in the household already, and maybe, since she is the glue holding everyone together, a big, big, big bed for everyone? Just saying.

Author's Response:

I know what you mean I've been single for a little over a year I'm a little shocked I was able to write it....lol And I don't think there will be a really big bed... I just don't know if I can take it that far.... I already have them pretty wacked..

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:40 PM Title: Risky Business

It was just right.  I feel like it's getting to the good stuff...I'm just really curious about how the dynamics of this whole relationship work.  Just the everyday stuff and of course the sexy times, too.   Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'm sure things are at home are very different then what we are use to. Now that the history is done there will be more "family" time.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:48 PM Title: Risky Business

excellent chapter

great end of the meeting - love the reminder Edward gives about him being the head of the house

great lemons



Author's Response:

Thanks. I like Edward with a firm hand.

Reviewer: abbygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:37 PM Title: Risky Business

great chapter as always



Author's Response:

Thanks Abby I try.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:24 PM Title: Risky Business

I loved it!!! i wonder though, how long will rosalie be nice until the bitch in her starts to appear. i wonder if Bella can handle this. And whatever happened to victoria? is she the one who hit bella with the car? was that really a accident? lmao so many questions i can't until you update again.



Author's Response:

Well the next chapter is going to be some girl time so we'll have to see how Rose reacts.

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:08 PM Title: Risky Business

Hi, this is my first review of this story.  i'm enjoying it very much.  i admit i've struggled a bit with aspects of it, but not what you'd probably think.  though i'm opposed to polygamy, I think it's a very interesting premice for a story.  i'm not opposed to the discipline aspects of it either, as I've read a number of the BDSM stories.  The only part I've struggled with is the sex with Rose and Alice, because they always feel so much like sisters to edward to me, that i haven't found the sex scenes interesting in the same way I might in other stories or with bella.  Having said that, obviously, I still like the story, and i'm continuing to read it, so I must not object too much.  i can suspend belief for the sake of the story.  i think I struggle most with edward and Rose, because I've never felt a bit of chemistry with them, so I suspend more belief with their relationship. Ah heck, and Alice feels too much like a sister ... ok, gues i'm a total canon pairing type woman.  But in the end, I do love the story and can't stay away from it.  It intrigues me and keeps me thinking and guessing.  I'm so curious to see what will change with bella in the mix.  i like that this isn't all about bella.  I wonder if edward will end up loving her best, needing her more.  Will there ever ben an emmett or Jasper?  all kinds of questions.  Will Bella need discipline?  i can't wait to see what happens as things unfold.

 

Sherry



Author's Response: Sherry Thank you so much for reviewing. I know what you mean when you say you are canon pairing type, I myself love the Edward/Bella relationship and normally that's all I read. But I just got the idea for this story and went with it. No one has ever done anything like this and I felt that it would make a interesting story. I had thought about making Edward's wives other vampire women, but I love Alice and Rose's characters and it didn't feel right not to have them as a main focus in the story. I guess I always felt that they had such a close bond (Edward did hear their thoughts while they had sex, even if he didn't want to.) that it just flowed. I am sorry to say that I can't see myself bring Emmett or Jasper into the story, not because I don't love them because I do, but for the fact that I feel that I would be sending the wrong message about polygamy and that would just be wrong. I am not a polygamist and I would never want it for myself, but I try to live by the moto that people deserve to love who and how they want, and as long as they are not hurting others (I don't mean perverts who say they love children because that's just wrong.) I don't think anyone should stand in their way. I'm really glad that you are pushing past the norm, and stepping out of your comfort zone to read my story. Thank you for reviewing, I like hearing what people think, the good and bad. Denise

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:05 PM Title: Risky Business

:)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:36 PM Title: Risky Business

Edward taking charge -  I love it!!!  I need another ciggie!!!

Great chapter and your lemons are just perfect - ripe with a bite :)



Author's Response:

Michele,

You rock.

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 12:56 AM Title: Everything On The Table

i love this story so far and cant wait to see what happens when edward and bella tell rose that they are dating i have a feeling that she is going to be ok with it now that she knows about bellas past so please update soon



Author's Response:

Well I hope your right about Rose. I promise that the next chapter will have them telling Rose and Alice. Thanks for reading

 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:45 AM Title: Everything On The Table

what an awesome chapter ... love the discussion between A & R ... love that E stepped in when he felt the need

 

eager to see B & E dating



Author's Response:

I was worried how people would feel about Edward stopping Rosalie from having a major fit. I'm glad that you liked it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 3:18 PM Title: Everything On The Table

I love this story, but it seems we don't make much progress with each chapter. This chapter said basically the same thing as the prevous chapter escept for the last couple paragraphs.



Author's Response:

Sorry that you didn't like it. There are just so many different emotions that I wanted people to see, that I felt it was important to know not the others were thinking. Knowing how Bella reacts to the family is a vital part to the rest of the story that I just needed to do it in this fashion.

With that being said, now that the background is done the story is going to flow more. Don't worry this are going to be heating up very soon. I hope you can stick with it I promise it will be good.

 

Reviewer: elizabethjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:53 PM Title: Everything On The Table

ooohhh i am glad that the story is working out so well....hope all is well with you as well....



Author's Response:

Thanks, I like where it is going...

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:55 AM Title: Everything On The Table

Loved it. So good.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 9:53 PM Title: Everything On The Table

good chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you! I really mean that. It means a lot to me that you take the time every chapter to review. 

Reviewer: edward08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:00 PM Title: Everything On The Table

love the chp



Author's Response:

Yeah. That is just what I was going for.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Everything On The Table

can't wait to see then end results for this meeting lmao! gosh i can't believe bells agreed to this. but hey! to each it's own , can't wait for another update



Author's Response:

I know it is a little creepy when you think about it... lol    I try not to think too deeply about the fact that Edward has two wives and is going to be dating another women.

Reviewer: jtaylor1972 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:51 PM Title: Everything On The Table

Always will I want more... but this was a good chapter.  Still having a feeling that Rose is going to make things quite difficult for Edward and Bella...

Looking forward to next chapter.

well done... as always



Author's Response:

Well what can I say Rose will be Rose.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:09 PM Title: Suppression

yea it's me again! i couldn't stop i gave into temptation and i loved this chapter! the whole in love thingie still irks me but it isn't my story it's yours an if you wrote it and it makes sense to you then it makes sense to me! i see Rose is becomming that bitch we all love to hate lmaooo great job i can't wait to see more of her bitch fits lmao. i wonder out of all three of them is bella going to be the only one who gets pregnant? that would be funny lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:35 PM Title: Emotions Involved

oh um..i liked the chapter..but i just can't believe * or realistically* believe that bella just fell in love with this douche bag with two wives. like him or deep like yes..but love? really?  great chapter though i don't think i'll be able to read more but your a wonderful author hun i wish you the best.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:57 PM Title: Revelations Before The Fire

Sounds a little..I don't know..I mean Edward keeps saying that what he feels for Bella is MORE then he's ever felt before.  He tries to relive himself, he fantastizes about Rosalie, then Alice, but doesn't get his release until he thinks of Bella and then says that's the most he's ever felt again.  He says this is the happiest he's ever felt..yet says right at the end that he's going to try and make her feel AS loved and wanted as he already feels for Rosalie and Alice?  Is that not a step down from what he already claims he's feeling?  Ok, I know Edward is special...but seriously...being Bella and doing the math, plus knowing how selfish and demanding Rosalie is, what's she going to get?  2:00pm on Wednesday afternoons to 3:00pm?

Can anyone live like that?  Can anyone go into a relationship like that with Rosalie thinking..."I'm the first wife, I always come first!"....I can't see where Edward is going to fit her in without her ending up crushed with her self esteem ground to a nub.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:34 PM Title: Everything On The Table

Wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:14 PM Title: Everything On The Table

WOW - brilliant chapter! 

Loved it.. can't wait for the next one!

Greedy aren't I!!! haha

T2M x



Author's Response:

Well just between us. My daughter is away this week :(    So I may just be able to get the next chapter written by the end of the week. I am going to start it tomorrow....

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:08 AM Title: Everything On The Table

D,

This chapter is awesome!  You have done such a great job in showing us what each one is thinking and the dynamics of this family. I can't wait to see what happens next.

M xoxo



Author's Response:

M,

I'm glad that I am getting thru what everyone is thinking. I don't want it to seem that anyone is getting lost.

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:54 AM Title: Everything On The Table

Thanks for the update, still they haven't dropped the bomb of Bella & Edward, looking forward to reading that part of the story & her reaction;)



Author's Response:

The big bomb is next I promise... And it will be in Edward's POV

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:31 AM Title: Everything On The Table

aaawww. I cant wait to see Rosie's reaction to Bella and Edward dating.  This chapter put a huge smile on my face!!! I love big group huggies!!!



Author's Response:

Your wait is almost over.....

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:21 AM Title: Money Problems

i won't lie, i wouldn't have stayed, i'mma prude lmao. i just really hope bella doesn't fall for this lifestyle. but to each's it's own. i don't know anything about the lifestyle but from your writing i don't find it appealing lmao. but great story your an amazing writer!

Reviewer: deazucar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:30 AM Title: Everything On The Table

please please please tell me that the next chapter Edward and Bella will tell the others that they're dating *cute pout*



Author's Response:

Yes the fact that they are dating will come next chapter... Let the drama begin

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:14 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

i can't wait to really see where this goes lmao

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:56 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth

i loved this!!! great job!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:34 AM Title: Everything On The Table

i so love getting this update in my inbox. man has rose come along way. i am so proud of her. these guys defentiely have alot to work through but i have my hopes up. alice is such a spitfire look out. i love that she sees that bella fits in the family like a puzzle piece. she sees that bella makes edward whole. that she will be a good edition to the family. that she won't just be another body taking time with her husband but an ally and a friend a new wife and maybe a mother. she is what will complete their family. she is waht they all needed in a way. she needed them as well to complete her and finally be able to love and accept love. yeah it is new for her but like they say communicationis the key and with it none of them can go wrong. they will be able to have their happy life by being honest and loving with each other. i so love it and can not wait for the update. thanx for writing. yeah i am happy, love it



Author's Response:

OMG... You crack me up.      I'm really glad you liked it. You have them all down pat, it's great to know that you see the characters exactly the way I see them.

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:26 AM Title: Everything On The Table

Best Part:

 

After I was done talking, I looked around to see a sad expression on everyone’s face and I felt instantly guilty for dumping everything on them when they had enough of their own issues to deal with. But before I could apologise, I was enveloped into a group hug.



Author's Response:

Thanks... I wasn't sure how people would feel me leaving it like that.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:27 AM Title: Everything On The Table

Great chapter. I liked how you showed Bella's confusion about Edward telling her that 'communication is key' then finding out he and Alice had been keeping something from Rose. I still don't agree with them doing that no matter what the excuse is. I think it would be like a 'normal' husband keeping something hurtful from his wife because he 'didn't think she could handle it'. I would want to know the truth and having something kept from me would damage my trust of that person or persons serverly. Thanks for the update. :~)



Author's Response:

First off I love that you said 'normal' because it is so true.  I know what you mean about having something kept from you, I'm not going to say it was right because it wasn't. It just that sometimes people have to with hold information to protect the ones they love and in a messed up way that's what they were doing.  Sorry ..

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:25 AM Title: Everything On The Table

Wow, that was an awesome chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yeah for me..... LOL   Thank You.

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:30 AM Title: Everything On The Table

I'm glad they got some of that out into the open :) I think it was really important for the story to be able to move forward. Hopefully Rosalie won't be TOO upset about Bella and Edward. It would be a shame if things just fell apart between ANY of them.

Great job with this one...I can't wait to see what you've got coming next!

~Rae



Author's Response:

Rae,

Up next... Dating.... Lets see just how far they can push Rosalie shall we.

Denise

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