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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:54 AM Title: The end of a reign of terror

Excellent Chapter.   Go Bad Ass Rosie and her band of sisters.     Oh Aro  You are an arogant MF.   Should have just killed them and get over it.  ah well

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:31 PM Title: The end of a reign of terror

Don't stop with this story. I do care. I think it's great story.

 



Author's Response:

I'm not going to stop, but it's hard to keep motivated with so little incentive, that's all...

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:06 PM Title: The end of a reign of terror

thanks for continuing!!!

Merci' - I think that might be right

Cheryle



Author's Response:

Of course i'm continuing. I'm not a quitter, and it's not as if I could get the writer's block, lol.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: The end of a reign of terror

First of all, thanks you for taking the time to translate this incredible story.

Second, I'm sorry to hear that so many things are dragging you down.

Third, I may not always review because I read mainly from my phone and reviewing is troublesome to say the least.  But, take heart and know I thoroughly enjoy this story!

I'll be here waiting whenever you can pump out another translated chapter.

 

Go Rosalie, the lit candles in thier asses was hilarious.



Author's Response:

It was hilarious indeed, and hopefully not too over the top. Boy, I had so much fun writing this scene in French more than a year ago :0)

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 4:52 AM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

Well its about time those assholes of the Volturi got their payback for all the torture they put those girls through.



Author's Response:

Next chapter should be posted very soon. It's being edited by my beta India Rose.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:52 AM Title: Tanya's last resort

Hmmm sounds like this was Tanya's plan all along. to be able to be alone with Edward so she can go back and tell Bella that they had sex again.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:23 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Well it looks like Jacob went too far with his jealousy.



Author's Response:

Ha ha, Edward had it coming too :0)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:52 AM Title: Three short stories

Well I am glad that Jacob is going to help them.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:13 AM Title: Deflowering Isabella

Well its about time that he deflowered her.  I would have liked for it to be missionary so that they could see each other.



Author's Response:

I think they will do the missionary later on, I'm pretty sure Edward will look Bella in the eyes at some point...

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:48 AM Title: Edward and Bella

Oh wow that was a hot chapter.  I hope the next chapter he will actually make love to her.



Author's Response:

Oh my God, I thought you already read those chapters when they were published. I thought I sent you the chapter where Edward deflowers Bella...

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 7:40 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

i love this story!  i stsrted reading it yesterday and have gotten through all you have yet, sorry i havent commented prior to but when i get going to dont want to stop until i have to!  this is definatley one of those stories!

i feaking love rose!

i wondered how jasper and alice were gonna get together!

i knew edward would get to bella in time!

tanya is batty and her and jacob are perfect for each other!

until you post again, which i hope is soon!



Author's Response:

I will try my best to update next week :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2012 8:32 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

Hi there! Did you miss me? I would never flounce on you.

I loved this chapter so much! I was laughing like an evil woman just imagining what will happen to those three disgusting pigs. I can't wait to see how much damage Rosalie and the girls inflict upon the brothers. I look forward to your next chapter.

=)  Kelly



Author's Response:

Actually,yes, I missed you :0)

I'm currently reading Slave in French (again) to relax while I'm translating Collisions... You're in for some hilarious moments in the coming chapters, lol...

Reviewer: Pitje Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2012 8:55 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

Just began reading your story. I absolutely love it.

Please continue with the translations because I can't wait to read the rest.



Author's Response:

Next chapter should be posted at the end of next week...

Reviewer: roximize Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:35 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

I just started reading this story and I really like it. I cannot wait to see how it ends.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2011 4:21 AM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

wow the brother must be real pussies if the girls got their arms immobilized so easy.   Get em Rosie!!!.

Tanya needs to grow up.  jeez.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 10:50 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

To you to a wonderful Christmas and New Year.

Rosalie's plan is working perfectly; the other girls doing their parts very well. It's going to be a long, long night, one that both the Lords of Volturi and slaves will never forget.

As for Tanya... she was trying anything to get Edward, and he was the only one to realize it. She was angry but said anger was made disappear by no other than Jacob. They will make an interesting couple...

Reviewer: atina10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 4:45 AM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, too!!! Thanks for update!! :)...xo

Reviewer: caroled Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:30 AM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

I just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying your story,  I just wished you updated more often. 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry but I don't feel like updating more often for 8 people who take the time to review my story, as nice as those 8 people are. Should I receive 10 times more, then yes, I would definitely be very motivated to finish this story faster, but I'm only human and when I see the reviews dropping from 15-20 to 5-10, my motivation takes a plunge too. Now, I know some people will tell me it's because I don't update more often that my reviews did drop, but this argument doesn't hold water as the reviews started dropping when I was updating more often, and I know of a lot of stories that get loads of reviews no matter the frequency and regularity of the updates (for instance My viking and Bonne foi).

Wishing you the best for 2012.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:04 AM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

I was hoping that you would include the entire scene in this chapter because Rosalie's revenge is everything that the brothers deserve and then some.

Thank you for the update!  Have a wonderful Holiday Season!

 



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, it's just that the next chapter with the recounting of Rosalie's revenge is as long as this one and I just didn't have time to translate it as I had to update my other stories as well.

A wonderful Holiday Season to you too :0)

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 11:14 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

a nice CHristmas would have been to spend the night with the volturi and rose



Author's Response:

Actually you're right, I wish I had had the time to translate the next chapter which is a recounting of what Rosalie have them endure during the night, but heck, I spent the past week baking goodies for the holidays...

My best for 2012.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 10:51 PM Title: Rosalie among the Volturi

Oh my. I bet all those women would like a turn at beating them in their privates.

Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:28 PM Title: Tanya's last resort

Yes, I am very tempted to use translator on French version, but I am well aware of the loss of the right meaning and suspense, so I will just be patient for the updates.

I really like these type of stories and thank you for your great imagination. ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 11:12 AM Title: Tanya's last resort

Oh good lord; I just want to smack Tanya, she's so desperate and pathetic!

I'm so anxious to see how Rosalie plans to mess up the Volturi pigs. I really hope that the other three slaves go along with it. I think they probably will; I'm just so suspicious of everyone now. I'm waiting to see who will end up being the traitors.

I've missed you Milk! I hope you are doing well. =)  I'm going to start Collisions soon; I can't help myself, I have to start another story. I don't know how in the world I keep track of all the stories I have going at the same time. I must be a bit looney! Well, I look forward to your next chapter. Take care.   =)    Kelly



Author's Response:

We know who are the ones plotting against the Volturi and who stay their loyal servants(Jane, Alec, Demetri and Felix + the mercenaries), so now it not so much about who's going to be a traitor as about trying to keep the plot a secret. But it doesn't mean there's not going to be a lot of action, far from that...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:53 AM Title: Tanya's last resort

gawd  skankya is pathetic.   Love Rose and the other girls will get the opportunity to exact some vengance.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 10:28 PM Title: Tanya's last resort

I have already read the french version, but the english version is so much better!  I know what is going to happen, and I can't wait to read in english what Rosalie is going to dish out to those perverts!!  Go girl power!

I like the way that Edward will handle Tanya as well.

Thank you for the update.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I never advise any one to use the google translator to read a story, whether it be a French translation or an English one. Google translator just doesn't know how to translate the idioms or the way a sentence is turned and it will sound very weird most of the time... But at least you know there will be a happy ending :0)

Reviewer: DRROBERTS2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 10:12 PM Title: Tanya's last resort

I just started reading this last week and finished  (or caught up lol) tonight. greay story! i have no idea whats going to happen next! will bella catch them and be pissed?! 



Author's Response:

Nah, don't worry about Bella, she won't catch them :0)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:45 PM Title: Tanya's last resort

Tanya is working extra time to make us all hate and yes, want to kill her, since she survived the venom she took. She is determined to get Edward, sadly she has no chance, even with this last atempt. I'm worried, if they are near the stairs, Edward might trip and they could fall. If Edward got hurt that wouldn't be good for the plan.

Rosalie was kind of excited for what she might get to inflict on the Volturi, I can't wait to find out what that might be.

Thanks to India Rose for helping you and my best wishes and thoughts also go to ALE

See you soon!!! :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:01 PM Title: Tanya's last resort

WELL LOOKS LIKE HE WAS DUPED

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:35 AM Title: Return to the harem

what a horrible place.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:10 AM Title: Return to the harem

Tanya chose a not very well thought or mature path. If she thought it might have got her Edward back, it backfired. All the girls are't too happy with Bella and Rose but they did agree to listen to them. Freedom is something they all wish so if there's a way to obtain it, they will look pass their grudges.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:58 PM Title: Return to the harem

skankyaandkate are just pathetic if u ask me.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:15 PM Title: Return to the harem

Will the world really be a worst place without Tanya? The girls better be quiet around Jane. Bella needs to get some sleep, so she can heal.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 2:37 PM Title: Return to the harem

Are you kidding me? Just stop it! *giggles* What do you mean we may never find out about the plans, and 'oh well'? You're killing me!  :O

Those poor delusional women. I guess I could see where they would be infatuated with the 'sex god', but to fall in love with Edward; I really feel sorry for them. I know, they are stuck in an extremely disgusting and horrifying situation, but to want to kill yourself and think your life is over because the 'sex god' is no longer paying you any attention is truly sad.

I hope Jane didn't overhear what the girls were saying, or any one else that could be a spy for the brothers. Oh no, I'm having another one of my 'what if' thoughts, what if one those love sick women alert the Volturi brothers about the revolt plan just to keep Edward around so they can get a chance to be with him. Yeah, probably not. I just had to throw that out there.  =)  Oh, one more thing; I really wanted to kick Kate in the teeth for her comment about Edward doing that to Tanya, he didn't make her take that rat poison, nor did he ever promise her anything other than great sex. I was yelling at her when I read that. Wow, now I'm yelling at a fictional character in your story. I think I am really wrapped up in your story.

Once again, thank you for translating and writing; I really do love your story. Looking forward to your next chapter.   xo    Kelly    =)



Author's Response:

Don't worry, we will learn more about the plan as the action unravels. I was just making a little joke because it seems we've been hearing about said plan for a while now and still it's not being put into action yet, so... But let it be known that Rosalie being sent to the Volturi IS part of the plan :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 1:53 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Wow, that was a crazy ass dream. You have a great imagination; I'm just glad the things that happened in that dream never happened. It was pretty clear that her dream came from things that had happened recently, and about people she knew more or less. *I hope that made sense, I'm not sure I worded it right*  :P

Holy crap! Tanya tried to kill herself? I'll bet she heard about Edward and Bella somehow. She'll just have to deal with it. *Jeez, I'm a cruel person aren't I?*

I'm getting so anxious about the uprising that's coming. Of course I worry that something will go wrong. Such as the wrong people being told what's going on and they alert the brothers. It could be a number of people, for instance, Jane or Tanya.

Oh cripes; I just had a horrible thought, what if Newton shows up? Any number of things could happen. What if he kidnaps Bella or something? That could happen at any point in your story. I would lose my mind!  :O  See, I told you I had a vivid imagination.  =)

I just want Edward and Bella to be safe, as well as Emmett and Rosalie and Carlise and Esme, and Alice and the new and improved Jasper. Oh and Jacob, I forgot about him.

Needless to say I'm on pins and needles regarding the revolt they are planning. I can't wait to see what happens; I know whatever it is will be really exciting, and not in a good way if you know what I mean. Of course you do! You are writing the story. *giggles* I'm so silly sometimes.

Thanks for writing and translating, I appreciate the time you must have to put into that. Love your story. See you next chapter.  xo  =)   Kelly

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 12:52 PM Title: Return to the harem

yes it is moving slowly, I winder what Rose will do?



Author's Response:

Something tells me that Rose will butt some asses...

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 8:00 AM Title: Return to the harem

:)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:19 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

I'm laughing so hard right now! I just knew Jacob was going to go 'there'. I can't blame Edward for wanting to kick his ass.  *giggles*  Will they still be rolling aroung on the floor in the next chapter, or will Esme yelling at them make them stop? I will see what happens soon no doubt.

I'm going to wimp out and save chapter 36, so I will have 2 chapters to read at the same time when chapter 37 is posted. =)  Thanks for writing. See you soon.  

Hugs, Kelly   =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 11:34 AM Title: Three short stories

This chapter was so cool! I loved that you had 3 different pov's all in one chapter. I loved getting to see what happened to Jasper after the dogs attacked he and Alice, and to see Alice's gift(and it was so crazy that it was Jasper's dad, it was fitting)I was a little worried that Jacob had more feelings for Bella than he did, so that was a relief that he didn't. Also I'm glad, and not too surprised that he's going to help in the plan to revolt.

See you next chapter.  =)   Kelly



Author's Response:

I feel a little sad for you that you're almost up to date with my story and soon you'll have to wait for my next chapters to be published. Snifff... Well, if it's any consolation, chapters 37-38 are already in the hands of my beta :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 10:57 AM Title: Deflowering Isabella

*Sigh* Somehow I feel very satisfied right now, and I wasn't even there.  ;)  Yes, sometimes when I'm reading a good story; I forget all about reality for a time. It's kind of fun to immerse yourself in the story, at least that's my opinion. I have to say that I just love this side of Edward, it was there all along wasn't it?

I really hope that Edward locked his bedroom door before he left his apartment; I don't think anyone wants to have a repeat of the visit from earlier. I'm getting more and more excited at the plotting that will be going on.

I'm off to the next chapter; I'm almost bouncing in my chair, that's how excited I am to see what's going to happen.  xoxo   Kelly  

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 10:16 AM Title: Edward and Bella

All I can do is swoon a bit and smirk a lot. I hope they get all blissed out, and thoroughly enjoy each other, because I have a feeling things are going to get ugly pretty soon. 

Of course I look forward to the demise of the slimy perverts, but then I want Edward and Bella to be able to be together away from that pit of doom.

Oh, then I have to see how Bella gets out of marrying the whoring bastard, Mike Newton. Maybe he won't be a problem? I'll just have to wait and see. That is after all part of the fun, to unravel the mysteries of your story. I love it!

Hugs.  =)   Kelly 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 9:37 AM Title: The chips are down

When Edward was still at Carlisle's apartment, all I kept thinking was 'hurry up, get out of there and go back to Bella!' I was so anxious! But of course Edward came to the rescue. *heavy sigh*

I know that I keep repeating myself, but I'm really looking forward to the men figuring out their strategy to rid themselves of the scum bag brothers or to rid the world of them all together.

Your story is so great, I'm so glad you have/are writing it.  =)   xo   Kelly 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 8:53 AM Title: The last straw

Holy crap! I'm glad you have several of these chapters done or I'd be left with the biggest cliffy ever!

I am totally freaking out right now, even though I'm pretty sure somehow Bella will be saved in the nick of time. Jeez, I can't believe Marcus and Caius just showed up like that. What's going to stop them from going back to Aro and telling him that Edward has a soft spot for Bella? Oh cripes, this is getting so exciting!

It looks like things are coming together as far as Edward et al, getting the hell out of that brutal, disgusting, and depraved pit of despair.

Oh I'm such a romantic sap, so I loved it when Edward and Bella confessed their love for each other. I may even have swooned. I couldn't help it.

You already know how I feel about this, but my fondest wish is for E/B, R/E, C/E(?),J/A(?), to get out of there in one piece. It would also be my wish that all of the slaves to be released.

A thought just occured to me about Jacob's feelings for Bella, how hard will it be on him to find out that Bella is in love with Edward? I hope he will be able to find piece with it. Oooo, and I wonder if that bitch Jane will try to alert the perv brothers to the plans of their demise, that is if she finds out.

Last but not least, I can't wait to see where Newton comes into the picture, and what will happen when that time comes.

Loving your story so much. You're awesome!  =)   xo  Kelly 



Author's Response:

I really love your enthusiastic comments. At this point they are what's keeping me motivated to finish the translation of this story. Thank you for taking the time to review my story, as you're one of the rare persons still doing it, as I mentioned before :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 8:00 AM Title: Winds of change

Hi there!  =)

This was a great chapter, you packed a ton if info into it. It left me with lots of questions floating aroung in my head. I'm sure I'll find the answers soon enough though.

I can't wait to get to the next chapter! Thank you again for writing. I love your story and am so wrapped up in it!  xo    Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:48 AM Title: Emmett's revenge

I see Emmett does have the magical touch. Surprise, Rosalie!  *smirk*  Emmett is already enamoured with Rose; I wonder how long it will be before he falls madly, and completely in love with her?

I have no doubt in my mind that he, Edward, and Carlisle will totally be into helping Bella, Alice, Rose, and Esme to escape the hell hole they are in. I also think they will free all the other sex slaves, as well as the slave laborers. I really don't know what to think about Jasper at this point though. 

I'm really looking forward to seeing Rose get all fiesty with Jasper. Rose sure is a force to be reckoned with.

Thanks for writing. I really love your story.  =)  Kelly   *I need sleep, so I'll be back later*  

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:57 AM Title: There's something about Rosalie

I love that you have given us some insight into Jasper, Alice, and now Rosalie. I'm sure they all have more to their stories, but at least you included them. I look forward to Emmett next. I always love Edward and Bella the best, but it's nice to have the rest of the characters included, especially when they all play an important part in the story. Not all authors do that, so I thank you.  =)   xo   Kelly



Author's Response:

I think it has to do with the way this story is written, multiple points of view is something I did at my readers request because they wanted me to write a story in which we would see different perspectives. The Training school saga by TSO and Fotrooza is written this way as well.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 10:19 AM Title: Alice Brandon, comtesse de Marillac

Wow, what a coincidence that Jasper and Alice crossed paths when they were children. Sounds like poor Alice had quite the revolting childhood. If he remembered her when he saw her in the infirmary, then I have to wonder why he didn't recognize her when he took her from the beach after the ship wreck. I guess she must have looked like a drowned rat. I can't wait to see what happens next. xo  Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 9:45 AM Title: Jasper Whitlock

No wonder Jasper is such a bastard, he grew up with a bastard for a father. I guess he had no choice? No, I think everyone has a choice. To see what he saw at such a young age though, had to have had an affect on him. I however, will not cut him any slack.  xo   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:57 AM Title: Between heaven and hell

I really, really like Edward's bedside manner.  ;)  Oh damn it, I just knew someone was going to cockblock Edward and Bella. I say it's frustrating but for the best, after all, Bella's going to want to be all healed up so she can actually enjoy herself, be able to move freely, not just lay there more or less. I'm pretty sure they will both get a whole lot more pleasure if they wait. There's nothing like pent up sexual frustration.  ;)  Also Edward will be able to show Bella lots of different ways they can please each other when she's healed completely.

Now I'm dying to know what's wrong with Jasper. But that'll have to wait; I need some sleep!  Hey, once again I must say thanks for writing.  xo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:04 AM Title: Caring for Bella

Cripes! I have to go read the next chapter, fast!

=)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:53 AM Title: Don't cross Aro

I guess I should not have been surprised when Aro told Edward that he'd be dishing out Bella's punishment, but I was floored. Poor Bella. Poor Edward. May Aro burn in the fiery pits of hell, or how about let Bella bite his dick completely off, shove it down his throat, and then Edward could whip him to death. Maybe the other two brothers could just be drowned in the sea. Or better yet, let the slaves loose on them, yeah that sounds like justice to me. Just a thought.

Thanks for writing. xo Kelly



Author's Response:

Like I said, maybe your wishes will be granted :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 2:02 AM Title: A slave trainer's obligations

What a mess these people are in! It's just one giant clusterfuck! I'm glad that Bella did such damage to Aro's little dick, but damned if she isn't going to get a severe punishment.

Aro is such a depraved MoFo; I'm not surprised that he issued a threat concerning the other slaves, just to make sure that Edward beat the crap out of Bella and Alice. Poor Edward. I don't think he's going to figure a way out of this.

Alice is safe for the time being, so that is something. Oooo, I had a thought; I wonder if while Alice is in the infirmary, if she'll get a chance to talk with Jacob. I'll bet that Carlisle will 'hide' Alice in the infirmary with her broken leg, that will keep her safe and not available to the whims of the jackals upstairs. At least I hope so. I also wonder if Jasper is going to come out of his coma. (I know you can't say, but I can't help being curious)  =) 

Well here I go to the next chapter; I'm thinking the next couple of chapters are going to be hard to read. I'm still looking forward to reading it though, because things have to get better, don't they? Eventually? I'm going to say, yes they will.   =) Thanks so much for writing.  xo  Kelly



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, things will definitely get better eventually :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:17 PM Title: The Volturi's request

Oh ick! Poor Bella and Alice, their young innocent eyes should not have had to see those repulsive, gag inducing,(no pun intended)pieces of crap Volturi brothers.

I was so proud of Bella for 'taking one for the team', she is fiesty, strong, and brave. Bella is also, no doubt in a whole lot of trouble. I'm worried what kind of punishment Aro will demand Edward to deliver, or if he'll take care of her himself. Oh crap, I just thought of something; will Aro blame Edward for Bella's actions?

I can't wait to read more! I'm getting all worked up, worried, and nervous for Bella, Alice, and Edward. Although Alice may not be in any danger at this point in time.

I hope you aren't tired of hearing it yet, but I really am so invested in your story, and characters. Thanks for writing.  xo   Kelly

 

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Date: 03 Nov 2011 5:34 PM Title: Third day in Volterra

I'm glad that Carlisle told Bella a bit about Edward, though I'm not sure that it sunk into her brain. I think her body had different ideas though.  ;)  I imagine that Carlisle will end up being a great ally to Bella, as well as Esme and hopefully Alice and Rose too.

If I could wish for the perfect scenario it would be this: for the nasty Volturi brothers to be killed or to rot in some dungeon, all the slaves to be freed, for Jacob to find happiness, and of course for Edward and Bella to fall in love, and for Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, and Alice/? to find happiness with each other.

I also have to wonder if Rosalie's parents will try searching for her, and end up on the Volturi lands. Also will stupid manwhore Newton come looking for his bride to be, or will he be too busy sticking it,(so to speak)to some other young lady with a wealthy family. Hmmm, should be fun either way, if it happens.

Oooo, I just thought of something else too; Maybe Edward, Emmett, and Carlisle will come up with a plan to escape with their heart's desires. Or something like that. I feel like poor Alice is left out here, but I of course want her to be out of that *ell hole as well.

Sorry for the long review, sometimes I get carried away.  =)  Thanks for writing, you are awesome!  xo   Kelly



Author's Response:

I love when my readers get carried away :0)

Well, as far as I can tell all your wishes will be granted, but I don't want to spoil the story by telling in advance what is going to happen. Alice won't be left out and yes, we will see lord Newton later on in the story...

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Date: 03 Nov 2011 4:14 PM Title: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

Love your Carlisle; I would love to see him smack some sense into his sons. I think they are both smitten with their respective slaves.

It was great to meet Carlisle, and I'm pretty sure he thought it was great to meet Esme. I'll bet they will be enamoured of each other in no time.

I'm really looking forward to what Dr. Cullen is going to say to Bella about his son. I hope like *ell that she doesn't get caught being away from the harem.

You know, I haven't meant to leave Alice out; I wonder who will be her trainer. I get the feeling that neither Emmett nor Edward will want that job , but what choice do they have?

I can't wait to read on, and see what happens next. I just love your story so much!  xo  Kelly 



Author's Response:

I couldn't envision having Alice touched by Edward or Emmett, so I had to find a way out... you'll see.

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Date: 03 Nov 2011 2:35 PM Title: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges

I really love your Rosalie, she's one hot seductress. I love how she handled Emmett. I can just picture his confusion when he wakes up still shackled. I'll bet he's already in love with Rose.  ;)  Hey thanks again for writing; I'm having a blast reading your story.  =)   Kelly



Author's Response:

Thanks for telling me that :0) In fact, most of the people who take the time to read my story are not disappointed :0)

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Date: 03 Nov 2011 1:45 PM Title: Emmett Cullen, comte de Morvalle

I really like your Emmett, it was really cool to hear from him.  =)  I wonder if that hidden door in the harem's spa room will play a part at some point in your story, besides to let Emmett sneak in to ogle Rosalie in the pool.  ;)    xo  Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 12:51 PM Title: Another kind of punishment

I just knew what Edward had planned for Bella, as he was pacing back and forth. Just for a minute, I thought he might use nipple clamps or put a clamp on her clit, then I thought no he wouldn't because she'd probably enjoy it too much. *Laughs*

I have to say I'm beyond happy that Jasper is in a coma. (I'm not very nice am I?) Hey; I just love your story, you know.  xo  Kelly



Author's Response:

Nipple clamps on poor innocent and naïve Bella... I'm not sure Edward would gain her affection if he was this naughty :0)

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Date: 03 Nov 2011 12:02 PM Title: Second day in Volterra

Oh good, I've been waiting for Jasper to get some kind of punishment; I hope it's brutal. *grins evilly*   =)  Kelly

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Date: 03 Nov 2011 10:59 AM Title: The trap

*Grins* I wondered if Bella would try to do something to help Jake. I'm so proud of her. =) I guess I should'nt smile too much, as she will undoubtedly be punished, again.  I hope she really did some damage to Jasper though, that almost makes it worth it; I would imagine that Bella feels the same.  xo  Kelly



Author's Response:

I'm glad to see you didn't abandon my story, for there is much more in store in matter of turnaround. Also, you'll be happy to know that I sent chapters 37-38 to my beta, so I might be able to update pretty soon :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 10:36 AM Title: Jacob Black's escape

Oh yes; I am really, really looking forward to Jasper's punishment. I hope it's really brutal. *evil smirk* At least I hope he gets punished. I think you said he does.

Oh cripes, I'm really afraid for Jake. He is going to be severely punished for his escape attempt. I wonder if Emmett is just laying in wait to catch Jake, afterall half the men there have attempted to escape, Emmett and Jasper surely know where the slaves would go to hide or which routes they would go in their attempts.

Thanks for writing.  xo  Kelly



Author's Response:

Jasper will not be punished per say, as you will see, but rather incapacitated, which I consider as a form a punishment...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:47 AM Title: Bella's punishment

Bella has no idea what kind of an education she's in for. I really can't wait to see just what's going to happen with her, especially regarding Edward. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:15 AM Title: The training room

I've really missed your story, but I was trying to finish up with some of my shorter stories. So I'm back so I can get all caught up with you.  =)

I think, no, I'm sure that Edward is going to have his hands full with Miss Swan. Bella is way too feisty for her own good, not that I blame her. I think I would be just the same. I sure as hell would put up a fight.

I think Edward went a little overboard with the punishment. After all, Bella had not been told of the rules. I understand his 'job' requires him to give out punishments when deserved, but...I suppose it's just the way it is, the women aren't there to be treated well.

I wonder if Bella will try to escape. I wouldn't put it past her, but I really hope she doesn't; I can't even amagine what her punishment would be.

Oh, I have to say that if/when Bella has to go serve the three pig Volturi brothers; I will hate it and not enjoy it at all. Just saying.  It certainly won't stop me from loving your story though.  =)

I worry about Rose and Alice too. What about Esme? Hopefully she'll be saved by the good doctor. Oh and poor Jacob too. I'm eagerly awaiting the punishment of Jasper. hehe  He's such a prick in this story. 

Thanks for writing.  xo  Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:50 AM Title: Edward meets Bella

Oh, I'd like to be punished by Edward, repeatedly.  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:39 AM Title: The harem

*Smirks*  Here we go... ;)  xo

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Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:24 AM Title: The journey to Volterra

I can not wait for Jasper to be punished for being such an asshole. He's going to be in deep shit when the Lords see the bruises on poor Bella's face. I'll bet that Bella's smart mouth will get her into quite a bit of trouble. Won't that be just horrible; Edward will have to punish her.  ;)  xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 11:07 AM Title: Edward and the slave Tanya.

Yes, I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to Bella.  xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 10:56 AM Title: The good doctor and the bad masters.

Oh, I'm so wrapped up in your story already; I can't wait to get farther into it.  =)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like this story and take the time to review it. Not a lot of people do so these days, and it makes me even less motivated to update soon :0(, but I will do my best anyway.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 10:42 AM Title: The lords of Volterra

Well, aren't the brothers just wonderful; I can't wait to see what kind of sadistist shit they are into. Lucky Edward gets the use of the slaves anytime he wants; I think that might just change when he sees Bella. Maybe? Can't wait to see what happens to Alice, Rosalie, and Esme. Oh, and Jacob too.  xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 9:32 AM Title: The ship wreck.

Noooo! Jasper can't be one of the bad guys, or can he? Maybe he is just one of the Volturi's lackeys or something. Guess I'll find out soon enough. I'm anxious to see exactly where they are being taken, and who will be there.  ;)



Author's Response:

Ah, I can't tell you much because I don't want to spoil the plot, suffice to say that Jasper will not go unpunished for being such a bastard...

Thank for reading and reviewing :0)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 9:09 AM Title: Pleasing Bella.

Poor Bella, she has no idea how much her life is about to be turned upside down. I can't wait to read all about it.  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 8:41 AM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

Loving your story so far. I'm such a sucker for a historical romance. Even better when it has a wicked twist, and it seems from your story summary that I won't be disappointed! I'm really looking forward to reading more. =)

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Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:32 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

:)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:28 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Nope, didn't see that, but if we think about it, it's not so crazy. If Tanya has found out about Bella and Edward, she is going to feel more than unhappy, so she would try something crazy. Rosalie said "tried" that means, she didn't succeed, right? Will this change the plans? It might at least put them on hold for a bit, until they find out what happened.

As for Bella's dream, with how much tea she drank, it's understandable she was in such state for so long and had such a peculiar dream. Did she say anything? What did Edward and Carlisle think if she did?

So many questions.... We'll be waiting... :)



Author's Response:

We don't really know if Bella spoke during her dream, but I'd think it is unlikely since Carlisle said she was in a coma-like state. As for Tanya, she only tried to kill herself, but she didn't succeed. Whether it will change the plan or not is something we'll see in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :0)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:36 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Yep Tanya does not want to loose Edward.

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Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:47 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

PLS CONTINUE THE STORY PLS!!! BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

You shouldn't be worried about me continuing this story as it is a given. It's just a matter of time managing and how I'm busy with real life that make the updates farther between. And, lately I've not been splitting my chapters like I used to at the beginning, so they are longer, meaning it takes more time for me to translate them.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:25 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Tanya is just trying to get Edward's attention away from Bella and back on herself.  She is jealous of Bella because she has done the one thing that Tanya was never able to do, win Edward's heart.

I admit that that was a messed up dream, but it was very interesting.

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

In the next chapter, we'll see that Edward has been very naive to think his relationship with Bella could be kept a secret.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 2:19 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Intersting dream, I am surprised no one watching noticed!

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Date: 10 Oct 2011 12:03 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Cool dream.   Newton is a douche in almost every story. lol

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 3:28 PM Title: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

I hope for my sake that Bella and Edward will be together;yes, I know I sound stereotypically romantic about those two, but you`ve succeeded in constructing a very interesting story.I`m going to watch out for every new chapter you are writing and posting.



Author's Response:

I'm a very romantic person myself, so yes, they are definitely going to end up together :0)

I want to apologize to my readers for the wait. I'm not responsible for it but I don't want to blame my beta if she takes 2-3 weeks to edit my chapters. She's just a very busy working girl.

 

Reviewer: youstayclassytwifans Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 1:57 AM Title: Don't cross Aro

How old are you? Truthfully please.



Author's Response:

I fail to understand the point here, but I can tell you that I'm old enough to know better :0) (this quote is not from me, it's from tara sue me)

I'm about the same age than Icy (in the same decade anyway)

 

Jeez, are we already in October ? Sh...

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 6:55 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Bad move Jacob, he should work with Edward and Co. to overthrow Aro's rule and free himself, but like a typical guy he has to get jealous instead.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 10:51 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Well I hope I don't have to wait a month and a half for your next update.

Author's Response:

No no, I'm starting the translation of chapter 36 today and I'll send it to my beta during next weekend. However, I hope you understand that translating a story is a longer process than writing one when the language of the translation is not your first language. Translating a story from English to French comes naturally to me, but translating a story from French to English is way much of an intellectual challenge :0)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 5:30 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Jacob is so jealous of Edward. He has never made love to Bella. He wishes he could. He gave her an orgasm, but that is it. They were never in bed together.



Author's Response:

Nope, they were never in bed, indeed, but it was just a way to speak for Jacob. He means he knows how to please her too, which Edward sounded doubtful about (implying Jacob doesn't know shit about how to please women). Jacob just wants Bella to be happy, in the end, but Edward did push his button a little too hard during that breakfast and he wanted to erase his smug attitude. I think he did a good job at it... or else Edward woudn't have jumped him. (by the way, Edward still doesn't know what Jacob did or did not do with Bella, only that he did not deflower her, so Jacob could be lying through his teeth it wouldn't make much difference)

Reviewer: gjmburgess2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 12:00 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

This is a good story. What to know what makes a Great writer.

One who finishes the story. 

Please don't be a quiter 



Author's Response:

I don't intend to be a quiter. The only reason why this story would not be complete within a year (I hope to complete it within 12 months) would be if I died, but I'm perfectly healthy, so...

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 11:33 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!!!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 9:57 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

reviews tend to drop when there are long periods between chapters I wouldnt worry to much this story is worth comming back to .. but I hope you will update more often.



Author's Response:

Like I said, reviews started to drop before the updates went fewer and far between, and since it's a vicious circle, it's hard to find the motivation again, and also since it is a story of my own and I have other translations that I do of stories from other people, I put my priority into translating their stories, not mine. I update the French translation of People like us every week, the rest of the time I work on 5 other translations. But if I have time to translate only one story during a week, it is only natural that I will translate the one that gets the more reviews, it's how human works...

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 9:52 PM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Oh no!!! Poor Jake! Update soon! I love this story!

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Date: 11 Sep 2011 8:07 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

PLS CONTINUE THE STORY MUCH FASTER THEN HALLOWEEN. PLS MAKE IT EARLIER AND UPDATE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLS CONTINUE SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 11 Sep 2011 6:45 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Jacob doesnt know when to shut up does he?  lol



Author's Response:

I find Jacob hilarious with his tendency to always speak when it's not his turn, interrupt people and act arrogant and smug just to have the last word. But he's very smart, though, despite all his flaws :0)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:25 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

ut oh.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:11 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

It is sad such a good story doesn't have more reviewers but when you say it might me 6 weeks (halloween) for another update that would be the reason you have lost reviewers/readers.

No black hole just people assume you are not going to finish which unfortunately happens often

 

Cheryle



Author's Response:

This argument doesn't stand, as I used to update way more often and still the reviews were fewer and fewer. I'm not saying it will be that long for the update, I just said there is a possibility. Why people would assume I won't finish this story? It is complete in French, so of course it will be complete in English sooner or later, but if I feel people are not reading it anymore, I won't rush it as I will do it only for my own pleasure.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:08 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Why so long???



Author's Response:

So long for what ? For an update ? Even if I have time to translate another chapter within 2 weeks time, it might take another 2 to 3 week for my beta to return it to me. Plus, like I said, half the people who used to read my story have given up on it(or so it seems), so I feel I'm writing for only ten people. Not very motivating, I'm afraid... So now I translate only when I feel like it... The good news is, since this story is complete in French, sooner or later it will be complete in English as well :0)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:04 AM Title: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

Both were walking a very thin line, and they ended up crossing it without anyone being able to do something about it. Bella's curiosity to see where it might go turned out to be uncontrolable.
There's plenty to work on now for everyone. Edward's plan is thorow and includes a lot of people and assistance. Lets ope veryone is willing to do their part.

Reviewer: angola Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:51 PM Title: Three short stories

ohhh  just anticipating the next chapter   this was very enlightening. always love Alice and her "gift".  Looking forward to more. Keep up the great work



Author's Response:

Chapter 35 is in the hands of my beta now, so it should not be too long before I can post it :0)

Reviewer: angola Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:39 PM Title: Deflowering Isabella

very satisfying..yep... that was just like my first time. LOL you are a very talented story teller. The "deflowering" was pretty near perfect, and I am so curious how all our heros are going to f-up the volturi.

Reviewer: angola Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:19 PM Title: Edward and Bella

Wow he is such a tease to her sometimes. You can just imagine his teasing personality. I love how he is taking such good care of her. Hey, you are welcome for the 500th review, however, it is I and all your other readers who should be thanking you for sharing a great story. All we have to do is read and enjoy the benefits while you are doing all the work!! and for that i THANK you.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you acknowledge the work involved here :0)  It is indeed quite an amount of work I put into this translation, and as if it were not enough, i'm also working on 4 other stories, one of which is the translation of People like us, and if you read it as well, you know it's quite a long story, so imagine what it represents for me to translate it from English to French (thank God it's easier for me to translate from English to French than from French to English, lol). Again, thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: angola Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:18 AM Title: The chips are down

Geez  when are these two gonna get together!! you tease!!!  I have to go to work now....



Author's Response:

Ha ha, you're so close to their big moment...

Reviewer: angola Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:49 AM Title: The last straw

oh my Edward better hurry back!

Author's Response:

By the way, thank you for posting my 500th review :0)

Reviewer: angola Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:08 AM Title: Winds of change

good chapter. I cant stop reading. this is all have done all day. not very productive of me, but your story is captivating me

Reviewer: angola Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 12:24 AM Title: Jasper Whitlock

wow, he seems disgusted.wonder why he does the beatings now

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