lol omg i love alice. 

Great story... any chance for a sequel?

I'm thinking that Edward and Bella run into each other on their outings and make up and get lemony.

I think they should have a baby for all their messing around unprotected!

Best story i've read in a long time! I stayed up till one in the morning reading this, didn't go to bed till my eyes started to burn lol

Lol. Awesome first chapter, can't wait to read more.

I did nothing but read your story the entire day today! I just couldn't put it down. Great story! I wish there was an epi or a oneshot look into their future. I'm glad they're together again and I would just love to see more of what happens to them and the other characters if you get what I mean. Nonetheless, you did a fantastic job!

No abuse! I LOVE JACOB! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S SO CUTE! OOO angsty Edward, what a switch. ;)

give the laptop a hun because you rock

I should be asleep, resting for work tomorrow, but I cannot stop myself from clicking on next at the end of each chapter. I think I am going to leave my self with this one though until tomorrow. Yes, biting. much fun indeed.

Val

You know, I was jut thinking to stop reading a paragraph before ending , because  it woud be too much to know about them if you develop story any further.

 Then thank God and Kikiblue... the ending. A perfect end. THE perfect end. Fora perfect chapter.

 Somewere in the middle of the chapter I tought how you , again, never dissapoint me with developing characters ( by the way, they are realy beautifull young ones, and much more very realistick). Girl, you fucking epiphany. I was melting because they behave themselves justthe way I expected.

  After my first rewiev ( somewhere in the middle of the story) I prayed all the time: " Plese be completed, pleeeease be completed..." and you finished it and more, just in right way.

   I hope you will read my humble rewiev,this is the only way to express my admiration to your work.

  Keep with the exellant work.

I must admitt, this is one of the stories which stood up right with Twillight. Of course I first start with reeding because of lemons, but i look for the good plot for weeks.

  You, girl are veeery good in developing characters (I`m tired of some bullshit descriptions like "He`s like this and that...")     

   Readers are not morons, we like to catch subtle hints of character of our own. And you`re good. No, you`re exellant.

I,m looking foward to the rest of the story. Hell, Ih9;m looking foward to more of your stories. Keep good.

(Pardon my language, English is not my mothers language).

Oh my dear good god, that was HOT!!!

I love your smutty, pervy mind my dear :P

Oh- how I loved AND hated this Edward & Bella! Thanks so much for the fabulous writing!

Wow, what an ass.  Love him!  I mean, really, who doesn't crush on the asshole?

i love u .... this`s history is perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was totally awesomr!!!!!!

poor Bells!!!!   

that is so not being exclusive!!!!   Edward is going to have a fit!!!!   LOL!!!

aww now Bella's got it bad!!!

poor bella always get cockblocked!!!!   LOL!!!!!

I really think that are both in trouble!!!!

Aww! Man, I always hate the ending of stories since they leave me wanting more!
I think this story's going to be one of the few that I'll keep rereading for lots of times. I especially loved how this wasn't one of those cliche, "and they lived happily ever after" Bedward stories. I love how it seemed more realistic. I honestly loved this story, filled with emotion, angst and pure, unadulterated lust.
I seriously love you. Thanks for taking two Mary Sues and turning them into the things we wanted them to be the most-intellectual badasses.
Hope to read more from you,
Death, from The.Twins-Life.and.Death

Completely understand Bella and Edward having trouble and her trying to screw it up because she thinks it will happen eventually anyways... definitely didnt think James was going to appear. I hope she tells him where to go and leaves to find Edward! I don't think Edward really cheats on Bella. I think Rosalie said it out of jealousy but hopefully we'll find out the truth!

Poor Edward - everyone around him is coupling up and he won't admit that's what he wants to because he'll lose the bet. Now he's jealous about Bella going on a date he told her to go on and he's going to go and do something royally stupid!!! And Miss Bella! I have a feeling she is going to hook up with Jacob - maybe give him some head and while she's doing it, probably have an epiphany that she doesn't enjoy it any more if it's not Edward.... these guys got a LOT to work out!! LOL! Good chapter!

AWWW!!! Awesome chapter! Glad to know now what happened to Bella and Edward the night she woke up in his bed.... so sweet of him to help her and now we understand why he was so angry with her. Glad they are falling for each other now.. let's see if they're willing to admit it or if they're ego is going to get in the way first!

WOW!! Definitely didn't see that coming but it was very HOT! Great job!!! I would definitely say the two are probably pretty even now. Poor Bella though - finding out that Edward was with another girl afterwards :( - guess she didn't see that coming!

Clapping, and more clapping.

THX, bb  good ride.

Now write something else.

LOL... great story! Lots of sexual tension in these guys and girls...kinda glad to see that Edward and Bella aren't automatically falling all over each other... and poor Mike, LOL! Great job so far! Interested to see exactly where you're going to take the story

I know this was finsihed  a while ago, but still loving it.  Your wit 'comes' through your writing.  The dialog keeps me smiling.

THX

God I love your pervy mouth.  LMAO

Swallowing  = good.

LIMES..It's LIMES with salt and tequila. LEMONS will make you SICK!

Pretty cool! Loved this fic!

HELLO, KIKI

I'M LOVING THIS FANFIC

BDR ARE TRANSLTING TO PORTUGUESE, BUT THE TRANSLATOR IS ON THE CHAPTER 9 ¬¬'

SO, I MEDE MY ACCOUNT HERE

I'M BRAZILIAN AND I'M TRANSLATING THIS, HEHE

I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FANFICS

PLEASE FOLLOW ME ON TWITTER

I WANT TO TALK WITH YOU

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It took me so long to review because..i don't like the ending or it's because i dont want this story to end? One thing is for sure, im disappointed. You know i got Bella's side, her reason, and we see how she's doing but i was expecting that i got a Edward's POV a the end, the way he sees Bella after Forks...But anyway, this is still one of my favorite fics. I hope you will keep on writing more.

Thank you.

that was good

A perfect ending for this story. Thank you again for bringing it to us. ;)

<3 <3

wow that was so fucking awesome I love you!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I have to re read it from beginning to end.. So excited!! Thank you for writing such a kick ass story!!

thank you so much for this amazing story!

im so gonna miss this

thanks a lot!

I have followed you from ff to twilighted and now here.  It was worth every single minute spent reading!! *tears* so sad it's over!

So, I have been such a failure when it comes to revies (I know, I'm sorry). But I have to tell you that when I came across this story I fell fast and I fell hard, and I kept falling with every chapter. I thought this epilogue was so perfect because it was so them, and I like a little ambiguity; leaves some room for me to imagine how they are building a relationship and a life together (however, a futuretake would be greatly appreciated as well ;)) Really amazing story. Can't wait to see what you do next!

ahhhh, this was just the perfect ending! Thanks so very much darling! I will miss them.

Sniff Sniff, WAAAAAHHHHH, blubber, flailing arms and all* Sorry its the end of an era, I had to give you an over the top farewell. Oh lovely ending, and now I'm going to miss that story and you. I do hope you keep writing, or at least pop your head in and throws us fangirls some crumbs...

Thankyou so much for writing, your story pulled me into the whole fandom, so this is a bittersweet ending for me. Thank you.

thanks for a sweet ending to your story. I enjoyed it a lot!!! Keep writing, Kikiblue!

Thank you for this wonderful story! I have been following for quite sometime and it has been great. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future;)

It was a perfect HEA for these two.  I love that they finally came clean and took credit for their parts in the break up.  Their reunion was hot and this story will leave me with sweet dreams of their future together.

Excellent story!!!

'It was me and him against the world. '

*Sigh*

Yes, Bad Romance was perfect for this chapter; completely them.

I'm so glad they didn't really have a big blowout like they probably would have done had they both still been living in Forks.  The time apart allowed them both to mature; adopt new lifestyles and outlooks on life.  It shows that they were meant to be together.  Regardless of where you are, if you still fit with that person no matter what else has changed in your life.........................it's just meant to be.

Thank you for taking us on this wonderful journey.  No matter how fucked up the characters may be, they still hold redeeming qualities that make us love them all the more for it. 

Mwah!

Glad that Bella had the time to get away from the Forks way of life. It was good for her to learn to live without all the unnecessary coping. Now she and Edward finally have a chance to make this work.